EK NAYI SHURUVAATH…..ZINDAGIKA (an ISHQBAAZ fanfiction by phanikiran) #epi 80

 

Hai all…..sorry for late posting…..bcz of severe pain in shoulder I didn’t type the episode…..here is the next episode….so read nd enjoy it….nd don’t forget to comment….

In this you will read wt Maahi indirectly asked Kaal….for that wt her reaction…..

So …start reading nd enjoy…..nd show ur support ….thank you….

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Episode :  80

After reaching OM….Maahi rested her carefully in her room….closing the doors he came out …..they all looked at him…..

Maahi: wy u all r looking at me…..he asked….

Shiv: nothing Maahi…..stay with her ….its a better thing…..

Maahi smiled…..

Maahi: nothing will happened to her……she will sleep with peace…..wtever her pain …it already came out….so for few hours she will be calm….go nd take rest….will meet tomorrow….gud night….said he left to his room….

They all exchanged looks nd left to their rooms…..

In the morning when Maahi came out from Kaal’s room after checking her condition….Dadi saw him ….she asked wts the matter…..Maahi told her wt happened hiding wt Kaal shared ….he requested her to stay with her as she will wake up may be in few minutes…..

She nodded nd went to Kaal….nearly after one hour….Kaal opened her eyes…..she saw Dadi…..she didn’t understand When Dadi came FH…

Kaal: Naani….aap yaha….

Dadi: mein bhi wahi puchrahihu….tum yaha kab aayi….

Kaal: matlab…

Dadi: Gudiyaa….now where r u?..she asked

Kaal: FH mein…

Dadi: nahi …tum tho OM mein…

Hearing it she got up from the bed nd looked around….she didn’t understand how ,why nd when she came there…..she tried to remember but she didn’t….seieng her struggle….

Dadi: Gudiyaa…. teek hai…jao jaake fresh ho jao….breakfast ready hogi….jao…jaldi aao….saying she left from there….

Try to remembering the last nights incidents….she left to wash room nd after few minutes coming out she moved to the kitchen side….

There she saw the 3 pairs who r preparing break fast….seeing her they wished her “Gud morning…”

She smiled ….still she is in thoughts….

Shiv: Kaal…breakfast ready….chalo….Annika…calling he sighed her….

Annika understood nd went near Kaal….

Anni: aavo…we will check the dining as all things r ready r not…..saying she moved….

Kaal nodding her head she followed her….she didn’t come out from her thoughts….when she reached dining….she didn’t noticed Maahi who is coming ….she dashed him…..Maahi holding her hand…helped her to balance….

She looked at him…..his touch saying something to her…..looked at his eyes….some flashes occurred in her mind…..just few seconds…..her mind rewinded the incidents that happened yesterday….

With a jerk she took away her hands from him nd stepped back….

“Kaal”…Maahi doubtedly called seeing her act….

“sorry ….i hv to go”….said she moved from there…..

Shiv: arrey yaar kaha jarahiho…

She turned nd looked at Shiv….

“don’t worry yaar….itni aasanise chodke jaanewali nahihu mein…..kaam purakarkehi jaayengi”….said she left from there….

Annika tried to call her but Maahi stopped her…..she looked at him…

Maahi: leave her ….she remembered wt happened yesterday….nd she understood that  uss samay mein unke saath hu….jaanedo…..with in few hours she will come back…..he said looking at them….

Om: but how ….

Maahi: lets see…..well guys….come on….breakfast time lets start said he sat in his chair….

They all are sitting  with him completed their breakfast…..

Triple S Office:

Kaal entered inside the office nd strightly she moving towards her Chamber shouted “Khadir”….

Her voice echoed ….staff looked at her with fear…..

Hearing his name…..Khadir hurriedly came out from his room nd seeing Kaal who is entering inside her Chamber…..he rushed to her…..

Sitting in the chair….looking at him….

“Khadir……its time to move the final pawn against Mehta….. choubeese ghantomein Mehta ka naam business worldse hamesha keliye hatana hi….….lets start the process”….she ordered him….

“yes Maam….i will…just wait for some time…..”said he went out ….

Kaal sat in her Chamber until Khadir came inside after 1 nd half an hour…..

“Maam”…he called

She opened her eyes….looked at him….

“Kaam hogaya…..within 24 hrs Mehta’s chapter will be closed forever….” He said….

“good”……saying she stood from the chair ….at the same time her phone rang ….seeing the display…..a frown appeared on her forehead….lifting it….

