The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 34

In case anyone missed out the previous part,

Part 33

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After 30 days, Sarna house

It was a normal lazy sunday. Kunj was sitting relaxed in the living room. Usha and Mahi were in the kitchen and Manohar was in his room. They hear the doorbell. Usha asks kunj to open the door.

Kunj walks towards and door and opens it to find out Taneja’s standing out with a very pleasing smile on their face. He stands ther shocked and surprised.

Le: kunj puttar?

Kunj comes back to hi senses

Ku: Leela aunty, how come you’re here?
Le: actually, I am here as I’ve something really important to talk about to Bebe, Usha ji and Manohar ji.


Us: Kunj who is on the door?
Ku: mom, Leela aunty is here and she wants to talk something really important to you guys

Usha leaves all her work and goes towards the living to attend Taneja’s.

Le: can we have a talk please?
Us: sure why not?
Le: but just the elders
Us: okay. Kunj go to your room along with Mahi and Yuvraj
Ku: but where’s twinkle aunty?
Le: woh she had some important work so she’ll come in 2 days or maybe earlier ..
Ku: oh okay

Kunj along with Mahi and Yuvraj leave towards the garden.

After 2 hours;

Ma: is your elderly talk over? we are dying to come inside!
Us: yes come in
Yu: by the way … what’s the matter? Elderly talks and all?

Usha calls Yuvraj and makes him sit on the sofa along with Mahi beside him. She goes to the kitchen, brings a box of sweets and feeds the two of them from one.

Yu: aunty?
Us: no more aunty, call me mumma (she said while smiling)

Yuvraj and Mahi were both shocked to see this side of Usha. The two together asked;

“what’s going on? Will someone tell us?”. Kunj also adds, “even I don’t have the slightest clue. Someone tell me too”. All the elders began laughing and later Manohar announced “So the thing is that, we have fixed the marriage for Mahi and Yuvraj!”.

Mahi and Yuvraj, they were over the moon after listening to what Manohar had just said. They had no clue this could ever happen. On the other side, Kunj was happily dancing! Mahi began blushing while Yuvraj asked;

Yu: how and when did this happen? Moreover, only mom knew about my feelings regarding to her then how?
Le: actually, I told your dad and your dad had no problem so that’s why we’re here. Moreover, we wanted it to be a surprise for you and that’s the reason why we didn’t tell you.
Yu: OMG! You guys are the best parents.

Saying this, Yuvraj stood up and hugged them!

Le: all thanks to Usha and Manohar ji after all if they wouldn’t have agreed for the alliance, this wouldn’t have been possible.

Mahi whispered, “thank you mummy! You’re the best!”.

Ma: anything for the smile of our kids!

The ambience was full of happiness.

Ku: but wait, where will the marriage take place?
Ma: okay wait! I’ve something to ask to alll of you.
Us: go ahead.

Gathering all the courage, Mahi spoke;

Ma: I’ve talked about this to Yuvraj before and he’s okay to it. But the question arises here is that if you’ll be okay to or not?
Us: without you letting us know, how will we say if have a problem or no.

After a long pause,

Ma: okay, so what we’ve planned is …. I’ve always dreamt of having christian marriage. Since Yuvraj has no problem to it, I wanna know if you all agree to it or no? I know you’ve all had plans regarding our wedding but please?
Le: I don’t have a problem ….
Us: neither do we have!
Be: go for it Mahi!

Mahi jumped in excitement and hugged both of them. The atmosphere was filled with happy faces. While in excitement, Yuvraj asked;

Yu: so when’s the marriage?
Be: aye haye! Wait dear, what’s the hurry?

Everyone laughed while Yuvi was burying his face because of embarrassment.

Ma: okay, no worries Yuvi! We’ll go to the church and ask an auspicious day, okay?

Yuvraj nodded his head, shyly while Mahi was busy blushing turning pink.


After two days;

Ma: everybody listen up! I went to the church in the morning and guess what the father told ..
Ku: spill the beans out dad
Ma: okayokay. The coming week is very auspicious and we can get them married any day from the next week.

Everyone began hooting.

