EK NAYI SHURUVAATH…..ZINDAGIKA (an ISHABAAZ fanfiction by phanikiran #epi 58)

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Episode: 58

Days are passing……every day the boys nd girls visiting Kaal…..they all enjoying the time while spending with Maahi….seeing their behavior with Maahi….Kaal felt happy……her injuiries are also getting healed bcz of the rest as they didn’t allow her to do a single work….Maahi temporaily takeover her business work nd managing it with the help of Rosy nd Nandan from home.….

Maahi is not like Shivaay…..he is a person of all emotions…..he know how to behave with each of them as per their mentality….in that short time he became their favorite like Shivaay….he is also enjoying their company which he missed until this day…..the bond increasing day by day between them….without meeting Maahi nd Kaal …their day didn’t complete…. they all are almost edicted to Maahi’s  company….

One day …Shivaay was amazed noticing Maahi’s skills of managing Kaal’s business when he is talking on phone with Nandan nd explaining to him about the plan of action…..seeing Shivaay….Rosy came near him….

Rosy:  Sir….aap ….

Shiv: Maahii!?….

Rosy: aap jo dekh rahahai wo sach hai sir….this is all bcz of Kaal maam…..

Shiv: matlab…..

Rosy: Sir changed himself as per Maam’s wish…said she left to answer the call….

Shivaay looked at Maahi…..why Kaal want to change Maahi…..nd why Maahi changed himself for her ….wts going on…..thinking it he stood there observing him…

One day after completing a departmental camp…..Ranveer came to meet MaahiKa…..when he entered inside …..Annika saw him…..he didn’t noticed Annika nd left to Kaal’s room….

Anni: o beti ki…yeh cheater yaha kyon aaya….saying she followed him….

Ranv: gud morning….how r u now Kaal……he wished nd enquired at a time coming inside the room….

MaahiKa looked at him nd smiled…….

Kaal: how r u Ranveer….waise congrats for successfully completing ur another level in training….she wished him….

Ranv: how did you know…

Maahi: Ranveer….har jagah inki khabri hai….he said with a smile…..

Kaal: Annika….come inside….she called noticing Annika who is standing at the door looking at Ranveer….

Annika came inside nd  stood with a doubt….

Kaal: aisa kyon dekhrahiho….yeh koi bhooth vooth nahi…..

Anni: insaan tho bhi nahina…..

Kaal: inka insaaniyeth tu khabi dekhi nahi……kaise bathayegi tu inke baaremein…..she asked with a smile……

Anni: u don’t know Kaal….how he tortured Prinku…

Kaal: jaise Shivaay tumko torture ki aise ya unse jyada…..

Annika was shocked hearing it…..

Anni: don’t compare with Shivaay…..yeh laayak bhi nahi….she said in anger…..

Kaal smiled…..

Kaal: insaaniyeth kabhi kabhi chupanapadithi hai Annika…..

ANni: yeh kya kiya …tum..

Kaal: mein jaanthihu…jo isne kiya wo sab majboorise kiya…..*( I know ….wt he did its all bcz of compulsion)*

Anni: kaise majboorithi wo…ek ladki ki izzath se khelne ko tayyar huvatha….

Kaal: Annika….i know about ur background nd ur family…even I know ur sister’s whereabouts….do u want to know it r not….she asked looking at her….

For her sudden change of topic nd her question not ony Annika but Maahi nd Ranveer also didn’t understand …why she changed topic nd wt she asked…

Kaal: kya tum janna chahetheho ya nahi…bol…

Anni: really u know about my sister….she questioned her with distrust……

Kaal: of course….do you want to know r not…

Anni: plz Kaal…if you know plz tell me where is my Chutki nd how is she…

Kaal: I will tell you but before that you will do one thing…will you….

Anni: really u know about her….then tell me what will I do….

Kaal: simple….you should insult Oberois infront of the media nd to tell how Shivaay tortured you….R u ready to do it…if u cant u never get ur Chutki’s details bol….

This time not only Maahi nd Ranv…Shivaay …who stood outside the room….who came to meet Kaal to talk on a business deal …was stopped hearing their convo……nd hell shocked hearing her words….

Annika shockingly looked at Kaal….she didn’t trust her ears….

Kaal: kyahuva…..tu karoge ya nahi….take ur own time….she said..

Maahi: Kaal….hosh mein ho tu…kya baath karrahihai tu ….he asked in anger…

Kaal smiled nd said….

