The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj) Part 11

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Hotel:
Twinj reach in the banquet hall where the engagement is supposed to be done. Twinkle says to kunj “i am going to check whether everything is alright … you can look over and let me know if you want any change okay?” Kunj says “sure” and they part in different ways. Twinkle goes to the worker and asks them about the decorations if they are done and she becomes glad knowing everything is perfectly done and thinks to herself “thank you babaji. Now i can prove mumma, papa and bhai that even i am capable of handling responsibilities. They always think that i cant do any work but i’ll prove them wrong now.
Kunj on the other hand is very impressed as he liked the way the hall was decorated and maintained so well. Both of them were walking backwards without seeing whats behind and yes they bang onto each others back when twinkle looses her balance and is about to fall when kunj catches hold of her and prevents from letting her fall. Twinkle now is landing in kunj’s arms, her hands over his neck and his hands on her waist. They share an eye lock and they get lost into each others embrace.They stare into each others eye until some worker calls out twinkle’s name for help. Twinj are then zapped back to the reality and twinkle says “thank you kunj” with a sweet smile while trying to hide her blush. She hurrily leaves to the worker.

Kunj (POV):
Her eyes, i could stare them for the rest of my life. The innocence on her face will kill me. Damn she is so pretty.

Twinkle (POV):
I DONT KNOW WHAT’S WRONG WITH ME? WHY IT FELT SO GOOD BEING IN HIS ARMS? ARE YOU OKAY TWINKLE? STAY CAREFUL…. OMG MAIN TOH MAR HI JAUNGI ABH (omg i am gonna die now) THESE STUPIDS QUESTIONS IN ME ARE KILLING ME! TWINKLE KYA BAAT HAI? PYAAR TOH NAHI HUA NA (what’s wrong twinkle? don’t tell me that you starting to love him? UFF SHUT UP! CONCENTRATE IN YOUR WORK NATOH PHIRSE BHAI KE TANE SUNNE PADHENGE (concentrate in your work or else bhai will annoy me).

All the work is done. Leela calls twinkle and says “puttar if everything is done then come home and get ready?” Twinkle says “yyes mumma .. everything is okay so far. i am coming home”. she cuts the call. she then calls kunj and says lets so home…. you gotta get ready and make the dulha ready as well ok? Kunj says “sure twinkie”. Twinkle blushes and they leave.

Sarna house @ 4pm:
Twinj reach sarna house and kunj leaves to get ready whereas twinkle leaves to yuvi’s room as she had to talk about something…

Evening @ 7pm
The clock striked at 7, the time when bebe had told everyone to come down completely ready so they can leave. Everyone excluding yuvi, mahi, twinkle, kunj and ashu (the groom … if you guys remember) had gathered in the hall. Bebe says “see usha i told you .. these kids can never be ready on time” when yuvraj comes down the stairs along with ashu and kunj. Kunj wore a blue kurta with a white dhoti to go along while yuvi wore a black tuxedo above his white shirt and a black pant along. They wait for another minute for the girls when suddenly mahi and twinkle together come down the stairs. They looked like angels. Both yuvi and kunj couldn’t take off their eyes off their girls. Mahi wore a dark blue velvet lahenga, the choli was full sleeve with some design colored in gold and the ghagra had the same design all over with her hair open completely with curls on the end. On the other hand twinkle … wore a lehenga where the ghagra was pink in color and the choli was colored in black. She wore matching accessories and had her hair tied up in a bun exposing her back. Both looked no less than a princess and our boys … they couldn’t stop stop staring at their beauties. Bebe then adds “both the girls are looking so pretty”. Both together say thank you bebe and they set off to the hotel.
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Hello guys, i am really sorry for the short update today but i couldn’t write more as it’s my mum’s birthday today and i am busy preparing a surprise for her along with my siblings. But i surely didn’t wanna disappoint you so i wrote a part but its not long. Hoping for you to understand 🙂 Thank you for commenting … you guys are amazing 💕 Carry on commenting to make me happy ( i am sure you guys don’t want me sad isn’t it ? 😉) Love you all. Bye x

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42 Comments
  1. Jiya_Ani

    Awesome Monica…loved it😍😍

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you xx

  2. dreamer....arundhati

    Monica. .Darlo.. Cute epi
    A happywala bday to aunty. . .
    Jaldi badwala update dena

    1. Kritika14

      Will surely say x and surely next part i’ll try to make it longer. Btw thank you x

  3. Fan

    Awesome epi monica.

