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Home»Fan Fiction»End less love story (part 15)
Fan Fiction Swaragini

End less love story (part 15)

AstraBy AstraJune 18, 2017Updated:June 18, 201733 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hey guys, thank you all for the previous comments.

All parts: All Parts here
Previous: part-14

Part 15

Ragini was holding Laksh’s collar, there is minimal distance in between them. They both have closed their eyes.

*ting* *ting*

Bell sound.

Both opens their eyes suddenly. Ragini leaves his collar and bends her head. Laksh too moves far rubbing his head. Both are embarrassed to look at each other. Laksh goes to the door to open. He looks from the enlarger mirror and finds Shekar..!!
Laksh heart stops there itself.

He backs off from the door looking shocked. Ragini can’t understand why Laksh is doing like this. then, Shekar beats the door strongly.

Ragini shocks, “Laksh, who is it..??”

Laksh: Ragini, let’s go away..!!

Laksh holds her hand. Ragini, “let me see, who’s it..!!”
She frees her hand from Laksh and goes to door. She looks and it’s Shekar.

“Papaa..” Ragini smiles.

“why are you scared of my papaa..?” Ragini asks and opens the door. Laksh stands just numb.

‘Pappa..!’ Ragini hugs Shekar. She looks beside and shocks to see Sanskar is standing beside. Ragini leaves Shekar and looks at him. Shekar goes inside.

The trio gets inside. Laksh looks on…

San: how far you will run away Laksh..? I will catch you where ever you go..!!

Laksh glares at Sanskar.

Rag: what the hell you are doing here Sanskar..???

Sanky looks at Ragini.

San: Ragini, I know you still love me..

Rag: stop the non sense..!!

Sanskar looks her shocked.

Rag: I’m married now. Laksh is my husband..!! and, I love him..!! I repeat, “I love Laksh”

Shekar: Ragini, just don’t believe his words. there is a hidden cheater within him. He has cheated all of us..!!

Laksh: uncle, that’s not…

Shekar: let me talk Mr. Laksh..!!

Ragini looks at both of them confused.

Shekar: Ragini, the way swara cheated us.. the same thing Laksh did.

Ragini looks on…

Shekar: swara has ruined your name and Laksh has ruined Sanskar’s name. laksh is the one who brought that girl to talk against Sanskar..
(the shopping mall incident)

Shekar: he is the one who has made the video in which Sanskar was killing a person..!!

Ragini shocks.

Ragini: no papa. This Sanskar has said you something. Don’t believe him..!!

San: I know Ragini you will say like this… that’s why, I have brought the proofs.

Sanskar shows her a video.

In that, Laksh is talking to the goons to fight with Sanskar. Ragini shocks and looks at Laksh. Laksh was bending his head. She goes near him.

“Laksh, why are you silent? Say it’s false..!! say that it’s not true..!!” says Ragini.

Shekar and Sanskar keeps looking.

Ragini holds his hand,
“Laksh, speak out..!!”

Laksh closes his eyes,
“It is true..!!”

Ragini shocks with thunder sound in background. She leaves his hand.

“that’s all truth Ragini..!!” Laksh says and looks at her.

Ragini in same shocked expression looks at Shekar. Shekar nods his head.

Now she looks at Laksh.

“Laksh, I’m with you. Say this was not truth..!!” says Ragini.

Shekar and Sanskar looks at Ragini amazed that she still believe Laksh..??

Laksh: Ragini, I can’t lie you more..!! Yes..!! that was all true..!!

Laksh was bending his head. Ragini nods her head and wipes her tears.

“That’s true..!! that’s true..!!’ Ragini says upset.

She then comes near Laksh and holds his collar.

“why did you cheat me..???” Ragini questions.

Laksh: I didn’t cheat you Ragini… I have cheated..

Rag: you have fooled my father, my mother, my daadi, my dadaji.. my whole family..!! you cheat..!!