Kaal: Naani….she called…

Dadi: where r u?she questioned….

Kaal: in Office…..she said….

Dadi: wt r u thinking about u….

Kaal: Naani…..

Dadi: haan….tumhari Naani hu….bol…..kya sochrahi hai tu…

Kaal: Naani….i didn’t get ur words….she said in confusion….

Dadi: tu khud aaya….aur bina bathake chaligayi…..

Kaal: oh…Naani…actually I hv an important work…..issliye I didn’t tell you….she said in relief,….

Dadi: I don’t want any explanations….listen with in 1 hr you should be here….dont say no…..its not my request….its my order…thats it….saying without hearing Kaal’s reply ….she disconnected the call nd looking at Maahi ….she showed thums up sign……

He smiled…..looking at Rudy…

Maahi: Rudy…we hv to celebrate our success …so shuru karo…..he said with a smile….

Shivaay smiled….

Shiv: Maahi…..u r doing big mistake by giving the party arrangements to Rudy…he said….

Rudy: don’t worry bhaiyya…iss bar fruit punch nahi rakhunga mein….he said with a smile….

ShivOmNnika at a time said …”shut up Rudy”…

Maahi smiled …..

Kaal felt helpless as she cant deny Dadi’s order……she looked at Khadir….

“don’t worry Maam…sab hojayega…..”he said….

“okay…but don’t forget to inform the progress…”said she moved from there….

As per Dadi’s order she came to OM….nd went to meet Dadi….she didn’t know about the party arrangements….

Dadi ordered the maid to bring lunch for Kaal to her room….Kaal looked at Dadi ….

Dadi: u r luking so tired gudiyaa. ….issliye….

She didn’t say anyting…..she completed her lunch in Dadi’s room nd as per Dadi’s order she slept ….she didn’t understand Dadi’s behavior…..by eveing 7:00 she came out from Dadi’s room nd reached the hall where all were…..she looked at all nd said…

Kaal: Naani…..i hv to go …bye….

“Dii”…shouting Rudy went near her…..

Kaal: Rudyy….wt happened ….

Rudy: aise kaise jaayenge ….he asked….

Kaal: mere car mein…kyom …she asked….

Rudy: arrey….we already arranged a party at poolside to celebrate our success in the business….how did you go without enjoying the party with us…..

Kaal understood that why Dadi’s behavior was different …..

KaaL: sorry Rudy…I hv to go….its important….

He started pleading her….all are followed Rudy….

“don’t worry Rudy”…hearing it they all looked at the voice….

Kaal turned to the voice….she saw Maahi who stood behind her in close starring at her…..when she turned… her eyes locked with him….…..

Maahi: she will join with us nd stay until the end of the party…..okay…..he said in an ordering way looking at her…..

They all looked at Kaal for her response….bcz they knew that once she decided no one change her decision….

Don’t know wt happened to her…..she nodded her head in yes looking into his eyes…..he left from there with a smile….

“Yaahoo”….shouting  Rudy started jumping…..for his shout Kaal came to senses….she looked at all…..

Soumya pated on his back nd said….

Somu: Rudra…lets go …we hv little time to get ready for the party….guests will come….

“oh yaah…”said they both left from there….

Anni: I will give one of the dresses that I selected for the party…..she said…

Jah: I will send the jewellary …..she said…

Kaal nodding head she left to her room….

They all showed thums up to each other….until this day Kaal never accepts anyones words once she take her decision…..she always convince others….but today they all witnessed the difference in her behavior infront of Maahi…she didn’t rejected his words nd didn’t say no to him who took  decision on behalf of her….

Kaal lost herself in thinking about her behavior while enetering  into her room ….she didn’t understand wt happened to her when she looked into his eyes…..why didn’t she deny his words….this behavior is a new one to herself….

Thinking about her behavior….she sat on the bed nd kept her phone aside…..then she noticed a box which was packed very beautifully….she took that box into her hands….a label sticked on it with a name….her heart skipped a beat after reading the name as “Gudiyaa”…

She opened the wrapper with shivering fingers nd heavily beating heart….she removed the box lid ….she looked at the item…..seeing it her eyes opened widely with surprise….

Inside the box there was a lehenga which has a beautiful banzara mirror work nd floral work nd a blouse contains the same work with the dupatta which is luking so elegant in beautiful color combination…..she gently touched it….her mind remembered the incident in which she met Maahi for the first time….at that time she wore the same mirror work dress….

