enemies frm childhood (part-3)

Hey guys!!!!!!!! So im back with another epi.…plzzz give me your opinion of my story..…hope u all will enjoy this…..once again thanku 4 the support u ve been giving me….this epi will be focused on rads….it’ll show her relationship with all the family members and how much they love her…….today I am introducing 2 new characters. Ankush and Ritvik. Both of them are radhika’s cousins but they loves her as their own sister and rads too considers them as her own brothers …..rads is called by malooty by niel and rohit….
Heres the link to prev chapter: http://www.tellyupdates.com/enemies-frm-childhood-part-2/

So the story takes the leap of 2 years…now baby rads grew up into a chid of 2 years old…………with her fark silky tresses which reach upto her shoulders and black eyes filled with curiosity,love and naughtiness she definitely looked like a baby angel. The blessings of the nature too was with her. Just like the Sun she too had a radiance of her own. Her smile lit up a smile on others lips too. Her words gave others hope. Her actions filled others life’s wih rainbow colours.
The clock in the living room struck 7 when radhus voice was heard in the living room. She was calling for her dear brother Niel. He knew what this call meant. He went to her bedroom to see radhu sitting on the bed with her eyes closed and hugging her teddy close her. He smiled and went to her and keeping her eyes closed he led her to the Pooja room. She opened her eyes to see the idol of lord Ganesh looking at her. She smiled and prayed: “ thankyou 4 letting me see this beautiful sun…..”
At Suns palace, Sun wiped his tears of joy saying: “ soo sweet of her..infact only she cares about me……”
Meanwhile Anjali is in a call. She was apeaking: “ It would be our pleasure to have them at our house…im sure a change of scene woud help her…Here radhu s there na she will make her happy…So at what time shall I expect them??? 9 ???ok we will b ready……”….
Don’t u want to know what rads was doing???????
She was in Ankush’s room. “ Radhu wants horse ride” she said by poking his back….
Ankush: “radhu……….

“ plzzz bhaiya????????” radhika requested by keeping a sad face and looking through her eyelids….once she does that it is difficult for any1 to refuse her…
“ ok one time…..” saying this ankush lifted her and placed her on his lap and gave her a horse ride. This is how hw does it. He moved hs feet up and down real fast by keeping the fingers on his feet rooted to the ground….( im not sure whether you ll understand….bt it is a nice feeling.my sis used to do this to me when I was little…)
After enjoying this to the core she thanked him and gave a peck on his cheeks. After that she silently crept into ritviks room and closed his eyes and left it at his free will to identify her.
Ritvik: ”Its my princess only….” Saying this he turned to face her and after giving a kiss on her cheeks said: “ what shall I do 4 my princess????”
Radhika: “ I want a piggy ride…’

Ritvik: ” upon my honour your majesty” and kneeled down b4 her and took her 4 a piggy ride to the living room. After giving him a hug she rushed off to dadaji’s lap. After settlin down she asked him when rohit would b coming and that she was missing hm badly. Before dadji could reply a voice boomed at the entrance “ I’m here malooty….” Radhu turned to find rohit smiling down at her. Seeing him she was overwhelmed with happiness and rushed off to meet him. Niel too joined her after a few secs bcoz he too had heard his voice and had come running to meet his bestie. Both of them shared a hug and turned to see radhu with pot face…..They laughed and rohit hugged her said: “ I too missed my cutie pie….”..She giggled and hugged him back….Niel: “ malooty when you got rohit didi u forget me???” Radhu smiled and hugged him and gave both of them kisses on their cheeks….Now both of their faces beamed with happiness as they both got radhus special gift…..Radhika gives both hug and kisses to only 3 person in a day…its kind of special n every1 looks forward to it……..

Precap: entry of two people.can you guess who they are??????????

Hey guys this week im going to my native place that’s y I gave a quick update….i hope I dint bore any of you…..if you feel my plot is dragging plzz do tell me……Dev, Ammu n dipika im sry that I din reply to all of you…..

Credit to: aastha

49 comments

  1. ammu

    aasthu..agaîn nice epi.radhu oru chellakkuttíyjanallo..sun’s part nannay tund.adutha epi yl nammude hero ‘s ntry with sam aano??eagerly waitng 4 nxt update

    • aastha

      tanku chechi…….enikke othiri santhosamayi…………well u guess too much…..u’ll know abt those 2 people in the nxt epi…….umm eente future plans entanennu chechi chodichille????njan eng lit degree edukan aanu plan cheyunnath……….chechide athe subject tanne……….ummm chechi eng lit eduthal athinte subjects entokkeyanennu parayamo????????????

