EK RISTA AISA BHI SWASAN SS BY SEEMA PART 6

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Ek Rista Aisa Bhi

Hi friends as I said I will give you back to back episodes before my vacation . So here I am giving my last episode before my vacation. And thanks all of you to loving this story .

Before starting, I want to say something. I read all of your comments in last part where rosey wants Swara is breaking all her relationship with her parents that also on mandap in front of all . But I want to ask you that is easy for a giri to doing like this on her wedding day where she has herself pressurized for this marriage. I don’t think so. Haan she can do one thing will give her cold reaction them or won’t talk with her parents or will avoid them like they aren’t existing for her . But if she will say I am an orphan and today I am breaking all my ties with my parents sitting on her mandap it will seem look like some filmy scene . In real life i can’t imagine a girl can do these type of things with her parents. Girls are having so much potential for this they would tolerate so many things in her life and try adjust herself in every situation. Swara is also a common girl. So how she can do something like this for which two families will insult in front of society. So sorry I can’t destroy my Swara’s character. I will just give punishment on other way not like that.

Here is the previous part link:-

http://www.tellyupdates.com/ek-rista-aisa-bhi-swasan-ss-seema-part-5/

Part:- 6

So chapter is starting Swara has come back and all are looking her surprisingly.

When Sumi saw Swara , she immediately rushed towards her where Sekher was following behind her. When Sumi reached near Swara she hugged her tightly. After listened from Ragini , Swara has ran away from her marriage she is very much worried for her somewhere she was feeling guilty also because it is happening only for her. If she and Sekher haven’t taken this decision then today Swara hasn’t taken this much big decision on her life. Somewhere she was also happy for her this decision. But why she came back now ? After some seconds she broke the hug and then query section started. And the first question is come from Sumi , where was she?

Sumi : ( caressing her whole face) where did you go beta? You know here how much were we tensed. Tell na beta I am asking something you, where you went before your marriage ?

Sujata: Or i will say, you ran away from your own marriage. If yes then why you have come back again? Or you have a boyfriend who has cheated you that’s why now you are here.

DP: ( as usual in his authorative voice) Sujata, will you give her a chance to tell something or you will imagine everything by your own. ( looking towards Swara) beta now you tell , where you went before your marriage .

She was with me dad: A voice came behind Swara. When everyone looked towards the voice direction, they found Laksh has stood behind Swara ,who has now returned from outside. In tension everyone forgot to Laksh, who was absent in whole discussion.

Laksh: She was with me all the time. I am sorry to be late but when we were returning, my car tyre punctured in middle of the road . So we had late.

DP: But she went with Ragini . Then how was she with you all the time?

Laksh: Actually I was wanting to give a surprise to Ragini. But I was not understanding, what should I give her? So I thought I will take help from Swara. So for this I picked her from temple and told her won’t tell anything about this to Ragini. But the plan was back fired. I never thought that Ragini will think Swara ran away from her marriage when she won’t find her in temple . And see my bad luck today my car tyre punctured for which we both became late . Again I am sorry because for me only you all have became tense. I think now also we are having the muhurat ( Watching his wrist watch ) so let’s go and start the marriage.

Maheswaris somehow were believed on it but Sumi , Sekher and Ragini weren’t convinced on Laksh’s fake story. In a unknown fear covered in their hearts. Sekher and Sumi looked towards Laksh on a hope for getting answer where Laksh just blink his eyes in a hopeless manner. Now Sekher and Sumi understood everything. Their unknown fear has became true. From beginning which thing they hidden from her Swara now she has known everything. Sumi and Sekher were looking each other helplessly and then looked towards Swara , who has stood at entrance till now blankly. From when she reached in MM a word hasn’t come from her mouth.

In other side Ragini was listening everything silently and wasn’t understanding why her husband is telling lie in front of his family. When she herself told Swara ran away from this marriage then why all this lie ? And why Swara came back again? Where I told her she will be back when I will call her . Then why she has come back here again ? She wasn’t getting any answer of her. So for getting her answer she marched towards Swara where Swara was avoiding to met her eyes with her di who is having the capacity to read it immediately.

This time DP told uttara and Parineeta bring Swara on mandap. After one minute all are present in near mandap with Swasan.

After sometime the marriage started. The couple was doing every rituals but not their willingly. Where one hasn’t known the meaning of all the rituals their another one is doing it for the family sake.

