EK NAYI SHURUVAATH…..ZINDAGIKA (an ISHQBAAZ fanfiction by phanikiran) #epi 88

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Episode: 88

Om: Dadi wt next….he asked in dull….

Anni: ye both are same…like SSO..

Hearing this Shivaay starred at Annika…

Rudy: bhaiyya…pls dont start you tom nd Jerry war now…

Somu: haan bhaiyya…we hv no time….

Shiv: Soumya is correct…if we want to do anything that will be possible only before her boarding…..

Anni: but how to do nd wt to do….

Gauri: hey Shankar ji show ur power nd give us an idea….

Somu: Idea….

Rudy: wah an idea can change your life….

All r at a time said “Shut up Rudra..”

Rudy: Hhmmm…okay….

Jah: Saumya …tell us fast wts that idea….

Somu: Maa….wht she told to Dadi before she left….

Anni: if you hv any problem just one call Naani…I will be here…..she repeated Kaal’s words like a parrot….

Somu: yes….so…

All: haan…soo….

They all truned to Dadi who is hearing their convo attentively….

All: Dadi …plz u r the only one to bring Kaal back….they pleaded….

Tejvi: they are right Maa…she hears only ur words nd obey it……they said….

They all pleaded her….

Dadi: ok…ok…even I am also waiting to see them together….she said….

They all hi-fied each other….

At Airport

Kaal sat in the lounge closing her eyes…she know if she opened her eyes or speak a single word she couldn’t control herself…bcz of this she remained silent….

Rosy observed her nd understood her pain which is she trying to hide behind her closed eyes…she silently moved to the end of the line nd make a call nd said…..

“I never see Maam in this condition ever before…she is trying to hide her pain…plz do something ….her condition is scaring me…plz” saying she disconnected the call….

At OM

Anni: yes dis is the right time for action…our plan will definitely works….

Shiv: how did you know….

Anni: just now I received a call from Rosy …she informed me Kaal’s condition at airport…

Somu: why late…lets start the implementation…..

Rudy: but how….Dadi’s words should create a block buster effect on Di…so we will plan to create dhamakedar scene….

Before he completing it….they all heard a glass smashing sound along with some other sounds….they all got shocked hearing it…

Dadi: ye awaz kahase aayi….

Somu: yetho Maahi bhaiyya ke room se…..

OmRi: we will check …don’t worry…

They both ran towards Maahi’s room nd by reaching there…they got shocked seeing Maahi’s room….its totally messed up with broken things nd glass pieces….they looked at Maahi who stood near the broken glass window…they also observed Maahi’s condition nd noticed his hand which was already got injured 2 days back …now it again got deeply injured nd its bleeding …they understood….bcz of hitting the window glass his hand got hurted badly…OmRi exchanged looks nd silently came back to hall….

They explained everthing to all…

Anni: Dadi…this is the right time to make a call….she said…

All: yes Dadi….

Dadi: okay…I will..

She called Kaalagjna…all r excitedly started waiting for her answer ….

At Airport

Rosy:  Maam…Security check started…shall we go…Maam….

Kaal opened her eyes …without seeing at Rosy….”haan..lets go” said she moved towards security check…

Rosy followed her…when she was about to go inside …her phone started ringing….seeing the display she answered the call …saying…

Kaal: Naani…aap….wt happened…r u alright…sab teek haina…she enquired in tention without taking a pause…

Dadi: (in a crying baby avatar)…Gudiyaa….mein…

Hearing her voice…Kaal got shocked…

Kaal: Naani….plz tell me wt happened….sach batao…kisiko kuch nahi huvana …haan…tell me Naani….

Dadi: (maintaining the same feel in her voice) I am alright…all r well…

Hearing it she felt relief….

Dadi: but ….

Kaal: but…plz tell me Naani…don’t scare me..,….

Dadi: but Maahi…

Hearing Maahi’s name she became nervous….her mind started thinking in different ways…she was disturbed by Dadi’s voice…

Dadi: Gudiyaa….

Kaal: haan Naani….bol …is  Maa …Maahi alright…

Dadi: you will come nd see urself….wts going on….i didn’t digest….may be I am alive to see all these painful things ….

Kaal became more nervous hearing those words from Dadi…

Kaal:  Naani..plz …i…i…I will come ..plz Naani…saying she turned back nd ran towards the entrance…

Seeing it Rosy smiled nd made a call nd said..”Ali get ready Maadam is coming”…after this she send a msg as “done”..