Kaal: shock lagina…if anybody tell like this…to know about ourselves nd our family …shall we do it r not…..right…

Annika nodded her head in yes nd no…..thinking about her words….

Kaal:  (with smile) Ranveer bhi yehi situation mein hatkatha uss samay….he want to know his family details…for this reason he behaved like that….Oberois smartness defeated him…he lost the last way of knowing about his family forever …am I right Ranveer….she asked looking at him…

Ranv: how did you know it…..

She smiled…

Kaal: mein janthihu tumhari majboori….unke peechhe wajabhi…mein yeh bhi janthihu ye sab ki peechhe insaan hai koun…she said….

*( I know about ur situation nd the reason behind ur behavior…I even know the person behind the situation..)*

“tumhaari majboori hai kya mujhse baath chupaaneki….Kaal”…saying Shivaay entered inside….

Seeing him…

Kaal: Shivaay…good morning….plz yaar give me permission to get down from this bed nd allow me to do my work…its so boring yaar…she pleaded…

Shiv: don’t divert the topic…Kaal…I want to talk with you right now…..he said….

Looking at him…she understood….

Kaal: Ranveer….wait in my office room….she almost said with an authoritative voice….

Noticing the change in her voice Ranv understood….

“yes Maam …I will wait…” said he left from there….

Kaal: Annika…plz…she said…

But Annika looked at Shivaay….

Shiv: plz …Annika….its important to talk with her right now….he said…..

Annika doutedly looking at Shivaay nd Kaal….she left….When Maahi got up nd was about to leave…Kaal stopped him…

Kaal: ruko Maahi….said she looked at Shiv….

Shivaay closed the door nd turning to her……

Shiv: bol….hai kya tumhari majboori……*(tell me wts your compulsion behind your behavior…)*

Kaal: aisa kya tha tumhaari majboori Annika se shaadi honeke baad bhi Tia se shaadi karne ko tyaar huvatha…she asked him very softly……

Shivaay was shocked hearing her question…..

Shiv: how did u know….he questioned….

She smiled…..

Kaal: Shiv….bhoolnamath…mein wahi Kaal hu……bcz of the promise that I did to you…….i didn’t interefere in the matters that related to Oberois….iska mathlab yeh nahi mein tum sabko bhulgayi ya chodgayi….i just left the Mansion but not the Oberoi family….(in mind***wt u know….i know it Shivaay…..but wt I know…..you didn’t hv any idea on it…..***)..come on Shivaay….tell me…wts ur compulsion behind ur behavior….”mein tumhari muhse sunna chahithi Shiv”…she stressed it while saying…..

Shiv: u mean….

Kaal: wt i say…..come on …tumhari jawab shayad tumhari sawalomko jawab desaktheho…..

Shiv looked at her…..she didn’t show any feelings on her face…few seconds he stood in silence….Maahi looked at Shiv without any expression….she didn’t say a single word nd started waiting for Shivaay’s response….he understood that she continues that silence until he open up …..finally…..

Shiv: someone told me that ONE OF THE OBEROI HEIRS IS AN …….IS AN……

She looked at him for his breaks….

Shiv: IS AN ILLIGITIMATE…..he felt some uneasiness while saying….

Maahi shockingly looked at Shivaay….Kaal didn’t react for his words….

Shiv: Mrs.Kapoor …taking the advantage of this one….she blackmailed me nd forced me to marry Tia….he said

Kaal: without clarifying u accepted it….she questioned….

Shiv: in that situation I didn’t hv much time…..so first I accepted it to get some time to know the truth….later I solved it with the help of Annika and OmRu…..nd destroyed the pen drive which hv this matter…….

Kaal: when did it happen…..she questioned….

Shiv: you didn’t know?…..

Kaal: Shiv…plz…

Shiv: 2/3 months before ur return…..

Kaal: who told you….

Seeing her balanced nature they were surprised…..

Shiv:  is it necessary to know the person name….

Kaal: its necessary to me…she said….

Shiv: Kaal……leave it….

Kaal: well tell me one thing…..who is that heir….she asked..

Shiv: don’t know…..but as per her words its related to …he stopped in mid looking at Maahi…

Kaal: don’t worry Shiv….u can say it….

But Shiv didn’t know wts going on in Maahi’s mind……he is thinking about the truth….the truth that he want to hide from Shiv….did he know it…..he became worry about Shiv….

