The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 23


If anyone missed out the previous episode, the link below will lead you to it;

Part 22

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Mahi’s room;

Twinj enter the room. Mahi indicates them to sit. Mahi speaks;

Ma: okay guys, bebe just called me up and told that we will have to resume back to the preparations of the marriage.
Tw: okay!
Ma: as per discussed, me and yuvi will be taking care of the food while you and kunj will be taking care of the decoration which included the garland as well.
Ku: done! I don’t have any problem but just say to twinkle that she wont annoy me (says teasingly while looking at twinkle)
Tw: oh please! Correction is required. Mahi di tell kunj to not annoy me cuz its very well known to you as well how annoying he is (giving a death glare to kunj)
Ma: oh! Shut up man. You too are just impossible. Sometimes you fight like crazy while sometimes act like lovers.

Twinkle begas to blush. Kunj eyes her lovingly but later comes to back to reality.

Ma: toh kya?
Tw: aisa kuch nahi h (there’s nothing like that)
Ku: yes exactly!
Ma; i know how lovers act so just don’t argue on this with me.

To divert the topic, twinkle says;

Tw: haan haan, kyu nahi .. expert jo baithi hai hamare samen (yea ofc! you will know it after all you are an expert)

Mahi blushes.

Ma: okay, no more bakwaas! from tomorrow we’ll start with our work alright?

All agree, say goodnight to each other and leave for their rooms.

@7 in the morning

Twinkle’s room:

She wakes up due to the sun rays that fell upon her face. She stretches her arm in tiredness and gets up. She goes to the washroom and gets freshen up. She was just about to go for a shower when she gets a message;

“Abhi tak soh hi rahi hai kya, kumbhkaran. Kaam bhi karna hai. Chall jaldi taiyaar hokar breakfast hall pe mil. (Are you still sleeping? You even have work which is yet to be done. Quickly get ready and come meet me at the breakfast hall)

~ Kunj”

“Ji haan, main kumbhkaran hu toh mujhe sone do. Tum thare itne smart … toh kaam khud karlo warna agar kumbhkaran ko gussa aayega toh tumhe bhi pata hai kya hoga. ( yes i am kumbhkaran so therefore let me sleep. Now that you are so smart .. do the work yourself. And c’mon don’t you know the consequences if kumbhkaran gets angry)

~ Twinkle”

“Just shut up man! Chup chap mil. (Shut up and quickly come meet me)

~ Kunj”


~ Twinkle”

She quickly gets in the bathroom for a shower and comes out wearing demin jeans along with plain red crop top. She tied her hair in a bun with few strands left out which her falling on her face. She wore a small earring to with and wore a comfy slipper and left her room carrying her phone along.

Breakfast hall;

Ku: Where the hell where you? You made me wait for so long. Akkal ki kami hai kya tujh mein? (dont you have brains?)
Tw: just shut up! I was just getting ready. Stop throwing your tantrums and its better to start off our work.
Ku: yea whatever. (with an annoying look)
Tw: Will you even speak what we will have to do?
Ku: oh sorry!
Tw: aur tumse zyaada umeed bhi nahi kari jaa sakti (couldnt expect anything more than this from you)
Ku: oh please! Just don’t waste time now as we really have to work. Okay, now firstly … we have got the flowers here so we’ll have to decorate the whole ground with this. So come up with a plan. Also, keep this garlands with you as you are much more responsible than me.
Tw: See, you finally admitted it. I am more responsible that you (she laughs)
Ku: i am being serious here. Will you also be?
Tw: okay (puts her finger on her lips)

Kunj smiles at her innocence and hand her the garland.

Ku: now come up with an idea of how to decorate the hall.
Tw: wait man, i am already thinking.

After 10 mins;

Twinkle screamed in excitement.

Ku: kya hua yaar? (what happened)
Tw: i got an idea

She shares her idea with kunj and he gives a thumbs up.

Ku: didn’t know you were so creative as well.
Tw: I am an all rounder darling (and winks at him)
Ku: darling?
Tw: toh?
Ku: kuch nahi.