After sometime priest told the bridegroom fills the bride’s mang on vermillion .

Sujata came beside Sanskar and gave him vermillion box to fill Swara’s mang

Sujata: Sanskar, you want your friend stay always with you ( Sanskar nodded his head vigorously as a yes where all guests are laughing to see his reaction and feeling pity on Swara) then put this vermillion on her mang

Sanskar immediately took some pinch of vermillion where the priest was chanting the mantra

On bg

MANGALAM BHAGWAN VISHNU

MANGALAM GARUNDHWAJHA

and here Sanskar put it on her mang where some sindoor fallen on her nose and a lone tear fallen down from her eyes where Sanskar was clapping happily because for him from today his friend will stay with him always.

Again priest told to tie the mangalsutra across her neck. When Sanskar was going to tie it on her neck again the priest was chanting the mantra

On bg

MANGALAM PUNDARI KAKSHAH

MANGALAYA TANO HARIH

And Sanskar tied it across her neck and finally the marriage finished. Priest declared from now both of them are husband and wife . Unwantedly Few drops tears were flowing from Swara’s eyes. From now she is no more Swara Gododia . From today she is Mrs Swara Sanskar Maheswari which she is hating most now.

Laksh is looking everything from a little far distance on mandap. Now he was thinking how he brought Swara in MM.

Flashback starts

When Swara and Ragini were talking with each other and Ragini was making plan how will Swara escape from this marriage that time one person was listening everything from outside . And the person is Laksh. Then he followed them and caught them in temple.

When Swara was running on road she stopped when she met with Laksh in middle of the road. First she surprised to see him there but then gathered her courage and moved near him.

Laksh: Where are you going Swara? I think today is your marriage after ( watching his wrist watch) exactly 10 minutes. Now you must be present in home not here. Tell me before sometime of your marriage why have you come outside ?

Swara: ( said cryingly) I can’t marry your bhai, jiju. I know he is a good person but he doesn’t understand anything about a relationship. How can I end up my life with a man who doesn’t understand the meaning of marriage, its custom and mainly what relation a couple keep in between them. Would you marry a girl like him and end up your whole life with her. Tell me jiju tell me ( said little bit loudly )

Laksh: I don’t know about me. But yes as I have known about you , you can cure my brother as your love . I believe on you.

Swara: I can stake my whole life on a believe.

Laksh: ( in a serious tone )Then what you want?

Swara: I want to run away from here where no one force me for this marriage .I don’t want a force one life

Laksh: Ok then go I have with you

Swara thanked him and turned to leave when Laksh called her from her behind

Laksh: Swara ( Swara turned her back towards him) but before you will go I want to say something. You go I have no problem. But after your leave I will divorce your sister ( Swara became shock after listened his statement)

Swara: Why are you doing this with me jiju? How can you do this with Ragini di. She loves you very much. She can’t leave without you. And you also love her na. Then how will you give her divorce.

Laksh: Ya its true she loves me after all she loves me very much. I also know that she can’t leave without me. But the truth is I don’t love her.( its an another shock for Swara) I have married her only for my brother. I had a deal with your parents if they will agree for your marriage with my bhai ,then I will marry with Ragini. And they agreed for this marriage themselves. I haven’t force anyone for this.

This is another shock not only another shock this is a bomb for her which has blasted on her head.

Swara:( said emotionlessly) my parents have known about it. After that also they are agree for it. And di, di has also known about it.

Laksh: No, till now she hasn’t known about it. If you want your sister ‘s happiness then you will get marry with my bhai other than you know about my decision. You have 5 minutes. Think about it. I have waited for you in my car. Then Laksh leaved from there.

Swara wasn’t understanding, what will she do? One side her own life who isn’t allowing her for this marriage and another side her di , where her whole life will be destroyed for her one decision. She knows that, her di how much loves her jiju. No she can’t do it specially with her di. For her happiness she can’t destroy her di’s life. She will marry to Sanskar not for anyone only for di. Yes only for her di.

After 5 minutes she sat inside the car where Laksh drove his car towards MM.

