Entangled destinies [Prologue and Introduction]… by Mahira

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Here I’m back with a new small story. It was meant to be a OS for the competition but too long and not enough time to end it, it will be posted on small few shots… it’s not just Swasan or Raglak or even Swaragini/Sanlak… or in any other you want… it’s a bit of all melted together… as their entangled destinies made them related forever…
No more bak bak… lets start the story…

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PROLOGUE
Sanskar Kapoor, 25 years old, leaves his center city’s duplex for his job at almost 10.00 AM.
Aware of his effect over the female kind of this planet, he’s amused by the whispers in his back standing in the elevator and doesn’t hesitate to wink back to his two teenage neighbors drooling on him at the moment he gets out. Blowing a flying kiss to the old madam Sanders, the concierge of the building, he takes his bike she just finished to clean and starts his journey which ends at the Hope Memorial Hospital’s entry.
Walking in, in his casual blue t-shirt and jean, he doesn’t even salute back the people crossing his way. If some considers him eccentric, others say he’s a genius… and he doesn’t give a damn to anyone’s opinion.
Graduated at 18, Doctor Sanskar Kapoor is one of the best neuro-psychiatric doctors in the world.
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Laksh Maheshwari… at his last year of the University, he’s the unique son and heir of Durga Prasad Maheshwari, one of the most influent industry’s tycoons in the whole continent.
Already engrossed in his father’s business, good son and perfect friend, everything was perfect in his life until one year back…
He receives a call when he’s driving and picks up immidiatly:
“- I’m on my way there, don’t worry… ha… ha ha ok… take care too…”
When he hangs off, his eyes get moist staring for a moment at his phone’s screen… a car’s horn takes him out of his thoughts as he’s about having an accident!
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Ragini Gadodia is the youngest daughter of Shekar Gadodia, the business partner and friend of Durga Prasad Maheshwari.
Brought up by her strict Dadi ma after her mother’s death, she has always been the model of the perfect girl be it in her home or at the university.
Closing a door room in her family’s mansion without a sound, she wipes her tears discreetly before going out.
She gives destination to her driver and takes the seat at back side of the car dialing someone’s number…
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Swara Gadodia is the eldest daughter of Shekar Gadodia, bubbly, funny and open-minded girl, despite the fact she’s the opposite of her sister, she’s the closest person to her heart.
After their mother’s death, she has been brought up by her Dida at Banaris and returned back home only few years back after the old woman death.
her life has always been dedicated to others, a fervent active member of the Down’s Syndrome children’s association… memories of her worldwide travels with them in aim to provide them better life are hanging in lot of photos over the three of her room’s walls. The fourth exposes lot of child’s drawings with colors, rainbows and hearts…
In the middle, a king size bed where she’s peacefully sleeping curled on herself, in her fair pink pajama, she would look like a baby if there weren’t those long black silky locks of hair covering her face… the dark space is only illuminated with a monitoring medical screen behind her and a perfusion needling her right hand.
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PART 2: INTRODUCTION
Hope Memorial Hospital…
« – Doctor Malhotra is waited in room number 355… Doctor Malhotra is waited in room 355… »
The young woman in her twenties sitting in the corridor on the waiting seats presses her hands together nervously again, she checks her watch again before looking up to her companion, the young man passes his two hands in his hair nervously. She tries to give him a reassuring smile but she couldn’t convince him as she was as irritated as him. When a nurse passes by their way, she exclaims hopefully:
“- sister, how long will the Doctor Kapoor take to come, please… we have been waiting here for more than five hours!”
“- I’m sorry madam, my reply will not change if you’ll ask me for the 10th time… I have no any idea!”
The man asks her sternly:
“- this is inacceptable, how is it possible to be a doctor and have no proper working schedules…”
“- … because I’m not an employee in you society!”
The voice comes from behind the three of them, the nurse looks back to doctor and smiles apologetically but he doesn’t smile back. Doctor Sanskar Kapoor never smiles… she tells him:
“- doctor Kappor, those persons are…”
“- waiting for me, I can see that Maria… you go…”
He enters his office letting the door opened behind him, so they come after him as he walks to his desk and opens his laptop ignoring them. The young woman starts after a moment of uncomfortable silence:
“- Doctor Kapoor, my name is Ragini Gadodia and this is Laksh Maheshwari, I’ve read an article about your work and we’re here to ask you to take my sister’s case…”
The doctor doesn’t even look up to them, he checks some files while Ragini continue tears forming in her eyes, Laksh presses her hand reassuringly:
“- my sister is in coma for a year now, no one was able to say what happened exactly and how to treat her… please doctor…”
She joins her hands her tears drowning her face as her voice chokes emotionally… Laksh’s eyes are moist too and the doctor looks finally to them as Ragini starts sobbing:
“- to treat your sister, she has to be hospitalized first…”
Laksh frowns saying:
“- HERE!!! In this public establishment! Have you heard the name, GA-DO-DIA… like in Gadodia’s Industries… we…”
The doctor whistles silencing him shockingly! He smiks saying:
“- Ragini ji… tell your husband that I’m still not an employee in his society! And… I work exclusively in this public hospital with patients interned here… take it or leave it!”
Ragini mumbles awkwardly:
“- he’s not my husband!”
Sanskar looks to their joined hands and both of them get apart with a jerk, Laksh’ explains with an uncertain voice:
“- main Laksh’ Maheshwari… Swara’s fiancé!”