Ragini pushes Laksh back. Laksh looks at Ragini in tears. Ragini’s face and nose turns red due to the high grief.

Rag: all the love you have shown me was false..? all the concern you have shown me was false..!!

Laksh looking at her,
“No. the love was true. The concern was true. For that love only I have did this much Ragini. I love you so much..!!”

Ragini closes her ears.

“Laksh, once I loved to listen that word from you. Now, it’s irritating me..!! don’t say love you again..!!”

Laksh: if you irritate or get angry this is true Ragini..!! I love you, I love you… I LOVE YOU..!!

Ragini shouts,

“Bas..! bas..! bas..!!”

Laksh looks at her shocked.

“What kind of love is this..? Do you say this love..? you have kept the mask of love for your obsession Laksh..!!” Ragini says.

Laksh: yes, I’m obsessed for you… how much I obsessed means, I wanted to kill that Sanskar many times..!!

Sanskar glares at Laksh. Ragini looks at Laksh in confusion.

“Are you mad Laksh..??”
Laksh looks at her as she asked.

“why are you talking like this..?? he was your friend…” says Ragini.

Laksh: I don’t care whether it’s a friend or anyone who comes in between us Ragini. I want you.. that’s it..!!

Ragini: then kill me..!!

Laksh looks at her shocked.

Ragini: why are you supporting your words…?? how was your love true..!! this is madness Laksh..!! this is madness..!!

Laksh: how could be it’s madness Ragini..?

Ragini turns her head away annoyed.

Laksh: yeah, I have done all that. but, I never tried to use your name.

Ragini closes her eyes in upset.

Laksh in tears,
“was it my wrong falling in love with you..? was it my wrong being a friend to Sanskar..?”

Sanskar looks at Laksh.

Laksh continues,

“I didn’t ask to give you to me Ragini. It’s your father who made me to marry you. What can I do if Swara has ruined your name. what can I do if sanksar has blamed you..??”

Ragini takes deep breath,
“Yes Laksh. You are right here. Swara and Sanskar were wrong. But, they both didn’t continue their works…!!” Ragini says. And Laksh keeps looking at her.

“why did you bring me Germany..? just to escape from the deeds you did right..!!”

A white flash appears on Laksh face shocked.

“why did you suddenly changed the city, because Sanskar was chasing you right..!!”

Laksh looks shocked.

Ragini:: have you ever ever tried to tell all this to me..?? NO..!! bcz you are scared Laksh. You were scared that I will leave you right..!!!

Laksh was looking at Ragini numb.

Ragini: I would have excused you. But, you wanted to keep the truth away from me.. forever..!!

Shekar looks at Ragini in tears.

Ragini says in tears,
“you wanted to take away from my world..!!”

Laksh remains clam.

Ragini:: I have forgot my love failure and I was getting happy in your love Laksh. But, once after knowing that love is not love but madness….

Laksh: no, it’s love Ragini. I will say it even finally..!! I love you..!!

Ragini: fine laksh..!! this is ‘your’ love. Then, I don’t need it..!!

Laksh looks at her shocked.

Ragini: for this love you did all this..!! now, I’m leaving that love only to you..!!!

Ragini turns to Shekar.

“papa, let’s go..!!”

Laksh in tears, “Ragini plz don’t leave me Ragini.”

Ragini keeps walking away in tears with Shekar.

“now you came to know truth. Give me one chance, I will prove..!!!” Laksh was telling following her. but Ragini gets into car along with Shekar.

Laksh was beating the window,

“Ragini, how can you leave me..??? ok, I agree I’m mad..!! show mercy to this mad guy..!! Ragini plz..!! listen to me..!!” Laksh was telling.

The driver starts the car. Car goes away…

Ragini holds her face in palms and cries, while Shekar consoles her. Sanskar remains calm who was sitting in front seat.

Laksh keeps looking at the gone away car standing alone on the road whom the people around are seeing him in pity.

