The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 28

If anyone missed out the previous part,

Part 27

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The Wedding Night!

So the night had finally arrived. The night for which everyone longed for, worked hard for. The venue looked heavenly. The atmosphere was filled with happy faces and sparkling dresses. The venue had benches on both the sides which were draped with a combination of green and white cloth along with a bunch of flowers at the tip of the benches. The stage had six chairs, two at the centre while two each at both the sides of the stage.

( This link might help you to picture the scene better )

All the elders were present and were busy attending guests. So now arrives our handsome kunj. He wore blue pants with white shirt and a blue coat to accompany by. His hair perfectly set up making him look hot as ever.

(A glance at his appearance*xJNiM%3A )

He also gets busy in attending the guests and later thinks “where is this twinkle? taking so much time to get ready as if she is the bride”. He wanders here and there but suddenly something shocks him and leaves him completely amazed. Yes, it was twinkle. She was slaying like a queen. (Wont describe the dress of hers as its really difficult to do so and also if i had to describe, i would describe it in the shittiest way so rather leaving it. So therefore, just check out her dress from this link, hope it works’s&client=safari&rls=en&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiXzPG5sK_PAhXHqI8KHcqcA_YQ_AUICCgB&biw=1247&bih=726#tbm=isch&q=pink+lehenga&imgrc=M3bhzjhj0vI5KM%3A )

Kunj just couldn’t take his eyes off her. She walks towards kunj and snapped her fingers to bring him back to the reality.

Tw: kaha kho gaye? (Where are you lost?)
Ku: tujh mein (into you) (without realizing what he spoke)
Tw: Kyaa??? (what?)
Ku: (after realizing) no nothing!
Tw: acha anyway, I’ll take a leave now! Ma was calling me. Bye!
Ku: acha twinkle sun (listen twinkle)
Tw: bolo? (speak up?)
Ku: You look hot
Tw: thank you! (with a broad smile on her face and some blushing)

Twinkle leaves leaving kunj numb in her beauty. He thinks “Haye! Yeh toh meri jaan leke hi chodegi”.


As it was late at night, many people had left and only the close relatives had stayed. It was now the time for the pheras. The priest was sitting on the mandap and preparing for it. Within some while, he called out for the bride and groom. He then told them to stand up and get ready to take the 7 pheres after all the puja that was required. Both ashutosh and megha stood up and began to take the pheras and promising each other on never leaving anyone’s side. All this while, twinj were lovingly looking at the pheras and smiling. After the 7 vows, ashu made her wear the mangalsutra and filled her forehead with vermillion. The priest then said that they are now officially husband and wife and ask them to take blessings of elders. They took blessing of all. All blessed them to have a great marriage life ahead. Everything winded up quickly and soon the area was all quite as everyone had left leaving twinkle and kunj. Twinkle was just about to leave and kunj got hold of her wrist making her stop. She turned and asked “kya hua? (what happened?”. Kunj replied “wanna talk about something”.”oh! well then speak up? what are you waiting for?” replied twinkle. Kunj moved forward and now twinj were close enough. He held her hand and spoke;

(Ishq bulaava plays in background)

Ku: twinkle, why is that when we are not together i feel so lifeless and when we are together i feel so happy and full of life. It’s like you are my soulmate. Everything seems just perfect when i am around you. Though we fight but i can never think of hurting you. The truth is that I’m crazy about you twinkle. I feel so alone without you. I wanted to tell you this since so long but never found the right time and now i think it is. I am really crazy about you twinkle. I can’t imagine my life without you now. If i don’t see you even for a while, i feel restless. Twinkle, I LOVE YOU! I really do.

Tw: I LOVE YOU TOO KUNJ! (in shock plus excitement plus happiness)

(Sajna ve plays in background)

They have a deep and an intense eyelock. In fraction of seconds they hug each other tightly filled with passion and love. While hugging, both recall their moments; the first time they met, airplane incidents, kunj taking care of twinkle when she was sick and drunk and many more. Kunj caresses twinkle’s face and gives a gentle kiss on her forehead. Twinkle smiles and hugs him back.

