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enemies frm childhood (part-4)

administratorBy administratorApril 13, 201633 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi guys I’m back with another epi……..i know its been a week…..sorry….once again thanks for liking my ff and supporting me……..and don’t forget to leave your opinion of it.
Here is the link to the previous epi: http://www.tellyupdates.com/enemies-frm-childhood-part-3/

Location : Mishra’s mansion
The Sun’s rays peeped through the open windows of the room to find a peacefully sleeping Rads. With her shiny black tresses which had fallen over her forehead and the cute smile which crept over her face, she looked like a Barbie doll who was hugging her teddy bear lovingly close to her.
Soon our princess woke from her deep slumber murmuring: “Why the Sun’s rays are falling all over me????? “
Sun: “I’m sorry my princess but you have to meet your prince “.
Suddenly Rads sat up enthusiastically and said “How could I have forgotten!!!!!!!! Today they are coming right????? “. Saying this she jumps from down from her beds and and closing her eyes she climbed down the stairs to see the idol of Lord Ganesh. After saying her prayers she turned to see Rohit smiling down at her.
Rohit: “ Don’t you want to see them????????????????? “
Radhika: “ Yes…..I’m very eager to meet them….will they make me a friend of theirs bhai???????? “
Rohit: “ Why would’nt they???????? After all who could not be friends with my malooty ….”……………saying this he took her hand and led her to the living room……..
Rohit walked her to a boy of his own age. He had jet black hair which fell over his forehead just like Radhika’s did…………He had dimpled cheeks and his face was lively and was filled with naughtiness…………Yes its our Arjun…….
Beside Arjun was standing Niel…On seeing Rads with Rohit he ran to her.
Niel: “ Good Morning my princess……………”….
Then he turned to Arjun and introduced Rads to him.
Niel: “ Arjun this is our princess………”
Arjun smirked down at her and pulling her cheeks told in a way making fun of her : “ Oh so this is your CHOTI princess…….” and pulling her cheeks asked: “ Vavede perenta?????????????? (what is your name baby?????) ”

Rads who felt irked at being called baby controlled her anger and asked him to bend down to her height and cupping her mouth she shouted into his ears : “ Prayan manasilla ( I dont feel like saying it) ”
Hearing her reply Ne-Ro ( Niel and Rohit) ans Sam broke into fits of laughter…….
Controlling her laughter Sam kneeled down in front of her and asked: “What is ur sweet name princess???????? ”
Rads: “ my name is Radhika . What about yours di??????? “
Sam: “ I am Samaira. You can call me Sam. Shall I call you Chashni????“
Rads: “ why not” and they shared a hug……………..
Just then a lady enters the living room and says:” seems like all of you made aquaintances………” and turning to rads told: “ nammal parichayapettilallo ( we did not make aquaintance did we???? ”

Precap : who is this lady????????

I’m sorry for boring you guys…..I am not satisfied with this epi……are u??????? did you all like it?????? Do tell me your sincere opinion of this update……..

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33 Comments

  1. Brin on April 13, 2016 8:29 am

    Please could you make it longer, still want to know why they are enemy? 🙂

    • aastha on April 13, 2016 1:03 pm

      yes i’ll make the next epi longer ad i’ll try to update soon……i’ll tell y they r enemies ..it is not much……….

  2. suga on April 13, 2016 8:45 am

    Oh wow cute princess 🙂 🙂 ha ha ha so arjun n rads fight started it seems 😀 😀 😀 next time long ff pls dear 🙂 🙂 loved it 🙂 🙂 take care 🙂

    • aastha on April 13, 2016 1:05 pm

      ya i’ll make the next one longer and i’ll update soon to make up 4 this short one…………..ad ya the fi8 btw them has started…..i’ll try my level best to make their fi8s intresting……..

  3. rosie on April 13, 2016 8:48 am

    Omg…aasthu dear waiting for ur update…very cute update…I like radhika answers…lol if I could see baby Arjun’s reaction then …awesome dear…update soon

    • aastha on April 13, 2016 1:07 pm

      thanks di…..im very lazy thats y i din update ………i’ll try to post next one sooon…..di do you have an fb account?????????

    • rosie on April 13, 2016 2:27 pm

      Yes I have but I barely active there…?

    • rosie on April 13, 2016 2:36 pm

      U can find me on name sushri suchismita with a demi lovato photo

    • aastha on April 13, 2016 3:06 pm

      di i saw it…but i dont see the option of send friend request…………wat to do????