Ku: Leela aunty, when is twinkle coming?
Le: oh yess, she’ll be coming anytime soon today! I completely forgot to inform you all. Kunj could you pick her up from the airport?

Kunj (himself): I wanted this aunty! You’re the best!

Ku: sure aunty! What time?
Le: around 5 I guess?
Ku: okay, don’t worry! I’ll do that!
Le: thank you so much

Kunj (himself): I’m coming darling!

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Okay, hi guys! How are you all? I know it’s been very long that I’ve updated you guys with this ff. Anyway, I really hope you haven’t forgotten me or my stupid ff.

Talking about the part, did you all like the twist? Also, Mili you’re a mastermind! How did you know this track was coming up? Drop down your comments to let me know what you think.

Moreover, I really had planned to post regular like once in 2 days or something but damn! Actually, my sister is coming back from India. I’d no idea about it before yesterday! Like my mom gave me a surprise. So can’t be promising but will try my best!

Love you! x and take care! ?

P.S – Ignore errors (if any) as I didn’t re-read it.

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  1. Komal123

    How cute is the chapter! I totally loved it ??

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! x The next part is up!

      Lovess! xx

  2. Chiku

    Awww thats soo cute!!! Loved it????lovely
    Post soon
    Love you ?

    1. Kritika14

      Thankyou! x The next part is posted already! 🙂

      Lovess! xx

  3. Awesome ? luvd it…..plzzzz post next asap…

    1. Kritika14

      Thanks! 🙂 The next part is up!

  4. Zuha Fatima

    Hey dumb head ?,
    ‘Slap…Slap…Slap’ Tight slaps for you! How dare you call this magnificent and extra-ordinaroily amazing FF ‘Stupid’ … You know what you are stupid if you think so! Budhoo kahin ki ?

    Okay, okay jokes apart. This was really stupendous and I was waiting for this like hell! Beautifully described and the comeback of Taneja’s was unexpected (at least for a dumb head like me ?)

    So today I’m saying your favorite dialogue ‘Post Soon’ so you better post soon (but if you won’t then also I won’t mind as I can understand you need to have a quality time with your sister ?) Anyways Take care!
    Loads of Love and Support!
    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    1. Kritika14

      You’ll slap me? No etiquettes at all! How can you slap someone elder to you? ? Anyway, thank you for all the lovely words! So glad I could write something which many couldn’t expect cause usually everyone would get to know! ?

      Moreover, to the reply of my favourite dialogue, the next part is already up and you can read it!

      Lovess! xx

      1. Zuha Fatima

        Yeah, you’re right I’ve no etiquettes. After all I’m whose friend? A dumb head like yours ?

        Anyways I just ended up reading the next magnificent work by yours and left my ‘Precious’ (?) comment for my ‘Precious’ (?) dumb head.

  5. Anam_sidhant

    Hey Monica! This episode was the epitome of cuteness, I just loved it and how!!Now what I m waiting for, is twinj romance.Do post soon! Love,xoxo?

    1. Kritika14

      Thankyou! x So glad that you liked the part! Anyway, the next part is already posted!

      Lovess! xx

  6. SidMin

    Loved it Awesome ??
    Why do you call your ff stupid ?????
    I find it to be the sweetest ff ❣
    And you know what I am born mastermind
    Love you post soon ??

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you Mili! Really so happy that you find my ff to be the sweetest! Anyway, the next part is up!

      Lovess! xx

  7. Kruti

    Mona darling acchi chizon ko ganda nahi bolte….bad manners….Ok thoda filmy hogaya but what to do apko toh seedhi bhasha samjh nahi aati….How many times do we tell ur ff is not stupid…..have u forgotten Ria calls u stupid not ur ff… pls nxt time if I find these words stupid boring nd blah blah blah which u r addressing to ur ff… then for sure u wont find my comment

    Anyways….Kunj ki bechaini dekhi nahi jaati…..jaldi Twinkle ko bulao…. D epi was cute….liked it
    Continue asap

    Loads of Love??