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How many of you missed me and my boring ff? I am sure no one did. But i think I owe you guys an apology, i am sorry for posting this part a week late but i was pretty stuck up with my studies so didn’t have the time to write. So here it is, the most awaited moment! You guys guessed it right and ofc it was pretty obvious at the fact that this was gonna be the confession. So this is what i had planned. I know it ain’t extraordinary like how the confessions are in other ff’s but i rather chose this because it has some importance and symbolizes the way how twinj made their confession of love (hope you guys remember it). Really wishing i haven’t disappointed anyone here. I know I ain’t a great writer like the others here on tu. Won’t say much.Bye x love you all ? Ignore errors (if any)

P.S. – Hoping for all links to work. *fingerscrossed* if they don’t, i am sorry for that as well. ?

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  1. Ria

    Hey stupid,
    Glad to see you back after a long time. To be frank, I just missed your ff and not you cuz you were always to eat my head..just kidding okay? I love you so, I don’t get irritated by you.

    Coming back to this, it was so simple yet so elegant. I just loved it. Just a moments back I relived the TEI confession memory. Gosh! I miss them.? Anyways, hoping to see you back earlier this time.

    Loads of love.?

    1. Kritika14

      Hey idiot,
      Well I’ll say i can just try to post the next part soon as i have to much stress rn. Anyway, thank you for this and i also miss tei really bad </3 Love you girl ?

  2. Ranabulbul

    Haye main to aj Mr hi jaengi…today I fainted in school so came back home early…and saw ur ff read it and it was not less than a booster that they confessed so cute epi and so romantic
    Loved it to the core dude..keep posting…
    Bbye love u

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so so much! So happy you liked it! Love you too x

  3. Hey Monica
    I missed u and your f2f so much…….
    Loved episode it was amazing…
    love u

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you payal x

  4. Kruti

    TEI ke confession ki yad dila di????……missing d show like hell

    Anyways……simple yet a beautiful nd cute confession…..Nice epi
    Continue soon

    Love u???

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you kruti x Love you ?

  5. Heyyy i missed u so much… Nd who told u that it’s boring… Listen moni, it’s not boring at all… Got it… Nd superb epi…

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much! Glad to know you don’t find this ff boring 🙂

  6. Aamu

    do cont
    atlast awaited moment..

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you!

  7. Anam_sidhant

    Of course I missed u and ur ff..I really wait for ur ff to read❤ and that confession part reminds me of tei? I really miss them? the episode was surperb! Post next one asap?

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much! I miss tei too </3 Anyway, I'll try posting the next part asap 🙂

  8. Chiku

    Awesome monica darling
    Loved it
    Next jaldi upload karna
    Loved it
    Love u❤️❤️❤️

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you chiku x I’ll try uploading the next one soon. Love you ?

  9. Shreya098

    Finally u are here..
    I was waiting for this..

    Tei memories flooded back??

    Loooved it????

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much! Even I miss tei -.- Anyway, loves xx

  10. Thanmy

    Diiii u trust me noo I know u will so plsssss stop saying that ur a bad writer kal hi bohut daanta tha mein ne not this time don’t worry I won’t take ur class but pls stop saying that ur a bad writer so mein toh aapko miss kiya aap maano yaa na maano I no u will not aacept because if u would then u would not tell all that in ur ff huh diii ur simply amazing
    So finally ashu ka shaadi hogaya oh no!!???twinkle Mumbai chali jaayegi ??vaise proposal dhamaal tha diii its far far far and lot mainer times better than me n sacchi mei i miss tei a lot!!!! Aur aap ne unka yaad diladiya!!!!! It was completely outstanding aur diii yeh kya shitty ideas laga rakha haii if u think so then I loveeeeeeeee ur shitty ideas???
    It was simple n fabulous diiiiii next one asap plsssssssss
    Love u dii

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so so much! So damn happy to know you think liked it. and shut up! Don’t you dare say ki mine was far much better than your cuz you are equally an amazing and really talented writer so don’t underestimate yourself okay? Even I miss tei a lot that is why I wrote this for a remembrance for tei. Also, to know what will happen next, stay tuned 🙂 and, thank you for loving my shitty ideas ? Love you ?