Flashback end

Laksh monologue

I know Swara, now you must be hated me in core of your heart. But I hadn’t other option without it. I am sorry Ragini. I know when you know about it, after that you also be hated me . After all I used you for this deal. But in this all matter one thing I haven’t accepted in front of anyone i.e i love you. Yes i love you Ragini. I madly love with you. Not from today but in our college life. But I haven’t accepted it in front of you because first I was wanting to become stand jn my own leg. Then I would send my marriage proposal in your home. And then a happy married life with you. But see now where we have reached. I am sorry for all the mess. But I am helpless. But please don’t leave me for this. I can’t leave without you. Please for the first and last time forgive your Laksh. I will never disappoint you in my whole life. If you want you will beat me , quarrel with me but please won’t leave me. I can’t live without you.

A lone tear escaped from his eye which he wiped immediately before anyone notice it.

After marriage swasan took blessings from all when swasan went near Sumi and Sekher , Sanskar bend down for taking blessings but Swara stood there like this only.

Sanskar: Shona you bend na we will take blessings from your parents

Sumi looked towards Swara who was looking other side where a mixture of anger and hatred was showing on her face.

Sumi:( said avoid the situation) its ok beta. ( said looking towards Maheswaries) actually in our customs girls aren’t touch the parents feet .( then hugged Swara and said in a low voice near her ears) I am sorry beta please forgive your parents for the last time. And take care yourself.

Then Sekher came in front of her and hugged her. And after sometime he parted from hug and gave her a lord Ganesh idol. Swara believes on Ganesh ji a lot. Because for her he is the one who solve all her problems and helps in her hard time. For this only everytime Sekher gives a new Ganesh idol before her new journey . Today also he gave her a Ganesh idol before starting her new journey/ life . To see it again some fresh tears flowing on her eyes . Now Swara is hating her tears also whose are flowing without her permission and making her a weak person in front of everyone.

Sekher: ( caressing her hairs and said in a low voice )Beta I am sorry. I know this one sorry can’t heal your wounds. But still if it can possible then forgive your parents for the last time. ( looking towards Ragini) now please won’t tell about it Ragini. You know about her. She can’t handel it .And please take care yourself with your di.

And after that Sekher and Sumi leaved from MM who stayed here for marriage.

Swara’s monologue

They care but not for me but for di. What will happen if di will know about the deal. I know she can’t handle it for which they agreed for this marriage without think about me for a once. I am happy for my di. At least my parents are caring for my di. And I am totally ok with it. But what is my fault in it. Why didn’t they tell me it before. I would try for managing all things. Why they accepted for this marriage? Where jiju doesn’t love di. In my whole life i never hate anyone. I also don’t believe in hatred concept . But now I worst hate him , hate my parents . I never forgive you all in my whole life.

Swara’s thought broke by a tap on her shoulder. It is uttra who has come here to take her inside the MM for other rituals.

After sometime all rituals started which was irritating Swara more but Sanskar was enjoying it . First she completed her grah pravesh ritual where she pushed the kalash inside the house and entered with Sanskar. Then they both entered their home temple for praying. After that some other rituals did by Maheswari ladies like searching ring inside a milk bowl in which Swara won by Sanskar’s help. Actually Sanskar knowingly gave the ring to Swara inside the bowl . For milk no one could see it. Actually he doesn’t want her friend lost the game yes for Sanskar it is only game not a ritual.

After sometime Swara entered inside Sanskar ‘s room. She has come here many times but that time only as a friend but today she has come this room permanently. From now onwards it is also her room where she will spent her whole life. Can she spent her whole life here like this? Now this is a big question for her. Which answer hasn’t near her. Her thoughts broke by Ragini who pulled Swara towards her to holding her arm .

Ragini: Will you tell me , why you came back here? I sent you na. Then why?

Swara:( avoiding her eye contact with Ragini) di please I am tired. Can we talk about it later

Ragini:( folded her hands on her chest) no I can’t. I want my answer right now. And you will give me my answer now with…..

Which answer you want to know bhabhi : A voice interpreted behind them

Its uttra , who has come here to leave Sanskar in his room

Ragini:( trying convert the conversation) nothing uttra. I am just asking about surprise for which ( now looking towards Swara in angrily) Swara had been leave from temple

Uttra: Ohh then you should go near Laksh bhai who is master mind of this surprise. And now leave Swara bhabhi also because my Sanskar bhai became impatient to meet his friend and she giggling on Swasan . By bhabhi , by bhai and good night both of you .

