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enemies frm childhood (part-2)

administratorBy administratorApril 2, 201649 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys thanks to all of you for your unconditional support…..i never expected my story would get such support…….had it not been for ypu guys I woul not have realized my talents….okim going to stop blabbering…today im introducing t2 new characters to the story…1 is Prerna(niels mom) and the other is Abhay(rads dad)….

Heres the link to the previous episode:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/enemies-frm-childhood/

coming back to our story…….
Everyone had been looking forward to this day. Today their princess was coming into into their lifes to fill it with rainbow colors…..Anjali was ready with an aarthi plate in her hand. As soon as dadaji (anjali’s husband ) along with Abhay, Prerna (she had gone to help mala) mala and baby came her face lit up with happiness. Even the children were jumping with happiness. Soon the mother and child were welcomed home by appling tikaon their forehead. No sooner baby rads was kept on the crib than her cousins surrounded her and kept looking at her cute face…she was sucking her thumb..Rohit spoke out:” oh! She is a baby angelonly wings lacking…..” (Sry guys this sentence is not mine but R.K Narayan’s.hope you wont mind). Suddenly rads opened her eyes to see 18 pair of eyes looking at her…slowly her marred expression changed and she smiled at the lot…seeing this niel”: dadima you wont believe it..but our baby is smiling at us…she looks very cute when she smiles…” saying this niel bent down to give a small peck on her cheeks…well its after effect was that she started crying. To a white faced Niel, Mala told that she(baby rads) was crying because all other bhais did not give her kiss……..(cute isn’t it??)
AFTER A FEW DAYS………….

The preparations for the namkaran were in its full swing. Wherever you looked all you could see were busy men running about with the preparations. It certainly was a bee hive of activity….. Everyone were doing their their best to make the event memorisable….Anjali certainly was very tensed and to add to her miseries the housekeeper and the lady who used to look after the kids were on leave. Since the family members were busy with the preparations no was there to keep the children in control…but it soothed her that the eldest 7 had gone to a summer camp and would return only a day before the ceremony….but the real naughty ones ie our niel and rohit were at home.They could not go to the sumer camp as they were not of age…but these 2 were more than enough to drive everyone crazy…..they all got in the middle of some work and henceforth delayed it…sometimes they would hide the knives in the kichen and when the backs of those at kichen wre turned….lets us what mischief they up to today…….it was around 2pm……after a days long work Anjali had decided to rest for a while before resuming it….she sat down on an arm chair and turned on the recorder to listen to some silent music..but to her horror what came out was “let’s nacho”…a flabbergasted Anjali ran behind the giggling pair to punish them before they took the help of dadaji…..”let it be Anjali…after all they are kida na???”……………………………………
ON THE NAMKARAN DAY……………..

(The rituals of the namkaran is done as it is in kerala. According to the tradition a girl child is named after 28 nights of baby’s delivery.I have done my level best to include all the rituals….please forgive me if everything is not complete…..)
Finally the day dawned. Yes today our princess was going to be named. A blindfolded Mala and our princess was brought to the hall.They opened their eyes to a beautiful sight. It was bound to be as every one had made sure that not one stone was left unturned. It was decorated with flowers in pink and white. Baby pink curtains with lighting on it now adorned the windows. A cream coloured mattress was neately laid on the floor. On its front end, 2 nilavilakku were kept at some distance from each otherand also sweets on plates near it. A beautiful crib was placed near it. Tiny babbie and a teddy hing from its roof. Soon everyone settled down and guests started pouring in. They blessed the child and gave gifts to her..The most awaited guests yes the Mehras came in finally. Little Arjun too had come. After giving gift to the baby he settled down with his friends nie land rohit. As soon as he sat down he whispered to them:” She is just as you both described..sooo cute…”.

Soon the rituals started. The sacred fire was lighted and Pandit ji started to chant sacred hymns to invoke the Gods in the heaven to bless the child. Dadaji performed Nool Kettu by tieing a Black string on rads wrist. Anjali whispered the name Radhika three times in her ear, with the other ear closed with a betel leaf. In Kerala, a black thread and gold chain called an aranjanam are tied around the baby’s waist on the 28th day. In certain parts of the state, it is performed on the 27th if it is a baby boy. Next radhus eyes were lined with mayye or kanmashi (Kohl)and a black spot was placed on one cheek to ward off the evil eyes. Finally a mixture of ghee (melted and clarified butter) and honey was given to radhika as a base for her various foods in the future.

