EK NAYI SHURUVAATH…..ZINDAGIKA (an ISHQBAAZ fanfiction by phanikiran) #epi 77

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Episode: 77

Next Day Morning:

Kaal entered inside the Mansion by 5:30 nd got shocked seeing all the family members who were present in the hall….they all at a time said….”GOOD MORNING”…….she looked them with widened eyes….

Kaal: aap sab inti subeh utgayethe….she doubtedly questioned….

Tej: haan dear….after a long time we get a free time to watch a lovely live movie….

Kaal:  Movie!!??

Jah: ohho Tej…stop ur teasing……waise Kaal …tum itni subah aayi …is there any special….

Kaal: wo…wo…kuch kuch khaas baath nahi aunty…today I am free…so I thought to spend time with ….with ….searching for words she looked at others….

Jah: with….

Kaal: with …with the girls …that’s it…

G&B: oh really….they all said at a time….

She looked at them feeling some discomfort…..

Dadi: arrey …kyom Gudiyaako pareshaan karraheho tum sab….Gudiyaa tum jao andar….

She looked at Dadi nd doutedly looking at others she moved inside….

Dadi: Maahi poolke paas tha….she slightly shouted from back….

Kaal was stopped nd turning back surprisedly looked at Dadi for her words….seeing their smiles ….she understood that bcz of Maahi nd accepting his deal…today she became their target…..

Herself:  “accepting ur deal is my foolishness….really is it my foolishness or my weakness? Wtever it may be….wt you will do if I didn’t accept your words….may be you will block me”….thinking it….she remembered his acts which creates havoc inside her ….” No…no…this deal is better than that one….” Saying herself she moved to meet Maahi without looking at others….

Seeing her silence …they all hi-fied each other….

Anni: we will prepare some special dish for them …..she said in anxiety…

Shiv: no Annika…don’t take too much stress…..hum haina …we will prepare for our brother …okay said he moved towards the kitchen….

OmRu followed him….

When Anni try to follow Shiv to argue with him….Gauri holding her hand dragged back….nd asked…

Gauri: shall we follow Di….

Annika thought a while nd nodded her head….the girls slowly escaped from there nd reached the poolside…hiding behind the pillars they started observing MaahiKaa….

Kaal went near the pool  but she didn’t understand how to start convo with Maahi….she blamed herself for her condition…..

Kaal:  ( in mind) Maahi….tune kaisi situation mein phasaya mujeh….

Maahi: why r u standing there….come here….its going to 6 O’clock…..he said without turning back…..

AniRiMya looked at each other….

Gauri: Bade bhaiyya ajeeb chirota hai….without looking back how did he know Di stood behind him…..

Anni: yeh sirf Maahi nahi….Shivaay bhi aisahi kehta hai….she said….

Gauri: sach mein…..she asked…

Annika nodded in yes….

Somu: haan bhabi….its possible…..its possible when their souls are one….she explained….

Gauri: if it is true…then I will test Omkaaraji….

AnniMya: haan !!??

Gauri: haaan….she said in her style…….

Anni: bechara Om…she murmured….

Somu: ssshhhhh….dekh waha…..

When he said with her without turning back…she didn’t say anything nd silently she came nd stood infront of him ….for the first time feeling some tention nd uneasiness at a time…

He looked at her from top to bottom….nd vice versa….finally coming to her face ….he noticed a change in her way of getting ready….

Somu: Bhabhis …did you noticed Di’s way of dressing….

Anni: haa Somu…she wore a designer saree !…..

Gauri: she left her hair freely !….

“not only that she wore designer accessories that too matching

….look at her”…hearing it the 3 girls surprisedly turned their heads nd were shocked seeing Dadi…

“Dadi….aap”….they said at a time….

“sshhh…look at there….” …said she became busy in observing MaahiKaa…the girls joined with her with smiles….

When Maahi starring at her….

Kaal: ( in mind)   don’t stare me Maahi….i cant handle it…plz….

Maahi: “BEAUTIFULL”…he said starring at her…

Kaal: haan…kya kaha….she asked…

Maahi: wo…wahi…morning atmosphere is so beautiful…am I right….

