Eloped- A Swasan os


Hello lovely people? I m Mariyam aka Louella.. I m a fan of Swasan as well as Raglak.. Only a few people know me as I comment on the serial IKRS only, but today I thought to give it a try for Swasan also.. I m sorry if there are any mistakes or if it is boring.. So lets go..

A girl and boy are seen running away from some goons who are behind them.. They somehow escape and sit in the bus which is going to Mumbai.. (The girl is Swara and the boy is Sanskaar)
The goons enter the same bus in which Swasan are hiding.. Swara puts ghungat from her dupatta while Sanskaar puts on the moustache and sunglasses which he had kept in his pocket..
The goons check each and every person there, they see Swasan and stare at them..
Goon 1- Hey girl, take out your ghungat, we want to see your face..
Sanskaar(in a different voice)- How dare u tell my wife to take out her ghungat? Its a sin for a woman to show her face to any man..
Goon 2- Ok ok..(shows him Swasan’s photo) Have u seen these two anywhere?
Sanskaar- No.. Who they are to us that we will see them?
The goons leave..
Swara takes out her ghungat while Sanskaar removes his moustache and sunglasses and they both sigh in relief..
Swara(smiles)- Arey wah! What an acting..
Sanskaar(smiles)- After all I m Sanskaar Maheshwari..
They both laugh..
The bus leaves.. Soon they reach Mumbai.. They both get down of the bus..

(Okay so till now u must have understood what has happened, Swasan love each other but their families are against this as Swara belongs to a rich family while Sanskaar belongs to a poor family. So they run away and marry in a temple and now they are set to go to Mumbai to live a happy life but Swara’s father has sent his goons to kill both of them as he loves his respect more than his daughter.. Will Swasan be able to overcome all hurdles and lead a happily married life?)

Swara(gets tensed)- Sanskaar, where will we go now? We don’t have anyone who can help us. And my father will do anything to find us..
Sanskaar(caresses her face)- Shh, don’t worry, first we will have food, then we will find a place for us to live, okay?
(Swasan have bought some money and jewellery with them, so that they can make up for their daily expenses)
They both go in a nearby restaurant and have lunch.. Now they go to the jewellers shop. Swara sells her gold ring and necklace and they get some money..
Swasan reach in a village where there are only huts. A man helps them get a hut where they can stay.. The hut is very dirty but Swasan together clean the hut..
Swara(sighs in relief)- Thank God! Its cleaned now..
Sanskaar laughs at her..
Swara- Am I looking like a joker that u are laughing like this?
Sanskaar(controls his laugh)- See ur face, the dust is on ur nose(rubs her nose) now gone..
Swara- Accha Sanskaar, I’ll call maa and tell her that we both are safe here..
Sanskaar- Okay, but take care, till then I’ll bring something for us to eat in the night..
And they both leave in different ways..

Swara goes to a shop where there is a telephone, she puts the coin in it and then dials the number of her home..
Her mother takes up the call…
Sharmishta- Hello..
Swara(says emotionally)- Hello Maa..
Sharmishta- Hello Swara, where r u beta? Are u fine?
Swara- Ha maa I m fine, and I m Mumbai with Sanskaar..
Sharmishta(has tears in her eyes)- Swara, beta, please come back.. Ur papa is so much tensed about u, he is searching u everywhere..
Swara- No maa, I will not come back, if u could have accepted Sanskaar before, I would be with u all there, but now its too late maa, Bye…
She cuts the call..
Shekhar, who heard it was Swara, comes to Sharmishta..
Shekhar- Sharmishta, to whom were u talking to?
Sharmishta- Woh I was talking to Ragini..
Shekhar slaps her tightly..
Shekhar(shouts)- I know u were talking to Swara.. Where is she? Tell me fast, or u will not be saved today..
Sharmishta(cries)- She is in Mumbai…
Shekhar calls someone and asks him to check every corner of Mumbai and if they find Swasan, kill them…

Days passed and Swasan spent romantic moments with each other, they tried to adjust in the small hut with love, while the goons were checking every corner of Mumbai.. Shekhar’s anger was increasing day by day, he used to remove all his anger on Sharmishta by beating her..