At OM:

After receiving the msg from Rosy…

Anni: success….she shouted slightly with happiness showing thumsup to all….

All became happy nd started waiting for Kaal….

Few minutes later …..

Car entered into the parking lot …before it stops…Kaal jumped out from it nd ran hurriedly towards entrance…she entered inside nd saw the all who were sat in silence with utmost sad faces….seeing them with that feelings…she got more tention…she is unable to take breath properly bcz of run…it was clearly shown on her face…her body slightly shivering with fear…sweat drops formed on her forehead…

Seeing her in such a condition….Dadi sighed Rudy….understanding her signal ….Rudy started crying to add more spice to their drama….

Rudy: Di…Diii…see…Maahi bhaiyya…I am scared seeing his condition Di…pplz do something….

She looked Rudy in shock….

Somu: haan …really we all are scared seeing his condition….

Anni: but he didn’t allow us inside the room…

Om: haan…Kaal…he will hear only your words….

Tejvi: yes…Kaal…go nd see…

She stood in deep shock….

Dadi understood her condition…she came near her nd touching her hand ….

Dadi: Gudiyaa…..she called….

With that touch she cameout from the shock…looking at Dadi with teary eyes….

Kaal: Ma…Maahi….

Dadi showed towards Maahi’s room nd sighed her to go…without a second thought she ran to Maahi’s room…all others followed her silently….

She reached Maahi’s room nd got shocked seeing the room condition…its totally messed up with the broken things nd glass pieces…she looked around nd noticed almost all things were broken….

She looked at Maahi who stood near the broken glass window facing back…..she noticed that bleeding on his hand which was already got injured…..she understood his pain….tears rolled down from her eyes….she wiped her tears nd adjusted herself….entered inside the room….

Kaal: Maahi…..she called….

Maahi turned back hearing her voice….seeing her his eyes filled with tears but he didn’t allow them to roll down….he hid his tears behind the eye lids ….he lost himself in her….

She went near him nd stretched her hand to held his hand but he didn’t allowed her to touch him….seeing his resistence….she was hurted but she is Kaalagjna….she never give up….she looked at him ….her eyes rexpressing a little anger as well as command….Maahi turned his eyes from her…

Kaal held his hand tightly nd pulled…nd checked the injury…her eyes again filled with tears…without lifting her eyes she tried to remove the glass pieces from his hand carefully….but he denied nd released his hand from her grip….

With an anger…

Kaal: Maahi…r u mad…wt are u doing …hv u any sense..plz…first allow me to do first aid then you will start fighting with me….

Maahi: (with the same anger) I know wt I am doing …plz leave me….

Kaal: Maahi….dont irritate me…come on …..give ur hand…

Maahi: no ….this is my hand …nd wound is mine…he said….

Kaal: but pain is mine…she murmuring  Plz Maahi ….she pleaded him…

Hearing her pleadings …others were surprised….

Maahi clearly read her heart which is visible in her eyes….a teasing smile appeared on his lips….

Maahi: well …if you want to do first aid….fisrt answer my question….

Kaal: Maahi…first allow me to do then I will answer ur question….

He is as stubborn as Kaal….

Maahi: no way,…first answer my question …

She gave up….

Kaal: okay…ask wt do you want to ask me …quick…said …focusing on his hand….she didn’t noticed the smile on his face….

With the same teasing smile nd with a husky voice…

Maahi: WILL U MARRY ME?…

Kaal: “Haan”…she was shocked hearing his question…

She didn’t replied…

Maahi: come on …tell me ….Will You Marry Me? He again asked….

She looked at him blankly…..(in her mind) I am not a lucky girl Maahi……I never marry you…nd never marry anyone else….

Maahi: Gudiyaa…tell me…

He again asked her…

She slowly moved close to him….his breath stopped a while bcz of her closeness….

Seeing her move others breaths also stopped for a while….looking into his eyes…she pushed him back….bcs of her act he sat on the bed with a jerk…..closely sitting beside him…..she held his hand very tightly….nd started removing the glass pieces….he lost in her for her authority nd commanding nature….

When she started removing small pieces of glass those stucked in his hand ….he felt pain nd pulled back his hand…..for his act… she more tightened her grip on his hand….she seriously looked at his eyes nd noticed the pain…she felt his pain….she again removing the remained pieces …he did the same with pain….she got angry nd slapped Maahi….seeing her act…

Maahi was little shocked but with in seconds a smile appeared on his face….others cupped their mouths with shock….

