The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 21


If anyone missed out the previous part;

Part 20

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All of them meet at the beach which was partly owned by the resort. Mahi wore a blue jumpsuit with floral print whereas twinkle wore a black comfortable maxi. While on the other hand, both the boys wore shorts along with shirts, kunj : a blue shirt and yellow shorts and yuvi : a whitish grayish shirt with orange shorts. They all went and sat on the mat which was placed on the sand. They started chit chatting and had a great time. Mahi picked up handful of sand and threw it on twinkle. Twinkle screamed in shock. She picked up another handful of sand and threw it on the direction of mahi but mahi bends and the sand hits kunj. This makes him mad and therefore he throws it back on twinkle but instead it hits on yuvi. Hence, in seeking revenge from one another .. they throw sand on each other and later realize their clothes are covered with sand. They were left with no option but wash it off from the beach water. All head near the water and again start splashing it to each other. They were having a quality time together. While splashing, twinkle’s leg gets stuck on the hard sand on the ground she was about to fall completely when kunj got hold of her. They shared an eyelock. They realized and quickly composed themselves. Kunj later picks up another handful of wet sand and throws it on twinkle which accidentally splashes on her face. She fumes in anger and tries to put wet sand on kunj’s face but fails miserably. But twinkle wasn’t a girl who would so easily loose and hence she climbed on kunj’s back and put all the sand on his face. She got down and everyone laughed at kunj. Kunj was angry in the start but later smiled seeing twinkle laugh her heart out. They were all dirty now.

Ma: okay guys! Lets go freshen up. We are so dirty right now. and honestly lets have some real rest for a while cuz i am very tired.

All agree and leave.

Twinkle’s room;

Twinkle takes bath and comes out. She comes out wearing a blue bathrobe with her hair open and wet. She hears a knock at her door and goes to open it. She finds kunj standing.

Tw: what are you doing? need something?
Ku: nothing! Just wanted to talk to you.
Tw: oh acha .. bolo?
Ku: Bahar khade khade baat karegi kya? andar nahi bulaygi? ( will you talk to me while i stand out? wont you call me inside? [okay, this translation was complete shit])
Tw: oh sorry, come na.

Kunj comes inside and makes himself comfortable on the bed. Twinkle comes and sits next to him/

Tw: haan bolo? what do you wanna talk?
Ku: firstly, could you get me water?
Tw: no man. Do self service.
Ku: Please?
Tw: (frustrated) okay fine.

She gets up and fills a glass full of water for kunj and hands it to him. She just about to sit when her bathrobe got stuck on the table next to the bed and was about to fall when kunj comes to the rescue and holds it and puts it back comfortable on her body, but all this time he had his eyes closed which was noticed by twinkle. Twinkle eyes him lovingly and they share an eyelock. This was broken by when a phone rang.

Tw: hello! Ji haan mumma
Le: Come in the breakfast area within 10 minutes .. okay?
Tw: okay! bye.
Le: bye.

She cuts the call. She tells kunj that leela has called her and says that she will talk to him later. He agrees and moves out.

Twinkle (POV):
exactly! this is why i love you, you idiot. It felt so good to see when though you helped me but with your eyes closed. This shows how good you are. If you wanted, you could do all this with your eyes open but your qualities are so good. This is exactly why i love you kunj. You truly are the best.

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okay, you all can curse me and give me as many slaps as you want. I know i totally deserve it. I am so damn sorry for posting so damn late. But because my schools started, i really had very less time to write. I was really very busy as i needed time to blend with my schedule. Now that i am better, i wrote this. But because of the hectic schedule i really would be posting in some gaps. Hoping for all of you to understand. But i have planned to post at least three times in this week as a compensation for this huge gap. Keep supporting me by commenting. Let me know how was this part. I know it was boring but cant help it. I really wrote it in a hurry. Thats all for now. Please keep commenting. Bye and love you all ? and also, ignore errors (if any)

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  1. SidMin

    Loved it It was so cute and Kunj I love him yar the respect he gives to girls when he helped Twinkle when her bathrobe was about to open and Loved the sand throwing vala part
    Missed you NO NO we miss those who we forget I did not forget you did you forget ?
    Love you 🙂

    1. Kritika14

      Aw thats so sweet of you ☺️ Thank you and love you ?

  2. Ria

    Hey sweetheart,
    The episode was a lovable one, okay? I mean you portrayed the fun times well. I loved it. Don’t think I’m telling just like that. I really loved it. Back to the point, thank god you’re not ending it. Hope you get to post soon.
    Loads of love.?

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you darling ? yes i won’t end it and you know the reason. Love you too ?

