The enemy within shot 1

Hey guys this is Prathi back with a new story I am trying something new hope you guys will like it..
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We all have heard about Angels and Demons from time immemorial, but have we ever thought how they came into existence!? Are they real or just some stories spun by bored and imaginative people!? Have we ever thought how they really look like!? We have always imagined Demons having two horns above their heads and a tail.. Whereas Angels having a Halo above their heads and wings.
Now we will get to see how they really come into existence!!
A small is seen playing with a ball in a Park.. He sees a Rs.5 coin
Boy: who would have left this here!?
( Picking up the coin)
Voice 1: That person will come back searching for it leave it there..
Voice 2: Hey come on just take it and keep it with you, you can buy balloon, Chocolate yummy treats!!
That boy heard the second voice kept that coin in his pocket .
After a while a small boy younger than him came looking for that coin..
Voice 1: See i told you that person will come looking for it..
Voice 2 : Hey buddy just don’t mind, let him search and walk away..
But as fate said, he was caught by his parents!! So he gave back the coin and was asked to say sorry..
Voice 1 : Accept your mistake Apologize!
Voice 2 : No don’t you dint do any mistake you just took it because it was lying there..
That boy ran away from there without apologizing..

Now that small boy grew up to be a teenager..
In college,
Freshers day..
A boy is seen waiting for his friends and he seems to be bit nervous..
Someone taps on his shoulders he turns and sees a guy wearing black shirt half tucked in and half out of his blue jean.. That guy looked handsome just like a prince any girl would fall for him..
Guy: Hey are you new here!? You seemed to be nervous
Boy: Yes of course sir I am new here..
Guy: So why don’t you dance and jerk off your nervousness!?? Come on guys play some music!! ( Dinka chika dinka chika plays)
That guy was forcing that boy to dance.. He heard a voice saying STOP THIS NONSENSE!!!!!
He turned back and he had the shock of his life!!!
He said Woooooow!!! Phoolon Jaise Chashmish, kya tum hogi meri kishmish!??
That girl was irked by his stupid comment..
She called out, Come Ronnie lets go, this guy seems to be an Idiot!!!
Now that guy got irritated, he was about to say something by that time someone called him,
Hey Abhi come let’s go yaar, that side there are so many people to bother around!!
Abhi: I am coming Nikhil ( He walked away saying that) Freshers were welcomed into a hall
Principal gave welcome speech to the freshers…
Freshers were Entertained
Many of the seniors performed to welcome their juniors.. It was time for Abhi’s performance every one started cheering Abhi Abhi Abhi…
That girl got irked hearing that she was about to leave but at that time Abhi spoke, Hey Chashmish this one is for you and started singing…

Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai
Kaun Hai Woh Anjaani
Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon
Kya Use Main Keh Doon
Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai
Kaun Hai Woh Anjaani
Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai
Kaun Hai Woh Anjaani
Woh Hai Koi Kali Ya Koi Kiran
Ya Hai Koi Kahani
Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon
Kya Use Main Keh Doon
Pretty Woman
Hey Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Tum Bhi Kaho Naa Pretty Woman
Ho Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai
Kaun Hai Woh Anjaani
Woh Hai Koi Kali Ya Koi Kiran
Ya Hai Koi Kahani
Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon
Kya Use Main Keh Doon
Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Tum Bhi Kaho Naa O Pretty Woman
Yo Pretty Woman
Listen Up Girl When U Feel This Way
Don’t U See The Sunshine
Coming Out Today
You Got To Feel It Right Just Like Day After Night
Dont Let The Sunshine
Out Of Your Sight
Cause I Can Feel You
Can You Feel It
When I Say That
I Can Feel You Here
Can U Feel Me
When I Say That I Am Crazy About You
Pretty Woman