Rudy: aah…Devil is back…

Kaal: don’t try to irritate me nd don’t move….she ordered avoiding eye contact with him….

In mind: I am sorry Maahi…I cant see you in pain but plz control…

In his mind: I know u r the one who shows this authority on me….you r the only one hv that right on me forever…you accept it r not….no one will fill ur place ever………

She removed the glass pieces nd bandaged the wound after cleaning it…

Kaal: u r not a kid….dont repeat these childish acts again…keep ur anger in control understand….said she turned back nd walked towards the room entrance…

Maahi: still u didn’t answer my question…he asked…

Kaal’s mind remembered Pinky’s words …

“sorry Maahi…I am helpless…i know your pain….bcz myself also stood in the same path…sorry Dost” saying herself …she left the room in silence…but her eyes saying so much….Maahi stood in silence…

She moved towards the hall nd before entering into the hall….she was stopped bcz someone held her hand from back…

She turned back nd seeing Pinky who stood with an added hands….

Kaal was confused….

Kaal: sorry aunty..i didn’t do anything…may be my acts gave him a wrong note…after few days he will forget all the things nd become normal…don’t worry aunty….i promise I never come back in your lives or in Maahi’s life…trust me…she said….

Hearing her words Pinky burst in pain….with an added hands…

“maaf kardo mujhe….math jao…tumhaari wajahse mere bachhe mujhe mili….ab tum jaayegi tho mein phirse ek aur baar unko khodungi…plz…” she said….

*@%*( plz excuse me….dont go…..bcz of u I got my child back….if you go now I will loose him again)*%@*

Aunty.??…she called in distrust…

“plz …sach kehrahihu…maaf kardo mujeh….tumhaare bina wo jeeyega nahi….tum jaayegi tho wo aise hi rahega lekin jeena bhul jaayega…..bachpanse wo kitna dard bhara zindagi jeeyatha mujhse jyada tum aanthethe….aaj unke zujndagimein khushi sirf tumhari wajahse aayi….ab tum khiud uss khushiko unse dur kardogi…plz…Kaalagjna…aisa math kar…bardash nahi karpayega wo…wo bhi tumhaare jaise…dard andar chupake …khush sabko dena chahtha hai wo….bahar jo dikharaha hai wo sirf humko khush rkhanekeliye lekin andar wo tutrahahi…tumhari wapas jaaneka phaisla unko kitna dard derahahai mein samajsakthi hu….math jao…hum sirf unke zindagimein khushi laasakthe ho lekin tum khud unke zindagiho…tumhaare bina nahi rehpaayega wo…unka khushi aur zindagi donom tumse judi hui….”

**(plz…I am saying the truth….he cant live without you……if you will go ….he stay like this but he will forget how to live…..how much pain he had faced from the childhood  you know very well than me….now wtever the happiness that he enjoying this is all bcz of u only…..now u …urself will ruin it….dont do like this…..he cant bare it….he is also just like you….hiding the pain inside he will try to keep others happy….he is breaking inside….ur decision of leaving him …giving more pain to him….i will understand it ….dont go…..we will just make him happy in his life but u r his life….he cant live without u…..u r his life nd the happiness …)**

Mein meri saare galathiyomko….nahi nahi….gunaomko qubool karrahi hu …tum aur Shivaay ke beech jo dosti hai  ynko galath samajkar …jo kuch tumse kahi aur tumhaare saath jo kuch kiya…unn sabkeliye maafi mangrahi hun….mujhe maaf kardo….saying with tears she felldown on knees ..nd tried to touch Kaal’s feet…

**(  I am accepting my mistakes…no no…..the offence that I did ….i misunderstood the friendship the bond between u nd Shivaay…..nd i said so many things to you….for all that plz pardon me…)**

With her act…Kaal was hell shocked…nd stepped back in hurry shouting “AUNTYY”…in tears…

All r also shocked for Pinky’s act…but they didn’t say anything nd looked at Kaal for her reaction….