Precap: I have not decided.

Guys how was it….im sure I have not done justice to the rituals….infact I have never seen a namkaran function as im not following Hinduism.i wrote this referring to internet and a video I saw………plzzzz give ur valuble suggesions n plzz say ur opinion about the story taking a leap of 2 years…

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49 Comments

  1. Amy on April 2, 2016 3:15 pm

    It was sooo cute….. i am frm kerala….. i know the ritual a little bit…. it was good…… update soon 🙂

    • Vivi on April 2, 2016 3:25 pm

      Ohh..wonderful…so kerala thill evide aaa….

    • Amy on April 2, 2016 3:37 pm

      Trivandrum…. where r u from?

    • Vivi on April 2, 2016 4:01 pm

      I’m from pathanamthitta..
      So r u working or studying

    • Amy on April 2, 2016 5:01 pm

      I’m in college…

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 5:11 pm

      thanks amy…………ne malayaliyanenu enikariyillayirunnu…………….tanks a lot 4 ur support……………………..love u…………

  2. Gauri on April 2, 2016 3:16 pm

    So cute little Arjun and Radhika….waiting for their fight to start 🙂

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 5:13 pm

      tanks di………plzz update ur story soon…………..

    • Gauri on April 2, 2016 8:41 pm

      writing dear will update soon 🙂

  3. Vivi on April 2, 2016 3:21 pm

    Aasthuuuu…kutti…nalla chptr ayirunnu…arjun radhu ne cute ennu paranju…..nee christian anno….???plz pettann nxt chaptr update cheyu…and if u can update regularly..
    Nee epom ethrayilla….
    Love u!!!tc

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 5:15 pm

      tankyu chechi………..yup njan christian aanu…….chechiyo????????????……..njan eppo 12th kazhinnu………..veetil pretyakichu paniyonnumilla………….n i’ll try to update regularly…..bt im a lazy goose…tats y i take sooo long to update………….tanks 4 ur support…………..love u…………..

  4. Brin on April 2, 2016 3:41 pm

    Awesome episode, waiting for the next update. 🙂

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 9:20 pm

      tanks brin……..i’ll post as soon as i can……….

  5. subha on April 2, 2016 3:47 pm

    super episode ……..update soon….

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 9:21 pm

      tanks a lot……….

  6. feby on April 2, 2016 3:50 pm

    nice one……but dear, christians also have similar functions as tat of hindus on 28th day…just tat matras by pandit ji is not there….its dissapointing tat u didnt c the functions….evn whn i was outside kerala, whnevr the malayali young couples got baby, all malayalis used to come and help them as family and so v used to enjoy it….its sort of fun u know…..and all non malayalis too used to help thm and everyone take part and rejoice in other cultures…..that all the uniquess v find in a defence area whn v just are seens as indians rather than malayalis or tamilians or etc…..
    well…u made me remember the awesome times….. and ur updates was also so cute….keep going….

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 9:23 pm

      tanks febi………pakshe christians nu baptism aanu ollath…….engane othiri rituals ellalo????
      nee christian aano?????????????

    • feby on April 3, 2016 12:48 am

      ya…iam a christian…..but v too have similar functions … u dont know coz u hv not seen…we too hav it….and mamodisa masangalku shesham alle ullu….iruvathettu ellam kunjugalkum undu….njangalde sideil undu…..pinne njan kanditullathu keralathinu porathu aayirkumpola… avide ellathinum xtra aakhosham aayirnu…..may b coz of tat….ivide ellam kanan irikunnathe ullu…

  7. rosie on April 2, 2016 3:54 pm

    It’s a very fresh story…happiness is all surrounded here…glad to know about other parts culture of India…very well narrated…so babies gang met…wow…update soon..tc??

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 9:24 pm

      tanku didi….i’ll post as soon as possible………..wen llu unite ardhika in ur story?????im dying to know…..

    • rosie on April 3, 2016 2:56 pm

      Ardhika always united from heart…but they cudn’t realized it…so some push needed n his sister will give that push..tc?

  8. ammu on April 2, 2016 4:21 pm

    aastha..nice part.a diffrnt plot.pls update soñ.im also a malayali,trivandrum.

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 9:25 pm

      tanku ammu…………..nee enhu cheyuva???????studying or working?????????

