Ek Pranaam India Ke Naam OS

Namaste everyone….a writer here…..the true readers..please see my name after reading this OS..not before that…writer’s request… 
“Ahhhh….this joint family…so many compromises…i hate it!! India and it’s melodrama” said a girl who is extremely irritated….

“Shona….everyone is not the same…”Said her mom Sharmista
If you are thinking that the girl is Swara..phir saahi pakde hai app 😉
“Mom…how can u believe in join family and relationships after suffering so much?I mean mom…just see your situation…u got married in India….where according to u every relation is given importance..there r joint family..the festivals…and all…..their belief in god….but your situation?Your husband left u due to the misunderstandings created by his sister and mother between u both….my father Mr Shekhar Gadodia….left his 7 months pregnant wife and his 5 years old daughter….this is Indian culture?”Swara said.
“Shona….baby calm down…..we are happy here isn’t it?”said Sharmista
“Yes mom….i’m glad that i’m not in that country….i’m enjoying my freedom in USA”Swara said

“Beta..just because all those things happened with me doesn’t mean that everyone is same…..paar tu samhal ke rehna….kahi kisi Indian seh pyar na kar bethe”Sharmista said while chuckling.
Swara gave a what-the-hell look to her mom….and glared at Ragini,her younger sister who was giggling at her mom’s dialogue…
“Mom…i’ll never ever marry….and if i fall in love with someone…then i’ll go for a living-in relationship”Swara said mockingly…
“Shona..don’t u dare to say that….we are Indians…..and this this not a part of our culture..”Sharmista said looking at Swara sternly.
“Exactly mom….love in not a part of my life”Swara said and was about to leave….when Ragini stops her….
“Di…is it necessary to deprecate India every single day?Ragini saidin an irritating tone
“If u have any other topic to speak on..then talk…or else let me leave..i have job to go on”Swara said
“i need to tie this rakhi on your wrist..may i?”Ragini said excitedly
“Rags….is this necessary?”Swara said in a disturbed tone…
“Yes..stop talking like a pragmatist”Ragini said…

“And u don’t talk like an savant….jo tu bilkul nehi hai”Swara said..
Ragini ties rakhi on her sister’s hand…Sharmista looked at them with her moist eyes….Swara stops Ragini from feeding her sweets..but Ragini forcefully makes her eat the sweets…
“No dieting today di..i know u r growing fat..but still ajj chodo..”Ragini said teasingly
“Did u find me only to ridicule on? Stop annoying me”Swara said
“U r my one and only di…..my ady hitler….and u know na…serious logo ko irritate karneka maan zada karta hai?”Ragini said while winking at Swara…
“Let me go before u get beaten up by me”Swara said angrily and left….
“Mamma…bet lagalo….someone will enter her life….who will be totally opposite to her and will change her”Ragini said giggling
Scene shifts to company Swara works for…Swara enters with an irritated face…Lovey…her bestie come to her…
“Whom did u fight with today?”Lovey asked…

“Lovey yaar….u know…my family na…both my paternal and maternal side disowned mom due to Urvashi bua and dadi,and today my mom was sending rakhi for her brother….that brother who is a stain on the word “brother” “ Swara said
“You always referred to the misunderstanding as “that misunderstanding” but never said what was the misunderstanding..what is it?”Lovey said with a questionable look…
“They alleged my mom for having an extra marital affair and being pregnant with someone else’ child”Swara said
“How provincial…ok..so forget this incident…i have a news for u….our boss Laksh Maheshwari’s brother will be joining this company for a month” Lovey said…
“He has one brother only na?Adarsh Sir?”Swara said…
“I donno….Adarsh sir is going to handle our Australian project…..so he went there..maybe he is Adarsh sir’s substitute for this month…but i’m so excited…..”Lovey said
“Lovey…..stop nagging me with this stupid topic” Swara said
“You r going to say this na…laksh sir likes u…but i have no one na….”Lovey said..
“No..he doesn’t….he just likes my work and efficiency….that’s it”Swara said….and sits in front of her computer…
“Oh shit!!!”Swara shouted…
“What happened?”Lovey asks tensely
“I’m Adarsh sir’s pa…..now i have to assist this new boss”Swara said sadly
Just then someone gives her a file…which was send by Laksh…with a chit….i love u….will be waiting for your answer…..laksh
Lovey giggles and shows her thumbs up…
Lovey asks Swara to go and talk to that ‘NEW BOSS’
Swara is thinking about laksh…she knocks the door….
The person from inside shouts…’Come in’