Maahi didn’t comeout from his room…he know wts going on outside his room…infact wt he want from Pinky exactly its happening there…he know Piky is the one who will stop Kaal…the only thing that needs is realization of Pinky about her acts….once she realise …she will definitely try to rectify them…issliye Maahi took that decision without Kaal’s notice…he know Pinky didn’t present in hall but she heard each nd every word of Kaal….he noticed Pinky’s silence form few days…not only that whenever they talk about Kaal…she didn’t react in such a way from few days like before…he even know once she realise she will stop Kaal at any cost….

Kaal coming to sense….she slowly sitting on her knees infront of Pinky …holding her hands ….

“ aunty…wt r u doing…a mother’s hand should always touch her children’s head to give blessings but not their feet…until this day I didn’t hv any type of anger on you…wtever u did that’s all meant for your son’s wellness nd happiness…thats all …plz aunty…don’t do like this….i cnat bare it….” she said in tears…

“Kaal”…she called ….

“aunty …aap maa hi…ek maa ke dil kaise sochta hai mein samajsakthi hu…pls aunty” …she pleaded …

**(aunty…you are a mother….i can understand a mother feelings….)**

“ Kaal …issliye ye sab tumko angel bulathe hai…bol tum naahi jaayegina….mein vada karungi…aaj se tum aur Annika jo kuch kaho aur karo…mein kuch nahi kahungi….” She said…

*(Kaal….bcz of this nature….these are always calls you an Angel….i promise you …..from today onwards wtever u nd Annika will say nd do ….i never object you both ….”)**

“aunty…pls don’t say like that…you r elder than us….nd a mother too…you r the one to tell about right or wrong to us…you hv that right forever being the mother of shivaay nd Maahi” ….she said….

“it means …you excused me nd accepted to stay….” Right….she asked

Kaal looked at others…their eyes also pleading her as “plz…stay with us…”

Finally she nodded in yes….

“then promise me….” Pinky said…

She looked at her in confusion…

“I know …once Kaal commits….she stands on it forever…right”…she asked….

She nodded in yes….others looked at Pinky….

“then promise me….you never leave Maahi….all of us nd this Mansion”…she asked Kaal….

Holding Pinky’s hands ….Kaal helped her to stand nd keeping her hand in Pinky’s hand….

Kaal: I NEVER LEAVE MAAHI, YOU ALL ND THIS MANSION….UNTIL MY LAST BREATH….THIS IS NOT MY PROMISE…THIS IS MY OATH…KAAL’S OATH”….she said….

Hearing it ….Pinky hugged Kaal in happiness….all others hi-fied each other….

Pinky: then why late …go …she said…

Kaal looked at others…they all are also sighed her as “go to Maahi”…

Kaal: is it necessary to go to him….she asked…

“what?”…they all shouted at a time as they all were shocked with her question….

Kaal: If I go inside definitely he will show his  Tadibaazi….she said…

Anni: hhmm…she is right…said keeping a thinking pose…

Shiv: Annniiikaaaa….

Anni: wt Annikaaaa…your brother’s blood made with this tadibaazi….she said…

Kaal: she is right….said keeping hand on Annika’s shoulder….

Seeing it…

Shiv: hello….we r OBEROI BROTHERS…he said it in full Tadibaazi….

Anni: you r right…in showing Tadibaazi…you OBEROI Brothers will come first in this whole world…

Gauri:  bhahujaayi is right ….i mean Di is right….saying she came nd stood beside Annika…

Om: as compliment we accept it with pleasure…he said….

Shiv: wt about you both…he asked pointing AnniKaal….

You r not siblings but you both behave in same ….never hear anyones words….

AnniKaal: kiske ladkiyom hai hum ….haan to whom we belong…bol Oberoi brothers ka haina…tho aisa hi hona hai….

Somu: yes …its right …saying she also came nd stood beside Kaal….

Dadi , Jah nd Pinky smiled seeing their war….

Tej: you are wrong …Maahi never  behave like that….he supported Maahi…

Kaal: really…well I will prove it right now…come with me….said she moved to Maahi’s room….

They all followed her….when she entered inside Maahi’s room she saw Maahi who stood facing window near the bed…

Maahi: why did you come back….he asked her without turning back….

Turning her head …she looked at others nd raised her eyebrows as …do you hear …….girls looked at boys with a winning smile…’

Kaal: here some one asked me a wish…after thinking a lot…finally I decided to fulfill it…she said with the same attitude…

Maahi: no need of it….saying he turned to her…

Kaal: oh I see….said she moved towards Maahi….while wrapping the saree pallu around her waist nd tucked it inside near the belly button….