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x

  4. Shatakshi

    Firstly a very happy wala birthday to ur mom…
    N about the episode… It was Awesome❤❤❤

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you for wishing as well as commenting sha 💕

  5. Zuha Fatima

    Monica dear it is absolutely Amazing👍👍 Keep it up! ! Keep rocking this FF! And many many happy returns of the way to Auntie! Stay blessed! !

    -Zuha

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so so much Zuha x

  6. Sayeeda

    Monica …ur episode was toooooo goooddd…..amazing… fabulous..

    Wish ur mom a very happy birthday from my side …may she get all happiness of world…

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you thank you so much x that’s so sweet of you 🙂

  7. Happie bdy 2 ur mom….nd ur epi wz soooo gooood….very cute 1…
    Ctd sooon

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you for the wish maggi ! so glad you liked the episode x

  8. Jisha

    Episode was amazing…too good…
    Wishing aunty a happy birthday 🎂🎂🎂… enjoy…

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much 💕

  9. Purnima.agrawal30

    Amazing awesome epi…..& Happy wala birthday to aunty…..

    1. Kritika14

      Thank youuu x

  10. Shreya098

    The epi was amazing…
    Wish ur mom happy birthday from my side🎊🎉🎊🎉🎂🎂

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much shreya ☺️

  11. SidMin

    Monica Loved it waiting for the next 🙂

    1. Kritika14

      surely will post one soon 🙂

  12. Jas and sid lover

    Ur episode was too good the way u express their feelings is just awesome….

    1. Kritika14

      so good to know you liked it! Never saw your comment before and honestly really happy that you have commented! thank you so much 🙂 You really brought a smile to my face x

      1. Jas and sid lover

        Well I read yesterday all parts of this ff in one go so..I truly admire ur writing…especially when first kunj saw twinkle and his pov..beautifully described ..and ya ofcourse it’s a great pleasure that my comment brought a smile to your face

      2. Kritika14

        Thank you …. You really made my day 💕

  13. Ria

    The episode was legit amazing. Literally loved it. Please continue soon.
    Wish aunty a very happy birthday from my side. Though the day has come to an end. Also, never mind for the short update. I happens once in a while.😃

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much x And btw … enough of you commenting … give me a chance as well to comment in your ff ?😂 Post it soon already or else i’ll be very mad at you 😡😂

  14. Baby

    bt d episode ws amazing monica luvd it n yah a very very happy birthday to ur mums god bless her

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you 🙂

  15. Rashiverma2199

    Monica….it was lovely

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you x

  16. Kruti

    Amazing epi Monica
    And wish ur mom a very happy B’day ….I can rather say a belated Happy birthday

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you so much x

  17. Amazing episode yaar too good 👏👏👌❤

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you 🙂

  18. Monica d epi was fantastic….d way u describe everything was superb & ya I really love that kunj new dressup in dhoti…hope I could see him in that attire….lovely epi.….waking for next

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you somali x and if you wish to see sid in dhoti .. just check is intsgram account and scroll down … you will surely find a pic .. i guess the one from his brother’s engagement. 🙂

  19. Angita

    Sorry for late comment but even my grandma’s bday was also yesterday…amazing update…so cute and sweet

    1. Kritika14

      Thank you angitaa !

  20. Sameera

    Wow Monica awesome😘😘thank you for suggesting me ur ff 😂😂

    1. Kritika14

      Aw thank you 🙂 Glad to know you liked it 💕

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