The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 39

In case anyone missed out the previous part, here’s the link to it

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*After 25 days*

(Kunj’s POV)

“Kunj, hurry up! They might be arriving anytime soon”, bebe screamed at top of her lungs.

“Hunji bebe, I’m just about to leave” I replied back, with the same tone.


I had been standing at the airport like a fool waiting for almost 20 minutes.

“Where are they stuck?” I thought.

My thoughts are interrupted as someone patted my back. I turn to look over, and there they were! For the first time, I couldn’t take eyes off my sister, Mahi di.

She looked even more prettier as a married woman. With the big chuda in her hand, the vermillion and finally the mangalsutra. She looked complete.

“Where are you lost?” di spoke while waving her hands in front of my eyes to bring back to senses.

“Oh nothing! Just that you look so beautiful in this avatar!” I say.

“HAHAH I know!” she replied back.

“And what about me?” I hear a voice from my behind.

“Oh you? You look bullshit as always” I reply giggling.

“You” she said and hit me playfully on my chest.

“I missed you, Twinkle” I spoke while hugging her.

“Ahem ahem! Stop with your romance at least at the airport” di interrupts.

“Romance?” I questioned.

“Does she know everything” I thought.

“Yes my younger brother! She told me everything” di said.

“Wait, did I speak that loud? Did you overhear my thoughts?” I asked shockingly.

“HAHHAH did you think the same?” di replied laughing.

“I’m sorry for not letting you know Kunj! Di didn’t let me”, Twinkle spoke for her justification.

“Whatever” I replied.

“Sorry na” she spoke again.

“Yea it’s alright!” I reply back.


“Ohmygod! My daughter looks so beautiful” maa said while adoring her daughter who had just been to home a few minutes ago.

“Thank you maa” di replied back with a little blush.

“Will you stop Usha! She’s my granddaughter too! Even I wanna talk to her” bebe spoke while we all shared a moment of laugh.

“Okay, all of you stop! There’s a surprise for you all!” di spoke.

“What is it?” all of us asked, excitedly.

“Well, we’ve extended our stay from 10 days to 20!” di spoke.

Everyone had even a wider smile on their faces and ahh I loved this. I so missed di and ofc, my Twinkle too!


(Twinkle’s POV)

I enter my room and find a beautifully wrapped gift on the bed. I walk towards it and find a note beside it.

“Hoping that you’ll like it! ❤️”

I broad smile crept on the face. I excitedly tore the gift paper, the way a baby girl is excited when she gets a doll. I find a box after unwrapping the paper and in the box was a gown, a royal blue gown.

I run to dress up myself in this stunning and exquisite gown that I couldn’t take my eyes off.


I stand in front of the mirror wearing this beautiful gown. Coloured in royal blue, a sweetheart gown which had a mirror border work just below the chest and had a floral print. It looked simple yet elegant. I wore silver accessories along with it and had my hair tied up into a bun with few strands falling over my face.

The next moment I hear a text notification. I check it out and it was of Kunj.

“Reach Hilton sharp at 8”

I smiled at the thought of us going for a date after so long. It already was 7:15! I quickly did a little touch up and there I was, all set to go.

The clock already striked 7:40. I quickly picked up my phone and rushed for the hotel.


“Come to the garden area”, another text by Kunj as I reached the hotel.

I enquired about where the garden was to one of the staffs and he lead me the way to it. I kept on following him with the thought on my mind on how romantic and exciting this could be.

I reach at the garden area and I find someone blindfolding my eyes and I knew it that it’s Kunj.

“Kunj, don’t do that!”

No response.

“I’m telling you, the consequences will be worse”

Again, no response.

“Kunj, mark my words!”

Yet again, no response.

“You’re so dead now!”

But before I was ignored again, my blindfold was opened and I had a beautiful view in front of me. Lights all over the garden giving it a luminous look like I’m in a galaxy full of stars. A table and chair for two were kept right in the middle for us.

I turn around and he was standing right behind me with a wide satisfying smile because he already knew that I loved it.

“I love this Kunj! This is so amazing! How do you manage to do this all?”