  9. suvi on April 2, 2016 4:26 pm

    Wooo dat was soo cute ?

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 9:26 pm

      tanku suvi……..glad tat u liked it…………

  10. Shree on April 2, 2016 4:39 pm

    Omg!! That was so cute!! Little Arjun and baby Radhika!! I’m just waiting for them both to grow up and then…. The fight!! Their bickering.. Lol.. I just can’t wait.. And Neil is so cute!! Rohit too!! To mischievous… Loved it aastha.. Post soon

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 9:28 pm

      shree im happy tat u liked the epi…..yes wen both grow up arjun ll sooon take bck hs wrd……….

  11. feby on April 2, 2016 4:59 pm

    wait let me count the malayalis in mmz …. 1.u aastha, 2. me, 3.ammu, 4.vivi , 5.mittu and 6.amy….. is there anyone i left…. hi guyz….

    • Ananya on April 2, 2016 8:51 pm

      Feby njanum malayali anu…

    • feby on April 3, 2016 12:51 am

      yup…u too dear….thn ammuz too……
      its funny to c such things going on……

  12. susi on April 2, 2016 5:25 pm

    It was too good yaar ……pls update soon dear …

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 9:28 pm

      tanku susi………

  13. Bhabya on April 2, 2016 5:36 pm

    It is very awesome . Please write soon.

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 9:28 pm

      tanks a lot……..ya i’ll write sooon……….

  14. niki on April 2, 2016 5:45 pm

    Waiting for our Arjun to dominate his princess and love her like anything ❤❤

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 9:29 pm

      ur patience ll b rewarded niki…………

  15. Ananya on April 2, 2016 8:46 pm

    Aastha it was a nic episode.. I loved it…

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 9:30 pm

      tanku chechi……..u cn cal me aasthu……

  16. aastha on April 2, 2016 9:32 pm

    a big tanks 2 all………im so overwhelmed at ur comments…………i’ll try my best to update sooon…………guys u can cal me aasthu……n febi, our ammuz is missing….she s also a mallu……

    • feby on April 3, 2016 12:50 am

      wait…is ammu and ammuz 2 diff ppl????

    • aastha on April 3, 2016 8:45 am

      ya……..ammuz also jst completed her 12th…….shes preparing 4 entrance………

  17. Abhi on April 2, 2016 9:40 pm

    Amazing yaar…..i loved it
    ..

    • aastha on April 2, 2016 10:19 pm

      tanks abhi…gladtat u liked it………..

  18. ammu on April 2, 2016 10:57 pm

    njn dgree 2nd year cheyuua..pne vacation plns nthojaya??

    • aastha on April 3, 2016 8:50 am

      pretyekichu plan onnumilla………..cousinente veetil poyi nilkanam…..grandparents ente aduthu poyi nilkanam…………..anganeyokke………eppo veruthe samayam kalayuva…….tv comp ethuthanne pani….pinne book vayikkum………angane 2-3 divasam kazhiyumbol story baaki ezhutham tudagum……pitte divasam teertittu post cheyum….pinne negalude ellam commentsinayi wait cheyum…………..tats it……chechiku eppo vaccation aano???????????enta padikunne??????????ethu clg???????????????

  19. Dev on April 3, 2016 7:00 am

    Suuppeerrrbbb aastha sory cudnt read strde bt it was good to read

  20. ammu on April 3, 2016 4:28 pm

    aasthu..hmm..vction aanu.bt spcl classes.njn BA english lang. and lit. Studnt aanu.ithraym cmmnts kittiyapo santhoshmayo??pne ntha future plans,studies

  21. dipika on April 3, 2016 10:52 pm

    Hey this so cute update…wonderful epi Astha dear…keep going.. waiting for nxt one.

  22. Roma on April 5, 2016 9:08 pm

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode aastha my darling. …loved it very very much. ..don’t know all the rituals but enjoyed it a lotttttttttt. ..as I’m Muslim so totally different background but I love n respect all religions n it’s rituals. …very lovelyyyy n beautiful narration my sweeeeeet friend. …so our cutie pies neil n rohit are naughty brats…I can imagine how badly they’ll be going to spoil little rads in future….will be fun to read….arjun liked her as cute baby…hmmmm…will see in future how much she’ll trouble you boy….I’m very excited for upcoming episodes. ..keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

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