  2. M jealous of radhu…lol…so much pampered…jus one thing,a request make radhika a strong girl…two new persons may be sam n Arjun…update soon…tc

    • Gauri

      Rosie darling sorry for replying late…I will update today for sure…I love leo tolstoy story..specially ”God sees the truth but waits” its close to reality …anyways I love good stories…and as kid my fav was Cindrella

    • aastha

      tanks 4 ur comment……..afterall radhu is the only girl child in the mishra family so its a surprise if she isnt pampered……n ya i’ll make radhu a strong girl………

  3. Gauri

    Aastha you reminded me of my childhood…I am the first girl after 8 boys in my family from both mother and father’s side…it feels like princess…they still don’t refuse me…such a cute update 🙂

  4. aastha

    guys there are some spelling errors: i meant rohit bhaiya not didi…. n radhu was stadig close to them with a pout face not pot face……….
    plz do overlook my mistakes and enjoy reading…….

  5. ammu

    aasthu..im glad 2 know dat u want 2 stdy eng lit.now im a 4th sem studnt in kerala univrsity.in each sem v hav 2 study each literary genre lik poetry,drama,fiction and d4ff works in these genres.then in anothr papr called histry f eng lang n lit.(everyone call it as hell as it is a lil diffclt)in wich u study british histry n sóciety.den sub(diff.4 diff collgs.my sub is psyclgy)then 2nd lang,commuñictn,grammar..if u hav gud lectures u just love eng.hope i dont make u bore.pinne nk thonnunu ithraym paranju njn aasthuvne shalyapedthuvanenn..ini aasthu ñjod onm chodklaa hi hi..

    • aastha

      ella ammu chechi chechi enne boradippikunnilla……tanks 4 te reply………..chechi reply cheytatil enniku othiri santhoshamund…….chechikku sughamano?????? veetil aarokke und??????????.love u….umma….

  6. Shree

    So cute!! All pampering for Radhika!! It was the same for me as I was the first granddaughter for both my parents side… Too much pampering!! My sister too was pampered the same way as she was too very special to my mom… I remember the horese and piggy rides I used to give her when she was small.. She’s spoilt even more… It’s k.. It’s all our mistake..

    I loved the episode!! The two mysterious people are…. I think.. Sam and Arjun… Or Arjun and Nandini… Or Saral?! I donno.. I’m just guessing..

    Post soon baby.. Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • aastha

      thanks shree…..well rads deserves all pampering as she is a cutie pie……well both u n gauri di were equally pampered…..i wonder if thats the reason both of u r sooooo loving…..love u..teddy hug………

  7. lucifer

    Hiiii aastha pplease add me to your group tooo. Njanum kerala il ninnum anu and enik valare happy ayi .enik eyalude ff Bhayankara istam anu .Please enik nigaluda e ff group il join chaiyanam ennu undu .but I don’t know abt it .sooo please and ur fff is sooooooo good and nice. And guys I am also a girl and lucifer is my fake name

    • aastha

      well luci ur comment makes me blush……..wow 1 more mallu……..well evide once comment cheytal mati pinne nee ee groupil life time membership eduthapoleya……..OCE A FRIEND ALWAYS A FRIEND………….umm luci ninte perinte attathe 3 letters maatamo?????????i dont y bt the name lucifer sounds a wrong bell……pakshe ninte eshtam…..eniku entayalum kozhappamilla…..by the by ninte veed evideya??????????etrayila padikkunne???????? ente ff serikum eshtamayo??????????? chumma parauvallallo????????? pinky promise????????

  8. Hey aasthu dear amazing update yaar …..their bonding was too good…I loved it… I think one person is Sam….. Pls update soon dear…luv u ….tc…

  9. aastha

    thamks to all who have commented………..ad a special welcome and thanku to luci…….all of ur comments makes i cloud 9………….none f u tld me whether u feel as if the show is dragging…………

  10. ammu

    aasthu dear .. Nk sukamanu.ninako??nte vtl amma ,pappa n 2 brothers .njn middle l aanu.wat abt u?pne aasthu ethu distriçtaa

    • aastha

      ammu chechi enikku sukhamau……..ente veetil pappa mamma pine chechi……….njan ernakulattanu………..chechi trivandram alle???????????…….chechi bhayakara bold aano??????..

