ENOUGH! ( RAGLAK OS)

Hii guys this is a raglak os….. Its mainly laksh’s pov…. Read it and pls tell me how’s it……. And I’ll update next chapter of SANGINI – A NEW BEGINNING! soon…. So pls read it…….

I don’t know y annapurna will be throwing out of house in the serial still I’m writing this os…… Do read it once…….

Annapurna comes to kitchen and says to swara..

Ap: swara earlier u hv thrown out parineeta from this house… Now i’ll throw this girl….

She holds ragini’s hand and drags her to the drawing room and throws her.

Ragini in fear of falling closes her eyes tightly and shouts….. But two strong hands catches her.

Ragini: aahhhh…..

Sanskaar, uttara, rp, adarsh and dp are shocked to see ap and ragini like this while sujata smirks.

Ragini opens her teary eyes only to find her in laksh’s arms. Laksh is looking at ap with lots of anger and frustration.
He makes her stand and side hugs her while ragini cries…..

Ap: laksh chod k aao iss ladki ko ghar ke bahar.( laksh take her out of the house) … I don’t even want to see her face…
Sujata: exactly jijji… God knows how many sins will she do… And…..

Before she could speak more laksh cuts her.

Laksh ( shouts) : enoughhhhhh…………
All looks at him with shock.

Ap: laksh…
Laksh: that’s it maa……app logo ki problem kya hai??? Agar aap chahte hai ki ragini iss ghar se chali jae.. Toh voh chali jayegi…… ( ragini looks at him with teary eyes) but akeli nhi jayegi… Main bhi uske saath jaunga…
(that’s it ma…..whats ur problem?? If u want ragini should leave this house then she’ll leave but she’ll not go alone.. I’ll also go with her)
Sujata: chore yeh tu ke keh raha hai???
( wht are u saying beta)
Laksh: kyun chachi??? Galti akele ragini nhi ki… Maine bhi uska sath diya tha… Toh saza bhi dono ko milni chahiye na……
( y chachi?? its not only ragini’s mistake.. I hv also supported her.. So we both should face the consequences)
Ap: par laksh….
( but laksh)
Laksh: par what maa??? Aapko bas yeh dikh raha hai ki Ragini ne jhoot bola ki voh pregnant hai… par aap yeh kyun nhi samajh rahe ki usne aisa kyun kiya??? Aas padhos ki ladies samjh gayi maa par aap aur chachi toh samjhna chahte hi nhi ho……
(But wht maa!?? U r only seeing that ragini told a lie that she’s pregnant.. But y are u not understanding the reason behind it!? Ladies from neighbourhood hv understood but u n chachi doesn’t want to understand…)
Everyone looks on…

Ap : laksh usne hamari bhaavnao ka mazak udaya hai… Aur yeh pehli baar nhi hua hai…
( laksh she has made joke of our emotions)
Laksh: ik maa… N isi liye hum aap se maafi bhi maang rahe hai… Par aap dono toh uski besti karte hi nhi thak rahe…..
( I know maa.. Thats y we are asking sorry from u… But u r always insulting her..)

Sujata: laksh.. Tujhe iss mamle mein padhne ki zaroorat nhi hai…
( laksh u don’t need to get into this matter)

Laksh: zaroorat nhi thi chachi.. Par aap dono ne mujhe majboor kar diya hai…. N chachi yeh matt bhuliye ki aapki bhi ek beti… Agar use bhi uske sasural walon ne uske saath aisa kiya toh??
( yes.. It was not needed.. But u both hv forced me.. N chachi don’t forget that u also hv a daughter.. If something like this her in laws do with her then??)

Ap: iski kabhi naubat nhi aayegi laksh… N ragini agar hume sach bata deti toh…
( it will never happen laksh .. N if ragini would hv told the truth then…..)