  11. dreamer..arundhati

    Monica jhalli…we missed you and your ff a lot
    The confession was worth it

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! and i love it when you call me jhalli ?

  12. Rashiverma2199

    Hy I missed u a lot….
    Loved the confession….. Amazing

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you dude x

  13. Simiyy

    I missed your ff and you …. I loved the epi

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you!

  14. SidMin

    Loved it KK 🙂 The part was so sweet and the confession was so sweet TEI ke yaad dila de 🙂 Love you yar 🙂
    And How dare you call my KK’s ff boring ? You can’t do that Okay ..
    Love you yar and your ff is not at all boring so Please post soon 🙂

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much! Your words really brought a smile to my face. Will surely try to post the next one soon. Love you ?

  15. Awesome

  16. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute lovely marvelous mind blowing epi

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you!

  17. Amazing epi.. loved their confession?? made me remind it twinj’s confession in tei in that mandap.. I’m missing them already??.. do cont soon ?

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you! Even i am missing tei very much ? Anyway, I’ll try writing soon x

  18. Shatakshi

    Omg Monica
    It was a perfect Proposal setup❤❤
    Frankly I too love a cute setups so it was Awesome for me
    N excuse me u r no one to judge urself as a bad writer…becoz u r not
    It was really Amazing
    Looking forward to it.
    Love u darling?❤❤

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much sha x Those words really meant a lot to me. So happy you loved this part! Love you ?

  19. Well hi! Remember me? Ofc you will after all I am such a spontaneous personality isn’t it? *Okay jokes apart* But wow! What was that? I am shocked. I mean how can you think of such great ideas? Like dude, you really just did how tei actually made the confession. I am so impressed. This was just the best setup. and stop saying you disappointed us. You didn’t so chill. Moreover, your dress choices ….. DAMN DAMN DAMN! They are just so perfect and lovely. Specially, I loved twinkle’s lehenga and the wedding setup and as usual you are so unique that instead of actually giving link to a designer suit, you just gave us the link to sid’s picture! Like that shows how creative you are! Honestly, you rock girl. Keep it up! Really looking forward for the rest of the story. Love youuuuuu ❤️

    1. Kritika14

      Ofc i remember you cuz you are such an amazing person! Your words are legit killing me. Your comment makes me blush ? So damn happy you liked this part. I really am out of words to say to you. All i’ll say is …. I love you ?

  20. Zuha Fatima

    Wow Mona di u seriously are rocking ??? Amazingly amazing! I know I am a bit late but seriously loved this part. Also the confession was so damn amazing! Keep it up!

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much zuha! Happy to know you liked it ?

  21. Romaisha

    Ohhh Myyy Goddd!!! ???????
    Drop dead shocked and mindblown!! ???
    Like damn you’re so good at this!

    Their outfit, the atmosphere there emotions! Like .. Damn blissful yaar!!
    Yah the confession did make me remember the tei confession which i loved !!! Seriously dii it was too amazing!! ???
    Love u yaar!

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much darling! When you say that I’m too good here then maybe I am? Cuz you write so well .. all of us here knows that! Even I loved the confession. Love you too ?

  22. SIDMIN-Daamini

    Okay okay …… now I know that u gonna kill me this time ….. 5 days late ….. silly me …… really a big sorry …….. busy with home ….. couldn’t able to read any ff ……… so for that I’m big wala sorry ……..
    Ab mujhe lagtaa hai ki iss episode k baare mein bhi kuchh bol hi dun
    To sunno Sach mein it was very cute ……… n especially when kunj confessed his love to twinkle …… yeh sab dekh mujhe rona aa gaya …….. Tashan-e-Ishq serial ki yaad aa gayi ….. wish the journey never ended but still hope for season 2 consisting the same cast with our sid ……… tumhaare ff pe toh main lattuu hun di ……. next part jaldi post karna ….
    Love u infinity ?????????????????

    1. Kritika14

      Its okay daamini! Your comment was just what i needed, doesn’t matter if you are late! Moreover, thank you so much for your words. They really brought a smile to my face, i am so pleased. Also, even i miss tei and wish for a second season as well. Well, i have already submitted the next part, hope you read it x Love you ?

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