The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 38

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(Kunj’s POV)

“Arrey what are the two of you doing here?”, bebe asked us? Both of us still frozen where we were standing cause of the confusion if bebe had seen it all or no. “Where are you lost now?” she spoke again, disturbing my thoughts. 

“Nothing bebe! Just came here to attend a call”, I replied.

“And what about you Twinkle?”, she questioned again.

I could see nervousness on her face and it was easily understood that she had no answer. I quickly blurted “I brought her here along with me as I wanted to talk to her because the other side, there’s a lot of noise”. Twinkle nodded her head in agreement.

“Oh okay! Now quickly come. Everyone is looking out for you two”.

Both of us followed back bebe while Twinkle gave me that ‘I-want-to-kill-you’ look. We were back in the crowd with all the celebration spirit in people and not that I didn’t like it but just that I really miss romancing with Twinkle. I laugh at my sad and depressing life.


(Twinkle’s POV)

“Oh my god! It has been such an tiring day”, I thought as I remove all my accessories while looking at the mirror. “But it was all worth it. The marriage was beautiful but thank god bebe didn’t see me and Kunj that way”, I thought again.

I quickly change into comfortable clothes when I hear someone knocking. I proceed towards the door and there he was! Standing in grey tee and a blue lower with messed up hair along with a bottle of wine? and two glasses.

‘What is it now? and wine?”, I question him.

“Well, it’s celebration time! So I thought to celebrate it with you”, he replied.

“But it’s already celebrated, what now?”, I question him back.

“Well well, there’s another reason too!”, he says.

“And what is that?”, I reply with a rather annoyed face.

“C’mon man! You’ve already taken a step ahead and now, you’re a part of my fam too! Isn’t it something that should be celebrated?”, he says with a smirk.

I stand there, amazed! “How can someone think too much? and then they say girls overthink”, I thought.

“Oh helllo! I’ve been so sweet to you and this is what you do?”

“Now what have I done?”

“What have you done? What haven’t you done? I’m standing here on the door is a bottle of wine and glass for two and this is what you do in return? Don’t even give sweet gesture as if to come in or anything such?”, he said annoyed … I suppose.

“Oh sorry! Come in”, I reply on realizing about it.

“You better be” he said with that stupid annoyed face.

He made himself comfortable on the bed and suddenly gave a weird reaction. “His hand is on that place, OH SHIT” I mumble under my breath and began cursing myself on being so careless.

“What is this so soft?”, he asks.

“No no it’s nothing”, I reply.

I run to place where he was sitting before the disaster could take place but sadly he had finally caught hold of it.

“Kunj, you’re so s*xy. I sometimes wanna eat you up”, I say while making myself comfortable on his lap.

“Twinkle, are you alright?”, he asked worried.

“Why do you think I’m not fine? I’m absolutely fine! But you seriously are a hot thing! Your body makes me go cray and those lips, I wanna bite them so hard, it bleeds”

“I’m asking you one more time Twinkle, are you fine? I have alcohol in my hand and you’re the one high here!”

“Don’t ask too many questions! Just go with the flow”

I jump over him and s*xually move my fingers on his face while trying to reach out his hand with the other hand of mine. I finally succeed and grab the thing but he catches hold of my hand and damnit. It’s all over. All my efforts go in vain.

“Whattt is this?”, he said trying to control his laughter.

“Don’t act too innocent, you know what it is!”, I reply feeling a bit uncomfortable.

“It’s so cute! Wait. This all sudden romance was because of this?” he said pointing at the thing that I had in my hand.

I nodded shyly and he bursted into laughters.

“Btw, it would really look s*xy on you”, he said which shocked me!

“What did you just say?”, I fired him.

“Just the truth! and honestly, it’s really a cute piece”, he spoke which again, left me startled.

I looked back at this thing in my hand – a pink laced bra. “Is it really that cute?”, I thought to myself. I quickly ran to my cupboard and placed it back.

“So you haven’t worn one yet, is it?” he said.

I look at him, appalled. “Is he even in his senses?” I thought.

“Fortunately no! And stop asking me such weird questions”

He laughed again.

“Okay, enough for now! Goodnight”

“What goodnight? I brought a wine and all you say is a goodnight? Moreover, I really want my lips to bleed”, he said smirking.

“Sorry, that was only for that time. I’m in no mood for that now! Listen, I’m really tired. Let’s talk about this tomorrow. Goodnight” I said, dragging him out of my room.

“Oh god Twinkle! Kaise siyappe karti hai tu?” I thought to myself while laying down on my bed. The thought of how sensually I behaved with Kunj gave me a good laugh at myself. I slept with a smile on my face thinking on how cute Kunj is.

