The Empty Canvas – A RiKara One Shot

The Empty Canvas – A RiKara One Shot:

” Now what , why this girl doesn’t let me live peacefully…” Thought Omkara angrily as he saw Svetlana coming within his house in a Palanquin dressed as a bride.

She came out of the Palanquin and went towards Jhanvi.

“Now what is this Drama?” Asked Jhanvi angrily as she saw Svetlana.

” Actually , Mom , you are not accepting me as your daughter-in-law so I need to do something na…” Svetlana was starting with her drama when a voice came from back.

“Arey Yeh Womaniya Kaun hai?” Svetlana turned and the family witnessed another Palanquin coming in the Oberoi Mansion with another Bride in it.

The girl came out of the Palanquin and passed a huge smile to Omkara.

” Humare Omkara Ji …” She said eyeing him.

” Sirf Humare…” She said eyeing Svetlana with anger in her eyes who was left confused by her arrival.

” Omkara Singh Oberoi Ki wife…” Said a Media person capturing Guari’s smiling face who went near Omkara and stood next to him , she held his arm trying to pose for a photograph when suddenly Omkara pushed her hand.

She smiled and went towards the media , “Hum Guari , Guari Kumari Sharma Singh Oberoi…”
” But do you have any proof for that , Omkara Sir is gonna marry Svetlana Ma’am , he had his engagement a few days ago and suddenly you…” Asked a Media person while Guari smiled.
” Engagement Badi hai yah Sath Phere?” She asked raising her eyebrows with a cute innocent smile.

The Media person looked at her confused.
” Hum Jante Hain , Jante hain , Koi Vishwas toh Karega Nahi Humpe so Hum Batade Humare pass Koi Saboot Nahi…” Guari was speaking again.
” Actually , you don’t have any proof , Liar…” Said Svetlana coming forward and holding Guari’s arm making her face her , Guari eyed her angrily and pulled her arm back.
” Par pore 150 se 200 Gawah Hai , Humare Bareilly ke Gawon Walein…” She turns towards the Media.
” Abb App Hi Bataye , Sabot Bade Yah 150 se 200 Gawah?” She asked as the Media agreed with her.

” You all…I called you and you…” Svetlana was going to speak when Guari took out her orange Sweet from her closed fist and pushed in Svetlana’s mouth.
Svetlana was left shocked , ” App Yeh Khayiye…”Guari smiled.
” Aur Waise bhi Sabse Bada Gawah , Humare Pati Dev hain , Humne Suna Hai woh Kabhi Jhooth Nahi Bolte…App Unhi Se Pooch Lijiye…” Guari said while the Media agreed and ran with their camera’s and Microphone’s to Omkara.
” Nobody needs to question Om…If the girl is saying that she is Omkara’s wife , we agree…” Tej said diving in looking for his own work to be done in the midst of this confusion.
Now all the people in the house turned to Tej.
” Sasur Ji , App Bhi na , Hum Jante Hai apko Humari Sautan Ji Chahiye , Right…Thori Angreezi Toh Hum Bhi Sikh Gaye Hai…Hum Kya Bol Rahe the , App Bhul Kyun Nahi Jaate Inhe Kyunke Humare Rehte Hue To Hum Apko Aur Inko Saath Hone Nahi Denge…Sazaa Jo Deni Hai Apko…Bohot Saari…” Came Guari’s reply which shocked one and all.
” Sasuma , Hum to Kehte Hai Chod Dijiye…Deserve , Humari Angreez…Nahi Karte Apko…” Guari said coming towards Jhanvi who looked at her with uncertainty in her eyes.

” I suppose today’s enough Headlines…JUST LEAVE…” Omkara shouted as he was up to the brim now with all the drama taking place in his house , in front of Media.
His scream was a loud one which lead to all of them exiting the Oberoi Mansion in a go.
” Bade Robdaar Hai App to Omkara Ji…” Guari said coming close to him and caressing his cheeks.
” App Chodiye , App Ka Naam Kya Hai…Jo Bhi Ho , Humara Samaan Humare Patidev Ke Kamre Mein Rakhiye…” Guari ordered a servant standing nearby who nodded his head and took out her luggage from the Palanquin and went towards Omkara’s room in a hurry.

