The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 31


If anyone missed out the previous part;

Part 30

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Next morning,
Twinkle’s room:

Sunlight falls over twinkle which wakes her up. She finds herself sleeping over kunj’s shoulder on the sofa. She was surprised as she had no idea how she landed up sleeping at his shoulder. She gets up from the sofa and lovingly sees kunj sleeping. She caresses his hair and goes to freshen up. She comes out wearing a grey top paired up with white denim along with a long maroon colored cape. She finds kunj still sleeping and thinks “He looks so cute and innocent when he sleeps but when he’ll wake up, he’ll back on his stupid annoying mode. Anyway, I guess I should wake him up already, it’s getting late”. She moved towards kunj and tried waking up kunj but all in vain. She then gets up, fills a glass of water and splashes it on his face which wakes kunj up completely.

Ku: what on earth is wrong with you twinkle?
Tw: what now?
Ku: are you a psycho? You could have awakened me by just calling out my name but no, you have to do all this stupid things right?
Tw: look, I tried it all! I called out your name, moved your shoulders and even tickled you but you were so engrossed in your sleep that you couldn’t even feel all of this so I had no other option left.
Ku: are you kidding me?
Tw: okay, stop fighting over this stupid thing. Go pack your stuffs! Don’t you know we have a flight to amritsar tonight?
Ku: yea right! But but, first a good morning kiss is required (he winks)
Tw: shut up and go!
Ku: not leaving until you don’t!

Twinkle gives a cute little peck on his cheeks.

Ku: what man! I didn’t ask for a kiss on my cheeks -.-
Tw: you didn’t mention so now my work is over. You better leave my room, even I have to pack my stuffs.

Kunj stands still and doesn’t move. Twinkle drags him out of the room, closes the door and laughs at his childishness.

It was 8 in the night, everyone had gathered to have dinner.

Be: so is everyone done with packing their stuffs? Btw, when is our flight taking off?
Ku: 2 in the morning.
Be: okay then, we’ll leave by 12 alright?

Everyone agrees.

Be: let’s have dinner then?
Tw: sure!

Everyone began to have dinner. All talking about the best times they had spent in phuket. By the time they had completed their dinner along with desserts, it was 11.

Be: I guess we should all go and get freshen up and check out everything now because it’s already 11. All of you, meet at the reception at 11:45 and from there .. all of us will leave for airport.

Alll agree and leave to their respective rooms.


Everyone had assembled at the reception and waiting for a taxi. The taxi arrives, they all settle down and left for the airport.

At the airport;

They had completed all the security checks and immigration and were sitting at the gate. It was 1:45 and a lady announced that the gates are open for the flight to amritsar. All boarded to the flight and because everyone were given seats in pair, twinkle and kunj sat together.

It was 2:15 in the morning when the flight took off. The duration of the flight was 4 hours.

Ku: we have a long way to go! What are you planning to do?
Tw: what do you mean by what are you planning to do? Its 2:30 in the morning, what will you even do? Shut up and sleep and let me sleep as well.
Ku: are you kidding me? We won’t get such golden opportunities always plus you’ll soon be flying back to Mumbai as well (he sounded sad)

Twinkle realized he was right. Soon after they reach amritsar, she would hardly stay for another couple of days and will be leaving to mumbai.

Tw: okay, so what do you want to do?
Ku: whatever you wish?

Twinkle stood up and called for an air hostess and asked for two cups of coke. Twinkle and kunj sat and talked the whole journey back to amritsar about how the two fell for each other and all. They had passes 3 and a half our talking about all this. Kunj holds twinkle’s hand and entangled them with his. He then lifted it up and kissed on her hand and she rested her forehead on his shoulder.

Ku: I love you twinkle. I don’t wanna loose you. What are we gonna do when we will be living differently?

Twinkle sensed the fear and pain in his voice and cupped his face and spoke;

Tw: don’t you consider our love to be strong? I am sure we’ll tackle this situation as well. Don’t you worry okay?

Kunj nodded.

Tw: we’ll call each other everyday and talk about the day. This way we’ll feel each other’s presence and moreover, my heart already belongs to you.

Kunj cupped twinkle’s face and gently kissed her forehead.

They had finally reached amritsar. All family members met each other, cleared all the security checks and moved out of the airport towards the car which was waiting for them.

All reached to Sarna Mansion and went to freshen up. Later everyone assembled for breakfast.

Le: okay then bebe, we shall take leave soon! Our tickets are booked for tomorrow and we’ll leave for mumbai
Be: what’s the hurry leela ji? You could have stayed for a little longer
Le: no no its alright! We don’t really wanna trouble you so yea
Be: as you wish!