Kaal looked around and nodded her head in yes….but the next second she got a doubt….

Kaal: Rudy…she called..

Maahi didn’t understand why she is calling Rudy…

Kaal: Rudy…come out I say….she again called …

Rudy slowly came out from behind the pillar nd stood infront of them…

KaaL: wt r u doing…she questioned…

Rudy: nothing I just observing the morning atmosphere….just now Maahi bhaiyya said na its beautiful….he said keeping an innocent face….

Kaal: achha….ShivOm…come out I say….she called them…

Both ShivOm came out from behind the pillars keeping an innocent faces….

Maahi stood with a smile….he simply enjoying the situation….

Kaal: aur koun koun chupahuva …..bahar aajao….she said….

Slowly Dadi, AniRiMya nd Tejvi came out from their places…she surprisedly looked at Dadi nd Tejvi…

Kaal: Naani…aapbhina…

Dadi: I also came to see the morning atmosphere …she said very cutely….

Kaal: ohh really…well…you all enjoy it…I will leave …said she moved….

Maahi: Kaal once commits…she stands on it forever….am I right Shivaay….he said….

Hearing it she was stopped…..

Shiv: koi shak ….

Maahi: then its just going to complete 1 hour….wt about the remaining 23 hrs…he questioned….

For his question …taping foot on the floor with anger she turned …looking at them….

Kaal: if you all put an end to this teasing session… then I will do my work…she said….

Maahi: you came here not to do your work…..to spend with me for 24 hrs…he said….

Kaal: 23 hrs….she stressed it…

Maahi: of course…23 hrs… cant you stand on it…he asked….

She starred at him…

Herself: Maahi…you got my weakness nd you are targeting it…why r u doing it….why….

Dadi: Gudiyaa tum teek ho….she asked…

Kaal looked at Dadi nd silently nodded her head….

“ Chalo…chalo sab….naasta tayyar karna haina….”saying Dadi moved nd all others followed her …

But seeing her in silence….only two were felt some guilty….they are Maahi nd Annika…

Maahi felt guilty bcz he cant bare her silence as it is a sign of her struggling nature to comeout from her inner struggle….he will understood her silence nd even he is ablel to read it….

Annika felt guilty bcz seeing Kaal in silence …she didn’t understand as they are trying to wake up her inner feelings  or they are giving her more pain as Maahi said…

Annika left from there leaving Maahika…

Kaal stood silently starring at pool water….Maahi starred at her….

Maahi: (himself) Gudiyaa….i know wts going on in your mind right know…I know I know wt I am doing ….simply I am using ur weakness….i know you never say no to us if we ask anything…..issliye mein tumse yeh maanga….but kya karu…..as an Oberoi I never wait for opportunity….i want to create it to remove the thorn called Mehta from your way forever….how can I allow him to come in ur way….he should pay for wt he did with u in previous not only that for wt he said with u….i never like if anyone comes in ur way….maaf kardo Gudiyaa for wt I am doing with u….plz….

Mehta….u planned well by using ur sister towards me …u want to take revenge on Kaal as well as Oberois….but your sister is not like you…she is so matured …not only that u didn’t know about ur sister’s likes nd dislikes…..but I noticed it…ab dekh iss Maahi ka chaal kaise hotha hai…..tumhari behen khud tumhari dushman banegi….wait nd watch…

At the same time:

Shivika’s Room:

When Shivaay entered in the room …he noticed Annika losting in her thoughts sitting in the sofa….he went near her nd sat beside her….but she didn’t noticed it…keeping hand on her….

Shiv: Annikaa…he called..

She looked at him…seeing her face he understood that she is struggling for something….

Shiv; wt happened Annika….u r luking so dull …baath kya hai….

Anni: kya hum galath karraha hai……..Shivaay….

Shiv: galath!…kaise galath aur kiske saath….

Anni: wahi galath…Kaal ke saath….

Shiv: I didn’t get your words Annika…..he said in confusion….

