Ek kahani (manmarziyan)

Hi guys.. Its been so many days there r no ff of mmz
I’m fan of mmz.. And silent reader of ff of mmz and swaragini..
I wanna write a ff but never dared bcuz of my poor writing skills..
Finally I have decided to write as there r very less ff these days..
Continuing of this is based on ur comments..
I request silent readers to comment for my sake once .. Plz..
I wish u all like it.. Here it goes…

At Nalanda college, Mrng:
A girl is parking her scooty, she unlocks her scooty and prays ” God.. Its first day of my college plzz save me from ragging.. Plzz..”
Meanwhile a fellow parking fews vehicles away notice this and smiles n leaves…
This same girl thinking” why this faltoos didn’t came yet..??”
She takes her phone and dails contact names faltoos..
Ringing.. Ringing.. But didn’t lift..
This girl irked” idiot, it’s first day still he is late,really idiot,stupid,donkey”
Cursing him near her breath she dailled again
Ringing…. He lifted it..
From other end: hey sweetheart.. Stop cursing.. I will be there in 15 mins Radhu..
Radhika(girl): come fast faltoos…plzz.. I’m very tensed…
Other end: okay baba.. Cmng.. Y so tensed, I will there in few mins.. By the way did u get it..??
Radhu: yes staring a big box infornt of her which she bought…

Meanwhile radhika thinking whether to get inside or wait her…
Finally she decided to take few steps into her new CLG…

Radhika walked into CLG..its was beautiful atmosphere with green trees covering almost every inch of ground except fews parts of the ground. She smiled seeing the atmosphere holding that big box in her both hands wrapping around it…

While enjoying she hears someone calling her n turns to see…
She sees a group of boys seeing on bench under a tree.
She is sure they r seniors n ready for ragging, so she thought of running away but dropped her idea, bcuz she knows further effects of that.
So, she briskly walked to them, thinking “when will this faltoos come.? Faltoos come fast..plzz” with her tensed face too..

A boy from that group starts pointing her features” big n beautiful eyes but covered with spects, chubby cheeks but no pinkness, face features r really perfect but no makeup, first day to CLG in chudidar which covers ur shapes,no heels n completely flats, so sad, she completely different bro..”
Another boy: what’s ur name.??
Radhika: radhika sir.
Boy: this girl sounds boring yaar…
Another: no yaar something interesting, whatever we have to rag her as she is first for ur ragging.
All laughs.
Radhika got scared n thinks” omg, they r gng to rag u radhika, try escape, god save naa.plzz,these much partially towards ur devotes, can’t u see ur Radhu..plzz..”
Meanwhile a boy comes there n all gives HiFi to him n he smiles.
Radhika is staring ground praying god.
She hears someone asked” leave that girl, she is so scared, leave her”
He is same boy who gave HiFi to all n smiled at Radhu in parking place.
Boy in that group: what happens arjun, y to leave her, that too our first contest, no I’m not gng to leave her..”
Arjun: I said leave na.. Leave her.. U go.. Radhu can feel seriousness in his voice.
Staring ground she left that place. Arjun stared fews seconds at her n turned to his frds notices that all r staring him that he is staring at Radhu.
Akhil(one of the group): hey arjun, stop staring her n start staring at the ppl who r staring at u ( rasied right eyebrow indicated someone)
Arjun turns to see n gives angry stare to that girl n turns.

Credit to: Deepthi

38 comments

  1. ? Ameena ?

    Ohhh deepthi u listened to my heart….wow from the beginning u r making me soo excited….wow arjun is just superb….plzz continue and update sOOn….u r story is making crazy already…and I m soo cuz it is mmz ff…these days only few ppl including me r updating…nd many ppl who used to updater just lost….plz definitely continue this one….
    One lovee?

    ❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥❤♥

  2. nikki

    hey deepthi good start dear. liked it a lot
    i also think the same
    nowadays the mmn ff are depleting too much
    and frankly i am not interested in ff for any other serial
    plz continue
    eagerly waiting for the next part
    love u dear

  3. manha

    deepthi really thank u so much. It is like u hav listened to our heart. i’m already loving it n so excited. so faltoos is neil. arjun staring n smiling at radz. u r just superb. intro was just toooo gud. plz update regularly. thank u .

  4. Hareem

    Woooooooooooooooooooow one more Awesooooooooooome ff…loved it

    Heyyyyyyy Deepthi dear…thank u sooooooooooooo much..for giving such a fantaaaaaabulous update…
    Ur writing skill is not poor u r writing amazing nd plzzz continue it….
    kEEp sMiLiNG alwaaaayzzz..☺

    Love u LOooadZzz?

  5. Geethu

    Yaar it’s awsmmnm…
    Pls continue this don’t giveup yaar..
    Many mmz are not continued perfectly we are very eager on you..
    Plsss continue it….
    <3<3<3<3<3<3

    (g)(g)(g)(g)

  6. Hayathi

    Plzzz yaar dont make traingle type of stories dr…. i lije only arjun radhika neil sam… thanks for writing ff dr

  7. nandhini

    Super yaar.really I am happy that you overcome your doubts and advent yourself
    Please keep writing frequently and give big updates

  8. Abbz

    Superrrrrrrr !!!!!!!♥♥♥♥♥♥was waitin 4 mmz ff ….. u gav it 2 me darling …… thankssss … pls continue and b regular naaaa plssssssss ♥♥♥♥♥

  9. roseboobi

    U r right deepthi.i think first days of ff page gives more imp to manmarziyaan.but after a month we saw that no one are not write regular ff of mqnmarziyaan.actually i started the reading of ff only for manmarziyaan.i dont know where the
    writers of ff manmarziyaan like kfar etc are going?i request all of u pls cont the ff of manmarziyaan.

  10. bhavna

    Hey dear evn i m fan of mmz n swaraginis ff…n plz ctn…nt bcoz no one updts their stry bt coz ur stry is vv good.. keep wrtng.. ????????

  11. aastha

    Deepthi dnt tell u dnt know HW 2 write……i lvd it……seriously I lvd it……

    Wow Arjun staring at rads te 1stfay itself…..nesam n ardhika in same clg…
    Continue writing………love u …..

  12. Shree

    Aich.. This is chooooo cuteeeee !! I’m looooovvvvvoliiiinnnnggg iiittttt !!!! Radz junior and arjun’s senior… Nice … He let her go … Awwww chhhooooo chweettt .. Hope all of us had seniors like that….

    I lived it deepthi … It’s good to see ppl starting to write ffs …. Waiting eagerly for the next one.. Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug

  13. nisha

    Hey deepthi dear woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

    Aawaz ho to aisi . dear wow what an awesome start dear loved it a lot a freshness in the story I loved it fully and going to read regularly for sure. Loved the sweet character of
    rads and our arjun oooooooooooooooooh saving rads from rags ( ragging ) loved it and totally your writing skills are amazing fabulous dear Not saying it just usually its actually awesome.

    Hey deepthi , I already told u before that your name is similar of my special dear one and you are also dear and close to my heart somehow dear I made a special relation with u my dear friend . I am so sorry and apologizing for not updating actually the situations are not in my favour of writing . I do want to write dear and soon gonna update the next part . But this time is not meant for me this time is to celeberate my dear friend story Ek kahani manmarziyaan.

    Congratulation sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.

    and I do want you to update regularly dear . at least when I can’t be able to update I can read and visit here to meet my sweetheart deepthi friend.

    hey I am eagerly waiting for the next one dear. Love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much always by heart. You can’t imagine even how much I am happy to see ur name here love u by heart tight hugs for u my dear muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

    Keep smiling deepthi I want u to always smile dear and yeah Belated but Merry christmass dear May god give u lots of happiness and wellness to ur family also.

    Once a friend always a friend.

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