Listening to this conversation, twinj’s face turned pale due to shock. Twinkle had no guess about this. The rest of the family began eating while twinkle and kanj’s face was sad.

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Okay, I personally allow anyone to curse me because I know I deserve it. Yea I am sorry, I genuinely am! Yes I know it has been really long since I have updated but I was really busy and then festive season pluss laziness. Okay! But guys are you not liking the plot? Well, I always say it’s boring but you guys always encouragee me write as you all like it. But on the recent post of mine, I’ve got really less comments compared to the number of comments I usually get. I know my ff is boring when compared to the other ff’s in this site. Yet again, won’t be forcing but a small comment wouldn’t harm, right? Anyway, hope you guys still give me your support. Will really be looking forward for your curses or whatever the comment is ? So bye guys? Love you all and take care! xx ? Plus ignore errors (if any) cause I didn’t re-read this one!

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  1. Joonakanksha

    Awesome dear… post jldi jldi

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! x

  2. Ria

    You stupid!!! Is this what you give me to read after 21 long days? See, I’ve not even greeted you. You’re being mean yet again. I mean yes, I know you’re mean bit, still..

    Okay, this update was legit short. ?? Well, I know you’re keeping really busy (Just kidding?) and ofcourse you’re lazy enough to type but, please think about us and start updating a bit sooner.

    Anyway, this update was a cute one. Dude, I’ve a question!! Are all the girls nakhrebaaz like me ya phir you know just for show? Cuz just a kiss wouldn’t have harmed but, still that peck on cheek and tantrums don’t seem to be over.??

    Okay, finally, I love you my Bae!!❣

    1. Meeta

      I bet U’ll be Nakhrebaaz, too.
      If you would be, I’ll remind you of Kissing your mate on lips won’t matter, never disappoint him with just a peck on cheeks.
      Well, Monica, I agree with Ria, the update was very short. But height of cuteness.
      Ohh. I can’t bear TwiNj separating.

      Loads of love♥♥

      1. Ria

        Meeta!!?? I already am nakhrebaaz.. I meant like for Twinj it shouldn’t ever matter.?? This Monica is another nakhrebaaz.?

      2. Kritika14

        Meetaaa ??? Anyway, I still do think my update was the same length as of what I usually write but if you all say so, I’ll try increasing it for the next update? But still, thanks xx To know if twinj are gonna separate, stay tuned to my ff! ? (okay it seems like I am advertising my ff ?) Well, it’s quite obvious on what will happen next though ?

        Lovess! xx ?

      3. Kritika14

        And wait! Ria, why am I nakhrebaaz all of a sudden?

    2. Kritika14

      Yo idiot,
      Well I know I am mean and so do you! So c’mon don’t expect such things from me? ? To my opinion, I wrote the part the same length as what I write every time but don’t really know why all of you think it’s short! Anyway, I guess girls are really dramebaaz ? Actually some might be dramebaaz while some could just do it for showing? C’mon there are different kinds of people and I ain’t a philosopher here, do I look like one? ?

      Dont worry, I know you are an idiot yet I’ll still love you ?❣️ (Too cheesy again ?)

      1. Ria

        Stupid, you aren’t a nakhrebaaz? Oh really? Wait! When I meet my jiju you shall just kiss him without any nakhras??? *ultimate fun*

        Dude, Okay, but, this Twinkle in your ff as well as mine is a nakhrebaaz.. always showing various nakhres..??, I love you forever.. may be even more than my would be jiju.?? ❣ (Cheesy, cheesy, cheesy!!)

  3. So back after a long time the episode was emotional and awesome

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much! x

  4. Rashiverma2199

    Awesome episode

  5. Vipul

    Hey Monika ! u know what maine agar TEI2 manga hota to I’m sure meri ye wish bhi puri ho jati bcz since many days I was thinking about ur ff only n look today u posted it…. well u know what if next time u dare to call ur ff boring then I’ll kill u…. ur ff is one of my favourite ff… so pls dont say like this pls…
    Todays epi was amazing n emotional… feeling sad for twinj….hope they will not get seperate….
    N I missed ur cmnt also on my ff .. u did not read that???
    Well leave it n post next asap…dont be delay for next… ok???
    Now ba bye n tc
    ♥Loads if love♥


    1. Kritika14

      Hey di,
      I feel so good to know that you would love this as TEI2! It really is a great compliment to me. Thank you so much for it! x Glad to know you really have been waiting for my ff.