Shiv: related to Om…shayad….

Kaal looked him with a little doubt as something is missed…..observing her Maahi felt something is there…

Kaal: Shiv…..who is she….she again asked….

Shiv: leave it yaar….its over….

Kaal: Shiv…plz tell me…..

Looking at her….

Shiv: if anybody told it may be I didn’t trust but DAI MAA told  me…

Hearing Dai Maa’s name …a frown appeared on her forehead…..

Kaal: Dai maa! R u sure….she asked…

Shiv: of course I am sure…..he confirmed….

Looking at Shiv….her lips took a curve with smile nd later it turned to a loud laugh…….she got down from the bed nd keeping hand on her stomach she continued her laugh…..ShivaAhi didn’t understand her nature….

Shiv: wt happened…..y r u laughing….he asked….

But she continued her laugh without giving reply….

Shiv: r u mad…..y r u laughing….he asked in anger…..

Seeing his anger…..trying to control her laugh….she sighed as just a minute…I will tell u…

She moved to the side table nd poured water into the glass…she started drinking but remembering his words….she laughed again nd water came out nd she coughed….

“Kaal”…they both at a time called her….looking at them….controlling her laugh…

Kaal:  SHIVAAY….TUM KABSE AATHMONSE BAATH KARNA SHURU KIYA….  ** (from when did you start talking with souls)**….completing the question she fell in the sofa while laughing….

He was shocked for her question…

Shiv: wt nonsense u r talking Kaal….he shouted with anger…

Controlling her laugh….

Kaal:  marehui insaanse baath karneko sirf eki raasta hai Shivaay…..am I right Maahi….asked looking at Maahi nd turning to Shivaay….

“when did you start the practice of this new activity without my notice….” She questioned…..

Shiv: are u mad….Dai Maa marchuki!!??….how did you know….infact u didn’t meet her before….you never see her….how did you know her…

Kaal: Shiv…in childhood every year I met her along with Naani…she knew me….you didn’t know about it…until I left this country I met her ….….again I met her when she was on her death bed….

Shiv: are u sure…may be she was died after  I met her….he said looking at her…

But Maahi mind started analizing her words nd silently stood observing her….but after hearing her answer both ShivaAhi were shocked…..

Kaal: do (2 years) saal pehle marihui insaan tumse kaisi mili Shivaay…..she questioned while coming near to him…..

Shiv: wt ???

Seeing Shivaay in shock Maahi understood his condition…..

Kaal: yes Shivaay…its true….Dai maa ki mauth meri aankhomke saamne hui…..unki anthim sanskar mein khud meri haathom se karvaayithi…..she confirmed….

Shivaay remembered Mrs.Kapoor’s words nd  how she stopped Dai Maa when she saying the matter while interefering in mid nd how she diverted him……

Shiv: it means wo sab Mrs. Kapoor ki chawl thi…..

Hearing it….Maahi went near Shivaay nd keeping his hand on him….

Maahi: Shiv……don’t think too much about the past incidents…..its over….…..

For his words he came out from the thoughts…..

Maahi: 2 years back is this the reason behind ur sudden visit to India ????he questioned Kaal turning to her…..

Hearing it she looked at him with widened eyes…..Shivaay surprisedly looked at Maahi…….

Kaal: so u r trying to know about me nd my acts …..right….

Shivaay looked at Maahi for his answer ……(thinking in mind as) how did he know about her visit to India….which I didn’t know until she told herself….why he is trying to know about her….wts going on in his mind….nd wts going on between the both……

Maahi: ur question is not the answer to my question Kaal….he said….

Kaal: really…then try to get the details if u r able…..she challenged him…..

Maahi: don’t challenge me…..he said…..

Kaal: if I challenge you….

Hearing their convo….Shivaay was surprised as he simply seeing himself in Maahi not only that he is witnessing another side of Kaal which is new to him as until this day he didn’t see her like this….she never allow others to challenge her nd she never challenge others as her decision is the final one..now she indirectly instigating Maahi…..

Maahi: its not good for you Gudiyaa…..if I want I will get it from you….he said looking at her eyes…..

Shivaay got  another surprise when Maahi called her as Gudiyaa bcz no one call her with that name except Dadi…..how did he knew that name…..

She smiled……. When she was about to say something…her phone started ringing…..she looked at the display nd answered……

Kaal: bol….

OS: ………….