Seeing it Maahi suspected her act…seeing her bold act others stood in shock….

She slowly moved close to him…for it…his heart beat increased…she stood close to him….nd moved her hands to his back nd wrapping around him…leaned on him…moving more close to his face…she wishpered in his ears….

“ I….LOVE….YOU…”that’s it….

Hearing it from her….his eyes became wide…his heart started jumping with joy just like a happy ball…didn’t know wt happened to him….”haayre” saying he fell back on the bed….

Seeing it they all came to him calling Maahi…she turned nd stood keeping a hand on her waist….

ShivOmRu called Maahi nd few seconds later when Shiv called him while shaking…he looked at them nd got up from the bed…..standing properly he looked at Kaal with surprise….

She with a smile looked at him nd winking at him ….” THAT IS KAAL”…said …she ran from there….

“hey Gudiyaa stop” calling he ran behind her….

They all followed them….

When they reached the hall …he was stopped  near the steps …all others also were stopped …when she is running towards the entrance….from back….

“ HEY GUDIYAA…..I …LOVE U MY ANGEL” ….he shouted ….which was resounded in the Mansion…..

All looked at him with surprise nd turned their eyes to Kaal to her reaction….

Hearing it she was stopped with shock as she didn’t expect it from Maahi….she didn’t think that Maahi will tell it openly to her….she slowly turned to Maahi…she looked at him with widened eyes….

Not only the family….the total maids, security nd Ali nd Rosy who stood at the car were heard wt Maahi said….a happy smile appeared on their faces…Ali nd Rosy hified each other…

Raising his eyebrows ….winking at her…with a naughty smile ….he said….

“THAT IS MAAHI”…

She looked at others….seeing their faces nd smiles…for the first time instead of giving retart …her eye lids downed with shy ….cheeks turned pink with blush…nd lips took a beautiful curve with a joyful smile….

Seeing her like that Maahi didn’t turn his eyes as she is looking more beautiful…

“O My God”  he said…

She looked at him for it…they all looked at him…

“wt happened Maahi”….Dadi asked….

“see Dadi…my Devil is blushing”…he said with a smile…..

Bass…”you Maahiii”…shouting she ran to him….

“Oh God ..save me”…saying he ran from there…she followed him..

They all burst in laugh….ShivOmRu at a time….

“Sabke Sab Devils hai”….*( all r Devils).*…..said looking at the girls with a teasing smile….

“wt did you say…say it again”…asked girls in anger….

“do you hv any hearing problem” …asking they ran from there seeing the girls expressions….

“ you stop.” Saying girls ran behind them….

Seniors laughed loudly….

“MASTI MODE ON”…

hi guys ….how is it…..i want to know from u all ….

Will meet with another beautiful nd joyful episode ….until then bye bye take care…..

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  1. Thank God Kaal didn’t leave Maahi

    1. Phanikiran

      Yes ..so I think all r ? happy

  2. You shaped each and every moment dear.heart toughing.especially pinky aunty conversation with kaal

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you dear ??u all loved it ?thanks a lot ??

  3. Wow….. Just awesome…..amazing……

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you dear??

  4. Nikita_jai29

    It is lovely…..

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you dear ???

  5. ItsmePrabha

    YO…Beautifully Written Epi..each and every scene is super..My most fav. is Maahi’s reaction to Kaal’s I Love You..Haayre……Loved it like anything akka..Will be waiting for the next..Till then Take care..

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you dear ???for this love ?

  6. Wow awesome ??????

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you dear Sufi???

  7. There is no words to praise for this story it really awesome and waiting for ur next story and I request that can make story of Gauri and omkara

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank dear Thiya?❤️?u loved this plot which is a different one from others. For that I am thankful to you?After this ff I will post another ff on Obros .in that definitely u will read about Omkaara Nd Gauri ?i will try to write on OmRi .if I didn’t get a plot for ff at least I will try to write a few shots on them.but plz give some time to me.hope u will like my another story too which I aleardy is posting the Series 2 on Maahi. Thank you dear ???

      1. Of course I will wait for ur next post and I’m also reading the series 2 and a true thing is this story is a super and awesome one compared to that but that is also good

    2. Phanikiran

      Thank you dear. I will try to give gud episodes ?☺️

  8. Uploaded next part plzzzz???????

    1. Phanikiran

      Sure dear will post soon??

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