The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 24


If anyone missed out the previous part, the link below will lead you to it;

Part 23
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Kunj and twinkle are out to buy tiara for megha. They enter a bridal shop and ask for a tiara. In around 20 minutes, twinkle had selected one tiara which seems perfect to her whereas kunj was standing there frustrated as twinkle took too long to to select one tiara. Twinkle purchases the tiara and turns towards kunj;

Tw: chale? (shall we move?)

Kunj gave her a disgusted look and gave no answer to her.

Tw: arrey? kya hua hai tumhe? Kuch toh bolo? aur itna sada hua sa chera kyu bana rakha hai? (hello! whats wrong? Reply at least and why such a sad face?) (pulls his cheeks while saying this)
Ku: main batao? Tum mein akkal nahi hai? (i’ll have to tell you everything? Dont you have brains of your own?)
Tw: Bataoge bhi kya hua hai ya phir gussa hi karte rahoge? (will you just remain angry or will you even speak something?)
Ku: I was standing here like a mad person doing nothing and you expect me not be angry?

Twinkle understood his anger and felt he was correct somewhere.

Tw: acha baba sorry. (okay sorry)
Ku: ya right, only if one sorry could heal everything.
Tw: dont be so rude man

Kunj gave her a grin.

Tw:: acha okay! What do you want in return?
Ku: return?
Tw: i made you wait right so what can i do for you?

Kunj thinks about it and says;

Ku: right now … i need nothing so when i’ll need i’ll tell you but remember your words okay>
Tw: fine by me. and hello, i ain’t a cheater like you
Ku: acha ji. Cheater and me? when did i?
Tw: think for yourself.
Ku: i dont remember anything as such. Spill the beans man
Tw: forget it man. I am so hungry lets go eat something
Ku: Donuts?
Tw: Perfect!

Twinkle and kunj leave from the shop and head towards Mister Donuts (a well renowned donut shop in thailand). They reach and pick up their donuts, pay to the cashier and begin to eat. Kunj had taken a coconut flavored donut while twinkle took a chocolate one. They also had a drink along with donut. They had it and left for the resort.

After 20 minutes;

Twinj reach to the resort and twinkle goes to mahi to hand the tiara to her.

Tw: by the way, why a tiara? Its an indian wedding afterall.
Ma: who actually ashu bhai told that megha bhabhi loves tiara and always dreamt of having one so bhai told me buy one for her as a gift but i wasn’t free so i told you.
Tw: oh i see. Ashu bhai is so sweet
Ma: yes he is.
Tw: chalo i’ll leave , i have to check out the decorations as well
Ma: yea me too, i have to talk to the caterers as well

They leave to different directions. Twinkle reaches to the lawn and looks at the decoration and thinks “this is just so pretty. I love it so much. Btw where is kunj now?”. She starts finding kunj and finds him busy in his phone talking to someone. She slowly moves towards kunj and as kunj cuts the call she jumps on kunj to scare him resulting in kunj and twinkle falling down on the ground, twinkle above kunj. They just seemed to be lost in each others eyes. Twinkle’s hand was on kunj’s chest while kunj’s on her waist. Kunj moved his hands from her waist to her face and sensually moves it and tugs her hair behind her ear. Twinkle had shivers all over her body while kunj was busy moving his fingers sensually on her face. They were zapped back to the reality when a worker called out for kunj. They quickly got up and composed themselves while kunj spoke;

Ku: i’ll be back in 2 minutes. Wait for me … i have got something to talk to you.

Twinkle shook her head in agreement and kunj left. Twinkle was hell scared as those words “i have something to talk to you” have always scared her. She was continuously thinking what would kunj want to say to her? For the next 5 minutes twinkle continues to overthink about the same when kunj comes and taps her shoulder asking “what happened? why do you look so scared?”. She replied “nothing as such. You wanted to talk right?”. Kunj continues;

Ku: you remember your words what you spoke today afternoon?
Tw: what?
Ku: arrey that what do you want me for you to do in return?
Tw: oh yea so ?
Ku: i have decided what i want
Tw: what?
Ku: a dinner night with you that too tonight
Tw: its not possible man. We have the marriage taking place tomorrow so no
Ku: i dont know. You promised
Tw: understand man
Ku: i dont know, you are coming that it!
Tw: ple .. (she gets cut off by kunj)
Ku: listen. i’ll be coming to pick you up at 8:30 at her room so be ready. Bye

Before twinkle could say anything, kunj had left. She spoke to herself “babaji kaisa pagal mila hai much?”. She leaves foe her room to dress up.

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Phew! Finally wrote it. I am so tired. Anyway guess what’s going up? My 25th part of ff. I am so glad. Never knew my journey could be so long. Its all because of you people. You guys have always supported me and motivated me to write more when i thought i was a shitty writer (i still think the same but i know you guys will deny it). Cant really express my happiness on how much i am excited for this! I swear. Anyway, for now, keep commenting and showering your love on me as they are my support system to write more and it makes me feel so special. Love you all ? Bye for now x also, ignore errors (if any)

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  1. SIDMIN-Daamini

    ???? monica di !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!…….. it was superb …u know what the best part I liked was of twinj n as whole ff was filled with twinj so I loved the whole one ..????….n n n coming 25th part ????…………..pehle hi twinj ki dinner date ki treat dedi coming up 25th episode k liye ?????? … u ………??