    • rosie on April 13, 2016 5:16 pm

      What it should b there…what happened to my account…oh god…coz of zero activity may b that’s happened…u can tell me ur name if u r comfortable…let me see then

    • aastha on April 15, 2016 9:48 am

      sorry di for the late comment……my fb name: Aleena profile pic : Monica Sehgal

  4. Shree on April 13, 2016 8:55 am

    Cute one aastha!! So right from the start they are not in good terms… Lol I love your lines in Malayalam!! Nalayirukunu… Post soon baby!!

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • aastha on April 13, 2016 1:08 pm

      shree r u malayali???????????? …….i never knew you were……im glad that u liked those lines……..

    • Shree on April 13, 2016 9:53 pm

      No baby.. I’m a tamilian… Can understand Malayalam well.. Not good in speaking.. Can manage.. Post soon baby!!

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

  5. ammu on April 13, 2016 9:18 am

    aasthu..ethra dvsamay wait chynu kallikkutty…nice part.crazy childrn.malaylm part nalla rasamund..ntha ithra short part?kurachu koodi long aakmo??hav a nice day dear.. z

    • aastha on April 13, 2016 1:12 pm

      sorry ammu chechi…………malayalam part eshtamayalle??? enikum eshtamayirunnu………..njan sunday aanu nattil ninnu vannath….pinne vacation aayathukond veruthe samayam kalayuvanu…..athanu update cheyan vaikiyathum ethrayum short aayi poyathum……………..adutha epi njan valutakkikollam…..pinky promise…….chechi enthu cheyuva???????? ummmm chechiku fb account edakumallo????? chechide fb accountinte peerum profile picum parannu tarumo???????????

    • ammu on April 13, 2016 4:51 pm

      aasthu…natlok poy njoy chytho?pne njn fbyl athre actve onnm alla.u can search in d name adithya vijayan with ruhanikas pic. Nte name kettu pls boy anennu karuthallea…

    • aastha on April 13, 2016 6:56 pm

      attil poyi njoy cheyan avide cousis aarumilla……….bt i had a good time with my grandparents……..njanum fbil athra active alla……..pakshe njan search cheyuna aalk eniku friend request send cheyan pattunilla………ethippo 3rd time aanu……nja rosie chechikum gauri chechikum request send cheyan nokiyettu pattiyilla………..

    • ammu on April 14, 2016 5:46 pm

      aasthu..vrodhamilenkl fb name m picm parayamo?kuzhapmlenkl mathi.pne aasthu ella mmz ff lm cmnt chyarundale? Nallakutty.

    • aastha on April 14, 2016 10:41 pm

      enniku verodamilla………..fb name : aleena fb pic: monica sehgal (our rads )

  6. Gauri on April 13, 2016 1:36 pm

    Aastha it was very cute I liked Arjun-Radhika’s meeting…but please make it little longer…loads of love and hugs to you 🙂

    • aastha on April 13, 2016 2:11 pm

      thanku di………i’ll make it longer……..di r u fashion desinger????????

  7. Roshni on April 13, 2016 3:21 pm

    Radhu inni choti bachiii???? I would live to read d next part and please make that longer plz

    • aastha on April 13, 2016 3:59 pm

      thaku…….and ya i’ll make the next update long…………….

  8. Bhabya on April 13, 2016 5:32 pm

    please write longer one. N its really very cute.

    • aastha on April 13, 2016 6:52 pm

      thank you……..i’ll make the next update longer………..

  9. susi on April 13, 2016 5:49 pm

    Very nice dear…make it next one longer update..love u …tc…

    • aastha on April 14, 2016 7:51 am

      yhanks susi………..i’ll make the next epi longer……….

  10. Roma on April 13, 2016 7:16 pm

    Wowwww very cute princess rads…arjun never gonna change, same arrogant n smirking boy….rads gave him very good reply…..lol….Sam was so sweeeeeet. …named our princess chashniiiii…..that lady can be piyali…awesome episode n lovely story. …loved it soooooooo muchhhhhh. ….keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

    • aastha on April 14, 2016 7:52 am

      thank you di………i so happy that u liked my story………i’ll post the next 1 asap……love u……muah…………….

  11. dipika on April 14, 2016 9:39 am

    in first meet they started fighting.haha..great dear..we longer one dear..keep going… love u.love this ff too.

    • aastha on April 14, 2016 10:41 pm

      thank you dipika………..glad that u love it………love u too………..

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