Laksh: toh kya ma??? Kya kar leti aap?? Fir se ma ( shomi) ko abortion ke liye force karti hai na???
( then wht maa?? Wht would hv u done?? Again force shomi maa to abort her child??)
Sujata: toh isme galat kya hai chore??? Na je koi umar hai maa banne ki??
( so what’s wrong in this?? Is this the age to become a mother??)

Laksh: chachi yeh matt bhuliye ki unki shaadi bhi baad mein hi hui thi… Normal shaadi nhi thi unki…. Aur bacha rakhna ya na rakhna unki marzi thi par aap dono ko pata nhi kya padi thi…
( chachi don’t forget that they were married later only.. It was not a normal marriage….. N its their decision whether to keep the child or not… Why u both are so bothered??)

Ap: beta yeh samaj uss bache ko kabhi apnata nhi… Aur log kya kehte??
( Beta.. People wouldn’t hv accepted that child ever…. And wht would everyone say??)

Laksh: maa log kya kahenge iss vajah se hum jeena chod de kya??? Maa logo ka kaam hai kehna…. Agar hum uski chinta karenge toh jeeange kab?? Aur kis samaj ki baat kar rahi hai aap??? Kya aap bhul gayi ki isi samaj ki vajah se sanskaar hamare se 5 saal ke liye alag ho gaya tha…… Maa yeh samaj wale do chaar din baat karte fir bhul jate… Par aapne toh maa ko abortion k liye itna force kiya ki unhe manna hi pada.. upar se dadi… Unki baat toh rehne hi dete hain……. Aur maa chachi aap dono bhi toh maa hai na… Aap dono ma ki halat nhi samajh paye!???
( maa wht ever people say will we stop living?? Maa people’s job is to say something or the other.. N if we’ll listen to them then when will we live?? N abt which samaj are u talking haan??? N hv u forgotten that Bcoz of that samaj only sanskaar was away from us for 5 yrs.. Maa ppl will talk for 2-4 days then they’ll forget… But u forced that much to shomi maa to abort her child n she was also going to do that……. N moreover dadi….. It’ll better not to talk abt her… N u both are also mother’s… U didn’t understood her pain???

Ap: par beta ragini ne jo kiya voh galat tha….
( but wht ragini dis was wrong)
Laksh: maa agar aap use ek maa ki nazar se dekhe toh aapko voh galat nhi lagegi…. Abhi aap ise saas ki nazar se dekh rahi hai…… Maa voh bhi ek beti hai… voh apni maa ko aisa kaise karne de sakti thi… Aap hi batayie????
( maa if u see her from a mother’s eyes them you’ll find her innocent… Now u r seeing her from a mother in law’s pov… Maa she’s also a daughter… How could she let her mother do that…. U only tell???)

All are silent.

Laksh: koi jawaab nhi hai na aapke paas??? Aur maa aapko pota chahiye na……
( u don’t hv any answer na?? N maa u need a grandchild na??)
Ap looks on….

Laksh: toh maa pota aa jayega… Aisa thodi na hai ki ragini maa nhi ban sakti kabhi… Par aapne toh use jeene k kabil bhi nhi choda…. Sirf main jaanta hoon ki raat bhar voh roti rehti hai… Voh din raat aapki maafi k liye tarasti hai… Use apni galti ka ehsaas hai par aap toh usko galti sudharne ka mauka hi nhi de rahe toh voh kya kare bole????? Jaan dede apni??
( then maa… Grandchild will come.. Its not that ma thatvragibi can’t become a mother…. But u hv made her life he’ll… Only I know how much she cries at night…. Day and night she begs for ur forgiveness… She has realized her mistake but u r not giving her a chance to rectify her mistake… Wht should she do then??? Should she give her life!??)
Everyone has tears in their eyes…

Laksh brings ragini infront of ap.

