Ek kahani (manmarziyan) episode 22

Thank you so much guys for ur comments,waiting for ur comments. Happy to see comments from silent readers. Thanks for commenting Natasha, deeva,usha n dev.. All others are not new to me,as I always love to read your comments..
And harani: ur asking the same question for 3rd time, age doesn’t matters in love.still u can’t imagine,Think Neil is elder than Sam..!!
Zayn: I’m from Andhra n I know that ur from telangana.
Ameena, shreya, bhavna, hayathi, shree, feby, manha, krishna, brin, shuba, devi, ananya, niharika n Vivi n other silent readers n regular readers like aastha,abi,cherry,roma, mittu, snehahari, lakshmi,arushi, anii, cherry, akshitha, shaheen, dhara, susi, dipanwati, hareem, abisa, jasvin, subhadha, Rachana, akhila, heeral, gauri, pani, liya, anwesha, sundari, rina, chandini n others, whom I don’t remember. I tried to remember all ur names but unfortunately I remember only few. Sorry.. I’m sure I missed few names.. thank you soooooo much guys for commenting..

The episode starts with radhika opening n getting relieved seeing them both happy. Just then, arjun receives call from his dad. He lifts it.
Arjun: haa.. dad..?!
Raghav: aruu beta…!! Please go to the address which I messaged u. its important.
Arjun: but dad… raghav cuts him off.
Raghav: no more excuses arjun, make sure that u will reach their in time. Its related to our company issue.
Arjun: okay..!! just for u only. He ended the call n turned to radhika,who is congratulating neil n sam n said “congrats guys..!! see u soon, I have some urgent work” he said n turned radhika for approval. She blinked her eyes in approval manner, while neil n sam r not aware of this. He bid bye n left.

Arjun reached the address n it’s a mall. He thought “company issue..?? that too in mall..??” he walks in n took his phone to clear whether the address msgd is correct or not.?? But stopped, when a hand caught hold of his arm. Its Avani.
Avani: hy arjun…
Arjun: what are u dng here..??
Avani: dad msgd me to be here in 1hr, so im here.
Arjun: so now, I got it, y dad msgd me..!!
Avani: so, they want us to meet so, they did this. Whatever..!! leave it. We already arrived naa.. come to shopping with me. Please..!! I didn’t get any of my frds for shopping.so come naa..!! I promise that u will enjoy my company.
Arjun nodded reluctantly n walked with her into mall. Both had a frdly talk. Arjun liked her company. Both sat down in restaurant inside the mall talking, arjun talked about neil n things happened in mrng.

Radhika, neil n sam are in full happy in clg. Radhika declared party to celebrate the drastic change in neil’s behavior n life too. Neil n sam happily agreed. All 3 fed to the same mall,which arjun n avani present. Radhika n sam decided to shop. Sam n radhika became frds in no time during shopping. Both liked each other’s taste, which made their bond more stronger. Sam thought “bhai…!! U r selection is best, radhika is really so sweet”. Just then, radhika observed arjun chatting n smiling with a girl n burned with jealous. (god: I got full clarity about u r future arjun,get ready.hehee..)
Radhika: come guys..!! lets go n have some food. Im hungry. Neil n sam nodded n walked towards restaurant. Arjun got up to get food n radhika saw him going.
Radhika: neil n sam.. u both go n sit, I will just come. She said n left. Nesam both looked around found every table filled.
Sam: neil…. See that table, only one girl is sitting there(pointing a avani’s table), come. We will sit there. He nodded n both walked n asked “excuse me, can we sit here, is there anyone here.?” Avani looked at nesam n said “yeah..!! sure”.
Sam: thank you…
Neil: hmm… corner table, good for romacing..!! he said looking at the view through glass wall. Avani looked him sharply, sam who observed this, pinched him.
Neil: oouchh…. Sam…!!
Sam: not only we both r here, there r few ppl around us.. indicating avani,who acting as she is dng something in her mobile. Neil turned to avani n said.
Neil: hai Miss.beautiful, this is neil. Forwarding his hand, sam turned her face in jealousy.(god: see.. flirting with girls infornt of his own gf, thinks he is not aware of his future)
Avani: hii.. im avani..Avani gupta… with a bit attitude, extending her hand. Both shake n she looked at sam, who is at jealousy. Neil looked at sam.
Neil: see avani.. these girls so jealous when there bf talks with any girl. Sam gave a plastered smile.
Avani: so, she is ur gf.. (god: after this much clarity convo, also she is asking such a question)
Neil: nope..!!(sam turned) my everything…he said staring her lovingly. Sam smiled. (god: I think he got saved this time)