One day,
Swara and Sanskaar were spending some romantic moments when the goons reached there, Swasan were shocked to see them..
One of the goon removes his gun and points at Swara, but Sanskaar comes in between and takes the bullet..

Swara wakes up with a jerk.. Yes it was her dream..
Sanskaar(caresses her face)- Shona, what happened?
Swara doesn’t say anything but hugs him tightly and cries..
Swara(breaks the hug and cries)- Sanskaar, those goons, they had come here.. They were going to…
Sanskaar(keeps his finger on hers)- Shh, calm down(hugs her) nothing has happened, it was a dream, just a dream..
In this way Swara always used to get such dreams but Sanskaar was always there to calm her down.. Swara now stitches clothes to earn money, while Sanskaar has opened a tea stall.. They both work very hard to earn money..

One day,
Shekhar’s goons see Sanskaar selling tea.. But they wonder where is Swara…
So one of the goon calls Shekhar and tell him about it..
Shekhar- Keep a watch at him, where he goes, what he does and find out where is Swara and where they live..

For a few days the goon keeps a watch on Sanskaar. And while keeping a watch at him, he comes to know that Swasan live in a hut and that Swara stitches clothes to earn money while Sanskaar has opened a tea stall..
When they tell this to Shekhar, he orders him to kill them!

So one day when both Swasan were at home, two goons came in diguise of guests..
Swara went to the kitchen to get something for them to drink, but when she came out she saw Sanskaar in pool of blood, and the goons have gone because the villagers had seen them with a gun and threatened them to call the police, so they could not kill Swara…
Swara goes to Sanskaar and makes his head rest on her lap..
Sanskaar(breathes heavily)- Swa..Swara..gi..give..mee a..pro..promise…th..that..u..wi..will..no..not..be..become.. wea..weak..but..stay..stro..strong..and..fulf..fulfill..ur…dre…dreams..pro..promise..mee.
Swara(gets teary eyed)- Yes Sanskaar.. I will do it for u.. I will live for u.. But plz don’t leave me.. Please..
Sanskaar(smiles)- I..lo..love..uu..Swa..Swara..
And he breathed his last..
Swara cried out loud to him but now he had already left him..
Today Swara is a great fashion designer, but still she has not forgotten her Sanskaar who taught her to live… She loves him still the way she used to before…

I hope u liked it.. Sorry if it was boring, all comments are welcomed? Sorry if I wasted ur time.. Meet u in the comments sections…

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  1. Simin

    Its not boring dear but sad ending
    Gosh why all are ready to make us cry

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks dear.. Sorry for making u cry?

  2. Sanswa

    Hey u made me cry, y sad ending..?? Anyways u rocked dear..

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks dear? Sorry for making u cry? Next time will try to give a happy ending..

  3. Shrinjal

    Louella… This was really really amazing dear?????
    Emotianal too??????

    Keep writing them!

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks a lot Shrinjal di??

  4. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Aaaaa,it’s so emotional and heart touching os*crying….loved it dear*still sobbing… Keep writing like this…
    Take care
    Keep smiling?

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks a lot dear?? Sorry for making u cry?

  5. Nice…..you punish this shekar also

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks Swasan?

  6. Mahavir

    Awesome dear loved it…

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks a lot Maha016?

  7. it was an awesome os! short and sweet.. loved it. awesome os! keep smiling. 🙂

    1. Mariyam123

      Thank u so much Ameera??

  8. Kakali

    Waaaa Mariyummmm !!! love it…
    .. m a die heart fan of sad ending !!!
    but but but if at d end my SWASAN r together…
    whether they die or alive…
    haaaa i just want them together…
    but Destiny is sooo crural naa !!
    huhhh !!!

    but i loved it… beautifully written dear !! …
    Thnk u… 🙂

    1. Mariyam123

      Thank u so much Kakali dear??