Anni: Shivvay…after seeing her in silence…I felt some guilty inside…I didn’t understand that wt we are doing is right or not….we decided that we will give her happiness by wake up her inner feelings towards Maahi…. In that process truly we are doing the same or we are giving her more pain as Maahi said…

Shiv: Annika ….i think you misunderstood her…

Anni: no Shiv….her silence is a killing one….as a girl I can understand her feelings at that moment….

Shiv: Annika….dekh meri taraf….saying he turned her towards him…

She looked at him…

Shiv: tune kahithina….zindagibhar khush rakhnekeliye….ab thoda dukh dena koi badi baath nahi….so we are not doing any wrong…I know she feels a little pain…but but I am sure ..once our efforts get success she enjoy the happiness forever….moreover if she feels any pain….unko sambhalnekeliye Maahi haina….so no worries nd no guilty…..concentrate on the mission okay….come on….get fresh up ….have to join with all at dining for breakfast….after that you hv to select the dresses for all to attend the evening party…right…so go nd come fast….saying he placed a kiss on her forehead to relieve her pain…..

She closed her eyes to feel it nd got some peace…..she convinced for his words nd nodding her head she left to wash room….

Shiv: (himself)..i know Annika…wt u r feeling about her…but we hv a little time to make our plan success…bcz you don’t know about her….she came here to complete her responsibility ….her responsibility is Maahi ….she already completed half of it….she is staying here to prove the truth infront of the world….once she will complete her final move….she will leave us forever….so wt we will do …do it before her final step….so its necessary to do like this……..when he is thinking it Annika got fresh up nd came near him…..

They both went to dining….

At the poolside:

Seeing her silence…Maahi want to break it…..he went near her nd standing beside her….

Maahi: bhuk lagrahahai Gudiyaa…plz….shall we go inside….he pleaded….

Hearing it…she closed her eyes a while nd later opening it….looking at him..

Kaal: are you mad…you hv to take medicines….if you stay without breakfast for long time when will you take medicine…..time par medicine lena tabiyat keliye jaroori hai…chalo andar….said she moved from there….

Seeing her he was amzed….he understood… …she just packed her all emotions inside nd to keep him nd the family happy she is behaving like this….thinking it he followed her…

At the Dining:

All gathered at the dining……when she was about to sit in a chair…..

Rudy: Diii…..he shouted….

She was scared hearing his shout….looking at him…

Kaal: wt happened Rudy….

Rudy: aap yaha nahi waha baitna hai…..said pointing the seat at another side….

She doubtedly looked at him…Gauri came to his rescue…..

Gauri: Di….Rudy bhaiyyaka matlab….ususallly we 3 pairs sits this side….so…

Kaal: its okay Gauri….said with a smile she moved to another side….

Shivaay sighed Maahi as to go nd sit beside her….for their trials nd support….he smiled nd moved near Kaal nd sat beside her….she noticed it nd understood ….why Rudy said like that…..she tried to got up from there….

Maahi: plz …Kaal….dont go…I remembered ur condition but here its not applicable….plz cooperate with me….he said in low voice while looking at others with a smile…..

She silently sat adjusting herself…..seeing it others started eating with smiles……

Tej: Kaalagjna…..he called in sudden…..

Kaal: haan….uncle……

Tej: do you know Mr.Chaturvedi…..

Kaal: haa Uncle….

Tej: do you know his son?….

Kaal: haa…..Mr.Rohan Chaturvedi……I know him…..she said thinking why he is asking ….

Others also curiously hearing their convo….

Tej: one week back he met me with a proposal…..

Kaal: oh….he is a gud business man…..she said….

Shivaay didn’t understand why Tej talking about the proposal with Kaal instead of him or Maahi…..

Shiv: o proposal  kya hai bade papa….

Tej: he want to tie up with us in one of our businesses…..

Kaal: oh thats fine Uncle….he had a gud track record…..she said…..

Tej: but he put a condition….

Om: condition?…

Tej: infact its not a condition….its also proposal to tie a relation with us…. …

Jah: but humare Prinku ki match tho final huina….

Tej: no..no…its not related to Prinku….

Jah: matlab…..

Tej: Kaal…..actually ….he want to marry u…..