Laksh: maa dekho iski taraf….. Kya halat bana li hai isne apni….. Har baar maaf kiya hai na maa…. Toh iss baar kyun nhi..??? Maa agar bacho se galti ho jaye toh bade maaf kar dete hai na aur sahi raasta dikhate hai…. Aur maa jab aap log mujhe maaf kar sakte hai toh ragini ko kyun nhi??? Maa aapko toh vaise bhi hamesha se ragini hi pasand thi na…. Fir uski kuch galtiyan… Voh bhi jo usne mere liye ki.. Unn ke liye jab pehle maaf kar diya tha toh abb unn baaton ko saamne lane ka kya matlab.. ????? Aur matt bhulo maa aaj hum sab yahan sahi hai ragini ki vajah se…. Varna kavya ne toh hum sabko jail mein daal hi diya tha…..
( just look at her wht has she done to herself.. Every time u hv forgiven her then y not this time?? Maa if children do mistake then it’s duty of elders to forgive them and show them right path n maa if u can forgive me then y not her?? Maa I hv always liked ragini then y due to her some mistakes which she did for me…… U hv already forgiven her for that then wht is the meaning to bring all those things back??? N don’t forget maa that today we are here all fine just Bcoz of her otherwise kavya had almost sent all of us to jail….)

Ap: thik hai ek pal ke liye agar hum ise maaf kar bhi de…. Fir bhi yeh parineeta ko vapis laane k bare mein soch bhi kaise sakti hai??
( alright if for a moment we forgive her then also…. How can she even think of bringing parineeta back??)

Laksh: maa bhabhi se bhi ho gayi galti…. Maa mujhe aisa kehna toh nhi chahiye par ismein bhi kahin na kahin aapki aur chachi ki galti hai….
( maa she also did a mistake… I shouldn’t say this but somewhere u n chachi are only responsible for this…)

Sujata: abb ismein hamari ke galti hai???
( now what’s our mistake in this??)

Laksh: kyun chachi??? Hat waqt ghar ki teeno swara, ragini n bhabhi ko kaun compare karta tha???
( y chachi?? Who used compare ragini, swara and bhabhi all the time??)

Ap and sujata bow down their heads. Dp and rp look at them..

Laksh: pehle aap bhabhi ko ragini aur swara se compare karte the… Aur abb ragini ko swara se??? Aisa kyun kiya aapne maa??? Agar aap bhabhi ko itna kabhi neecha dikhate hi nhi toh voh kabhi apne aap ko chota nhi maanti aur na hi galat raaste pe jaati… Aap khud socho maa… Agar dadi ( his dadi) ne aap ko chachi ko aise compare kiya hota toh aaj hum sab yahan nhi hote… ………. Maa koi bhi galat nhi hai iss time pe bass haalat galat hai…. Fir bhi aap chahti hai ke him yahan se chale jaen toh hum chale jaenge…. Kyunki main ragini ko akele toh nhi bhejunga…..
( first u used to compare bhabhi with swara and ragini.. N now u compare ragini with swara??? Y did u do this ma? If u haven’t compared bhabhi to these two she wouldn’t hv felt so bad abt her self nor she would hv gone on wrong path… U yourself think maa..if our grandmother had compared u and chachi then we all wouldn’t be here.. Maa no one is wrong right now only situation is wrong.. Still if u want us to leave then we’ll leave coz I won’t let ragini go alone…)
He starts to leave. He takes ragini’s hand.

Laksh: chalo ragini… Jahan tumhari izzat nhi vahan hume nhi rehna…..
( lets go ragini… Where there is no respect for u we will not live there…)
Ragini: laksh par hum aise kaise jaa sakte hain??? Maa abhi gusse mein hai… Voh maan jayengi…..
( laksh buy howcan we leave like this?? Maa is angry right now… She’ll forgive me…)

Ap looks at her with teary eyes.

Laksh: ragini already 2 mahine ho gaye hain…… Hum jaa rahe hai bass…..its enough now…
( ragini its been 2 months… We are going thats it… its enough now…)

He takes her with him.

He stops and turns back.