Kunj calls the leader of the workers and explains him the arrangement that has to be made. He then looks at twinkle and say;

Ku: oh i forgot! Mahi di told me that she is a little busy so if you could get a tiara for megha bhabhi?
Tw: sure but only at one condition
Ku: now what is that?
Tw: you’ll come along with me
Ku: what? come along with you that too for shopping? Kidding me right?
Tw: ofc i am not! You are coming .. thats final. Come lets leave now itself. Both are free right now. By the time we will return .. the decoration will be done as well. Also, we could have a day out as well. 
Ku: fine

They leave.

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Yo guys, how are all of you? I hope all of you are doing fine. I am sure many might be mad at me as i promised that i would post 3 episodes the last week but i just posted 2. But so sorry guys, i was really lazy this time. I swear i had no story in my mind which i could pen down. I really was running out of ideas. See, this proves that i am such a bad writer. But for now, i have planned something, some shitty ideas are cooked in my head so please bare those. Actually another reason for not writing was that my comments have fallen which really demotivates me to write. If you guys find it boring .. i’ll just end it up within the 5-7 parts then. Wont drag it to annoy you guys. Leave down your comments to let me know how this part was. Criticism is also accepted. Love you all ? Bye x Okay, my bak bak is over ? Ignore errors (if any) as i didn’t proof read it.

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  1. Meeta

    Oh f**k.
    Who’s in DP?
    It’s not clear
    Well yrr that was wonderful.
    Well u now, haven’t completed even 1 chapter of any subject n my exam starts from 13th.

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x well i just hope your exams go well. The man in my dp is Theo James.

  2. Zuha Fatima

    Superb! Mind blowing! Cute ? Simply Awesome ?? Good going! Such a sweet little episode 🙂

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    Love u!


    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x Love you too xx

  3. SidMin

    Monica Loved the episode The fact that the comments are dropping is because many of them have their exams so maybe they don’t have time to comment And How dare you call my friend a bad writer and her ideas are shitty Don’t dare think so Love you Post soon And I know you are lazy and so am I 😉

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you. haha yes, i am damn lazy. Love you too xx

  4. Ria

    Hey darling,
    You know what, you go die. Now, I’m just fed up of explaining you. A deceiver. I hate you! Go, go die somewhere.
    Anyways, the episode was superb. I won’t tell much cuz then you’ll later tell me I exaggerate and tell. Well, anyways my lazy ass do post soon.
    Loads of love.?

    1. Kritika14

      Yo darling,
      I won’t die cuz if i do then who will come to argue with you and annoy you? Then how will we fight over who is more dumb (idk if it makes sense?). Anyway, i ll post the next part only when you post your ff so the choice is yours ? Love you too ?

  5. SIDMIN-Daamini

    U know what Monica di !!!! I was busy with my studies …….I just commented on few ffs …but then I saw ur …I’m really having shortage of time ……….I tried to read it at least …….even if I don’t able to comment but it made me engrossed in the epi so much..engrossed me in twinj Nok jhok ……..then I realised the time, I’m having …but when I read …u r sad coz comments r decreasing so I thought to comment n make u realise that ur ff is amazing but coz most r having exams ….so r not able to comment …….. that’s all my darling sissy nothing else …….otherwise the epi was fab ……loved twinj to the core n Plzz don’t manipulate urself…otherwise mere se Buraa aur koi ni hoga …got it … …?love u ??????????????????????aur haan merana aaj exam tha ..n that was superb……Awsome……Chalo bye ..,bohot bak bak krli maine …love u ??

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much. As always, you brought a smile to my face. Never knew my ff was so important to you. Really happy to know that. I love you too ? and please continue with your bak bak because i love it.

  6. Chiku

    Hey monica.
    Can i slap u for thinking that we r not liking ur ff. Seriously.
    Ur ff is amazing. Its one of my fav ff How can u think that it is boring. Its way too interesting. I love it. Don’t think of ending it or else ull see my angry side.
    Coming to episode its amazing as always.
    Loved it
    Love u girl❤️??

    1. Kritika14

      Sure you can but you will have to fly to bangkok to slap me ? So happy to know its one of your favs. Feels great. Surely i don’t wanna see your angry side so i cancel my plan ? Love you too ?