Arjun, at counter, ordering food. He felt a cool breeze n turned to see radhika. He surprised n smiled but she gave angry look n walked out.
Arjun: what happen to this girl suddenly..?? he ran after her, calling her, but she didn’t listen. He held her hand n pulled her close to him. It’s a bit isolated part of mall. She banged to him,he held her waist tightly, she closed her feeling his touch on her waist.
Arjun: y r u angry at me..?? radhika came to sense with his question.
Radhika: y did u came, seems u r busy with u r urgent work. Go… she said pouting.
Arjun(confused): urgent work..??he realizes after a while n says… so, my girl is jealous… with naughty smile.
Radhika: no… im not, y should i..??
Arjun: u should…(touched her forehead with his) only u should, bcuz only u have right to show u r possessiveness on me. She stared in his eyes… n that girl is avani, my dad’s frd daughter,dad said to meet her,that’s it….
Radhika(smiled): okay then…
Arjun: so.. u got angry on me,so, I have to forgive u na… let me forgive u… he said coming closer to her. Radhika smiled.
Radhika: mistake is urs.. n I should forgive u..
Arjun: its not my mistake, its u who misunderstood.
Radhika: no.. its u who with girl,so, its ur mistake.(god: admit naa arjun..!! y to risk ur life…)radhika again pouted.
Arjun: then, I will ask forgiveness in my style…. He pulled her more close n leaned to kiss. But radhika, placed her hand on his mouth.
Radhika: nesam r waiting for me, u go n enjoy with avani, okay bye.. said sarcastically. Both walked into restaurant n saw nesam n avani on same table.
Radhika: let me go first, u come later. Otherwise they will doubt us.
Arjun: doubt..?? on what..??
Radhika: I didn’t tell neil about our relation,so please… arjun nodded n stood there,while radhika walked them.
She greeted them n sat n made small introduction with avani. Then Arjun arrived acting surprised n smiled at radhika secretly, who smiled back with her eyes. Arjun introduced Avani as his office Frd to all. Nesam was chatting closely,while Ardhika too chatting with eyes ignored Avani.Avani literally irritated.
Avani: Arjun,where is food..?? He forgot to get as he was with Radhika.
Arjun:sry..!! I ordered but forgot. Neil,come with me, I can’t carry all stuff. Both left to the food counter.
Radhika felt to share today’s good news about Neil’s love with Shekar. She excuses n leaves to call Shekar. Avani n Sam r left alone. Avani decided to clear her confusion,so she spoke up.
Avani: so Sam..what’s up..??
Sam: hmm… nothing here.
Avani: so.. u n neil love each other a lot.??when did ur love story started..??
Sam: yupp… a lot.. just today we confessed to each other.She smiled looking at Neil,who is standing at distance.
Avani: so…. Arjun n Radhika too love each other..?? Sam laughed. While Avani gave a sharp look.
Sam: no… not at all… actually my brother loves Radhika so much but he didn’t confess yet..!! I wish Radhika n my Bhai be one…!! She smiled looking at infinity n dreaming their pair.
Avani: Ohhh…She smirked at Sam n then looked at back to see Radhika happily talking in phone,explaining everything to Shekar by waving her hands in air,while Arjun is staring her lovingly.She looked back at Sam thinking “u fool..!! U doesn’t know that they love each other, now I got a opportunity in the form u to get back what I want. Sorry, Radhika I’m going to separate u from Arjun (smirking at Radhika) I’m selfish,I will get you” she looked at boys,who are cmng,recalling that she has seen Arjun n Radhika together few minutes before.
She excuses Sam n went away from table n called someone n said “Mr.Sharma, I want details about Arjun, Radhika, Neil,Sam n Sam’s brother details. Be careful. Especially Sam’s brother details including his schedule too”
She returns n involves in casual talk with all thinking about her further plans. Avani forced others to accompany her in shopping,Radhika was not interested but Sam is excited n insisted her. So, 3 left to shopping, leaving boys. Avani behaved frdly n closely with Sam n talked cheesy with her. Sam liked her behaviour n quickly became frds. But Radhika felt negative vibes in her talks but didn’t pay much attention to that. All 4 happily ended up the day except Avani,who is literally irritated acting soft infront of Sam n she wondered how Neil loved these sort of fool,however she acted frdly with Sam to make bait for her evil plans.