Swara comes inside and sits…the person was sitting on his revolving chair with his back facing towards the door…Swara couldn’t see his face…
“I did not ask you to sit”her boss said….
Swara stands up…..
“What a ridiculous and absurd person he is”she thought
The person turns….
“You????”Swara shouted…
“You??”That person shouted..
“Sanskar….u here?Good to see u actually..”Swara says with a gloomy face..
Hmm..same here..even i did not expect to see my love….here…”Sanskar says admiring her dazzling eyes…and her simplicity…
“Sanskar….”Swara said…
“I mean..my classmate…3 years have passed since we got out of our college…and u didn’t change at all…”Sanskar said…
“U didn’t either”Swara said…
Swara is about to leave when she holds the handle of the door…but doesn’t turn..
“R we friends Sanskar?”Swara asks…
“I think we are”Sanskar said….and Swara leaves with a fade smile…
Sanskar takes out his wallet……and moved his fingers across the picture in his wallet…….that’s Swara….
Sanskar’s pov…

Swara…u r my first and last love…i could not move on in my life…3 years have passed away….and i’m standing on the exact place u left me….we knew each other for a month..and i fell for u….i proposed u and u rejected me….that was the end….that’s why today we r having this awkwardness between us…who knew that our fate would bring us in front of each other again….
It was late….8pm…..Swara was working at that time too…..everyone else left except for Swara and Sanskar…Sanskar was leaving when he saw Swara working hard…..she looked tired…..Sanskar came to her with 2 cups of coffee….
“Here u go..take this”Sanskar said…
“Umm…thank u….i can’t say no now..i’m very tired and i need this….u leave na..because i think you r done with your work..”Swara said
“No..i won’t…..i’m give u a lift t your home…”Sanskar said…
“I don’t need it”said Swara
“How will u go alone?Its late”Sanskar asked..
“Dude..this is not India…where girl r unsafe..”Swara said..
“Why do u always insult India?”Sanskar asked in a wrathful tone
“Meri marzi”Swara said…
Swara takes her bag and enters the lift…Sanskar joins her…..just then Sanskar starts jumping…shouting cockroach…..
Swara gave him a hopeless look……
“Stop jumping”Swara shouted….
“Where is it?”Sanskar asked innocently…
“Its gone”Swara said..
The lift stops suddenly….
Swara looks at Sanskar furiously….

“U were jumping..and becuz of u….this lift stopped….idiot…”Swara said
“Sorry…abb?”Sanskar asked…..
“Abb kya??Wait karooo…”Swara shouted…
“I’ve an idea…let’s talk…accha tell me why do u hate India?”Sanskar asked
“Becuz….my so called family is there…..my mom’s in-law….her parents…everyone disowned her….just because of a misunderstanding…..created by my bua and dadi…they blamed her for having extra marital affair and being pregnant with someone else’s child….wese toh sab kehte hai..that Indians love each other…trust is the base of their relationships….every religion,every tradition,every relation is respected…..what was that then??How could they insult a woman?How could my dad leave my mom…and me?My mom was pregnant with my younger sis Ragini…and….”Swara said…..she was crying…..she hugged Sanskar….
“Everyone is not the same Swara..i know u have bitter pasts in India….but u can’t hate India…”Sanskar said….
“No one can change my pov….”Swara said….
“I’m an indian Swara….”Sanskar said..
Swara pushed him away breaking the hug…..

“U r an indian…u will support them only na…..i didn’t know that u r also an Indian……or else…mein tumhe kabhi yaad nehi rakti….i wouldn’t had felt guilty for rejecting u..i wouldn’t had felt guilty that i loved u but i didn’t accept it…i would feel guilty for losing my love……”Swara shouts…..
Just then the watchman opens the lift door and Swara runs from there…
Next morning…….
Swara is trying her best to avoid Sanskar..and Sanskar is trying hard to talk to her…..Ragini comes to Swara’s office..
Just then she collides with sanskar…..
“Sorry”Sanskar apologized
“Sanskar?U r Sanskar right?”Ragini asked…
“Yap…but do i know u?”Sanskared asked…
“Nope..but i do….i’m Swara di’s sister Ragini and i saw your pic in her phone..u r that dauntless fellow..who dared to propose my sis…am i right?”Ragini asked…
Sanskar nodded….
So…u love my di?”Ragini asked…
Sanskar nodded again…
“Ok then jiju…baki ka mujpe chod doh…” Ragini said with a naughty smile
“BTW…..can u do me a favor?Meri India ki ticket katwa do…”Ragini said….
Sanskar nodded again…
After 4 days……
Swara comes to Sanskar’s house….