Laksh: maa… Bahut time ho gaya iss ghar mein khushiya nhi aayi hain…. Ma ek baar sabko ek maa ki nazar se aur equal nazar se dekho… Sab thik ho jaega…. Maa agar swara mein kuch achi baatein hai toh ragini aur bhabhi mein bhi achi baatein hai bass aapko dekhne ki zaroorat hai….. Aur maa koi bhi insaan perfect nhi hota… Sab main kuch na kuch kami thi hoti hi hai na… Aap mein mujhme papa mein chacha chachi bhaiya… Sab mein kamiya hai… Vaise hi ragini swara aur bhabhi mein bhi hai…… Maa aap teeno ko compare nhi kar sakti…. Har insaan alag hota hai kyunki har ek ki parvarish alag hoti hai…. .maa aap ek baar khud ko ragini ya bhabhi ki jagah rakh kar dekhiye… Aapko pata lagega jab koi kisi ko kisi aur ke sath compare karta hai toh kaisa lagta hai….. Main yeh baat samajh sakta hun kyunki main khud jaanta hun…. Bachpan se hi papa ne mujhe adarsh bhaiya aur sanskaar k sath compare kiya hai…. uss time pe sirf mujhe hi pata tha ki mujhe kaisa lag raha hai….. Aap log chahte ho ki aapke saare bete ek jaise ho.. Fir unn sab ki biwiyan bhi ek jaisi ho…. Aage aap chahenge ki aapke pote potiyan bhi ek jaise ho…… Par maa yeh possible nhi hai……..
( maa. Its been a while that happiness has come to our house.. ma for once see everyone with a mother’s vision and with equality… Everything will be fine….. Maa if swara has some good qualities then ragini and bhabhi also have u just have to see it…… N maa no one is perfect… Every one has some or the other weakness… uhv papa hv chacha chachi bhaiya… Everyone has some weak points… Like that only ragini swara and bhabhi also have…. Maa u can’t compare these three… Every person is different Bcoz everyone has grown up with different up bringing…maa once keep yourself in place of ragini or bhabhi…. Then you’ll know that when someone compares is with some other how it feels…. I can understand this Bcoz from childhood papa has compared me with adarsh bhaiya and sanskaar.. at that time only I knew how it felt..u all want that all ur sons should be same then their wives also should be same and in future you’ll want ur grandchildren to be same……. but that’s not possible mom…..

Everyone is looking at him.. Ap and dp hv bow down their heads…..

Laksh ; ragini come and pack ur bags…..
Ragini: but laksh….
Laksh: ragini r u coming..

Ragini compiles and goes behind him to their room and start packing. Adarsh, Swara and sanskaar try to stop them.

Downstairs.

Dp: ap.. Sujata… Was laksh saying right?? We’re u two comparing the dils of the house??
Ap and Sujata bow down their heads.
Rp: Sujata bhaisaab is asking something…
Ap: voh jii…
Dp: I don’t believe this ap…… I didn’t expect this from u… Disgusting……. N earlier also I told u to think as a mother as ragini’s mother but no…. U want to see it from ur vision…. Now face the consequences…….

Ap sits on sofa crying while Sujata also realises her mistake…….

Ap n Sujata: we are sorry….. Now wht shud we do??
Dp: stop our children….
Ap looks at him while she nods……

Sanskaar: lucky listen yrr… Pls… don’t go…
Ap n Sujata stands up..
Adarsh: laksh pls… Wait…

But laksh is not in mood to listen..

He come down and they both take blessings of all elders and starts to move.

Ap: laksh ragini……. Agar bado se galti ho jae toh bacho ko bhi maaf kar dena chahiye na………

Laksh and ragini turns and see ap and Sujata holding their ears.

Laksh: maa… Ragini: chachi ji.. .
Ap. Apni maa ko maaf nhi karoge???

Ragini cries and runs towards them and hugs them tightly…

Ragini: I’m sorry ma…. Sorry chachi jji…..
Ap and Sujata: we also sorry..