It’s evening, Ritvik returned home after a very busy working day. As soon as, he entered home, he went to his room to freshen up. While, Sam ran to his room in excitement to tell about her day n senses he is in bathroom. She ran n starts banging the door.
Sam: Bhai… Bhai.. come out fast. Urgent.
Ritvik: Sam… use another washroom if it’s urgent. Sam banged her.
Sam: not that urgent.. I want to tell u something important.
Ritvik: we will talk later in the morning, I’m tired,go…!! Sam made a face n an idea strikes.
Sam: Okay… I was thinking to say that Radhikaaa… (smirks) we will talk morning,u r tried na… She turns to go.
Ritvik,who heard Radhika’s name pecked out of washroom n shouted “wait…I will come in while”. Sam smiled n said “no no..!! No problem, I will tell tomorrow”,”nooooo… I’m coming in a min”he replied. He came after a while n sat beside Sam on bed. Sam started.
Sam: u know, Neil…
Ritvik: wait wait.. u said Radhika, right..??
Sam(laughed): u won’t come out until I say it’s about Radhika…!!
Ritvik: u…. devil…. he hits her with pillow n she laughs.
Sam: Bhai..I’m sorry but this is also an important matter. He turned serious n she started narrating the whole incident. Ritvik jumped n kissed her forehead. She hugged him. Both had a happy tears.
Ritvik: I’m happy that u got a right person…!!
Sam: Even I’m happy bcuz ur selection is best, tell me when r u going to confess her…??
Ritvik: soon…
Sam: what soon…?? U have to propose her tomorrow, if you get then someone will be after her.!! So do it tomorrow.
Ritvik: Okay..!! I will think..
Sam: then u have to buy gift for her, so we will go to shopping tomorrow…!! N where r u going to propose her..?? I will plan a date n decorate everything, u ask her for date n propose her,okay..??
Ritvik: cool cool…. She is sweet n Simple girl so need anything, I will propose her in simple way,okay..!! U buy gift for her. Now go n sleep,go…!! He pushed her out of the room while she muttered “how unromantic my bro is..!!poor Radhika”.
Ritvik closed the door n smiled to himself thinking “how his life turned in few months..how her sister’s ego turned into love..how she forgot her Piyali’s presence..how she turned to my choti old Sam,who is sharing her everything with her Bhai..Radhika entry made many changes..her tips to maintain good relationship with Sam..Sam’s love succeeded due to Radhika.. n almost everything changed infront of my eyes without its presence like slow breeze..!! I’m never going break my relation with you Radhika at any cost..!!” Thinking this, he slowly slipped into sleep.

Avani in her house. A elderly aged man arrived analyzing the file in his hand.
Avani: Mr.Sharma, did u..??
Sharma: yes mam…!! Arjun n Radhika r in love from past few months,they met in some musical concert…he continued but was stopped by Avani indicating to stop with her hand.
Avani: tell about others..!! She ordered.
Sharma: yes mam.. Sam n Neil r in…
Avani: I know (immediately)she paused.. tell something new..!!!
Sharma:sorry mam, Sam’s brother loves Radhika, his name is Ritvik..Ritvik Khan..!!
Avani(surprised): Ritvik khanna not Khan…!! Do Ritvik loves Radhika…?? Then I have to plan something big..!! Get his tomorrow’s schedule.

That’s it…. wait wait… please suggest me a good girl name which starts with J…please….!!please comment the name.

Credit to: Deepthi


  1. aastha

    hey deepu i hd jst finished readng renus story……. ten i saw urs……i know its a long time since i commeted…bt i m busy…my board exam commenses soo……..

    i HATE avani………..bt sme hurdles r needed in any1’s love life soo tat tey cn realize hw mch tay loveh other n also their love story ll ve a filmy style n it’ll b intresting 2 tink abt te hurdles tsy hd 2 go through 2 gt their love in their future……..bt im sad 4 ritvik……plzz intro sivanya….so tat ritvik ll gt hs love also……i feel soo sad 2 tink tat hs heart ll b broken………i likd ritam bond….n nt to mention nesam ardhika n nerads bnd…………….arjun s sooo romantic…….n rads loses hr sences evn it slighest proximity f arju……n avani a free advice 2 u:” u ll vr gt arjun..he s meant 4 rads only…..u dnt evn deserve to b their friend….bt do create sme hurdles so tat ull mke evry1 realize evn tat raghav tat arjun s rads only……..”……
    hey deepu u wont destroy sams n ritviks frienship wth rads na????????????plzz promist tat u’ll nt break rads heart or put hr in deep misery…..