“I’m so happy you loved this! And c’mon don’t you know I’m a very talented person?”

“Haan haan, bade talented ho ji”

and he began giggling. “Was it that funny?” I thought to myself.

“May I have your hand?”

I gave in my hand in his and we walked till we reached the table which was for us. He pulled out a chair for me like a gentlemen and let me sit and then reached out to his.


While we were having food, soft music began playing from behind.

He forwarded his hand, signaling for a dance and without any hesitation I gave mine.

“Been sitting eyes wide open behind these four walls, hoping you’d call
It’s just a cruel existence like there’s no point hoping at all

Baby, baby, I feel crazy, up all night, all night and every day
Give me something, oh, but you say nothing
What is happening to me?”

I don’t wanna live forever, ’cause I know I’ll be living in vain
And I don’t wanna fit wherever
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home”

He grabbed on my waist while my hand placed on his shoulders and we began dancing slowing with the beat.

“I’m sitting eyes wide open and I got one thing stuck in my mind
Wondering if I dodged a bullet or just lost the love of my life

Baby, baby, I feel crazy
Up all night, all night and every day
I gave you something, but you gave me nothing
What is happening to me?

I don’t wanna live forever, ’cause I know I’ll be living in vain
And I don’t wanna fit (fit, babe) wherever (wherever)
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home”

He looked deep into my eyes and sensually began moving his fingers across my face while we continued to dance.

“I’ve been looking sad in all the nicest places
Baby, baby, I feel crazy
I see you around in all these empty faces
Up all night, all night and every day
I’ve been looking sad in all the nicest places
Give me something, oh, but you say nothing
Now I’m in a cab, I tell ’em where your place is
What is happening to me?

I don’t wanna live forever, ’cause I know I’ll be living in vain
And I don’t wanna fit wherever
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home

I just wanna keep calling your name until you come back home
Until you come back home”

The song was over but we were still dancing romantically until a waiter came in and asked for what we’d like to have for desert.

We order one for both of us and shared it.


While heading towards the car in the parking lot, he suddenly grabs my hand and pushes me at one side of the wall were no one was present.

“What are you doing?”

“Don’t ask me such silly questions! You know what I’m doing or about to do”

“For god sake, not here! We’re in the parking!”

“As if I care!”

“How can you be so carefree?”

“Befikra hona bhi zaroori hai!”

I laugh at his stupid, lame yet funny? joke! He comes closer to me. The proximity increasing and I love this. I love when he comes close to me, his smell is so heavenly! I wish we could stay like this forever.

He leans forward and I knew what was happening next.

He kisses me gently.

“And your lips are so soft”

He kisses me again, deepening it. His tongue insistent, persuasive and arousing. He reaches out for my back and sensually moves it giving shivers to me.

“You are mine, Twinkle”, he whispers.


He gives a victorious smile.

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Hi all of you! Really sorry on not being able to reply each one of you individually on the previous post of mine. I promise to do it soon!

For now, enjoy reading this one!

Love you! ?

PS – Ignore errors (If any) as I didn’t proof read it!

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  1. Kruti

    I legit loved d cute twinj romance….Lovely epi
    Continue asap

    Loads of Love??

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! The next update is already up! You can read it now!

  2. Soumyad

    Hey kritika the episode was awesome…loved it and twinj’s romance was superb…plz post soon

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! The next part is already posted! x

  3. SidMin

    ?????????????????loved it the emojis say all I want to say ….. I really loved every but if it thw way Twinj spend time together and above all the way you write …. you write awesome …..
    Love you post soon. ???

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! The next part is already posted ☺️

  4. Ria

    Heya K**ti K*****,
    God!! I can’t even type your name here?? Well, this episode was so cute (Like, me) and romantic (Unlike you?) Twinj are really so cute and Kunj? He’s too romantic. The last scene? That dialogue, “Don’t ask me such silly questions!”??? I still can’t laughing. It’s so funny. Okay, looking forward to the next?? Take your time though. I know you’re busy. Just don’t stress yourself, but even if it stresses out the shit of you, drop me a text??