      Moreover, I am sorry. I guess I missed out your update. I’ll soon read it and comment as well. Thank you for letting me know as well. Anyway, I ‘ll try uploading soon, can’t be promising!

      Lovess! xx

  6. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous epi

  7. Amazing epi as always.. loved Twinj’s cute scenes??.. you know what today only i was thinking about your ff and you posted it today only.. i guess if i had asked for something else as well, i would get it ??.. and ur ff isnt boring.. its unique n amazing in its own way.. everyone writes diff stories and each n every ff,os and ss are amazing.. plz do post soon ❤

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! xx Glad to know you were thinking and waiting for my ff. I’ll try posting the next part soon but can’t be promising! Hope you understand. Lovess! xx

  8. Ramya

    Awesome amazing episode

  9. Chiku

    Wowwww amazing ?????
    Loved it. Dont tell me that twinj are going to get separated. Abhi toh inka romance woh bhi tantrums wala chamu hua thain???? but overall loved it.
    Waiting for next one. Iss bar jaldi oost kardena.
    Love u??

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you cheeku! Feels good to know you really liked it. Well, I’ll try uploading the next part soon but can’t be promising!
      Lovess! xx ?

  10. Jisha

    And after a long gap, I am commenting on ur ff… yippee… awesome episode… hope twinj does not get separated… felt it is a short episode…I know u r busy… that is ok

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you jisha di! x Happy to know you liked the episode! I am sorry, I know many of you felt the update to be short so I’ll try uploading the next one longer. Hope you continue to support me! Lovess! xx

  11. Jisha

    Commenting after a long time on ur ff… awesome episode, but felt it is a short one…I know you are busy… hope twinj does not get separated…

  12. Zuha Fatima

    Okay! You know what I am feeling that I should slap you tight on your face ??? Hey, just kidding!! God….Though the episode was cutr but it was short 🙁 Please try to make longer next time! And … DON’T U DARE SAY THAT UR FF IS BORING!!

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    1. Kritika14

      Aww, come slap me! At least I would meet you this way ?? Well, sorry cause I couldn’t write a longer update but I’ll surely try writing a longer one for the next one!
      Lovess! xx

  13. Adya

    Ufffffff…….di u know what
    ….u r crazy……I was waiting for It sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo EAGERLY……
    Nd soooooo short……how bad of u……bt it was superrrrrrrrrrrr cuttttteeeee…..hnnn hnnn it was very cute…..
    Bt Next time u post this short….I’ll stop talking to u……
    Ohk now it was enough ……one word comment ;!!!!!!!!! FINE?????
    ND PLSSS post soon……and plsss a bit looonnnngggggg…….
    It’s a request….!!!!!!!!!! Or order !!!!!!! U decide ok ????
    Love u

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! xx Feel great to know you were waiting for my ff for a really long time. I hope I made your wait worth?! Anyway, I know you are a little upset because of my short update but I’ll try posting a longer one next time. Also, I’ll try posting soon, can’t be promising!
      Lovess! xx

  14. OMG! so you are finally here. I missed you so much. I missed your ff as well. Dude heights of laziness! C’mon be active and start giving us regular updates alright? Anyways, this update was short yet so cute! I loved the section where twiinj had their cute little romance in the flight. Hope you write sooner this time with a bigger update.
    Love you ❤️

    1. Kritika14

      Heya kee (I hope you don’t mind me calling that),
      It feels great to know you missed me and my ff as well! Well, sorry as well for being so lazy? ? I’ll try being regular this time with a longer update!
      Lovess! xx

  15. Aamu

    N romance in flight was???
    Do cont…
    Post soon??

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! Will surely try to post as soon as possible x

  16. SIDMIN-Daamini

    Di !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Itna cute ….. uffffff….. itne din baad aur itna cute part SIRF SHORT UPDATE MEIN …. koi ni this much I can understand must be busy buthis short epi ………… main toh jal kar raaakh ho gayi hun ….. I mean like ….. I just loved it … amazing…… muuuaaaahhhhh ????
    Curse toh ni karoongi but duaa karoongi ki next jaldi ho …… ???
    Lub uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ???????

    1. Kritika14

      Aww, I am sorry! Next time pakka, I’ll try giving a long one! Moreover, thank you for such a lovely comment! x I’ll surely try to post asap!
      Lovess! xx ?

  17. dreamer...arundhati

    mons….lovely epi

  18. Reading ffs after soooo long feeel so good?Such a beautiful episode gurl??

    1. Kritika14

      Haha, thank you so much girl! x

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