  2. feby

    hey..i thought u will b bz and will update after exam only….but…u wrote…gud…..well…now only 10days left…..
    and yes………..very nice update…..super….keep doing it…..

  3. Shree

    Oyi!! Deepthi!! What did you just do?! A villian track?! Nooooooooo!! ????…. Thought avani would be a good girl.. But, no… Details?! Wth… And how an you find on when and how and who fell in love?! Heights… And it was good btw… Please don’t separate ardhika… Please..

    It was a cute episode deepthi… Loved nesam and ardhika… ??

    And names of girls with the letter J.. Hmm.. Why?! New character?! K wait.. Lemme think..

    Well k… Janani, Jayashree, Jayanti, Jeeva, Jayvanti, Jeevita, Jenny, Juhi, Jodha, Jhanvi, Jisha, Jiya, Jothsna, Jessy, Jamuna, Jyoti, Jagriti, Jaganya, Jaya, and etc… List seems to be endless… I know a lot of names, but I think it’s enough.. Else it’ll be like mini naming ceremony.. And lol.. It is.. I just put in all the girls I knew with.. All my childhood friends, relatives… Lol… A lot.. ??

    Please post soon.. Can’t wait any longer…

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

      • Shree

        Hmmmm… Your niece is it?! Thats so cute!! ??… So, you’re Attai now?! Wow!! Congrats!!

        You can go with Jayanti- another name of devi Parvati

        Jagriti-wakeful or awekening

        The meaning even depends on the spelling…

        Jamuna-Holy river


        Janani (which is my cousin’s name)- tender

        Jisha-a person who wants to achieve high

        Jothi-person who spreads light everywhere they go

        Ok.. So it think this is all… I called up all of them and asked their meaning… And I listed these… I think it’ll be helpful..

        Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug… And a small hug and a kiss from my side to your cute little niece ??

  4. Krishna

    Now Avani is going to play with Ardhika…… Oh godddd that’s nice……. So waiting for more twist’s……….. Uplaod it asp ?

  5. zayn

    Hey deepthi … todays update awsome
    1st i thought avni was +ve …. seems intresting And congratz for ur brother !!
    I can suggest few names :-
    June … i thnk i mostly christian names!!
    Sorry ànd once again congratz

  6. Natasha

    deepthi dr how r u? so avni is a villain. no…she shouldnt do anything wrong.

    can i ask u something? will u give me a chance by giving a role in ur story l. i promise i will try my best.
    actually love ur story a lot and their bond. dont think that im joking. im serious. so will u? im waiting for ur reply.

      • Natasha

        okay, done. i was joking but its okay if u really want me in ur story. and yaa if u will make make a series on ur story then i want to play a role. after all working with friends project is awsome and for this reason we will get some time for our friendship on the set.

  7. bhavna

    HEy deepu tdys ws d bst…hate avni ….arrghhh?????
    Loved nesam …..
    Aradhika plz dnt misundrstnd each othr….
    N deepu i ll suggst two names …Janvi,jeevika….
    Plz tell us which name u hv slctd for our cute lil angel….btw congrats…giv my love n kisses to bby…??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  8. Neha

    Hii deepthi…superb update yaar..
    Aradika n nesam scens r best..i hate anvi
    u want names r8..
    jevika.. 🙂

  9. Hello deepthi
    Good thoughts
    Nice story….
    Have a wonderful day..
    Enjoy ûr work and make us enjoy by writing more and more episodes
    I think ur in +2, if so all the Best for ur exams

  10. Harani

    sorry for asking the same question sry dr..just asked for clarification.:-) tdy the episode was awesome 🙂 new negative vibes…avani …again a problem for ardhika …

  11. manha

    It was very gud. Ardhika talking with eyes now. oh so lovely. Avani ahhh she is villain now. Don’t make this girl so strong. Ritvik- sam convo gud. Sam is now teasing ritvik in name of radz. cool. Ritvik bhi radz ke pyaar me paagal ho gaya hain. oh god so many twists. I just hope everything will be fine. God’s thoughts very funny. loved them. Waiting for next one. take care.