Hearing it Kaal looked at Tej with a little shock….but Rudy is always Rudy….

Rudy: no way Papa…..he cant marry Di….

Kaal still in shock nd recollecting Tej’s words…

Tej: wy cant he maary Kaal….he asked…

Rudy: iss Devil ko koun sambhalega …Maahi bhaiyyake alava…..ek nahi do nahi kahi baar its proved…..he said ..

Hearing it Kaal was coughed nd choked because of the food that stucked in her throat….she didn’t expect the words from Rudy…..she looked at Maahi …Maahi also looked at her….seeing her condition Annika went near her nd rubbing on her back she gave water to her….taking it Kaal started drinking ….at the same time she saw Pinky who came there to join with them as she just came from the temple…..

Seeing her Kaal want to go from there ….but Maahi held her hand…..

Maahi: Gudiyaa…….dont know why your behavior change in sudden….but plz don’t go …..khana beechmein chodke jaana its not correct….he said in low voice….

Kaal didn’t replied nd tried to relieve his grip….

Maahi: plz….Gudiyaa….if you leave without completing it….i will also go from here…..u know very well about me…..he said…..

Hearing it she sat without lifting head nd luking at others ….waiting for Maahi’s completion ……..Maahi still held her hand….when Maahi completed his breakfast….she immediately stood relieving his grip nd without luking at anyone….she left saying …”sorry guys….u all can carry on”….

Except Maahi nd Tejvi….the others understood why she left from there…..Pinky left from there without saying anything….Maahi confirmed himself that her behavior always changes whenever Pinky is there……he decided himself to know the reason…..

After completing breakfast….they all gathered in the hall….

Annika announced that she selected the dresses for evening party nd kept in their rooms..….after they have a trail …if they confirm it …its okay otherwise she need sometime to arrange another one….they all said okay nd was ready to leave to their rooms….

“hello …..gud morning all….wow wt a pleasure….all the family members ek saath…..i heard so much about ur family…..now I am witnessing it…..i am so lucky to see u all like this.”…saying entered Ms.Rina Mehta…

.they all were stopped….nd looked at her….Rina came near Dadi nd took her blessings….Shivaay introduced her to all ….they all welcomed her with a smile…..after that all the elders left leaving the youngsters….

Kaal just came there as she want water…..she saw Rina….she didn’t understand why she came here……she want to go from there nd turned to leave….bt….

“excuse me Ms…….i know you….even I saw you but where I saw I cant remember…..” said Rina…..

Kaal looked at her….

Shiv: may be u saw her in a business journal….bcz she is Ms.Kaalagjna…..

Rina: o my god…o my god….Ms.Kaalagjna …..the most powerful nd youngest business woman …..o god….how lucky I am….i cant trust my eyes…..saying she went near Kaal nd holding her hands…..

“ you know Maam u r my role model….ohho….not only for me …who started their businesses nd r going to start ….to all of them u r the role model….so many times I want to meet u but I didn’t get the chance….today I am so lucky”….said in excitement….

Kaal felt some uneasiness as she didn’t like this type of situations…..she looked at others as plz save me…..

Suddenly….

Rina: Mr.Maahi….aapne jiske baaremein kahatha…..wo ye thi…..she asked with a loving smile…..looking at Maahi….

Maahi nodded in yes saying thanks to god ………..

Rina: so perfect…if you don’t mind….i will take a pic….plz…plz….plz…..she requested……

“sure”…saying Maahi came near Kaal nd stood beside her…..she didn’t understand about whom she asking …..before she could ask…..

Rina: Mr.Maahi…plz stand in close……she requested….

“why not”…said….keeping his hand around Kaal’s waist he slightly pulled her to his side….

She was already in confusion …..with his act she was shocked ….she looked at Maahi….at the same time Rina clicked the image saying “perfect”…

She shockingly looked at Rina…….she came near them ….

Rina: congratulations….you both r made for each other….kisika nazar na lage tum donomko….thanks for this lovely pic….just ek selfie….said standing beside Kaal….she took a selfie…..

