enemies frm childhood (part-6)

Hi I’m back again with another chapter. Kindly overlook the mistakes and tell me your opinion of the same.
Here’s the link to previous epi:http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=enemies+frm+childhood+part-5
The Sun’s rays found its way through the curtains to find Ritvik lovingly looking at Radhika who was cuddled into a ball on the bed. There was a cute smile on her face. Ritvik kissed her forehead and said: “ O my sleeping beauty wake up………………….”
Radhika: “Bhaiya plzzz……..5 more minutes………after that I’ll wake up…………”
Ritvik: “No 5 minutes……you have been saying this for an hour….now no more…. wake up….”
Radhika : “Humph……….”

Ritvik closed her eyes and led her to the Pooja room. Radhika opened her eyes to see the idol of lord Ganapati.
She folded her hands and prayed to him : “ Ganapati, first of all thank you for making my attempt to make fun of that Arjun a grand success….Please give me more ideas and make them all a success…………………… “
After sending her prayers to God she turned around to see Ritvik looking at her…
Radhika (in mind): “ OMG….did I say that aloud ????????????? “. She smiled unsurely at him and asked: “What happened bhaiya ???? Why do you keep looking at me like that??????????? “
Ritvik (laughing ) : “ My dear princess don’t I even have the right to look at you ??????? “ Saying this he kneeled down before her.
Radhika(in mind) : “ Thank God I didn’t say it out loud…………..” (loudly)” Nothing like that bhaiya” …Saying this she hug him.
Ritvik too hugged her back and whispered in her ears :“ I heard your prayer “………….
Radhika broke the hug and looked at him shocked.
Ritvik : “ Don’t worry…I won’t tell it to anyone.”

Radhika : “ Pinky promise ??????????? “
Ritvik : “ Pinky promise………”
Radhika hugged him and said: “Thankyou bhaiya…..I love you …you are the best bhaiya in the world.“ Saying this she gave him a peck on his cheeks and ran off to freshen up…………………………..
Scene changes :
Rads is seen walking towards the guest room…Soft voices could be heard from the room. It was evident that Nandini was trying to wake Arjun up….She paused for a moment outside the room and then knocked it. Nandini opened the door and asked her to come in.
Radhika: “ Di, didn’t Arjun wake up till now???????? “
Nandini : “No beta….I’ve been trying to wake him up for an hour…but he wouldn’t even stir..”
Radhika ( smiling at her ): “ Don’t worry di, I’ll wake him up…..”
Nandini : “ ok………..” Saying this she left the room.

Radhika looked around the room to find a glass of water kept on the table. She took the glass and poured out its contents on to Arjun’s face.
He woke up with a jerk and shouted: “Rain rain……”
Hearing his shout Radhika broke into fits of laughter. Arjun who came back to his senses ran behind Radhika who on seeing Arjun’s angry face had fled out of the room……………………..
Scene changes:

There are a lot of noises in all the rooms. Apparently everyone is getting ready to go to temple. Finally everyone except Radhika has come down. Anjali’s voice could be heard in the living room.
Anjali : “ Choti, make haste. We have to reach there before temple closes. I don’t understand what is taking her time to come downstairs. “ After a few minutes of wait she told Niel to bring her down. After a few minutes Niel came down tagging Rads along with him……….
Anjali : “ What took you so long and why didn’t you comb your hair ????????? “
Radhika : “ Sorry dadima…..I couldn’t find my hair comb. “
Anjali : “ ok ok…..lets move on .“ Saying this she turned to go but was stopped by Rads call.
Radhika (looking at Arjun): “ Dadima do we need an umbrella ??????? It might rain…….. “
Arjun who stiffened hearing her question glanced angrily at her. But Rads was unaffected by his murderous stare and smirked back at him…..

Arjun : “ I know you don’t have brains. But can’t you stop blurting out stupid questions ???????? “
Radhika retorted back : “ Valsa Williams( she reads the news at 9 in ‘All India Radio’) told in the news that there are chances of rain. “
Anjali who was watching their fight with uneasiness decided to put an end to it and interfered: “Stop fighting. Its late “ and lifted up a protesting Rads into her arms and left the room calling out others to follow the suit.

Precap : not decided.

I’m extremely sorry for the very late update. Actually I thought to update it on Friday .But unfortunately I fell down. Please do tell me your opinion of this update. Is it very boring ????? If so I’ll stop. Please do give me suggestions……………

Credit to: aastha

53 comments

  1. Gauri

    How are you now Aasatha, and its not boring dear … I really like it thanks for updating…I am waiting how will Arjun answer her 🙂 keep it going tc

    • aastha

      I’m ok now if you ignore a little bit of pain……….happy that you liked it……………when r u gonna update di ????????? I’m dying to read both the ff’s……..