  12. nisha

    jahal- Goddess of power

    Jaral -water fairy

    jarul: Flower queen

    Jeeya: Life

    Jeiya: Sweetheart< to live

    Jenya: Noble by birth

    Jessi: Beauty, god gift

    Jiana: Life, God is gracious

    Jiiya: life , near heart

    Jisha: The Person Having the Highest Feelings for Living

    Joita: victorious, winner

    Josna: moonlight, brave, Lotus

    Josya: Delightful

    Juana: Gift from god, A flower

    Jyena; Princess

  13. nisha

    hey sweetheart deepthi how r u

    its been time to meet you. Dear Your name always stay close to my heart You make ur own place in my heart

    I always loved ur story.

    the way you describing it it is immensely beautiful . Always an admirer of your writing skills as well as your story dear.

    How r u . How’s ur life going

    Sweetheart , Its been time and getting busy in my busy stuff right now. This is the main reason for taking a break of manmarziyaan stories.

    But I am always here for friends. Randomly visited here and see that you need names of J initial .

    Always ready to help you in any way I can be .

    Love u so much deepthi

    I am whole heartedly saying this sweetheart so sorry for not reading the story today. as I am getting busy from last some time . Doesn’t be able to read any manmarziyaan story I wish to but I can’t be able to read any story.

    Please if possible forgive me.

    But I have full confidence in you sweetheart that you are writing fabulous and make so many readers of ur story.

    and very happy to see manmarziyaan friends happy with your stories. Love u so much dear.

    After some time , surely getting time with this hectic life and read ur story . love u dear.

    keep smiling

    once a friend always a friend

  14. nisha

    hey naty my sweetheart how r u see now I have to find you for talking to you.

    Sometime really missing old days when we able to talk on one page on

    Telly update page

    at least we all can met. but anyways.

    Sweetheart very very happy to see you happy with deepthi story

    I am very thankful to deepthi who make u came here and comment .

    at least we can meet. .

    Hey naty how r u dear very much missing you. whenever I saw message on desi tiv box

    I leave a message dear. but I think you left.

    hey dear post your story dear where is heart there is life if not then your another story dear.

    Why you stopeed your story.

    Love u naty and missing u a lot dear.

    keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend.

  15. awesome
    love uu and ur story
    Miss J(radhu) loved it
    want more of jealousy and Rads and sam bonding to improve
    next update asap
    loveeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuu

  16. Very nice story…..plzzzzx don’t separate them…..make them strong to handle this situation……
    Avni……huh….i don’t like that girl….
    Anyway m a silent reader but not now…..hehe??

  17. Abi

    Hey deepu….

    No i dont want any evil….. I know, a good story need a best villain… But i can’t accept it…. ???

    BTW, in j_ i like” JEMI-WHITE DOVE” For female ;
    For men i like J-JOSHUA ☺☺☺
    It s my suggestion☺

  18. devga

    This is awesome yar ….
    I think I am new to ur ff …. Really dint knw such wonderful ff on ardhika … And nesam …. Deepthi now u had forced me to read earlier ones …. Ameena and Natasha are not updating mmz ff ……
    Oh Natasha how long no c … Anyways u would have forgotten me … No prob how r u …. ? Wer is ur update?

    This episode made my day refreshing.
    Thank u ….

  19. Lakshmi

    Superb episode dear. Ardhika as usual they r amazing. Rithvik n Sam’s convo is nice. So Avani is villain. Luv u..tc.. All the best deepu..

  20. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous , outstanding episode…nesam n ardhika so lovelyyyyyy. …and this avani…how come she turn to vamp…in last epi she was quite positive. ..rads jealous n arjun asking for forgiveness in his style…wowwww…nesam all lovey dovey n ardhika talking by eyes….lovely scene…ritvik n sam convo very sweeeeeet. .ritvik gonna propose rads …noway…and this avani…so evil, how her man got all the info regarding ardhika, nesam n ritvik???…well loved it very much. ..but plzzzz don’t separate ardhika or nesam….some twist is OK but not disaster. ….eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

    How are you alllllllllll my deariiiiiiieeess…missing you soooooooo muchhhhhh. ..love you loadsssssssssd…..muaaaaahhhhhh

  21. abha

    Hiii deepthi I want to tell dat u r awesomeeeeee?. M also mmz fan..and casually read ur 22epi…and guess what I totally got impressed by ur writing skills read all ur episodes till now….gods dialogue r amazing…Bt y a villian?? Ardhika had jzzt started now…nw m scared dat she may create misundrstanding btwn neil nd radhika as radhika didnt inform nei abt hr nd arjun…1 more thing y don’t u post regularly?? After reading all epi m lyk what ll happen?? Anyways luv u loads….and post soon

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