Kaal: I am coming…..said …disconnecting the call she looked at Maahi…..

Kaal: if u r able…..then try it……challenging him she left from there opening the door…….

Maahi smiled nd looking at Shivaay….

Maahi: wt happened Shivaay….aisa kyom dekh raheho mujeh….he questioned……

Just then Annika entered inside the room after seeing Kaal who left with Ranveer…..

Anni: wt happened Shiv…..did she tell anything…

He looked at Annika……turning to Maahi….

Shiv: wts going on in ur mind…..he questioned…..

For his question Annika worriedly looked at Maahi….

But Maahi smiled…..

Maahi:  I know Shivaay….u accepted me as ur brother bcz of Kaal nd the promise that u did to her……still u hv doubt on me……u didn’t trust me until I prove myself…right….he asked

Shiv: mera matlab wo nahi Maahi……

Maahi: no need of explanation Shiv…..i can understand bcz I introduced myself in that manner nd tried to cheat u…infact that’s not my original nature…..i agree I am bad but not too bad….i even agree I am not like you but I will do anything for you Shiv ….bcz u r my brother……ur family is mine also if u accept it or not…..nd moreover I am ready to do anything if it relates to Kaal bcz she is the reason for me to live in this world…..trust me Shivaay…..said patting on his shoulder he left from there…..

Hearing his words nd seeing his moist filled eyes….Shivaay felt a little pain inside……

Anni: why r u hurting Maahi….u didn’t trust him….she asked….

Shiv: until this day I hv a doubt …but now its cleared…..lets go….said left from there…..

Annika confusedly looked at him….

Anni: uffff….donom bhai ek jaise hai…..kissikobhi aasanise samajmein nahi aatha….everytime I felt that I understood Shivaay..but every time he shows new color….now adding to him two more people are there to understand….my learning about understanding this tadibaaz walom never ends…..saying she followed Shiv…..

Kaal dropped Ranveer on the way instructing him wt to do nd she left to Triple S office……she entered inside the office….staff wished him nd enquired about her wellness….she wished them nd saying thanks to them for their concern she entered into Khadir’s chamber….seeing her….he stood nd wished her while inviting nd showed the chair….

After sitting in that he showed the file which hv some details about the person whom she ordered to search…..when she is checking it….

Khadir: Maam…..how is Maahi sir….did he asked anything…..he enquired…..

Kaal: yeah …he is fine….said checking the file…nd few seconds later she got his another question…..

Kya poocha aapne….Maahi Sir asked anything……wt do you mean of it…..

Khad: wo ….wo…Maam….actually….

Kaal: Mr.Khadir…..tell me wt happened…..she asked with a commanding voice…..

Noticing the change in her voice…..he narrated wt happened when he left after meeting her…nd how Maahi confronted him…..hearing Mr.Mehta’s name…..nd wt he told him…..

Hearing it she softly smiled….seeing her smile he relaxed a little…..

Kaal: (in mind) …oh issliye he questioned me…..thinking it….well …don’t worry Mr.Khadir….infact I expected it….one day he definitely will try to know about me nd my acts….but he started it early…..i know he is smart…..bhai kiska….khoon aisa hai tho …behavior bhi aisa hi hogana….well one day he will definitely come here to meet u Mr.Khadir….enjoy…..she said with a smile….

He was shocked for her words…..nd remembering Maahi nd his way of confronting him…..he was scared…..

The day passed….at  night….

Oberoi Mansion ::

After completing dinner Shivaay sitting at the poolside started thinking about Kaal’s behavior nd Maahi’s words……nd trying to join the dots….

Himself:  wts going on between Maahi nd Kaa?l……she challenged Maahi…..why?…..Maahi called her Gudiyaa…how did he know her name?……

2 years back she came India….but she didn’t contact anybody ….why???

Wt he said?……he is ready to do anything for Kaal ….why he said like that?…..wt its mean?…..

Haan….from last one month her behavior changed a lot….isski peechhe ki wajah Maahi hosaktha hai kya?…..

Annika came there nd seeing Shivaay…..

Anni: still r u thinking about Maahi…..she questioned….

Shiv: no Annika…I am thinking about his words …..

Anni: abhibhi aapko unnpar bharosa nahi haina…..

Shiv: Annika….i am not talking or thinking about my trust on him….i am thinking about his words that he said about Kaal…..

Anni: matlab….