“Where the hell is my sister?Tell me….u booked a ticket on her name right?How dare u Sanskar?How dare u send her to India?She is just 17….and u…”Swara said….
“Swara…she wanted to go..so….i’m sorry Swara”Sanskar said..
“Sorry my foot..abb mujhe hii India jana padega….”Swara said and left…..
Sanskar smiled….”So this was your plan sahisaheba”Sanskar thought…
Swasanlak and Sharmista(In the flight)
Swara..i’m sorry”Laksh said…
“Y r u apologizing?”Swara asked
“Umm..i proposed u…actually i didn;t know that u love bhai..bhai told me everything..and don’t tell him about this please..or else he will feel like i sacrificed my love and all”Laksh said
Swara nodded…
They reached India
“Now tell me where is Ragini”Swara said…
“At your badi”Sanskar said…

They reached badi…Swara knocked on the door….Ragini opened it….Swara gave a tight slap to Ragini…..
“U didn’t think about us before leaving right?U r only 17 Ragini…..puchna toh dur batana bhi zaruri nehi laga tujhe”
“Di….u hate dad right?but today..u have to know the truth….i got this letter in the locker of this house written by our dad…..u know na di….he was SSP?He was being threatened of being killed along with his wife and kids..as he wanted to free some girls from an human trafficking..some powerful minister was behind this racket…when Urvashi bua and dadi tried to separate mom and dad….dad thought to support dadi so that mom leaves him…cause mom would never leave him…..mom left with us…and dad got killed….woh shahid huye di…..woh shahid huyi”Ragini cried….
Swara ran from there followed by Sanskar…..

Swara was crying vigoriously……she saw some kids setting some balloons free…there was a mandir nearby….some kind of programme was going on..people were laughing..and having fun…some people were distributing food to the poor ones…..a guy was helping an unknown old lady to cross the road…a auto driver was also distributing food to the poor people too,people were beating someone who was teasing a girl…some youngsters were dancing with the old ones in the mandir on the bhajan(Jagrata)..she remembers Laksh saying about the sacrifice…”Itna pyaar hai yaha….aur mein?Bhai bhai ki khushi ke liye apne pyaar ko bhulanekeliye taiyar hai…yaha sab khud bhuke rahenge par dusro ko bhuka nehi rehne denge….i was wrong”Swara thought
“Yeh hai mera India Swara…hamari bharat mata”Sanskar said…..
Swara smiled at him and hugged him…….

So everyone…….it’s me Eva here….i’m a Bangladeshi..but i’m connected to India..i love that country… HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY EVERYONE!!!

38 comments

  1. Riha

    Wow me too bangladeshi to bangladesher kon ongshe thako apu ami Dhaka e thaki by the way awesome os

  2. Radhika

    its really awesome os just love the way u describe india and people living here no words to describe it just love this os and this beautiful country happy independence day just loved it😃😃

  3. Piyali

    it was amazing sweetheart , really Our India is a great , a place where people sacrifice themselves for others , where we don’t see a person’s religion to make a friend and even to love , I am Proud to be an Indian…..thanks a lot for this beautiful os……keep writing………..love you…….be happy……………

  4. Mugdha

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Eva.To be honest I was shocked when I saw your name.I couldn’t believe my eyes,that it was you because it’s not the way you write.You tried a new way and trust me this was an awesome try and successful too.You are a Bangladeshi,still you know a lot about our country and this was an excellent way to honor our country in telly updates.
    Loved it and love you..
    #Mugdha

  5. Fairy

    Ooohh eva its u.. :)…Superbbb os dear…loved india,proud to b an indian…happpy independence day .!!!!jai hind …keep rockng eva..