      • aastha

        I’m from Ernakulam……..I just completed my 12th………waiting for the results…….so r u having vacation now????????????/

      • aastha

        best of luck for ur exams………I took science stream…(computer ) ……enikku bore adikkunnu……………May 7thinu result varum………athukond oru manasamadanavum ella………………future plans ennoke chodichal enikke ariyilla…….njan degree edukananu udesikkunathu………english literature…………soooo after tmrws exaam will you be free ??????

      • Dev

        Haa njan naale kazhinjaal totally free…..pakshe ende frnds land cheyundu……1 week so outing with them to hydrabad. 3 days

      • aastha

        That’s really cool………..have a happy time enjoying with ur buddies……..ummm what should I call you??????

      • aastha

        I cant believe that you are chettan and not chechi……….I never knew boys would watch serials…….so what should I call ???? simply dev or chetta ???

  2. Sree

    First of all take care of urself and the ep was very nice actually cute.plz post next asap but first get well.love u aastha di.

    • aastha

      Thanks shree for your concern………..glad that you loved it………y did u change ur icon ?? r u the same shree who writes mmz-2 ????

      • Sree

        No i am not that shree. I am sree and i write mr maheswari and his secretary.love u and tc

      • aastha

        oh sorry…….anyway nyc to see you……..in which class r u studying ??????? where do you live ??????????

  3. Gianna

    Aastha this was a laughter packed update arjun screaming rain I literally laughed. Love this nok-jhok btn ardhika. Loved it loved it loved it and love u loads. ???

  4. Thanks for D update Dr 🙂 🙂 🙂 I was waiting for these cuties 🙂 🙂 🙂 rads omg so much fun 😀 she s lovely 🙂 but with much naughtiness 😉 😉 😉 it’s superbbbbbbbbbbb 🙂 🙂

  5. Very nice aasthu dear….its damn cute funny…when arjun shouted rain..rain..iam burst out laughed…radhu knoty girl..bohut parishaan kiya arjun ko…loved their cute fight…pls update regularly dear. …love u loads ..tc…

    • aastha

      thanks susi………..glad that you liked their fi8’s…………..love u too…………..

  6. Aasthu dear how r u now…don’t move here n there…i am always yearning for ur update for its freshness n soothing effects…those babies n their nokjhoks are too cute…stay blessed..tc??

  7. ammu

    Aasthu…sorry for late comment dearhow r u?d epi was so funny n cute….arjun n rads ..randu perum vittukodukkilaa…pinne rads epozhm bold ansllo….sis bro bond(rads rohan) is aldo vry nice…n pls check fb dear….

    • aastha

      ammu chechi , chechi comment cheythatinnu tanne thanks………..njan eppozhum chechide commentinayi wait cheyyarunde….vere aarum comment cheytilengilum chechiyude comment evide undakumennu enikkariyam……………….eppo kuzhappamonum ella…….kurachu vedanaunde………………….chechikke ee epi eshtamayatil otiri santoshamunde……………………how is everyone at home ?????????? ……….i’ll check fb for sure………………..love u……………..ummaa…………………….

      • ammu

        aasthu..nte phn cmplaint aayi..so fbyl0kayran pattla.ethu bookinte karyama paranje…pinne state sylabs aano?njnm comp science aayrnu..be k

      • aastha

        Cleopatras Daughter….. ya bjan state syllabus aanu…….chechi aetayirunnu ????? ….sorry chechi for the late reply…..I was talking to Dev chetta……

  8. Hey Aastha dear it was super duper cute babe..radhika is so adorable here..how cutely she said am said it loud…haha..wanna give het kissy…bro-sis bond is lovely.Aradhika fight is funny n cute..bichara arjun…n as u said u r just 12 th pass out..i can’t belive yar..ur writing is so amazing… n its not bore at all so don’t think like that…bt want longer epi next time…love u…muhaa..

    • aastha

      Thanks deepu….after reading ur comment I feel weightless…………I’ll try to make the next epi longer…………………….

  9. miss x

    Omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggg this is just sooooo cute ashhuu….( okay na calling like that )……..I love those nhok johks btwm rad n arj………please please update it soon………and yes take care
    Btw who is Anjali???

    • aastha

      hey missi……no probs you can cal me tat………….Anjali is Rads dadima…………

  10. Roma

    Hi aastha dearyyy…how r u now?…plzzzz take very good care of yourself. …the episode was awesoooooome. .loved ardhika cute fights n teasing….keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

    • aastha

      I’m fine now di…..still a lil bit of pain is there…………..happy that you commented……..love you too…………………..

  11. nisha

    hey aasthuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu this story is also very good

    I loved it too.

    I like the humour of rads and arjun here

    More practical and realistic

    the approach is very interesting

    I like the way you make their conversation very beautiful yet not boring at all.

    love u dear keep updating this one too

    I want ot know what happens next how come rads teach a lesson to arjun. and answer his questions in her smirk way.

    Go a head sweetheart

    love u aasthu take care

    keep smiling

    hey roma heloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo dear

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