  7. SIDMIN-Daamini

    N yaa di one more news I want to share with u all which is that jasmin bhasin is coming in a new show on colours…..n will be opposite to siddhart shukla ………actually don’t know about the plot of the show but will be based on the movie chori chori chupke chupke n will be playing the role of prity zenta sorry if I pronounced it wrong………but at first I was very happy but upset that it’s siddhart not sidhant ………..this news is airing n most probably true but not sure ……….bur still can’t imagine jazz with anyone else without r sid …….that’s all…..thought to share it with u ……..

    1. Kritika14

      Yes even i got to know about this yesterday. I completely agree, its really difficult to see jasmine with someone other than sid. Lets see how the show is and the response towards it. Anyway, thank you for sharing ?

  8. dreamer..arundhati

    Monu darlo luved their nok jhok…ctd soon

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x

  9. Purnima.agrawal30

    amazing awesome fabulous cute epi

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you 🙂

  10. Kruti

    Hey monica….the epi was cute and sweet
    Loved it

    And jahan tak comments ki baat hai ya toh aadhe log exams mei busy hain ya toh some of them have quit TU……saare ff’s mein comments ki kami hai
    So dont think that we feel ur track is boring……its amazing

    Love u??
    Post d nxt one asap

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much x I’ll surely try to post soon. Love you ?

  11. Baby

    monica amazing episode dear
    yr same rsn given to many pls dont end exams r dere so evry1 is busy wid d studies
    n den d episode amazing fabulous srsly luvd it dont get demotivated at all
    we all srsly luv u n ur ff n it was really amazing episode
    post nxt asap bcz cnt w8 fr it

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you baby. Will post soon whenever i will be able to write 🙂

  12. Awsome n cute epi.. loved it.. and ur ff is not at all boring.. and you’re not at alla bad writer.. I love ur writing style.. comments may have decreased since many ppl have got exams but dnt worry they will increase once they are done with exams 🙂 .. do cont soon ?

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much x You comment really lightened up my mood ?

  13. Thanmy

    Monica dii what was that ?? U always motivate me in my ff aur aap khud not fair n yeah sorry na for not commenting on ur previous shot I was lil busy pucca from now I’ll comment anyways the episode was amazing n brilliant as usual and never ever call ur self as a bad writer aisa soch na bhi mat varna mei Thailand aa jaaungi!! Awesome episode dii

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you darling ? aur please, aap thailand aa jao. I will be so happy to meet you ?

  14. Fabulous…bohut acha episode thA… don’t worry about comments…I think most o the are having exams n sadly some of our friends have left tu temporarily…so that could be a reason…u r an awesome writer…
    Never ever get demotivated….
    Love you….

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much x Love you too xx

  15. Shatakshi

    Oyeee hoeee Monica its was Awesome
    Yaar tu bhi mere he raste pe chal rahi h???….comments ke mamle me
    But chill as I started chilling….becoz many have exams….sab hare jaise buddhu nahi hote???
    Aur ha….ur shitty ideas are mindblowing
    Love u loads darling??❤❤

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much sha x sahi hair, sabh hamare tarah nahi hote ?? Love you ?

  16. Awesome monica dii……

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x

  17. Shreya098

    Awesome Monica…

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you 🙂

  18. monicu…don say 2 end…
    coz theur real love story hasnt even started yet…so hw can u thnk of tht…
    it was really lovely n post asap…

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much x

  19. Romaisha

    Ha! Look who’s talking about boring now? Bad writer? Huh? Teri tuh! Saale do u want me to remind me all that u said to me when i pulled tht stunt?? You!! ??
    Come on yaar its only bcz of u im writing my ff!! Youre one of the best writers i know so say anything else about my fav ff imma kill you!! Ok?
    So hushhhh

    Good hope all them words got stuck in your head…. Now abt this episode .. Yaar it was seriously amazing!!!!!!! ??? loved it! There fights are so cutee
    So sorry for late comment btw … School work nah and also i come home rather tired so… Just consider me a silent reader if i dont comment ok? N im always reading so dont think otherwise!!!

    Love you yaar! Byeee ❤

    1. Kritika14

      Hayeee .. sorry yaar, maaf karde ? I dont really think i am really one of the best writers but surely i am so glad to know this is your fav ff. Thank you thank you so much x But i will not at all consider you as a silent reader so its okay if you comment late but don’t leave commenting please? I really am motivated when i read yours so please? I know i sound to desperate for comments but its about the motivation and appreciation that makes me write more. Dont take me wrong tho. Love you ?

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