  6. Avan

    Very NYC Eva….. I loved it……. I’m very proud to be an Indian….. Bharat maata ki jaii……. Tq so much for writing on INDIA… You made us feel sooooo proud….tq once again..love yu

  7. Divyashankar

    Wow hatts of even ur other country u wrote about our country I m feeling very proud actually we shd love all country all country is our country only nothing in it excellent dr but some hindi words I didn’t understand next time when u rite pls write in English u write very well dr ….all d best happy independence day dr….jai hind

  8. Meghs

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    Superb eva😊 the way u described idia and this os description was amazing i know its not way u used to write but its best….
    Whatever u told about idia was correct

    Happy independence day.
    Keep smiling always😊😊

  9. Halima

    |Registered Member

    Amazing Evu… I loved it… They way you described India in the end was amazing, actually, they are nice people…
    Hope to see you back with another OS,
    Happy Independence Day…

  10. Anjali

    Awesome dear it was superb. Love it and happy. Independent day. Jai hind. I love the way you describe India . No words to say how much I Love your os . Proud of you.

  11. Meher

    |Registered Member

    Oh Teri ki!!! I never thought it has written by you!!!

    M speechless..

    What u did no one can!!

    I Don’t know what to say… It’s just osm every word would fall short.. no one can say u aren’t an Indian.. the way I describe the things was osm… I never feel this much proud!!

    Happy independence day!!

  12. Diva

    |Registered Member

    So sweet yar love message India is India chahe koi kitna bhi criticize Kar le…… HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY

  13. swetha

    hank u for such a loving story truly inspired my heart to be a true patriot….thank u so much for arising a felling of an indian in my heart

  14. Akshata

    |Registered Member

    awesome os, I appreciate the good example you have shown to everybody. the way you have explained everything is commendable. loved it.

  15. Shagun

    Apne last line bilkul sahi kaha hai
    Aisa hi hai hamara INDIA
    PROUD TO BE AN INDIAN
    JAI HIND
    JAI BHARAT

  16. Abdul hafiz (Uma)

    Excellent dear.Loved it.Seriouslyit.Seriously, I am not connected to India but I love them from the core of my heart.
    “HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY “🌹🌹🌹)(after all, you are half Indian)

  17. Anjali30

    |Registered Member

    Amazing job Eva…
    Very different from ur usual style and a very very sweet and patriotic story…
    Absolutely loved it… <3 <3

  18. Asmaara

    |Registered Member

    Very good eva I am Pakistani per us sy phely hum sub ek thy hum log sirf naam or place sy batay hoe hain per hamary dill ek hain hamari motherland ek hain or mai amaan ke assha ko support karti hun or chati hun hum sub countries k bech friendship rahy na k larai and happy independence day

  19. Paru

    Eva hats off u…big salute….someone write a beautiful OS about our country.. Dedicated in independennce day…u changed many of people thoughts…
    People like u..make this world beautiful…

  20. Mona

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    Evku, don’t be angry at me for commenting here so late. I got so lazy to do it😌😌😌
    But I had read it afternoon itself and I have told u what I felt but now I went on reading once more and once more I want to say u that, I really want to salute u..
    Thank u so much for this
    Love u 😘😘

  21. Anju

    hungry for some comments huh?
    cheap u
    did u stop getting comments on ur ff that u have started your advertisement see i have no problem with u advertising urself but the thing that bothers is i amindian and u are dragging my country for basically no reason

    • Mona

      poured my heart outand eva stop commenting from fake ids
      this coment of Paru is yours and i know it cuz your wrting style here you put ……… is clearly visible dont advertise yourself fake girl

      • Mugdha

        |Registered Member

        Sweetheart…so thoughtful huh? U saw Eva’s writing style…now see my style..even i use…..so am i Eva?Shan used it….woh Eva hai?Fairy used it…woh Eva hai?Divyanshri used it..woh Eva hai?Yaar bohot sareh Eva hai yaha…abb mein kuch bolu?Sunn benakoof…yeh jo inne sareh bashing comments..hai…yeh 1 min ke difference par likhe gaye hai…..ab agar mein bolu ki woh sareh ekhi hai?Bolu kya..janti hu ki sab ek hai….oyee sunn…mein bhi Eva ko kehrahi hu….i want to salute her…kya karogi?Aagar Indian hoti toh advertise hota tabhi muh bandh rakti….i mean like desh seh zada bashing acchi lagti hai?Indians ko tumjese loogo ke liye hii sab galat samajte hai…and intelligent people…please mujhe batao zara….yaha advertise kaha huya???

  22. RUPA

    |Registered Member

    Beautifully plotted!! Loved it !!

    This is truly a wonderful gift for Indians on eve of INDEPENDENCE DAY and the fact u being bangledishi and writing for India is wonderful & Something like this will keep ppl of world united.

    Love You For This.

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