    All my love,
    Ria (Your Idiot, forever ?)

    1. Kritika14

      HAHAH thank you idiot! Love you! ?

  5. Sohi

    It was soo romantic and amazing
    Liked twinkles dress very much
    Can you please send me the link of the dress
    Twinj was soo adorable
    Do continue

    1. Kritika14

      So glad you liked the dress but actually it’s not a dress that I found on the internet but it is one of those from my closet! So really sorry, won’t be able to provide a link to it!

      1. Sohi

        It’s OK dear
        But Really telling you. You have amazing quality of selecting something

    2. Kritika14

      Thank you! and also, the next part is already posted! x

  6. Episode was romantic yet marvelous
    Liked twinkles dress
    Date setup was fab
    Do continue

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! The next part is already posted! x

  7. Hey kriti,
    First scene was shooooo cute ☺☺☺ and twinj romance was Just AMAZING babe, ????????? And i love this whn u give twinj kiss ? in ur every epi, ?? guess ?? And kunj line “YOU ARE MINE” uff this give me goosebumps always ?? All overall I Love it, ❤❤❤❤
    Plz post next update soon, ??
    Love you, ??

    1. Kritika14

      Aww, thank you so much! The next part is posted! ☺️

  8. Kritikaa,
    How do you manage to write so good! The romance, the date setup, the dress and the song selection! ❤️ That song is just so good! THE KISS ? you never leave a chance for disappointment! It was such a bliss to read! Moreover, those dialogues ? They were superb! Post the next one very very soon! Looking forward to read the next part! Love you! ?

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! x

  9. Presha

    Hey kritika awesome loved it

  10. Ramya

    It’s amazing loved it
    Love u keep smiling

  11. SidMin23

    It was awesome and the way he described was nice and twinj spending moment together ? And waiting for next part

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! The next part is already up! You can read it now ☺️

  12. RUTU.....

    Hey Kritika,
    Lovely episode dear and cute too post next one soon ???????????????????????

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! The next part is posted! ☺️

  13. Chiku

    Awww!!! Lovely loved it??
    Post soon

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! The next part is up! x

  14. Shalini15

    Hey Kritika, it was amazing nd romantic episode…. Twinj moment with mahi was awsome… nd you are too good in discribe the date setup nd dress nd all… nd their kiss hayeee kya baat hai aaj kal aap badi romantic mood mein hain every episode mein kiss??…. love it yaar… pls post next asap

    Lots of love

    1. Kritika14

      How will I be in a romantic mood? Boyfriend hona bhi toh zaroori hai na ? Anyway, thank you! and also, next part is posted! ☺️ Lovess! x

  15. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute marvelous lovely epi……

  16. Aanya_pandey

    Aahh.. that was such an amazing update yrr… N that kunj admiring his sister… That is the cutest of all.. n yeah.. that date planned by kunj for twinkle… That was also.. really very cute gesture??

  17. Adya

    Heya kriti di,
    Long time huh? Sorry if I didn’t comment on the previous one coz I really don’t remember.

    I’m in damn love with kunj. He’s just do romantic and twinj are sooo cute and sweet. Well the last part was too funny. I was laughing like anything.

    Try posting soon and sport if don’t comment.
    Love you!

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! Well, the next part is already posted! So you post yours soon now, okay?? Love you!

  18. Romaisha

    you posted without telling me???
    How nice -_- :v
    im kidding.. i’m glad i read!!
    It was just fabbbb yaaarrrrr
    so beautiful… Cant wait for next epi
    Loved it!!

    1. Kritika14

      OMG! I’m sorry for forgetting to inform you? ? Anyway, thank you! and yes, the next part is also posted so you can read it now! (Don’t tell me later that I didn’t inform you) ?

  19. Baby

    ohhhhhhh god kritika amazing☺
    tooo cute romantic yet beautiful☺
    to be described am speechless loved it☺
    it was tremendously flawless gorgeous episode☺
    love u lods☺☺
    post nxt asap dear♥♥

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much! The next one is already posted! ☺️

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