Then uttra and Ragini leaved from room but before leaving Ragini gave an angry look towards Swara. But Swara immediately turned her face other side.

After uttrag leave Sanskar immediately took Swara in a bone crushing hug. Where Swara eyes widen to see his sudden hug where Sanskar is having a big and cute smile on his face.

The screen is freeze on their faces.

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Precap: Swara’s first day in her in-laws house and some swasan moments

So done. Another part was finished. As I said before vacation I will give you back to back episodes I think I have fulfilled my promise. So from today I am keeping this story on hold . After I came back again I will start to write it . So wait for it and for me also.

One more thing till now I haven’t give any description about Sanskar ‘s character. As all of you have known that he is a mad. But the question is from when ? how ? like this many more. So don’t worry I will give all answers on my further parts . So from now main story will becoming start and swasan journey also.

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37 Comments
  1. Soujanya

    Awesome…

  2. Neptune

    wow yaar i loved it and you are right in real life no girl will break ties with her parents that too in front of all girls always try to adjust not because they are weak but because they are soft hearted and never want to break any relation………………..
    i am waiting for your holidays to end…………….
    enjoy your vacations dear and have a safe journey…………………

  3. Phoniex

    Loved it seema will wait for this story.

  4. nice dear

  5. nice…continue soon

  6. Rosey

    It’s ok seema I’m happy with it…
    But I want that Laksh to be punished….he is so cheap how he convert while situation in his favour

    1. Rosey

      And yes but at least you can fill a tiny wish Swara don’t behave good with Laksh….and that sujjju

    2. Seema

      Thanks rosey dear to understand my pov and don’t ashamed me telling that, you can fulfil my tiny wish. You can demand anything not only tiny but big one also. And sure I will fulfil it . And anything else you want to see on further parts then tell me now.

      1. Rosey

        i want swara to behave well with sanskaar and ragini only…
        she should think that whole mf knows that laksh has deal with her parents

  7. Awesome dear I loved it wait for next part

  8. awesome ?? will wait for next part..

  9. Awesome..

  10. Sus

    its good dear and no doubt you are giving realistic way this story

  11. awesome dear will wait for ur return and for ur ff next part ….
    enjoy ur vacation..

  12. Ishanvi

    superb!!!

  13. Independent

    Awesome dear

    1. Seema

      Thanks independent dear. I think after a long time you have commented on my story. I was missing your comments dear like you and again thanks to liking it

  14. Asha

    Seema akka super epi I loved it i thought that laksh will say about sanskar’s past anyway u rocked it akka….???????????☕?????from ur lil sis no monkey ok akka…..

  15. Gayathri.visu

    Amazing…. I already hate Laksh charac, now Suju charac also! I agree she is Sanskaar’s mother, but before that she is a woman. How can she say like this about Swara? And Ok dear, I m agree ur points. Plz continue as per ur planning. But I can’t understand onething. If Laksh loves Ragini then what is problem to accept this fact? And why he desperately want Swara for Sanskaar? Is he is the reason for Sanskaar’s this state? Waiting for the answers dear. Anyways enjoy ur dear….happy n safe journey!

  16. Scooby

    Awesome ?? swara is living for all so make her life with happiness soon!!!
    I was thinking while reading wt if is sanskar acting now!!! Lets see….

    Happy vacation ? enjoy to core??
    Bubye tc semma..?

  17. nice one..

  18. Simi

    I understand laksh’s pov.. But he cant ruin Swara’s life…
    Good one dear

  19. Rachna

    Awsm… Update soon next part

  20. Arshaanya

    I dun agree wid ur note above atall seema..
    On one side u r telling girls hve so much ptntl n all n othr sayin i cant show swara breaking her rltn wid her fmly….
    Wat is dere dat swaraz chrctr wil b spoiled if u show her breaking her rltn wid her fmly???
    I also want same thing… girls r so strong n hve potnl n i want swara to break all rltns wid dem….
    Laksh is saying i’l gve u evry happiness ragini n othr side spoiled one girlz life…
    Only ur love can cure sanskara ? r u kidding me laksh…
    I want somethin more bad shud happen wid uttara dan only dey wil cum to knw abt her pain…
    Evrytym i feel hutt upset n all aftr reading how all r bhvng wid swara…it is gvng me pain n m tellin u truth…
    I dun want raglak to unite in dis ff…
    I was swasan n ragini to live away frm evry1 huh…
    I think i hv to stop reading dis story…coz ot pains so much u showing dis much bad hpng wid girl…