    1. Kritika14

      Aww, your comment gave me a good laugh tho ? Anyway, thank you so much for such lovely words! My next part is already up so you can read it now! 🙂

      Lovess! xx

  8. Ramya

    Mona so cute episode lovely
    Loads of love keep smiling

    1. Kritika14

      Thankyou! x

      Lovess! xx

  9. Adya

    Ohk fine .. so you call it STUPID right ? Then what’s my ff .. may I know ? Look before you call it STUPID . Do you even remember how many times have I sent you PM just to post your ff ?

    Today’s episode was a wooowwww !!! I truly love it … I mean how can your STUPID ff be so good hnn…?? Nd Christian marriage ! Like seriously ? I’m too excited….

    Plss post your STUPID ( I’ll address it like this until you realize your fault ) ff soon..
    Love you !

    1. Kritika14

      Aye, shut up! How can you say your ff is … ? ? Okay, I know you texted me quite a lot of times for my ff and trust me, I was so happy to know someone is really waiting for this! Moreover. thank you! x SO glad you liked it! The next part is up, you can read it!

      Lovess! xx

  10. Finally, you are back! So f**king happy! Anyway, about the part … It was amazing! Loved the twist of Yuvraj and Mahi’s marriage! Post soon man. I know your sister is coming but think about us too soo ? not forcing, just a request!

    1. Love you! ?

    2. Kritika14

      Aww thank you! x So glad that you’ve been waiting for so long! Anyway, the next part is up!

      Lovess! xx

  11. SidVee_Yashvee

    Heya, it was a lovely episode.. I knew this was coming but wasn’t sure if it was for twinj or yuhi.. but I’m happy for yuhi too 🙂 post soon ?

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! x The next part is already up!

      Lovess! xx

  12. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous epi

  13. Ria

    Heya Stupid,
    Tanejas are here for YuHi’s marriage?? I thought Tanejas were in Amritsar to propose for TwiNj’s marriage. Well, idk why, but I expected something from you which I shouldn’t be because you’re completely HOPELESS.

    Anyway, the update was absolutely fantastic. I legit loved the idea of a Church marriage. I guess you too have the same wish? Well, I’m waiting for Twinkle’s arrival. Yay!! Tomorrow… Together. I’m so happy.

    All my love,

    1. Kritika14

      Well, I guess you’re much more hopeless than I am! And yes, you’re right! I really wish to have a church wedding tho indian marriages are love but you know, that wish! Anyway, as you know the next part is up, do your work ?

      Love you! ?

  14. Oye !!
    I’m here … Yeah its me.. Your romaisha ????
    Sorry didn’t get to log in but hey? I commented ?
    So ammm… U better start posting ur ff daily cause i have to read what’s gonna happen next!! So damn eager!!!!!!!!! Ahhh ???
    Can’t wait!!
    :v yah i know u missed my crazy ass comments .. I missed them too ?
    Di.. So.. Pleasee please post next one soon !!
    I really like the story.. I don’t even tl you that -_- you are awesomeee. ???
    Anyway.. That’ll do.. Better post the other one soon. Else i won’t comment .. ? .. ???

    Loads and loads of love!!!! ???????

    1. Kritika14

      Aye, I missed your comment so much! Glad you did on my insistence! ? Anyway, the next part is up cause you asked me so why not! ? Now don’t eat my head and read that okay?

      Lovee you! ?

  15. Oyee!! Yasss I’m here!! Yeah i know you were thinking about me and yay I’m here!!
    Sorry.. Couldn’t get to log atm so i commented right away… Yes child.. Its mere Romaisha !!! ????

    Oh god! Im being mindblown again!!! ???
    Really.. Im seriously your biggest fan rn! God your writingg damnnn
    Haa.. One problem.. You can not keep me waitin for this.. Its illegal ?
    Please please please post asap! Pleashhg ?

    See i commented .. Now please post.. Gotta keep reading.. Ok di?
    Yaar i missed you so much and your story;

    Plz post soon yaar di.

    Loads of lovee !! ??????????

  16. Aanya_pandey

    Yuhi ki shadi… Will b waiting fr twinj ki shadi?

    1. Kritika14

      HAHAHA, wait for it! ?

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