” Abb…” Guari held Svetlana’s arm who was standing there dazed at the girl who just entered the house , ” Bahar…” Guari said as she dragged Svetlana out of the house.
Svetlana couldn’t do anything and as soon as they were standing at the entrance of Oberoi Mansions , Guari smiled , ” Jab Gharwali Aagayi Hai to Baharwali ki Kya Zarorat…Haina Sultana Ji…” Guari stressed the last two words passing a deadly smile to Svetlana , Svetlana looked at her face clearly and at once knew her to be the girl whom she met a few days ago and…Chulbul.
” What are you doing?” Tej said coming towards Guari who closed the door on Svetlana’s face while Svetlana was left speaking just one word , ” Chulbul…”
” Jo Bhi Kar Rahe Hain Sahi Kar Rahe Hain…Beech Mein Mat Aayiga Sasur Ji warna Problem App Ko Hi Hogi…” Guari said as she passed Tej giving him a glare who was left Boggled seeing the first shade of his Elder Daughter-In- Law.
Guari smiled as she saw the empty hall , ” Patidev Shayad Kamre Mein Hai…” She thought with a smile.

She went towards the room thinking how she planned all this with her Dandi Bhaiyaa realizing Svetlana’s plan , she didn’t knew how , from where but she realized that what she was doing as Chulbul was absolutely nothing except for giving some support to Omkara and so she decided to turn Guari again to get her work done , she knew Svetlana would attack again but she was prepared , she knew how to fight with Svetlana now , She knew how to fight both now , her inner turmoil , her love as well as her outer enemy , Svetlana.

As she was thinking this , she reached the room and saw Omkara standing with his back faced towards her , ” Hume Maaf Kardijiye Omkara ji , Humne Apse Chulbul Ko Cheen Liya par Sultana Ji Ko Nikalne Ke Liye Yeh Zarori Tha…”Guari thought to herself as tears from nowhere filled her eyes , she wiped them and tried to smile.
” App Hume Itna Chota Samaajh Rahe The Ki Hum Uss Kaali Thakur Se Shadi Karlegen, Aise Pagal Thodi Na Hain Hum Omkara Ji , Hum Guari Hai , Abb App Yehi Dekh Lijiye , Hum India Ke Sabse Bade Parivaar Ke Bahu Hain Abb , Aur Sabse Deserving Bachelor Ki Patni…” Guari said with a smile while Omkara didn’t reply , not even a word.
Guari Continued , ” Abb Humari Zindagi Aaram Se Bitegi…Humara Kamra Acha Hai , Bas Thode Changes Karne Padenge…” Guari said as she sat on the bed relaxing.
” Tum Toh Yahaan Pehle Bhi Reh Chuki Hon Na…Chulbul…” Said Omkara turning to her , Guari got up from the bed in an instant…shocked.

She eyed him bewildered as she realized that he knows that she’s Chulbul , he showed her the Specs of Chulbul which fell from her luggage as the servant was taking it.
” Nahi Janta Mein…
Sach Kya Hai…Juth Kya…
Dokha He Yeh , Yaa Ankhon Ka Khel…

Pyaar Hai Yeh…Ya Dard Ka Mel…” Omkara said as he smiled a bit at her.
” App Kehna Kya Chahte Hai?” Guari asked confused coming towards him.

” I don’t know , Should I remember how many times Chulbul saved my family and helped me or should I remember you… Guari… what your were…how you were…the Guari I saw In Barielly So I have decided something , From today my heart is an Empty canvas , A white canvas , paint whatever you can , whatever you want , I promise , you paint trust , you’ll get my trust , you paint hatred…you’ll get my hatred , you paint care…you’ll get my care…” Omkara walked pass her while Guari had tears in her eyes.
” You Paint love…You’ll Get Love…” Omkara said as he reached the entrance , Guari smiled among her tears , she smiled as she cried , she knew Omkara was different …Her Omkara was different , his every way was different , his way of hating was different , his way of loving was different and this was his way…Of Loving.