  3. Superb.. amazing epi.. really loved it.. it was not at all boring.. loved it when they were at the beach and played with the sand and water.. also in twinkles room where kunj heled twinkle with his eyes closed.. kunj is truly the best.. and dear I completely understand.. U can post whenever u r free 🙂

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much for the appreciation as well as for understanding 🙂 so glad you liked my boring episode x

  4. Aww very cute epi…
    their beach Masti was awesome…
    Loved it

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x

  5. Its awesome…..

    1. Kritika14

      Thanks 🙂

  6. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute epi

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you xx

  7. Joonakanksha

    Nyc and cute

  8. Rashiverma2199

    Wow….Mona lovely episode

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you 🙂

  9. It was waiting for a long time and finally you posted it it was fab xxx

    1. Kritika14

      So glad you liked it 🙂 Thank you x

  10. Angita


    1. Kritika14

      Thank you 🙂

  11. Zuha Fatima

    Wow Mona di this was something sooo cool :~) Loved the beach part 🙂 So sweet! Sorry for short cmnt!


    1. Kritika14

      ThanK you so much x and don’t be sorry for the short comment 🙂

  12. Kruti

    Missed u soooooooo much monica…..and i very well understand the hectic schedule of clgs coz even i am undergoing through that right now

    Anyways amazing epi….the beach fun was just fab
    Loved it
    Post d nxt one asap

    Love u?

    1. Kritika14

      I missed you too x Thank you so much for understanding 🙂 so happy you liked it. Love you ?

  13. Sayeeda

    Amazing episode…. Since long time I was waiting for your ff… Thanks for posting it…
    Beach part was superb… Loved it to the core…
    Love u ??

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much. So glad you liked it. Love you ?

  14. Jisha

    Loved it dear…It was so awesome…Kunj is so caring and he is the best…Loved the beach part…
    I was waiting for your episode…But I understood that u must be busy with the school schedules..Update whenever you are free…
    Love you dear…

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much x also, thank you for understanding. Love you too ?

  15. Shreya098

    Amazing epi…
    Enjoyed it

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you 🙂

  16. Chiku

    Amazing sweetheart ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
    I was waiting fr ur ff since long. ???
    I really didnt find ur episode boring. It’s amazing.
    Yaar thats not fair y ? First romu made me fall in love wis his ff ka kunj then i named kuku chiku and kunj???
    Now in ur ff also its kuku no twinj only kuku?????????????????

    1. Kritika14

      Aw! so happy you liked it that much 🙂 you know, i have a friend whom i have named kuku ? like i made this out from her surname. But you can go on with your kuku too ? Love you as well ?

  17. Baby

    oh my god monica
    u r fabulous
    i mean dats y i luv kunj
    hmmmmmmmmm yeh twinkle lka dialougue hai bt yr
    kisko sid se pyaar nhi hai hehe
    sry sry bt yr
    amazing was missing u soooooo mch
    nfinally u r bck lud it yaya i no u posted an os which was vry cute n dere was a journal fr twinkle
    bt emotional as well
    bt yr i luv ur ff its soooooo cute
    adorable episode
    post nxt asap dear
    luv u lods

    1. Kritika14

      OMG! such a long comment. it feels like i am on top of the world. Such long comments give me pleasure to read them. Thank you for this and also for considering my boring episode an amazing one. and, i missed you too x So happy you liked my os 🙂 I will surely try to upload the next one soon. Love you too ?

      1. Baby

        hmmm who said u dat ur ff is boring madam dare u
        i luv it ohk n it was wonderful n amazing mein zhuti tariff nhi krti
        luv u dear

      2. Kritika14

        That is really so sweet of you ? thank you x and love you ?

  18. dreamer..arundhati

    Monica osum epi

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x

  19. SIDMIN-Daamini

    Monica dear must want to praise ur guilty …………just kidding
    Samajh mein ni aayaa……….koi ni …………don’t take stress…………but dear no slap I can’t even think it in my dream coz u r not with me physically …… …..sorry haan di …thoda zyadaa kr diya ……….but epi was superb yaar
    U know what………. u write so well that after reading ur such an amazing ff ….we don’t need any Precap coz it itself make such curiosity that we automatically start gaining r eagerness
    Loved it
    But post only on ur comfort kyunki asal mein aapko khaa toh nahi paayenge ???
    Love u ???????

    1. Kritika14

      Acha ji ? mujhe kha nahi paoge ? comedy acha kar leti ho ? But, keeping this aside, thank you so much ? And you know, i love long comments and this one just brought a big smile on my face. Thank you for that as well. I am so glad you are liking my ff to that extend. It makes me feel special, seriously. The next one is already submitted so you can read that as well aur aisa hi lamba comment karna theek hai? ? Love you ?

  20. Thanmy

    Awesomeeee diiiii I just loved it matlab wow!!!! Kunj was sooooooo cute I was waiting for this from such a long time finally u r here it was amazing diiii
    Love u

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much x Really glad you liked it. Love you too ?

  21. Romaisha

    Monica!! Yaar … So sorry for late comment ?
    And as usual your episode was fabbbb!! ?? Kunj is so sweet ?Haye,!!
    Glad u posted 🙂
    Love u ???

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you darling x Love you too ?

  22. Shatakshi

    Hey Monica
    I know I m late….but kya karu…I started reading it now
    It was really Amazing
    N its okay if u need time
    Take ur time n post
    Love u❤❤

    1. Kritika14

      Hey Sha,
      Thank you 🙂 and i am so happy as you are supporting me x thanks x Love you too ?

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