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much darling x Love you too ?

  2. Baby

    monica amazing dear luvd d epside to d core wowowowowoowww………
    beautiful cnt w8 fr ur 25th episode post nxt asap.
    or haan jb pta hai ki we ll deny wt u were telling u r so y do u say that dont dare ohk beacouse u r a wonderful rtr………….luvd it n luv u 2 sis
    dare u to speak lyk dis agn nowww……
    just post next asap cnt w8……..hehe 😛

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much yaar. I so so glad. Love you too darling ?

  3. Ria

    Hey stupid!
    I know you’ll be annoyed but, I thought we get paid for annoying each other.?? Jokes apart, I was on cloud nine to see your update. As promised, you uploaded this after I uploaded mine. The episode was amazing. I loved it. Waiting for the dinner night. Also, also, for my stupid’s ff’s silver jubilee. Do post soon as I can’t wait longer.
    Loads of love.?

    1. Kritika14

      Yo idiot,
      firstly, what is this crap on your dp ? its like spaceships flying .. is it? ? Anyway, So glad you liked it. Love you too idiot ?

  4. Rashiverma2199

    Wow….Monica episode was lovely….amazing

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x

  5. Paavu

    Hey monica missed u and ur ff and ya many many many yyyyyyyyy congos to u for completing 25 epis of ur amazing ff and ya it was very nic epi as always and we all are waiting for confession so much and u know what do u remember I also live in thailand so you know what donuts are my fav and “MISTER DONUT” I just cant express my views about it now my mouth is watering uhhhh yum bye and ya monica pls do read my ff “YOUR LOVE TAUGHT ME MEANING OF LIFE ” AND 6 SHOTS OF ” GAME PLAYED BY DESTINY GAVE ME U ” PLS AND DO COMMNT AND SRRY BUT I LL POST THEM ON 30

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much. and i get your feels, after hearing mister donuts even my mouth starts watering ? but honestly, i really don’t have the time to read new ff’s as i have a really busy schedule, tho i’ll try. Please don’t take it to your heart na. Love you xx

  6. Paavu

    Srry I haven’t seen earlier that its 24th epi as I only read title and just start reading so anyways srry and ya waiting for 25th part which is I think most probably CONFESSION

    1. Kritika14

      Its okay ? chill out x and to know what’s up in my next part, stay tuned.

  7. Kruti

    Amazing epi monica….loved it

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you xx

  8. Shatakshi

    It was Amazing Monica
    I think I dont have to tell u right??
    N I have something to talk to u wala part reminds me of lily Singh??
    That video was hilarious…
    N the episode was Amazing
    I think.something is gonna happen in next episode
    Love u?

    1. Kritika14

      you have to tell me yaar ? aise kaise chalega ?? Jokes apart, thank you man x It really means a lot. And yes, even i remember lily’s video when someone says “i have something to talk to you” and in someway its true, isn’t it? Love you too ?

  9. Meeta

    You got to be the best.
    Now waiting for the 25tg.
    Post soon.

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x will surely post when i get time xx

  10. Dreamer...arundhathi

    Mons I m also glad that we got to read such beautiful ff
    Ctd soon
    Wunnerful epi

    1. Kritika14

      That is so sweet of you 🙂 thank you x

  11. Lovely episode…… :):):):):)

  12. SidMin

    Loved it Post soon 🙂 Miss you and Love you loads 🙂

    1. Kritika14

      Aww, i miss you too x catch up soon. Thank you and love you ?

  13. monicu…loved it…kunj got a nice chance 2 spend wid tw…cant w8 4 it…so plz post asap…as ur 25th epi”ll be completed as a treat of twinj date…loved it

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x Will post whenever i will be able to 🙂

  14. Romaisha

    Well hello Monica di! You good?
    Haa Me too .. Extremely sorry for late comment! Anyways back to the epi… Yaar u r too good, like seriously! Im too eager to see what’s going to happen at dinner in your silver jubilee ????
    Post next soon ..bye
    Love you ❤❤❤

    1. Kritika14

      I am full too good ? Glad to know you are too. Thank you so much yaar xx I really am blissful reading your comment. I’ll surely post the next part when i’ll be able to.
      Love you ?

  15. Zuha Fatima

    Mona di…Firstly sorry 4r being late ?? Plz forgive me ?? Well the episode was so cute and adorable that I am out of words to praise it ??? It was beautifully described leaving me awestruck‼‼
    Good going ‼‼ Keep it up ‼‼

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
    Loads of love and support ❤❤


    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much x Feels great that you liked it that much. and don’t be sorry for commenting late; its all okay x Love you ?

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