“O my god,,,I am so excited..i cant express my happiness in words…..i hv to share this with my friends as I met Ms.Kaal nd took a pic with her…..okay guys…I will meet u all later …..bye”….said she left in hurry….

They all surprisedly looked at her….Kaal didn’t comeout from the shock that got bcz of Rina’s words…..Maahi still stood in the same pose….

Sumo: she is very nice….

Om: wt she said ….its true…..

Kaal looked at them nd understood wts going on…..she pushed Maahi in force….….

Kaal: don’t be smart Mr.Maahi….remember the condition  nd be in ur limits …said she left to her room in anger….

But she didn’t know ……within hours she herself earse the limits which she put …..how nd why….continue ur read to know it…..

Maahi looked at her….others were shocked for her behavior….they all looked at Maahi….

At the same time…..

Kaal slowly walking towards her room…..she started thinking about her behavior towards Maahi…..

“aisa behave karna kyom aur ab usske baare mein sochna kyom”….questioned her heart…..

“shut up”….she murmured….

“you always scares of me…issliye shut up bolke mujeh rokna chahethe hai tu…”

“no ..nothing like that”….she said…

“really….then go nd say sorry to him”….heart said ….

She was stopped nd think a while she turned nd came to hall but hearing their convo she was stopped…..

Anni: don’t misunderstand her behavior…..

Shiv: don’t take her words serious….

Maahi: why should I be serious at her nd misunderstand her when I know wt she is …..he asked them……

Sumo: you mean you didn’t hurt for her behavior bhaiyya….she questioned….

Maahi: why should I hurt when I crossed the limits….

Om: means….

Maahi: when I asked her a wish she accepted with a condition….i agreed for it…..now wt I did its out of line….right……her reaction is quiet natural for my action nd an expected one…so there is no hurt nd no anger ….he said…

Hearing it they all mesmerisedly looked at him for his understanding nature…….

Anni: really Kaal is so lucky….

Shiv: helloo….ladka hai koun…..

Anni: aahahhaaa…..humari jaise ladkiyom aapke zindagimein naa aathe tho aapka yeh samajdaari ka insaan kabhi bahar naa aathe….haina girls….

Sumo: u r right bhabhi….

Anni: I am always right….but this bagad billa didn’t accept….

Shiv: Anniikkkaaaa….

Maahi: arrey yaar….harbaath par ladna tum donomki adath hai kya…..

Shiv: mein nahi yaar….this girlna….patha nahi kahase shurukarthe hai….

Anni: hello…remember who started first….

Rudy: Bhaiyya….they started again…lets go…I am feeling hungry….hv to prepare something….said he dragged Maahi to the kitchen…OmRi nd Sumo followed them….

When they entered kitchen ….seeing Kaal ….they were surprised….she saw them but she didn’t say anything nd started preparing lunch……

Hello….thank you for reading….how is it…..plz do comment nd support through likes….thank you ……will meet with another…until then stay tuned to read…bye…..take care……

 

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  1. so cute

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you??

  2. ???????? post next asap

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you dear ??sure will post soon.

  3. Hey phanikiran,
    Can u please suggest some actress for the role of Kaal because I thought of Jennifer winglet but I don’t think she will look good with Nakul. Sol please suggest some…..

    1. Phanikiran

      Hi Aditi.. Sorry dear.. I didn’t hv much knowledge about the Hindi Serial actors nd actresses… Even i didn’t know perfectly about the cast of my Telugu serials… So plz select the actress for Kaal character urself.. Nd tell me whom u selected… ?thanks for the love… The one nd only show that i watch is Ishqbaaz.. ??

  4. Nikita_jai29

    It is nice one dear.. Maahi understanding about kaal is lovely… Don’t make kaal so nervous infront of maahi…

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you dear??the next will be a lovely one. Definitely u will like it… ??

  5. Alekhika20

    Nyc update

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you dear Alekhika20 for this continuous support ??

  6. ItsmePrabha

    Akka, MaahiKa are Magically beautiful couple.. cant stop adoring them.. this update is amazing… Will be eagerly waiting for the next..

    1. Phanikiran

      Thank you Chelli for this comment. ????

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