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Thanks for all of you for reading and hope have your feedbacks.
Sorry for mistakes and errors

Mahira

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55 Comments
  1. Awesome

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much 🙂

  2. Kriti249

    Awesome…please continue soon

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much 🙂

  3. Amazing dear

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂

  4. Swasan pls

    1. MAHIRA

      Hum… Wait and see :p
      Thank you so much 🙂

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you 🙂

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you 🙂

  5. Mahira who r the couples in ur ff?? It’s awesome concept..

    1. MAHIRA

      To know… You’ll have to wait a bit and see
      Thank you so much dear

  6. IME

    Awesome!!
    loved it!!
    post coon!!

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂
      Next part today or tomorrow ^^]

  7. Bela

    Hey that seems really interesting ?

    Please do go on, it was a really engrossing prologue???

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂
      Glad to know you loved it… Next part today or tomorrow 🙂

  8. Sus

    Awesome

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂

  9. IQRA222

    It is awesome
    Waiting for the next part

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂

  10. It’s really superb prologue plz continue it

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂

  11. Asra

    interesting dear…

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂 🙂

  12. Swarna01

    Thank god mahi u make it ts instead of os. Amazing story. Goggly pe goggly. In 1st scene i was thinking its a normal story bt the end shock swara is in coma n laksh is her fiance???? Fiance?? Nt bf, jiju, frnd direct fiance. Cntnu.

    1. MAHIRA

      Swarna my dear.. Shocking na?? A hardcore swasanian like me and laksh being swara’s fiancé……..
      You know my love for surprises and twists na??? So be sure here too whenever you’ll think that it’s the main turn of the story… Something else comes..
      Thank you so much my dear 🙂

  13. Gayathri.visu

    Interesting…. But pairs????

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you dear…
      Pairs… Wait and see…. 🙂 🙂

  14. Raina

    DIDI!!! i am so happy that you are coming with another story!!
    i am proud to say that i was the first one to know that you are going to write a story. lol..
    really very much interesting didi

    1. MAHIRA

      Chote 🙂 thank you so much sweetooo
      Yes you were the first and unique knowing about it…
      Happy to know you loved this one 🙂

  15. Intresting………laksh….??swara’s fiance???….continue sooon….n ur ff tooovaiting fr that tooo

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂
      Are you talking about if this is your love… Ff? I posted in advance on Monday , did you read it?

  16. Phoniex

    Loved it mahira it’s integrueing. Are you starting from A particular part of Swaragini or its a different story altogether. Loving it so so much.

    1. MAHIRA

      My dear phoniex… Thank you soooo much 🙂
      It’s a different story from the serial…

  17. Simin

    Diii i loved it
    Post soon
    Cant wait now

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂 tonight or tomorrow for the next part ^^

  18. Mahisha

    Awesome

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear

  19. Yo di…..!!!!
    Interesting….superb…waiting for it….!!!!

    1. MAHIRA

      Yo DA my dear 🙂
      Thank you so much^^
      Happy to know you loved it … Will post next part tonight

  20. seems interesting..loved it..continue soon dear..tc..

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear kumu 🙂

  21. Fairy

    Superbbbb!!!loved rags charecter???? n laksh supporting rags ws really sweet!!!sankyz charecter is awesome…hmmm!!!swara is in coma.!!N laksh is her fiance …omg shock laga?..waitng for nxt part!!!!keep rockng n stay blessed sweety????n I hope raglak r pair…well I like both raglak n ragsan bt still my intuitions r saying raglak wl b d final pair..let’s wait n watch??post soon…?

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you soooo much dear… Crossing you here after sr ending is a pleasure 🙂
      So yes… Tumhara pyaree laddo is a sweet and kind little sister 🙂
      And my princess is in coma *pout*
      Anyways… This story will have many pairs…. So wait and see ^^

      1. Fairy

        Hey? yeah it’s really nyc to see u again sweety?…hahhaha meri pyari laado? usi ke leye to mai stories parte hoo??wl b waitng for d twist n turns???looking forward to ur story dr?

  22. Awesome

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂

  23. Arshaanya

    Hi mahira…
    Vry intrstng prologue…
    Is it both swasan n raglak??
    I read only swasan stories bt still wil read dis as i find it vry integrueing…
    Tc

    1. MAHIRA

      Hey arshu 🙂
      So happy to see you here, hope you’ll like the track ^^
      I miss the comments of the titled best commentator of tu :p
      Thank you so much dear 🙂

  24. Pramudi

    Yippee.. Another masterpiece from mahira.. ?
    And it looks really interesting. So bring it on dear. Love read further. Like arshanyaa said, me too read only swasan stories. But just for you will read this too.
    And dear, i’m very sorry for not commenting in previous parts of ‘if that your love… ‘ i haven’t read those yet dear. I’m really sorry for it. And there are more stories to read & i have bookmarked them.
    Take your time & update.

    1. MAHIRA

      Hey my dear 🙂 where have you been for so long *pout*
      Me too I always wrote exclusively Swasan but as its a short story and raglak are having a huge part in the story…. Can’t say much more dear 🙂
      Thank you so much dear 🙂

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