The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 43

In case anyone missed out the previous part, here’s the link to it;

part 42

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[2 days later]

(Twinkle’s POV)

So here comes the day when I’m officially gonna loose Kunj to someone else! But it shouldn’t matter me. As decided, he’s just a stranger, he will remain one!

“Twinkle, go get ready! Don’t you know Khyati and her family can be coming anytime and also, check up if Kunj is ready or no!” bebe said.

I couldn’t deny her words so with no other choice, I replied in a yes! I walked towards Kunj’s room acting all strong and confident. I knock the door.

“Who’s it?”

“Twinkle here!”

“Oh, come in”

I enter the room and see Kunj standing there shirtless doing something with his mobile.

“Can you wear your cloths?”


“What what? I’m not your to be wife that you’re standing here shirtless! Why did you even let me in?”

“Why is it bothering you so much?”

“Oh my god! You’re impossible! Btw, do you need any help? Bebe asked me to ask you if you have any problem or any issue or anything”

“Nothing so far!”

“Good! Bye then. Better get ready quickly or else the engagement wouldn’t take place and I wouldn’t want that to happen”

“Don’t you worry! I’ll get engaged today for sure”


Saying this, I walk off his room and pat myself on the back because of my little brave act that I did inside.

While I was going to my room, bebe calls me again.

“Twinkle, I have a gift for you!”

She hands me a box wrapped beautifully.

“Okay, so there’s a dress in this and I want you to wear this today”

“But bebe, I already have a dress! What was the need of this?”

“No questioning! You are wearing this! The argument is over”

“But bebe…”

“If you don’t wear it, I’ll consider that you’re not my daughter anymore”

“Lekin bebe …”

“The choice is yours” bebe leaves as soon as she says this.


I looked at the mirror and couldn’t stop admiring on how pretty I looked, I swear. Bebe had given me such a beautiful lehenga, I couldn’t take my eyes off it.

I was dressed in a creamish crop top kinda blouse which had a deep back and some simple design on the front while the skirt was grass green in color with some light embroidery by the border. I wore a combination of green and silver jhumkas while my hair was left open with curls by the end. With some really light makeup which included winged liner and mascara with some bit of eye shadow, I was all set for the engagement.

Honestly, I thought I looked way too pretty for such a function but I couldn’t go against bebe’s will so, no choice.


The guest had already started coming while bebe, Usha aunty and the rest of Sachdev’s were busy attending their guests.

“Go check on if Kunj is ready and bring him down” Usha aunty told me.

I was again forced to go to his room. I was pretty annoyed seeing him already. Although I have to stay strong but that doesn’t change the fact that I actually still love him. How would I stop loving someone so easily? I could I forget the memories? How could I let go of all this so quickly? But whatever, I have to stay strong and act like it doesn’t affect me anymore!

I walk to his room and I see him smiling while he looked at his phone.

“Ahem ahem”

“Uh sorry! I didn’t notice you Twinkle. Btw, you look so pretty!”

“Sorry what? I guess you’re complimenting the wrong person! I’m not your girlfriend or even you would be wife so keep your compliments for her and not me! Also, almost all the guest have arrived so your mom is calling you down”

“Oh sure!”


I slam the door and walk off.


The hall was completely crowded with people talking. It seemed like everyone awaited for the function to begin. After 10 ish seconds, Kunj was finally all dressed up and ready and was in the hall! Everyone complimented on how great he looked and honestly, he looked hot af.

After a while, Khyati and her parents arrived. I was really confused. She looked really simple, with no tam-jham when it’s her engagement. I brushed my thoughts away and focused on seeing if everything was alright.

One thing really disturbed me all this while. Everyone was complimenting me more than they did to Khyati. She has to be in the spotlight right? So why am I getting what she currently needs to get? Whatever, I’ll rather find bhai, he was looking for me since pretty long or else I’ll be gone.


I began hunting for bhai because it seemed like he was playing hide and seek with me. I mean, he was nowhere to be found.

Suddenly, all the lights fade out and we all hear a voice.

“Kisi ne sach kaha hai, beauty lies in the eyes of a beholder. Her eyes, they’re so bright and radiant. Her smile, so alluring. Her body, just fine. Her fingers, perfectly fits with mine. Her face, epitome of beauty.

?Your hand fits in mine like it’s made just for me
But bear this in mind, it was meant to be
And I’m joining up the dots with the freckles on your cheeks
And it all makes sense to me

I know you’ve never loved the crinkles by your eyes when you smile
You’ve never loved your stomach or your thighs, the dimples in your back at the bottom of your spine
But I’ll love them endlessly

I won’t let these little things
Slip out of my mouth
But if I do
It’s you
Oh it’s you
They add up to
I’m in love with you
And all these little things?”

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  1. Awesome episode kritika I loved it and now I’m sure that twinj are gonna get engaged hope so and try posting soon

  2. SidMin

    Awesome… just loved it …
    The episode was too good Twinkle trying to be strong and Kunj … taking things casually. ..
    Well Loved the last part the words were awesome …
    Love you post soon ❤❤❤

  3. Presha

    Hey kritika awesome just loved it.
    I think the voice us of kunj…. And the engagement will be of twunj which is a total surprise for twinkle… I hope so… But wat a lovely epi

  4. amazig..lovly..awsm

  5. Chiku

    Wowwwww!!!! It’s amazing lovely ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Loved it. Marvellous.
    Which song is played??? Can u tell the name plz????
    Post soon

    1. Kritika14

      Little Things by One Direction!