    1. Arshaanya

      N wat kind of parents dey r who think abt only one daughter…
      I rmbr dere was one ff neelimaz in which she justfd swasanz chrctr n nvr let dem frgve mf n gadodiaz…
      Dey dun dsrve to be called parents who do partiality btwn dere children… n for one child spoil othrs

    2. Seema

      First thing I will tell plzzzz arsha dear take in a deep breath and give a deep breath out. Now u r feeling good. Ok first of I said girls are having so much potential for that they would adjust herself in every condition. This is also a condition where Swara will adjust herself. Again I didn’t feel Swara should behave rudely with her parents in front of everyone where her own sister marrige has stake. If she would know about it before marriage then she would do something. But now her sister is married. If she will do something then Laksh will divorce her. So I won’t think a girl will do something like this.

      And I showed na after marriage she didn’t take blessings from her parents.

      But one thing I must say all of my stories I loved this one very much you know why? Because to see all of your hatred towards Laksh. When I read your it gives me energy to write something better.

      And you will happy to hear that after onwards I will give you more swasan scenes and less drama. Drama parts finished dear. So just chill

      1. Arshaanya

        Ya i undrstnd ur point..
        U knw i get so attach wid some stories na… ya seema fitst tym me 2 hating laksh frm d core…
        Shekhar ko evry1 hate mostly in all ffz bt here dis laksh ???…
        U knw i srsly breathe in n out while reading ir stories… dun knw y bt i feel so upset na seeing swaraz pain ????
        N for me u hve to make dat laksh n shekhar shomi face hell n humilation guilty n rlze how wrong dey were bt still nvr get dere daughtet swara bck ever in life ??
        Dan only i’l satisfy n u hve to fulfill my dis wish ????

    3. Seema

      First thing I will tell plzzzz arsha dear take in a deep breath and give a deep breath out. Now u r feeling good. Ok first of I said girls are having so much potential for that they would adjust herself in every condition. This is also a condition where Swara will adjust herself. Again I didn’t feel Swara should behave rudely with her parents in front of everyone where her own sister marrige has stake. If she would know about it before marriage then she would do something. But now her sister is married. If she will do something then Laksh will divorce her. So I won’t think a girl will do something like this.

      And I showed na after marriage she didn’t take blessings from her parents.

    4. Seema

      But one thing I must say all of my stories I loved this one very much you know why? Because to see all of your hatred towards Laksh. When I read your it gives me energy to write something better.

      And you will happy to hear that after onwards I will give you more swasan scenes and less drama. Drama parts finished dear. So just chill

  21. Seema

    First thing I will tell plzzzz arsha dear take in a deep breath and give a deep breath out. Now u r feeling good. Ok first of I said girls are having so much potential for that they would adjust herself in every condition. This is also a condition where Swara will adjust herself. Again I didn’t feel Swara should behave rudely with her parents in front of everyone where her own sister marrige has stake. If she would know about it before marriage then she would do something. But now her sister is married. If she will do something then Laksh will divorce her. So I won’t think a girl will do something like this.

    And I showed na after marriage she didn’t take blessings from her parents.

    But one thing I must say all of my stories I loved this one very much you know why? Because to see all of your hatred towards Laksh. When I read your it gives me energy to write something better.

    And you will happy to hear that after onwards I will give you more swasan scenes and less drama. Drama parts finished dear. So just chill

  22. Seebu_s

    pls punish that moron?hate him so much in this ff?

  23. Vyshu10

    ???? swara…she shouldnt fall weak. Laksh is ?? waiting for his punishment. It will be more effective if its more from ragini.

    Wanna see sujata swara talk someday…like sujju asking swara to cake of sanky or thanking her to care of sanky

    Hope u r enjoying ur vacation….i have enjoyed mine

    1. Seema

      Ohh dear where were u? U know I was missing u and ur comments. Now I saw u have commented on every parts. Thanks dear. And ya I am enjoying my vacation now.

      1. Vyshu10

        Aww….thats so sweet?? I went on a two week trip…so couldnt comment.Sorry.

        Anyhow….enjoy and hope u come back soon. Waiting for the ep

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