Shiv: do u remember wt he said…..why he said that….aisa karneko wo kyo tayyar hai…..

Anni: shall I ask one thing…..

Shiv: haan ….bol…

Anni: r u ready to do anything for me or not….

Shiv: Annikaa….

Anni: bolonaa…..

Shiv: tu mera jaan hai Annika….tumahareliye mein kuchbhi karoonga…..

Anni: aap jo bola wahi aapka bhai Maahi …Kaal ke baaremein bolatha…..still didn’t you get it…..

Shiv looked at her……

Shiv: iska matlab wo donom pyaar mein…

Anni: ek minute…when did I say they both r in love….

Shiv: wt do u mean Annika….tu abhi bolithina….wy r you confusing me…

Anni: hello tadibaaz billuji….mein sirf Maahi ke baaremein boli…wobhi unke baathomke baaremein….how did I know about Kaal….

Shiv: u mean only Maahi  hv feelings on her….not Kaal….

Anni: how did I know…..but one thing is sure…Kaal ki changing behavior ki peechhe wajah tho Maahi hoga…….kuch tho ho rahahai….pathalagana hai…..she said imitating CID ACP Pradyuman……

just then entered OmRi nd RuMya….seeing her bhabhi’s act….

Rudy: Annika Bhabhi…aap achanak ACP Pradyuman kyo bani….aur kis baremein patha lagana hai…..

Anni: come…come…come….come near…..said she moved two steps….

They all formed a circle nd she said wt Maahi told Shivaay….

Om: it means Maahi hv strong feelings on Kaal…. Right

Anni: don’t know Om….wo feelings strong ya nahi….pathalagana hai…..

Somu: wt about Di…..

Anni: ufff…..Kaal……Shivaay se kam nahi wo….itni aasaan nahi unki dil ki baath pathalagana……aur ek taraf Maahi…..he just said he can do anything for her……..but he didn’t open directly…….to know the matter hum kitni plans banaanaa padegi ab…….

Gauri: phikar kis baath ki……hum haina…..pathalagalenge……..she said in her style…..

Om smiled knowing about her talent…….

Anni: then why late…..start our plan of action….

Somu: well from tomorrow onwards our Mission LoveHiKa will start….

Rudy: wt is this LoveHiKa……

They all looked at her with the same expression….

Somu: Love of Maahi bhaiyya nd Kaal…..she said…..

Oh….okay …..done……they all said at a time nd left to their rooms saying gud night to each other…….

 

Hello guys…..how is it…..in next you will read about how the Obros nd Obroi Bahus started their Mission LoviHiKa……but they don’t know How Kaal moving her pawns to clear the way for Maahi to enter into OM……you will read in coming episodes……until then bye…..

One minute….dont forget to comment nd giving ur support……thank you….stay tuned to read….bye….take care…….meet soon….

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  1. Sorry but one thing shiv ke liye anika important hai ki nai kabhi dikha hi nai jaise uske liye kaal or family hai wo dikhta hai ,jaise aj usne bola to anika bhar bhej diya but Mahi that Na are wo uski wife hai,Maine kabhi nai dekha wo kaal or family ke uper anika ke bare Mai space.

    1. Phanikiran

      thank you for the kind review….dear

  2. Alekhika20

    Superb update

    1. Phanikiran

      thanks alot….Alekhika20

  3. Nice one
    Siwani I agree with you
    Pl show some trust and respect for between shivay and annika

    1. Phanikiran

      thank you Chaithu….for ur kind review…

  4. Nikita_jai29

    It is amazing dear

    1. Phanikiran

      thank you dear….next will follow soon

  5. Whoa!! Beautiful episode… and a good build up to the next twist…. Mission LoveHiKa !!!!
    Super excited for Mission LoveHiKa !!! Hamare ACP Pradyuman, Jagga Jasoos aur Karamchand… Sab pata laga lenge!!!

    1. Phanikiran

      thanks for the support Firooza..

  6. ItsmePrabha

    amazing update …loved the way how billu is observing maahi..and yeh kaal normal insaan nahi hai ekdum antaryami hai..sab pata hotha haina usko..loved mahika scene as always..par iss baar billu ki confused state dekh kar hasi aa rahi hai..absolutely loved the way how anudi explained the matter to billu..and now eagerly waiting for Mission LoveHiKa..post when ever you are free..Take Care..

    1. Phanikiran

      thank you Prabha for this love towards the FF…

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