  6. Paavu

    Pehle hi pata tha mujhr ki dis is gonna be a full proof plan haina monica dear srry kritu loved it o need oder pt nw nw nw nw plsss

  7. Loveleen

    Ohh kriti dear post the nxt part soon dear I cnt wait nymr to look fr twinkles surprise …Plz plz

  8. Komal123

    Fir suspense pe chid diya! I hate you fr this! But the chaoter was marvelous! I know whats coming next! Cant wait already

  9. SidMin23

    It was awesome and I think it was kunj and khyati plan to make twinj engaged and kunj was taking this thing causal and twinkle act to be strong infont of kunj

  10. Aishwarya.twinjfan

    Oh god kritika u just nailed it. Waiting for the next part. Nd waiting for seeing tw’s reacrion after coming to know its her own engagment. I know this is the first tym i am commenting so u moght be new wid my name. Bt still ur ei was fab

  11. Ria

    Heya Kriti,
    Dude, on a serious note, I MISS YOU ❤ I want to talk to you so bad, but these exams just don’t allow me to! Let them get over, I’ll be able to talk to you for longer although, I guess, you won’t be able to. ?

    Back to the update, that was an immensely funny update. I love how everyone’s into the plan and how Twinkle is trying to be all strong! Kunj ? Let’s not talk about him? Omg! The way he stands shirtless because he knows it’ll affect Twinkle. And the funniest part of the update was, ‘I began hunting for Bhai because it seemed like he was playing hide and seek with me’??

    All over, I loved the update and I’d a great time reading it. Hope you’ll post soon. Play, I know I’m being greedy knowing you posted real soon, but right now, the track is so interesting and funny and good and incredible and beautiful and what not that I can’t wait! ❤

    All my love,

  12. Anam_sidhant

    Hey kritika,
    Dayum!!! This was literally something I expected for twinj engagement, it was incredible. I so love this episode and TBH, this is the first time I’m so curious for your next one, i hope you’ll get time and post soon !♥️

    P.S:- can you give the link for twinkle’s outfit.

    With Love,

  13. Purnima.agrawal30

    Awesome amazing fabulous epi….eagerly waiting for next part….

  14. Baby

    ohk…………sooo kritika……….
    like srsly how dude how do u write soooo beautifully…….
    m in love as always told u before only……….bt srsly its its tooo cute……….
    kunj ughhh he is sooo bad hurting twinkle n den giving her a surprise wuld b srsly a shock for her…….twinkle angry is sooooo cute………..n him standing shirtless……..dat too like srsly for making twinkle come out n want dat it shuld affect her………..srsly too good stry line luving it……..♥♥
    n m 100100% sure now toh twinj r gonna get engaged n married too…………☺
    luving d way where whole family is involved in dis naughty plan……..n sooo on d thing wen twinkle said dat khyati is nt looking bride n all r complementing her……..well cute it was…☺
    lods of love………♥☻♥
    post soon……….☺

  15. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Amazing episode Kritika…. Loved it…I think Twinj are going to get engaged…… Please Post next one soon….Can’t wait

  16. Sara28

    Well thank god you notified me that this was up, otherwise I would have missed it for sure! Okay, I have a feeling…something is fishy…I wonder, Twinkle might just be the bride after all ? Omg Kunj’s actions are just too funny. He gives no care in the world? And the song, I just love that song. It brings back so many memories! Now I have to see what happens next and if Twinkle realises that it was just all their plan. Try to post soon but of course finish your syllabus first. Good luck!

  17. I guess it’s all a plan! If so, I can’t wait to see what Twinkle’s reaction would be. Moreover that song, it’s one of my favs and you’ve used it in the best way possible. Kunj is so smart! Standing shirtless cause he knows Twinkle is affected by him and on top of all, the last lines of Kunj! They were super cute ? Can’t wait for the next update! Post soon! Love you! ?

  18. Kruti

    Kriti…..Very beautifully written yar nd that song….loved it……Amazing update
    Continue asap

    Loads of love?

  19. Romaisha

    Haaaaaaaaaa!!!!!! Its Twinkle! I knew it!! ??????????????

    The part where u said everyone was complimenting twinkle more than her and she walked in looking a bit plain… I knew it!!!
    God… You really gave me a flipping fright!! ? but the episode was hell amazing!!!!
    Pleaseeee post the other one ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?

  20. Simiyy

    Hey Kritika
    It was really good
    I hope you post soon
    Loads of Love

  21. Shalini15

    Kritika… the episode was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb. Loved twinkles behaviour nd the way was taking situation casually. Song was good. Loved it so much ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? try to post next part asap .

    Lots of love

  22. Ramya

    Awesome kritika
    N I’m pretty sure
    Kunj is going engaged wid twinkle only
    I’m so happy
    Love u keep smiling

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