Precap: the obsession starts again..!!

From Astra’s creation box.

Jaanus, raise your hand who has remembered the same incident where Ragini was exposed and laksh talked like this..!! in serial.
how many wanted to see Laksh’s position in Ragini’s place..

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    33 Comments

    1. Malu on June 18, 2017 5:55 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    2. avika on June 18, 2017 6:33 pm

      nice waiting for next part

    3. Mitra on June 18, 2017 6:52 pm

      Its awesome as always

    4. asra on June 18, 2017 7:09 pm

      amazing astu dear….loved it alot..

    5. bindhu on June 18, 2017 7:10 pm

      Amazing dr but plz let it be raglak dr

    6. Jiyani on June 18, 2017 7:17 pm

      Me and awesome episode

    7. Ammu on June 18, 2017 7:32 pm

      It’s​ Interesting episode dear and feeling bad for Laksh ??? yes I remembered the same incident in swaragini when Ragini exposed and I want to see Laksh’s position in Ragini’s place. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP. Love you dear ?????????????

    8. Asw on June 18, 2017 7:46 pm

      Amazing yaar me too keep going

    9. Vini on June 18, 2017 8:24 pm

      Awesome

    10. Anju on June 18, 2017 8:46 pm

      Awesome episode

    11. Aadya114 on June 18, 2017 9:06 pm

      Ya di I too wanted to see laksh in ragini’s place. Episode was awesome. Feeling bad for laksh

    12. Laashya on June 18, 2017 9:35 pm

      Amazing episode and can’t wait for next

    13. Vennila on June 18, 2017 9:35 pm

      Awesome

    14. Monu on June 18, 2017 9:54 pm

      Interesting nd poor raglak

    15. DivzS on June 18, 2017 10:32 pm

      Omg omg omg omg…. 1. You updated back to back… 2. This update is DHAMAKEDAAR…. 3. Shocking twists every update made me (and maybe every reader) a mad fan… 4. Expecting another thriller update real soon.. Superb… Thank you so much… Awesome

      • Astra on June 19, 2017 11:31 am

        hey divz.. thank you so much for the four comments..!! i’m sooooo glad..

    16. Sreevijayan on June 18, 2017 11:52 pm

      Such a sad update sisy…a very depressing day altogether..loved it sooo much…..

      • Astra on June 19, 2017 11:29 am

        true yar, yesterday was really depressing. india lost the match.. and some more.. but be happy dear… thank you..

    17. Rakhi on June 19, 2017 6:33 am

      Heartbreaking update but awesome dear.. I wanted to see lash in Ragini’s place so thanks for that.. Keep rocking

      • Astra on June 19, 2017 11:30 am

        thank you so much Rakhi…

    18. Arjuna on June 19, 2017 6:37 am

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    19. Ankita on June 19, 2017 11:48 am

      Plz don’t make laksh love for ragini into obsession let it be pure

    20. Sherin on June 19, 2017 5:06 pm

      Awesome dear

    21. Elizebathlovely on June 19, 2017 5:16 pm

      Amazing

    22. Aamy on June 19, 2017 5:52 pm

      Awesome

    23. Soumya on June 19, 2017 6:47 pm

      Simply superb di

    24. Ashly on June 19, 2017 7:20 pm

      Fantastic amazing superb

    25. Monisha on June 19, 2017 8:21 pm

      Feeling bad for raglak nd unite them soon

    26. Pearly on June 19, 2017 8:37 pm

      Nice part

    27. Thahseem on June 19, 2017 8:55 pm

      Interesting

    28. teitokUn1718 on June 20, 2017 8:22 am

      Loved it….
      Waiting for obsession….

    29. hemalattha on June 21, 2017 4:24 pm

      Yaar I was amazed. It was a mesmerising chapter. Continue.

      • Astra on June 21, 2017 4:35 pm

        thanks alot dear..

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