In the side of the box there was another small box…she slowly took the box nd opened it….she was amazed seeing the item ….that was a waist chain ….the same chain which Maahi gifted her…..the same chain that she lost while leaving the chawl.….

She noticed a paper inside….she took it ….opening it …she started reading….

“it is beautiful….but its beauty reached its peak then only when it hugs your waist lovingly”…her cheeks turned pink due to blush….she continued ….

“wear this always….i want to hear its rythym…throughout my life…”reading it she got freezed….as Maahi indirectly told her that wt he want from her…

Just then she heard Pinky’s voice calling Shivaay……Pinky’s words echoed in her ears….she immediately stood up nd kept the box inside the cupboard nd stood there losting in thoughts….

Kaal: sorry Maahi…ur wish never fulfill…..maaf kardo Dost….

Her eyes filled with a thin layer…she came into senses when Annika called her….

Anni: (without noticing Kaal’s face)…Kaal…look at these two dresses…which one you like….she asked showing 2 designer dresses…

But she didn’t replied nd again she lost in thoughts….Annika observed her …nd noticed the wetness in her eyes….she kept her hand on Kaal’s hand….Kaal came out from the thoughts for her touch…

Anni: Kaal ….r u alright?..she enquired…..

Kaal: (with a fake smile)..yeah I am fine…..said…

Anni: select one from this two….she again showed the dresses….

Kaal:  (without any expression) wtever u like select it…she said…

Annika know as until this day she didn’t select herself….

Anni: tho this is perfect for you….she showed a full white long frock…haan this is the perfect matching jewellary for this dress said she showed the diamond jewelary set….

Kaal: do u like this combination….she asked Annika..

Anni: yes, this is so beautiful nd perfect for u….she said…

Kaal: then its final ….said….

Annika put the dress nd jewellary in her hand nd left from there saying get ready fast nd will join at pool side….Kaal nodded….

After some time they all gathered at pool… all family members were there….girls are looking very gorgeous….nd challenging the boys patience….

Party started with josh….Kaal stood near the pool looking the 3 pairs who are lost in their own world….suddenly her heart beat increased…she looked around nd noticed Maahi who is coming near her….she looked his eyes which are showering mixed feelings of love , affection, care nd so much….she didn’t understand wt to do ….she looked around to escape…she saw Dadi who is talking with a family friend….she immediately moved near her….throught the party she almost tried her best to avoid Maahi nd an eye contact with him….after the party she say gud night to all….

Dadi: Gudiyaa…how did you go? Its already crossed mid night….

Before boys respond….they heard a voice from the entrance …they all looked at the entrance…Ali stood there….

Ali: Maam….

Kaal: (with a smile) …lets go Ali…said she went near Dadi nd took her blessings without facing anybody she left from there…..

She knew if she turn back she hv to face Maahi….is she will see him she cant control herself ….Maahi stood with no expressions starring at Kaal who is leaving silently….

Maahi: (in mind) Gudiyaa….if you say or not….i will understand ur heart…..you agree it or not….our souls are one….i can read ur soul through your eyes bcz that eyes always shows myself to me ….your eyes are expressing something which is not visible on your face….i will find it….

After Kaal left from there …..they looked at Maahi who lost in his own thoughts….Shivaay put his hand on Maahi’s shoulder…he came out from his thoughts nd looked shiv….

Shiv: Maahi….r  u ok….he asked….

Maahi: yaah..i am fine…well gud night said he left to his room with a smile which was filled with a pain…

They all exchanged looks nd after sometime the 3 pairs gathered in dadi’s room….

Om: why didn’t she accept her feelings?…

Dadi: she cares him….she do anything for him…..but she is hiding her feelings….why?even in party she avoided Maahi….for few minutes I felt she didn’t love him….seeing her behavior Maahi also avoided her…. i felt for a while as really they hv feelings for each other or not….…she said…

Gauri: even bhaiyya also didn’t say anything….

Annika just came there….

Anni: don’t worry…they both hv strong feelings for each other but Kaal is the only one who is hiding her feelings…..infact Maahi indirectly asked her that wt he want from her….

Shiv: wt do you mean Annika….he asked….

Anni: yes …see this…u will come to know wt Maahi asked her…said she showed the note which was kept in the cup board by Kaal….

She narrated about wt she saw when she entered in Kaal’s room to give her the party dress…..one by one they all read it….Annika also said that she saw tears in her eyes at that time…

Dadi: wts the reason that stopping Kaal to accept her feelings towards Maahi….

