EK NAYI SHURUVAATH …..ZINDAGIKA (an ISHQBAAZ ff by phanikiran) Episode 2

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Hai dearies. Thank u for ur warm welcome …I am happy after reading ur comments….pls give ur support like this in future which give a boost to my ff getting farward….sorry no nonsense…plz read d 2nd episode …thank u.

Episode: 2
Naani: ( with a moist tone) Kaalagjnaa…
She noticed d moist filled voice of her Naani. She also understand the old lady’s condition….she adjusted her tone nd with a smoothness in her voice….
Kaal: Naani plz calm down ….plz Naani…6 saal ke baad aap mujeh yaad ki thi …iska matlab mein vaha khadam rakhneka waqt aagaya…mujeh samay deejiye Naani ..sab settle karke mein vaha aavungi….
Naani: ( hearing her voice… the pain increased than before in her heart nd with a heart wrenching voice she murmured as) Kaalgjna kya ho raha hai …kaise ho raha hai …

meri samaj mein nahi aaraha hai… mein kamjore padrahi ho aab…kuch sahi nahi lag raha hai…kuch to hai par meri nazar ke samne nahi dikh rahi hai…aaj tak meri takath, meri kamjori dono meri pyaari pothe hai lekin aaj tak jo huva un sabki jindagimein.. vun sab ko dekhne ke baad…mujeh darr lag raha hai ki mein aane wale dino mein unki khushi dekh sakthi hu ya nahi…iss khandaan aage badegi yaa nahi ye bhi meri samaj mein nahi aa rahi hai….thum soch bhi nahi sakthi ….pichle 10 dinomse kya huva…ek dum Shivaay jaise dikhne waali insaan Shivaay ban kar hamari beech mein reh rahatha…bhagvaan ki krupa se unse hum bachgaye….aur
Kaal: ( hearing her last words ..she got shocked nd with a doubtfull voice) Naa..Naani aap abhi jo keh rahithi vo sach hai..r u sure …aap sach mein unko dekhi kya..
Naani: haan .. puttar

Kaal: daanm it.. (she murmered)

Naani: kya huva puttar..
Kaal: (coming to sense) ku..kuch nahi Naani, mujeh sirf 24 ghante dedijiye…o khatham honese pehle mein aap ki saamne hoongi…sirf 24 ghante.. aur ek baath .. mere baare mein aap kisiko kuch math bathana Naani…mein aarahihun..
Naani: ( with a happiness in her tone) sach mein putaar..mein sochthi thi thum mujeh kabhi maaf nahi kar sakthi… saalo pehle meine jo kuch kahithi uske baad tum meri baath maan nahi sakthi…bus puttar..tumhaari ye baath sunneke baad mere dil ke kone mein chupihui shak ab nikalchuki… tum tabhi aur abhi meri pyaari gudiya ho…teek hai ..mein kisiko nahi baataungi tumhaare baare mein…intizaar karoongi tumhareliye…aaj se thum jo bhi karnachahthi ho karlo…mein aab beech mein nahi aavungi..jo galthi mein saalo pehli keethi vo ab nahi karoongi…..mein sirf sab ki kushi dekhna chahthi hun bus …ye mera vaada hai…

She credled d reciever.
Kaalagjna kept her phone aside nd closed her eyes by rubbing with her hands..thinking about d previous convo…after sometime she opened her eyes.
Now her eyes filled with tears .

Kaal: ( in her mind) aa rahi hu Naani…. Itni saalonse kis call keliye mein wait kar rahi thi uss keliye mein aa rahi hun…..do (2)saalonse kis vaada nibhanekeliye intijaar kar rahi thi …uskeliye mein aa rahi hun…jis farz poore karnekeliye mein wait kar rahi hun …uss keliye mein aarahi hun…
She wiped he tears, picked her phone nd dialed a number.
Hai doston, plz do comment…haan I agree dis is a smaaall one but wt can I do friends ..typing karna meri problem hai bcz I am unable to type continuously which creates problem in my hand so please excuse me for it….nd I will try to give a long one ..but gussa math kar…try to understand …

thank u

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12 Comments
  1. Nithu

    nice di

  2. Nice dr and pl do give some English translation aslo dr……

    1. Phanikiran

      hai Arthi thankx for ur welcome..i will try my level best to give d output in mixing d both languages bcz i am little poor in both d languages..if i write d same in my mother tongue(telugu) its not a big problem for me..so excuse me for my drawback..plz try to understand yaar…plz do read nd comment .

  3. Nikita_jai29

    It is nice

  4. Awesome

  5. Awesome dear….. Soo much suspence…. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt…..

    1. Phanikiran

      thanx for d response friends

  6. Impressive manner of expressing the feelings & thoughts of the characters…
    Love the build up of the suspense… Keep going… am enjoying this FF…

    1. Phanikiran

      thank u very much for ur supporting words Firooza.

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