    • aastha

      hiiiii paru………….wow oru malayali koodi……nee entu cheyuva?????????padikkuvano atho work cheyuvano??????????…eethu districtila tamasikunath?????????…ninaku ente story ishtamayo?????????????……reply sooooooooon……………

  11. ammu

    aasthu..ntha angne chodche?njn bhynkara bold aanon?hmm nk thonunmila njn athre bold aanent.bt if im with my frnds,i dare 2 do anything(chumma oru punchinu parnjthaa ).i wondr nammal ethre dóoreyaa..bt nammal ithraym koottayi.nk nalla santhoshamuna my littl sis..

    • aastha

      normally oru veetil 3 kida ondenkil 2nd kid bhayankara bold aayirikkumennu ente teacher paranitunde…….atha chotiche…….pineyentha………ummmm chechi ciema vallathum kando????

  12. ammu

    u r so cute aasthu…nthu karyamaytta samsarikunnath..nte psychlgy tchrm parayunath mid child eppoyzhm blncd aayrkm eth sahacharyavm adjst chymn.njn anganok aanu.angne films kanan pokar4la..last kandath moideen aanu..shariya nammude mallusok evdèpoy?n what is ur ambition aasthu???

    • aastha

      tanku chechi…….ente ambition ennu paranal….well angane pratyekichonnum ella..nalla oru job veenam… entayalum i want to make my parents proud of me……..penne newspaper il ezhuthaamennu aagraham und…..hindu newspaperente metroplusilokke articles vararille athupole entengilum ezhuthiyal kollamennudu….pakshe athoke pattumennu enikku confidece ella…….chechide ambition enta??????????…….

  13. Vivi

    Aasthuuu kutti…sorry late aayi poyi…evide innale vbs strt cheythu…so njaan avide volunteer aaa…den ath ellam kazhinj vannapol kure tym aayi…april 14 vare ond vbs…so little bit busy aaa…pinne ningade avide vbs strt cheytho….
    Back to our story….radhu should be pampered more and more but in a good way or else she will be spoiled…i’m also d 1st grandchild in my both parents house and i’m also spoiled a bit by der love..my family is my great wall of china….kk i should stop my word vomiting nw..i jest keep on talking der is no pause button in my system……i luv talking even its full of pottataram…..ennik enniyum othiri talk cheyan ond…ippom ethreyum mathi…inni samyam angott kadukyelle…..
    All d best wishes 4 ur studies….eth college illa.. pokhan theerumanichth…
    Pinne fast update cheyu…
    Love you alot….
    @luci-really happy to have here..if u don’t mind wots ur real name and nee evide ninde place…
    @paru-happy to c u tooo…ghosh hw many r der…ninde place evide ya…
    @ammu-ammu’see…. Enna vishesham..ellam sugham thane alle… Dulquar inde puthiye film trailer kando KALI….ennik ath byangaramayi..ishta pettu……

    • aastha

      tanku chechi comment cheythatiu……ente palliyil ennu tudangiyenna totunne enikku ariyilla…..njan pokunnilla……..i always hated going 4 tat….enikku 3 days matrame ullu…athum full day….vbs start cheythal athu atrayum pettannu teerane anna ente prarthana…………

      chechi KALIude suspence polikatte??????????

  14. ammu

    hmm viviii we misd u here.njnm kndu kaliyude trailr.nalla film anennu kekkunnu.nee actualy ntha padkunee??

  15. Yep njn padikkuva…btech final yr…enikku story ishtapettu….pinne criticise chaiyalloo alle….kurachoodi innovative concepts add chaiyam ennu thonunnu….any way good luck asthuu

    • aastha

      tanks paru chechi……..chechi ethu clgil aanu padikunnathu??????????…..ofcourse criticise cheyam……….innovative concepts ennathukod chechi enta udesiche????????examples parayamo??????????enikku manasilayilla…..atha choyiche……pine entokke und visesam????chechi ethu districtilanu tamasikunnath??????????….veetil aaroke und??????????

  16. Roma

    Wowwww awesome, marvellous episode. .rads soooo lucky…everybody pampering her….loved the epi very very much. …all the fun n specially sun’s comment very cute…new entry maybe sam n piyali…..keep it up honeyyy. …very interesting n refreshing exciting story. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads.

    • aastha

      r u te same roma who used to comment in renu’s ff ???? coz i never tot u wud comment…..tanks 4 te compliment……….r u te same roma?????????plz answer….

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