The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 29

In case anyone didn’t read the previous part,

Part 29
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(Ishq bulaava plays in background)

Ku: twinkle, why is that when we are not together i feel so lifeless and when we are together i feel so happy and full of life. It’s like you are my soulmate. Everything seems just perfect when i am around you. Though we fight but i can never think of hurting you. The truth is that I’m crazy about you twinkle. I feel so alone without you. I wanted to tell you this since so long but never found the right time and now i think it is. I am really crazy about you twinkle. I can’t imagine my life without you now. If i don’t see you even for a while, i feel restless. Twinkle, I LOVE YOU! I really do.

Tw: I LOVE YOU TOO KUNJ! (in shock plus excitement plus happiness)

(Sajna ve plays in background)

They have a deep and an intense eyelock. In fraction of seconds they hug each other tightly filled with passion and love. While hugging, both recall their moments; the first time they met, airplane incidents, kunj taking care of twinkle when she was sick and drunk and many more. Kunj caresses twinkle’s face and gives a gentle kiss on her forehead. Twinkle smiles and hugs him back. Kunj breaks the hug and cups her face and says “you look cuter when you blush”. This makes twinkle blush harder. While twinkle was busy blushing, kunj picks her up in his arms in bridal style and walks till her room. He says “open the door”. “No I won’t! First put me down” she protested. “Fine then! Get ready to face the consequences” says kunj naughtily moving closer towards her lips. Twinkle frights and gives away the card in fear. “Good girl” say kunj while twinkle gives a disgusted face. Kunj opens the door with great difficultly and puts her on the bed. He goes to close the door and turns to find out twinkle had moved somewhere. He began to search for twinkle later realizing she is in the toilet. She opens the and comes out wearing a plain blue top along with a pair of grey lowers. She walks towards kunj who is standing numb and she snaps her fingers to zap him back to the reality. “What’s wrong?” says twinkle. “No nothing!” adds kunj. Twinkle walks towards her cupboard and keeps her dress inside it. As she turns back she finds two strong arms to stop her from moving.

Tw: kunj!
Ku: yes?
Tw: let me go
Ku: why should I?
Tw: cuz I am tired and need to sleep
Ku: oh really? So you really want to sleep right now? Your eyes say something different
Tw: shut up and let me sleep and even you sleep
Ku: what’s the hurry?
Tw: Look over there …

Kunj turns his neck to look but little did he know what would happen next. Twinkle hits his arms making him to move his arm and she runs away. SO THE CHASE STARTS! Kunj behind twinkle. Both are running across the whole room.Finally kunj catches hold of twinkle and start moving towards her. While moving twinkle is stopped by the bed’s edge and falls on the bed. Kunj too falls, kunj over twinkle. They were close, close enough to feel and hear each other’s breath. Both were just lost into the moment, lost in each other’s eyes which was filled with passion for love. Kunj moves a little closer which made their noses touch and leans over for a kiss. In no time, twinkle gives a peck on kunj’s lips having him completely shocked. She rolls on another side of the bed and stands up saying “Well, I guess that’s enough for today! Good night Mr Sarna. Will be seeing you tomorrow now”. Kunj is still standing shocked as this was never expected by him even in his wildest dreams. Twinkle shook him and he finally was back to his senses and touched his lips and smiled. Twinkle blushed seeing his reaction. “Now move!” ordered twinkle. Kunj began to move and went to twinkle. He held twinkle’s forehead and gave a gentle kiss on her forehead and spoke “I Love You Twinkle”. “ I Love You too” replies twinkle. Kunj leaves the room and twinkle locks her door.

Kunj’s room;

He enters him room, changed his dress and rolls onto his bed with a beautiful smile captured on his face. He reminisces all the moments he had spent with twinkle and specially the one where both had confessed about their love and the peck which twinkle had given to him.

On the other side, twinkle was on her bed with her phone on her hand which displayed kunj’s picture. “So finally, we have become one! I have always dreamt of this day and it has happened in the most beautiful way” thinks twinkle. Both of them think about the day and fall asleep with a satisfying smile on their face.

Next morning, The breakfast hall;

Everyone has assembled in the breakfast hall.

Be: Thank you so much leela ji, without you this marriage wouldn’t have been so successful.
Le: There’s nothing for you to thank me about. It was my duty to do so.

Bebe smiles.

Be: and yes i forgot to inform you that we won’t be having a reception as we have an emergency to go back to amritsar

Listening to this twinj’s faces turn dull.

Le: well okay then! We’ll stay here for another 2 days and leave then okay?

Bebe nods.

Be: so final then! today all of you can roam around and tomorrow we’ll start packing for amritsar alright?

All agree.

Tw: btw bebe where is yuvi bhai and mahi di? Haven’t seen them throughout the wedding and i tried calling them and their phone came unreachable?
Ku: yes even i tried contacting with them
Be: oh yes i forgot! I have only send both of them to amritsar as i needed some documents from there but now I’ll tell them to stay there as we are also coming soon. So today, all of just roam around as much as you want here as it is your last day.

All agree and leave for their rooms.

Twinkle’s room;

Twinkle to kunj;

Tw: okay, go to your room and get ready and let me also get ready and then we’ll go somewhere okay?
Ku: what’s the need for me to go, i’ll help you dress up (says naughtily and winks at her)
Tw: shut up you dirty minded person. Now go!

She pushes kunj out of the room and closes the door. She turns back and smiles on the whole incident and thinks “I love you kunj! You are the best thing that happened to me”. On the other side of the door, kunj leans on the door and thinks “I love you twinkle! You are the best thing that happened to me. I’ll always keep you happy”.