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Heyo guys! I hope you’re all doing fine! Well,I’m back again with another update of my fan fiction. Drop down your thoughts about it in the comments section to let me know how you feel about it. Looking forward to read ‘em all! ☺️

Also, really sorry for not being able to reply each one of you individually on the previous part as I’m having a really hectic schedule. I promise to do them soon! But THANK YOU for showering so much love! Your comments makes me wanna write more and more. In fact, this is the only reason for giving regular updates since the new years! Keep supporting guys!

Love you all! ? Take care! x

PS – Ignore the errors (If any) as I didn’t re-read it.

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  1. Sara28

    I’m literally dying of laughter right now! Kunj’s sad and depressing life ? I can’t even form the correct words right now. This was hilarious! Omg keep it up and I’ll eagerly be waiting for the next post. Love you! ?

    1. Kritika14

      HAHAH thank you! x

  2. Ria

    Heya K**ti K***p,
    So, I didn’t know you’re planning on updating so soon. Well, this episode was so hilarious. Seriously? Like, pata hai kya? Teri bhi kismat yahi hone wali hai? On a serious note, I can’t help, but laugh at this adorable sa couple. Omg, they’re too cute for life. And that seduction part?? I can’t get over it. Hope you can update soon.

    All my love,

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you love! x

  3. Loveleen

    Aww tht ws so cute ….Tht sudden romncing part…..How do u get such awesm ideas ….It’s really funny

  4. Kruti

    Kriti that was a hilarious one…..spcly that seduction part???…..cute epi….loved it
    Continue asap

    Loads of love

  5. Sohi

    Hahaha it was funny yet cute
    Their jodi is awesome
    Do continue

  6. SidMin23

    This was the hilarious ? ? part and twinkle seducing kunj ???? and kunj want his lips to bleeds by twinkle ???? I hope soon u will post

  7. Anam_sidhant

    Hey Kritika,
    Ok so ‘hilarious’ was the word came in my mind after reading this!??
    This was something really amazing, I just loved it and how!!
    Post next one real soon!


    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! x

  8. Soumyad

    Hey kritika I m in love with your ff… are an awesome writer…loved the episode… Plz post next episode soon…

  9. SidMin

    Loved it Awesome ?
    Twinj moments were cute and hot?Love you post soon ❤

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! x

  10. Hi Kittu,
    Read 2day’s epi i made my mind to cmntng ☺☺ but sry 4 not cmntng ur prevs 1?? but I read it frm the begning ?? I love ur ff shoooo much ❤❤❤❤ This is just AMAZING ????? Love 2days epi very much ??? the seduction part was ????? How cute my twinj is ??? but i really want to see a Wild twinkle and kunj Lips to Bleed by twinki ?????? Now plzz post next soon ☺☺
    Love you ???

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! x

  11. Chiku

    Now i am seriously laughing hard????????oh god it was sooooo hilarious ????????a Pink laced bra was the thing????loved the seduction part for the bra?????
    Post soon??

    1. Kritika14

      HAHHA thank you!

  12. Roshini125

    Hey Krithika…I think I am cmnting on ur epi for first time….Finally I broke my silence. …their epi so cute n romantic. …will be waiting fr next one

  13. Ohmygod! My cheeks and stomach hurts … I can’t stop laughing! The whole chapter was so damn hilarious ? and that seduction part …. ??? i really wish for twinkle to actually do that and make pretty babies ? okay, I’ve just talked way too much! Really looking forward for you to update with the next chapter as soon as possible.

    Love you ❤?

    1. Kritika14

      HAHA thank you!

  14. Purnima.agrawal30

    Awesome amazing fabulous funny fantastic epi

  15. SidVee_Yashvee

    Awesome n so hilarious ???.. loved the seduction part????.. eagerly waiting for the next ❤

  16. Ramya

    Awesome amazing
    SRY fr late
    Loads of love keep smiling

  17. Aanya_pandey

    Oohhh… Bebe didn’t saw them… N n n … Hahahahaha…. Kunj getting in hand twinkle’s bra???
    So damn funny that scene was

    1. Kritika14

      Glad you liked it! x

  18. Presha

    Hey kritika I m commenting on ur ff for the first time and I read it in one go and all the 38 epi were a blast I really loved it

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much!

  19. Shalini15

    Hey Kritika, firstly very sorry for late comment you know busy schedule nd waise bhi tumhein toh pata hai I’m late lateef….hehehe

    Well episode was awesome nd too funny…. twinkle’s hilarious behaviour was yaar I was laughing like a mad… really twinj are too naughty… nd thank god bebe didn’t saw their kiss.. well it was superb episode… loved it…

    By the way do you recognize me? I think not.. right? so let me itroduce myself…I’m Neha.. actually I’ve changed my account from my old account ‘Vipul’….

    Well post next part asap

    Lots of love♥♥

    1. Kritika14

      Well, I recognized you the first time when you commented with the new username itself! But anyway, thanks for letting me know! Moreover, I’m really glad you liked this part! xx

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