Jo na keh sake tum

Jo na keh sake hum (x2)
Kehne lagi dono se woh
Khamoshiyaan.. O saathiya
Kehne lagi dono se woh
Khamoshiyaan.. O saathiya
Saathiya saathiya
Saathiya saathiya (x2)
Baadlon mein

Ghul na jaayein
Hain jo naghme thehre thehre
Do dilon mein jazb karle
Saare jazbe gehre gehre
Kal kya pata milna miley
Nazdeekiyaan o saathiya
Kal kya pata milna miley
Nazdeekiyaan o saathiya
Saathiya saathiya
Saathiya saathiya.. (x2)
Milke tumse khush hoon lekin
Dil hai phir bhi, uljha uljha
Door kar de, paas aa kar
Kal humein na koi lamha

Pad jaaye na, dil pe kahin
Gham ka nishaan o sathiya
Pad jaaye na, dil pe kahin
Gham ka nishaan o sathiya
O saathiya saathiya
saathiya saathiya.. (x2)
Jo na keh sake tum
Jo na keh sake hum (x2)
Kehne lagi dono se woh
Khamoshiyaan.. O saathiya
O saathiya saathiya
Saathiya saathiya (x2)

Guari turned and ran towards Omkara who was still at the entrance facing the door now , she hugged him from back , ” Hum Appse Pyaar Karte…Hum Appse Bohot Pyaar Karte Hain Omkara…” Guari said as she hugged him more tightly with each passing second , she was crying yet she was smiling , a smile climbed up Omkara’s lips , he once again tried to trust someone from his heart , after many days his heart trusted someone and overpowered his mind , he knew he wasn’t wrong , not this time , not at all…
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So Over with writing it , don’t know if it was up to your expectations , only your response can tell that , do reply…secondly , this one’s written in Hindi but if someone isn’t able to understand it then please let me know , I’ll write it in English again even for one person if you want , but just tell me please.

27 comments

    • Piyali

      Piyali

      |Author

      Thanks alot dear, actually the story is over so I don’t think I can write any epilogue or sequel…do you want something in specific in the sequel/Epilogue? Do reply..thanks for reading…love you…be happy…

      • Nita D

        Nita D

        |Registered Member

        I know that dear that it is a nice ending, but I just wanted to read that time after few days/mths when all’s well n where finally om trusts gauri n they they loved happily ever after types…..I just suggested it….nothing hard n fast abt it….it looks nice this way also as I said, but there is a scope for further continuing it.

    • Piyali

      Piyali

      |Author

      oh that way , to be honest I don’t think I am good at showing those after marriage happy scenes , really I have realized that I am not at all good in it so I think I won’t be able to continue , if someone else wants to continue or you then I don’t have problem….thanks a lot for reading and the suggestion too….

  1. B.k.maha

    B.k.maha

    |Registered Member

    Superrrrrrrrrrr….. But try to translate in English also…. This is my request dr….. I loved it….. Omkara’s accepted scene I just loved it….

    • Piyali

      Piyali

      |Author

      Thanks alot dear , yup will post English one tomorrow…..thanks a lot again…really happy you liked it…Love you….be happy..

    • Piyali

      Piyali

      |Author

      Thanks a lot dear , Yup will post in english by tomorrow , please wait till then , thanks a lot for reading it in Hindi too…..Love you…be happy..

    • Piyali

      Piyali

      |Author

      Hey , thanks alot dear , well I love RiKara and will surely try to write more on them…..thanks a lot again for the comment….Love you…be happy…

    • Piyali

      Piyali

      |Author

      Hello dear , thanks a lot for reading it , actually I have written the english version but am not able to get the English translation of O Sathiya so just trying to get it , I may take some time for that , please forgive me , will try to post the english one soon….Love you….be happy…

    • Piyali

      Piyali

      |Author

      Hey , thanks a lot for such a sweet comment dear , really happy you liked it….thanks a lot again…Love you…be happy…

  2. Kriyaina

    Kriyaina

    |Registered Member

    Superb …om’s lines were awesome as well gauri shutting mouth of tej and shwetlana was great…want to see in dil bole oberoi as well

    • Piyali

      Piyali

      |Author

      Hey , thanks a lot , really happy you liked it…..even I wish to see it is DBO but we can just hope..I am still hoping…lets see…thanks a lot again…Love you…be happy…

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