Everyone smiles…

They break the hug.

Ap goes to laksh and is abt to join her hands but laksh stops her.

Laksh: no maa…..

He hugs her while she cries.

Ragini says sorryto everyone and takes their blessings……..

At night.

Whole family is having dinner. Everyone has forgiven parineeta also… Every one is happy…………..

Swara: lets have a family photograph….
All: yesssss

Then all pose for a family photo.

Dp ap rp and Sujata are sitting on sofa…. All the girls parineeta ragini swara and uttara are sitting on floor…and our handsome boys adarsh, laksh and sanskaar are standing behind the sofa……..

THE END.

I know in serial they’ll stretch it more….. But I thought to give a happy ending… Hope u guys liked it………… Drop ur views in comment box……

Thank you..

Keep reading πŸ“–
With love
Richa

44 comments

  1. faima

    In serial there is no moral..I liked ua os..Nd once dp also said swara is gar ki beti nd 2 others r bahu…it obvious u like sme one mre than others.Nd expressing is good but in front of others two it’s not done.Nd camparing each other s very bad nd it will break relationship

  2. Shana98

    |Registered Member

    Nice I actually love this OS. This the best I have read so far and it’s a good example of what Laksh should say to Ap and Sujatha and the whole family and how he should be supporting her while she’s is compared to swara. πŸ‘ŒπŸ» great loves it. β€οΈπŸ˜˜πŸ’–

  3. Sonia

    I love this OS.. This thing only goes in my mind.. because of comparison only bhabhi turns negative.. she wants to look great but ends up in mess.. and also recalling past is also worst thing ever.. if a person want to change also they can’t.. it’s like provoking them to be in bad.. everyone has some individual quality.. elders should understand that and if kids doing wrong they should advice them.. instead of tat comparing and talking about past is worst thing..

  4. Varsha

    |Registered Member

    Actually I thght to write somewhat like this as I ws least intrested in d current track n u hv gt my mind voice dear, it ws fab awsm supr

  5. Megha123

    |Registered Member

    Loved it ….actually yesterday in Facebook we were chatting about the same thing in ragla,k page that no one is perfect as they show in serial in the character of Swara in my PoV it’s totally fictious by character of Ragini is like any other girl though she has flaws in her she is the gem of a person this is what we like in her the most its amazing to see an os which is reflecting my point of view…….in short it is simply elegant..loved it ….& try to post ur ff soon can’t wait for next part

  6. Emz fasa

    Awesome πŸ™‚ i wish this could happen in serial i am also many time thought why everyone compare rags and pari with swara she is not perfect
    Moreover traditional bahus are bad while modern bahu is perfect they are making rags and pari feel they are not good bahus

  7. Akshata

    |Registered Member

    I competently agree with you, no one is perfect. every single person has their own perspective of life. we should accept them with their qualities and flaws. comparison is the worst thing. i dont think it will happen in the serial becoz they never shows ragini’s good side and also dont think that they will give laksh this much importance and these many lines. but i am being optimistic, will hope for the best.

  8. SPP

    |Registered Member

    I wish this would happen in the serial
    Giving some Raglak scenes as well as family drama and giving Laksh a good role after a long time
    It was just Amazing Fabulous Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Loved it a lot
    Thanks for this OS DEAR
    Wonderful Marvelous Outstanding one
    What u said is absolutely true and agreed with you totally
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    • Richa19

      |Author

      Thanks myna…..

      It’ll be in dreams I guess coz they don’t want to show the truth in a straight forward way… .. N want to continue negativity…..

      Well what can we do??

  9. Hemalattha

    |Registered Member

    absolutely an amazing story which the real serial also can’t give but u gave that.it really awesome.u just naile it.it just amazing.outstanding

  10. Nami

    |Registered Member

    This is what we want to see bt they r showing something else. They keep comparing swaragini. I must say very well written. Specially laksh’s dialogue. I wish this coould have happened in the serial . Loved it.

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