Precap: Twinj day out^^

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Sup guys? I hope all of you are doing well. So how was this? I hope i did justice to their romance after their confession. I guess i am pretty early this time? Thank you to all those who are regularly commenting on my ff. It really makes me so happy! Hope you guys continue to do so. Anyway, bye guys x Take care! Love you ? Ignore errors (if any) as i didn’t proof read this one!

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  1. Rashiverma2199

    Lovely episode….

    1. Kritika14

      thanks 🙂

  2. dreamer..arundhati

    Mons missed this…superb epi

  3. Amazing loved twinj scene

  4. Anam_sidhant

    Twinj romance was on peak of cuteness??? it was amazing monica❤ and uh know what now I can’t wait for next episode please please please try to post asap???

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! Will surely try posting soon ?

  5. SIDMIN-Daamini

    Di !!!!! It was so hot hot ……. I’m melting not coz of cuteness but with the hotness …….. loved it a lot n u didn’t did justice ……. u rocked ……… that sudden kiss was amazing ……. ??? itni khushh hun ki abhi kisi ko bhi kissy yaa hug dedu….. I know thodi vulgar ho gayi but kya karu ….. very excited for twinj day out ….. post next one soon ….
    Love u ???

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! Aur koi baat nahi, i didn’t find this vulgar. So happy you liked this. Will try posting the next one soon x Love you ?

  6. Awesom….. Amazing job really luvd it waiting for nxt excited for their day out post nxt asap

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! Will surely try posting the next one soon x

  7. Amazing epii.. aww their confession and after-confession romance was soo cute??.. really loved it.. and the sudden kiss by twinkle was awesome n kunj’s reaction ??.. eagerly waiting for twinj’s day out.. do cont soon ?

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you sidvee! Glad to know you liked it x Will surely try to post the next part soon ?

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  9. Ranabulbul

    Awesome epi..u rocked it girl….it was cute ..and hot also…
    Just imagine twinj romance…uff….
    I love them and ur ff and u too..
    So post soon

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! Will try posting soon x

  10. amazin…awesome epi…really luved it…do post soon.

    1. Kritika14

      Thanks! Will try posting soon 🙂

  11. Angita


  12. Kruti

    Super cute epi……loved it
    Twinj scenes were….muhaaaa
    Very well written….loved d epi

    Love u???

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! ?

  13. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute marvelous lovely epi

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x

  14. It was such a cuuuuutttteeeeee confession………I mean loved it………..u wrote too gud yaarrr……..just fabulous………… nyyyccclyyyyyy… written………….it was amazingly written

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! x

  15. That was great, Monica.
    That confession.?
    Next one soon.

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! WIlll surely try to post soon ?

  16. Awesome……..

  17. Shreya098

    Lovely epi..
    Loooved it❤❤❤

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! ?

  18. Chiku

    Awesome ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????
    Really loved it
    Very cute episode

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you chiku ?

  19. Thanmy

    Hey!!!! Monica dii thanq for my b’day gift (u posted ur episode noo well don’t be shocked today is my b’day?) n that tooooooooo such a cute episode u made my day dii thanq n twinj were shooooooo cute wow!!!!!! I just loved today’s episode???☺
    Love u dii but plssss next one asap??

    1. Kritika14

      OMG! How dumb can i be? HAPPY BIRTHDAY ❤️ I really had no clue about this! Wish i had </3 Anyway, i hope you get all the happiness you deserve and have a great year ahead full of excitement. Continue to give me more of your beautiful yet unique ff's for which I crave. Wishing you all the success. Love you ❤️

      Well, coming to your comment, i was waiting for it *literally waiting*. Glad you commented! I am really happy as I made your day with my ff. Will surely post the next one soon ?

  20. HEYO! Well I am doing great, hoping for the same for you. You know what? I am melting here as there was so much romance/love in the air. Like wow! Firstly, the confession was super cute and their romance ? Seems like you have a lot of knowledge on romance ?? But honestly that was just splendid. Also, sorry for the late comment but what to do, these studies ufff (I know I am filmy and dramatic so don’t laugh okay? ?) Overall, it was just perfect! So keep writing and soon give the next part. Hope you dont keep us waiting. Lots and lots of love ❤️?

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much and i’m doing great too! Honestly, i am so happy to seee your comment and its okay for the late comment x Will surely try to post soon x Loves xx ?
      P.S – Even my best friend’s name is keerat, and some what you talk the same way she does!

  21. Awesome epi.. Loved it…

  22. awseOme

  23. Rafaya

    Hey Monica,
    Rafaya here! I hope u know me … as I am guessing so 😛 Well I never read your FF before but Zuha (You might be knowing her, she is my closest pal) recommended this FF and girl the romance was so damb s*xy! I am out of words…Go on girl! Just go on!

    1. Kritika14

      heya! Thank you so much for those words. They really meant a lot to me! And yes, i do know you cuz you are writing a ff with zuha right? Anyway, really happy to see your comment 🙂 Loves xx

  24. Romaisha

    Dii!! Awesome!! Really enjoyed all the twinj scenes! ??
    Damn hot and cute!
    Love u dear 🙂

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you darling! ?

  25. Zuha Fatima

    So I am late…Actually my mobile broke so I have to use lappy to comment…missed so much all this while…It was so hot and left me awestruck!! I am just spellbound by your imagery!! Keep it up! Love ya!

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you zuha! Was really waiting for your comment. Happy to see you back. Love you ?

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