Sone Ka Rang Hai
Sheeshe Ka Ang Hai
Jo Dekhe Dang Hai Kya Kahon
Hairaan Main Bhi Hoon
Yeh Kya Andaaz Hai
Itna Kyun Naaz Hai
Iska Kya Raaz Hain Kya Kahoon
Woh To Pal Mein Khush Hai Pal Mein Khafa
Badle Woh Rang Har Ghadi
Par Jo Bhi Dekhoon Roop Uskea
Lagti Hai Hai Pyaari Badi
Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon
Kya Use Main Keh Doon
Pretty Woman Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Tum Bhi Kaho Naa Pretty Woman
Aankhon Mein Hai Nasha
Zulphon Mein Hai Ghata
Pehle Hamne Ada Yeh Haseen
Dekhi Na Thi Kahin
Dekhi Jo Yeh Pari
Masti Dil Mein Bhari
Masti Dil Mein Bhari
Hai Yeh Jadogari Ya Nahi
Ho Na Tum Janu Kya Hain Naam Na Janu Main Pata.Par Itna Hai Maine Jabe Jise Dekhle Ek Nazar Bhar Ke
Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon
Kya Use Main Keh Doon
Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Tum Bhi Kaho Naa Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman.
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Tum Bhi Kaho Naa Pretty Woman

Everyone started saying pretty women..
A boy came and said hey Pragya you became Pretty women so soon.
Pragya said, Come on Purab stop it she was about to hit he ran she ran behind him..
Abhi felt jealous, he heard a rough voice saying you need to take care of that guy
( He was on stage and he dint hear any of their names)
A girl came running jealous saying, Abhi so who am I!? If she is a Pretty Women!?? Abhi said, Come on Tanu just a song that’s it calm down.. He says to himself have to get rid of this chipkali first ( he was smiling sheepishly) Tanu saw this and asked, Are you planning to do something!? Abhi said in a kiddy voice, What!? Nothing of that sort baby come let’s go.
Abhi reached home and in his room he sat on his bed.He heard a gentle voice saying , You love her.. He said , Who that Chashmish no way but she looks like an Angel mat be she is really an Angel.A voice is heard saying, Beta You reached home!? How many times to tell you not to speak to yourself!? Dadi, just chill it’s ok to speak to ourselves sometimes. So how was the freshers party? Abhi said, It was good Dadi (He was smiling)

Dadi said, something has happened I can sense it!! Abhi said, No Dadi nothing happened and again was smiling like an idiot!! She asked, Tell me how is your girlfriend Tanu!? Abhi said, Please Dadi how many times to tell you don’t tell her as my girlfriend I hate that chipkali..(He made faces while saying this)Dadi left from there smiling at him.The next when he entered the coll someone dashed him from behind while running past him. That guy said sorry and kept running. A Rough voice said, How dare does he do something like that to you!? And he is that same guy with that Chashmish go get him go… A gentle voice (which was heard in a very feeble manner) said, Don’t do this Abhi.. Abhi who was very angry ran behind him got hold of him and started hitting him black and blue..

Pragya just then came and saw this scene and was very angry over Abhi.. Abhi who saw Pragya stopped hitting that guy..
Pragya came near him slapped him across his face and said, Come Purab let’s leave who was injured badly.. Abhi heard the Rough voice saying, Why dint you do anything when she slapped you!?