  9. Rabia0032

    Its not boring but sad youuuu Killed sanskar whyyyyy nooo?????but awsome os

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks Rabia0032? Aww! Not me those goons killed him?

      1. Rabia0032

        But ypu told goons to kill him you are Killer you separat two lover veryyyy nad

      2. Mariyam123

        Okay baba I m the killer?

  10. Mica

    waaa.. you are killer.. you killed Swara’s Sanskar… huhuhuhu
    but i love it…

    1. Mariyam123

      Nahi!! I m not killer?? Those goons killed him not me?? well thanks a lot for reading and commenting?

  11. Pooja26

    u r so bad yr,,,, 🙁 🙁
    my sanky is dead nooooo……..

    superb os,………
    keep writing…….

    1. Mariyam123

      Oh, at last someone told I m bad? Well thanks for commenting?

  12. Arshaanya

    Loved it…
    It was emotional
    Write more stories on swasan
    From now no more sad endings only happy wala ok…

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks a lot dear? Yes will write more stories with happy endings?

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks dear?

  13. Dharshini


    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks Dharshini?

  14. it was heart breaking i’m crying but amazing

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks Myna? Sorry for making u cry?

  15. Nice

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks a lot dear?

  16. I am crying…!! I It’s soo emotional…!!

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks a lot dear? Sorry for making u cry?

  17. Soujanya

    Awesome… Emotional…??

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks a lot dear?

  18. Scooby

    Everthing went bt end u gave me thud.. bt i love sanskar and swara living with his love words.. brave swara.. emotional but superb maryam…

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks a lot dear?

  19. Zeestum2

    Nice but a sad ending made me ? ?????

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks dear? So sorry for making u cry?

  20. NDSG

    U killed sanky????????? but overall it’s nice…

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks dear? Sorry for making u cry?

    2. NDSG

      Actually big fan.. Of sanky.. can’t digest his death… But I like the story…?

      1. Mariyam123

        This was just my first story… More stories on the way, so in those I will pakka give u a happy ending?

    3. NDSG

      Okie I’m waiting???

  21. Zeestum2

    No problem ? just try to have happy endings from now on…

    1. Mariyam123

      Yes definitely?

  22. Manjula20

    Heart touching yaar

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks Manjula20

  23. Angel20

    Hey princess…
    This was so awesome, amazing, I loved it very much! But yes it was really sad! But still I loved it.

    Loads of love

    1. Mariyam123

      Thank u so much Maria di?

  24. Haya malik

    Wow….awesome… Loved the ending …the start of eternal love

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks dear?

  25. Deeksha

    Loved it dear….!!!!!!!

    1. Mariyam123

      Thanks a lot Deeksha?

  26. Hawww..
    U killed my sanky!!!! Huhuhuh… bad grl.. 🙁 🙁 🙁
    Bt I lv dis os..
    it ws soo lvly os dr..
    swasans lv is eternal! No1 cnt separate them.. nt even death. Awwww..
    I lv dat concept!! U write it soo well.. and im hpy dat swara is successful wmn nw.. 🙂
    Nice os dr..
    keep writing
    bt write hpy ending and dnt kill my sanku.. 😉 😉 😛
    be happy always

    1. Mariyam123

      Thank u so much dear? I didn’t kill him. Those goons did it? Next time pakka I will give happy ending?

  27. Wow… Loved it… Bt its too emotional dear… ?????

  28. Vyshu10

    nice…aww sanky died. Plz next time give happy endings

  29. U nailed it rey !!! Sad ending 🙁 I cried a lot but u know it is the 1st sad ending os which I like the most and I had read ur ikrs working also bcoz my sis maha api is really big fan of that drama … Wish u happy journey in swasan heavenly couple world … :-* :*

  30. Wonderful

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