Shiv: I know the reason….i mean we know the reason….he said looking at them….

They exchanged looks as they all remembered Pinky’s words….

Meanwhile…Maahi who didn’t sleep and want to  talk with Dadi to know about Kaal….came to meet Dadi nd was stopped hearing their discussion….he stood at the door nd heard their words….

Maahi: (in mind) so Dadi…you all know the reason for her behavior as well as her pain …..i understood that anyone of you didn’t tell me….well…Dadi…aap khud bathayegi mujhse wo wajah hai kya….get ready for my move….saying himself he silently left from there….

But they didn’t know Pinky also heard their words….

Maahi who stood at the window  starring at the moon in which he is seeing Kaal….

In his mind: Gudiyaa….until this day I didn’t ask u the reason for your behavior…..in future also I never ask you….kaise pathalagana meinbhi jaanthahu….unke baad tumhaare dard tumse hameshakeliye dur hojayenge…..

At the same time Kaal stood in her room near the window starring at the moon in which she is seeing Maahi’s reflection….

In her mind: sorry Maahi…I know I hurted you badly …..but it’s a necessary one…I don’t want to spoil the happiness of the house….you will definitely forget me with the love nd affection of your family….i know wt I am going to do towards you is wrong but it’s a must nd should for me….i am sorry….her eyes filled with tears….

There Maahi nd here Kaal both didn’t sleep the whole night….

Next day Morning:

After completing break fast….Dadi asking the girls about the next days festival Karwachauth …. arrangements….

Tej came to hall….at the same time his phone rang …he picked it up nd hearing the matter from other side….he immediately swithed on the TV nd watching the breaking news he called ShivaAhi….

All came in hurry hearing his shout…..

Shiv: wt happened bade papa…..he asked….

He sighed to see the TV…..

They all looked at the TV nd watching the news they got shocked……but Maahi’s mind started revolving around Kaal….he called her but she didn’t lifted….

Tej: how is it possible…ek din mein aise kaise hosaktha hai….Mr.Mehta’s all businesses at a time collapsed….nd his partners withdrew their share from his businesses….how….

Maahi: possible hai bade papa…..if a person intentionally want to destroy him…..wo bhi Kaal jaise insaan chahetho….its possible….he said…

Hearing it except ShivOmRu…all others got more shock ….

Tej: Maahi wt r u talking….

Jah: Kaal ke baaremein aise kaise kahenge tu….unke baaremein tu jaantha nahi…..

Shiv: bade Maa…he is right….infact he knew about her well than us….he said….

Tej: wt do u mean…..waise Kaal aise kyom karegi….unko kya lenadena hai Mr.Mehta se……he asked…

Then Shiv narrated the whole thing …wt happened two years back in Paris nd wt happened few days back in the party…..

Hearing about Mehta’s behavior towards Kaal Tej got angry….

Maahi; she bares the pain …even  she bares the harsh words nd misbehavior towards her….but don’t know why she become Devil when the matter comes to Oberois….he said….

Dadi: wo jo kiya sahi kiya….lekin wo Mehta chupke baitenge….aur Gudiyaa…..

“wahi hai mere darr bhi….i am trying to contact but she didn’t lift it….now it is switched off”….Maahi said…..

“Shivaay…hv to go….i cant sit like this….i am feeling as she is in danger”…he said to Shivaay….shivaay nodded his head nd was about to move…..Maahi’s phone notified him about receiving a MMS…..

They all looked at him….he opened it nd seeing the MMS they all got shocked….

Hello all….how is it….next will post soon….dont forget to read the NOTE…nd tell ur opinion….plz…..

Stay tuned to read the next part ….untill then bye bye …take care…..

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  1. U are a great writer and in each episode u perfectly show the emotions of all. With each chapter I am in loving each character more. Just keep writing. ??

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you Aditi?❤️Love this response

  2. Nikita_jai29

    It is lovely dear.. Please take care of yourself…

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you dear for the comment Nd the concern??

  3. No words to describe it. I loved it

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you dear for the love????

  4. ItsmePrabha

    Wow,Akka..awesome epi..loved it..but end lo cliff hanger..uff i cant wait for the next…BTW how is your shoulder now??is it still paining??..take rest…and post the next when you are ok..till then Take care..

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you Prabha for this response.?now I am feeling well. Will post next part within two days☺️

  5. Superbbbbb???????

    1. Phanikiran

      thank you Sufi

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