The gentle voice said, You love her that’s why you don’t hurt her.. Tanu who saw this was very angry she got hold of Pragya and was about to slap her but Abhi stopped Tanu from slapping her.. Tanu asked, Come on Abhi why don’t you just let me slap her the same way she slapped you!? Abhi said, Stop it Tanu mistake is on my side he called out Pragya and said I am sorry I overreacted.. Pragya replied, Oh finally you realized it and I am glad you realized it ( Sarcastic tone) and left the place with Purab.. The Rough voice said, See this is the respect you get from her come on slap her on her face… But instead he ran overtook her stood in front of her and said, I am really sorry Pragya and what’s your name by the way? (Purab just showed his id card), Oh Purab I am really sorry I was feeling jealous of how you two are together for each other always I never had friends like this, That’s the reason I hit him and dint hit you coz you are a girl na!? Shall we be friends!?? Saying this he forwarded his hand for handshake.. Pragya said, Mr. Abhi I have heard enough about you, you can never ever change yourself.. And you know what I hate guys like you.. And started moving.. Abhi again came in front and said please just give me a chance one single chance I can change and will change for you ( Oops! ) He then said, As a friend I will change myself for you.. Pragya thought for a moment and said, Ok let me observe you for sometime and then decide about accepting your friendship.. Abhi said, Ok you will very soon accept my friendship Miss. Pragya saying this he went singing and dancing.. Tanu was boiling seeing all this.. Her friend Rita said, You still have time to hatch that plan which I told you earlier . Tanu said, No need Abhi is mine and will always remain mine forever! Few days passed Abhi was being good just for Pragya’s sake. One day a guy irritated him a lot, Abhi was about to hit him at that time he saw Pragya crossing and said, Buddy I forgive you for whatever you said.. At that time he heard the Rough voice saying, No no no no no no don’t do like this you are going to kill yourself.. Abhi said, Arey chup! Everyone around him asked, What happened Abhi!? And he said, Nothing guys just like that speaking to myself!! Few more days passed Pragya accepted his friendship and was seen together almost all the time.. Pragya thought to herself, He is really good at heart not like what I thought about him earlier. One day Pragya dint come to college, Abhi was behaving restless and went to her home to enquire about her and came to know that she wasn’t feeling well and was resting in her room.. Abhi went in and saw her she was looking really weak! A Rough voice said, You are in love with this weakling!? Tanu is the right choice for you go meet her.. He hushed off that voice and went near Pragya caressed her face.. He left without walking her up.. She dint come to coll for a week, Abhi thought not to disturb her so he too dint visit her later.. Tanu got hold of this chance and called Abhi to her Apartment saying, Hey Abhi today is my b’day why don’t you just come to my home!? I have invited all our friends.. Abhi nodded yes.. Gentle voice said, No don’t go she is planning something evil I can sense it.. Rough voice said, Come on go it’s her b’day go and enjoy. That day evening he went to her apartment he opened the doors and saw it was filled with roses everywhere and called were lit in a very dim manner! Tanu I don’t think you called me to celebrate your birthday seems like honeymoon ( chuckling) and said, I know it’s a bad joke turn on the lights for God’s sake I feel uncomfortable.. He saw her coming and was relieved I thought you were not here and have to celebrate with ghosts.. When she came near he observed that she was dressed in a very seducing way.. Black netted saree with blood red blouse she bent down at that time her pallu feel off of her shoulder! The rough voice said, Come on take her ! The gentle voice said, See I told you she is planning something evil!!

Which voice will Abhi listen to this time!?? Will Tanu be successful in her plan? Will Abhi realize his love for Pragya or fall in Tanu’s traps ?? Wait for the next shot to know this!!

Guys hope you like it I am trying something new please bear with me and I want feedbacks please.. Positive, negative both are welcome.. I am not telling anything about what I wrote coz my sweeties will fight with me for saying so..

31 comments

  1. Maahi

    |Registered Member

    awesome awesome awesome soul talking was a way tooo awsome dr i am in love woth dizzz now eagerly waiting dr nd thnx fr reading my update lv uuu keep rocking dr

    • Prathi

      |Author

      Thank you Sharaya☺☺ Are you continuing your ff!? Or am I missing it!? if I have missed it b please send me the link

  2. Vaishali

    |Registered Member

    wowwwwwwwww prathi dii it was amazing dii oh how can i forget it was written by my dii who is always perfect loved it a lot loved those two inner voices and abhis love fr pragya for which he didnt listen to his enemy within loved it no words dii love u loadzz waiting fr ur next episode wish abhi hears the gentle voice fingers crossed…

    • Prathi

      |Author

      Thank you Vaishu.. Can I call you so!? And don’t make your sis wait for your episodes, u kind of update rarely any problem!?? I love reading it

  3. Riyashri

    |Registered Member

    As usual U hav nailed it !! Awesomeeeee to the core !! Love it !! Sorry for the late comments !! Love u Prathi di !!

  4. Maya

    |Registered Member

    Superb as usual!😍😍😍😍 waiting for the nxt one! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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