Ek kahani (manmarziyan) episode 17

Episode starts with Arjun n Radhika ending their calls respectively. Radhika turned n surprised to see Ritvik beside her.
Radhika: Ritvik… when did you came.??
Ritvik: when started ur poetry n ended with challenge. He is not aware of other end conversation.
Radhika: Ohhh.. that… how is it..??
Ritvik: that was really good, but… May I know for whom..??
Radhika: he is proposing his gf, he forgot the lines n I reminded him that’s it. She tried to smile, she don’t want to lie so she covered the truth.
Ritvik: okay..!! Where ur faltoos..?? (God:flirting with ur sister)
Radhika: don’t know, he left in the morning, he messaged me that he return home directly in the evening. Leave it, he might be with some girl.
Ritvik(laughed): y r u so sure, that he will be with girl..??

Radhika: bcuz in his Frd n know him from childhood. Ritvik exclaimed.
Both sat somewhere under tree n started chatting. Radhika talked non stop about her n Neil relationship. Ritvik stared her smiling. She slowly moved to her background.
Radhika:I’m orphan. My mom throwed in dustbin. Sarita maa found me, brought me to that orphanage. I’m orphan, I felt like I need a family. But fate is different.
Ritvik: hmm..!! I’m sorry. Upto me everything happens for a reason.
Radhika: yaa, ur true. Everything happens for a reason. I would have really missed my true relations like faltoos, Shekar pa, Sarita maa, chotu, bunty u n many others if she wouldn’t have left me. In childhood, I thought it’s a punishment but now my opinion changed its like boon from God.

Ritvik: May be..!! But who is this chotu, bunty..??
Radhika(smiled): they… They r my frds in orphanage. I love to send time with them.
Ritvik: ohh.. really,sounds good. Can it is possible to meet them.??
Radhika: yaa.!! Sure, we will go their on every Sunday, u accompany us on one day..!!
Ritvik: I’m free this Sunday, so shall we ..??
Radhika smiled nodding in yes manner.
Ritvik: shall I drop you..??

Radhika: yaa..!! Sure. Both started riding on bike.Ritvik was a little scared so he is riding slowly. Radhika shouted to stop when she realized a cycle is overtaking them.

Ritvik: what happen..?? She showed the overtaking bicycle n Ritvik made a face saying “I’m a bit scared of riding bikes”. Radhika got down n removed the bag twirling around her n throwed it to Ritvik. She indicated him to move back n he made a question mark face. She jumped on to front n took hold of handles. Ritvik was surprised thinking “is she going to rid.??”. Radhika “get hold of me”. He caught her shoulder. She raised the bike holding brakes, bike roared n she released brakes n bike moved with a great speed which made Ritvik hold her tight in shock. His face colors changed with increase in speed n she laughed loudly seeing that through rear mirror. Ritvik was amused to see her laughed. Scene ended at Radhika leaving to hostel.

Sam n Neil on bike returning. Neil is in his own thoughts regarding love. He know it’s a wonderful thing of life but he is scared of it due to his childhood circumstances. Sam is thinking about Neil’s words, she can clearly see pain in his eyes. She is unaware of what to do. Bike stopped with jerk bringing the back to world. She got down. Both stared but spoke nothing. Sam has a to speak on face without bothering their feelings. Finally, she spoke.

Sam: I don’t know y but I can feel pain in ur eyes. I don’t know whether to console or not bcuz I never did that. I made many people cry, those never bothered me. But y ur pain is bothering me..?? I can only say don’t cry bcuz it’s a way to console. I’m telling this bcuz it’s strange that I’m feeling for someone other than my family. Okay bye. See you tomorrow. She left.

Neil hidden his emotions as he did it many times, he never loss control on his emotions, not even infront of Radhika n Shekar, as he know what happens. He is not aware that why he loss control on his emotions, he skipped all his thoughts listening Sam. He heard her words but not with complete attention. She left n he smiled.He started to home n thinking “such a innocent, she can get trapped in anything easily, but she behaves as a mature girl, no, she covers herself as extraordinary girl. Actually, she is extraordinary due to lot of innocence. Ohhh God.. save her, this bird can easily hit my any hunter. (God: when Hunter is beside bird, what can I do..??)

Arjun smiled remembering their conversation. He took that letter n read it again n again smiling at it. Just then he phone buzzed n he looked into it n saw msg from customer care, he ignored it n looked at time which is at right corner of phone, he shook his head in shock saying “ohh no..!! I have to be in office by this time.” He literally ran pushing the letter into his pocket. He reached on time n signed few files n sat in cabin waiting for Akhil. He placed the letter openly on the table infront of him. He desperately waited for Akhil to arrive to share his thoughts. He smiled seeing Akhil through monitor infront of him. He dialed his PA n Akhil stormed the door in excitement, he seems happy more than Arjun expected.
Arjun: seems very happy..??
Akhil: yes man..!!(twirling arjun’s chair) I found my love finally, I’m happy to see love on her eyes for me, I’m out of words..!! Arjun face saddened hearing last sentence.
Akhil:what happen..?? Y r u so sad.leaning towards Arjun.
Arjun: I’m happy that you found your love but I didn’t found my yet. It’s been 3 days, not even a single clue also. But she… She observes me everywhere, n even placed a letter in my presence.. it’s very annoying I’m desperate to know her.

Akhil: woww..!! That’s great man. She gave letter, give it let me read… Arjun stared the letter which lying lifelessly on table. Akhil tried to take it but Arjun pulled it towards him.
Arjun: it’s my personal now..
Akhil:okay..!! I tried to gather some clue from it, what can I do if you urself don’t want.
Arjun: clue..?? Y didn’t I get this idea..!! He grinned.
Akhil:bcuz ur phattu.. so… He picked the paper from arjun’s fist n started reading sitting on couch. Suddenly, Arjun ran to Akhil n took letter in blow n ran to his seat pushed that into his blazer. Akhil was surprised by his action n was about to question but stopped seeing Raghav entering the room pushing the door. Akhil understood.
Raghav: Aruu… did u sign those files. Do u have any idea about shinee company..??
Arjun: yaa dad..!! They are one of the best company, I have seen his interviews in many magazines.
Raghav: good..!! We r tying up with that company.
Arjun:great news dad..!! Congrats.
Raghav: their is one more good news. He is expected something from us.
Arjun: what dad..??

Raghav:May be it’s u. He said his daughter saw u somewhere, I think he gave a hint. Arjun’s mouth hung in shock n Raghav saw it. Chill Aruu..!! I guessed it but not sure about it. He left cabin hearing his phone ringing.

Raghav walked into his cabin n his PA, who elderly followed. Raghav respects his PA a lot due to his age.
PA :sir..!! Y did u say like that..?? U r the one who insisted them to tie up with ours n asked for their daughter.
Raghav: I know Verma, I’m doing this for his happiness. He will forgot that girl, when he is sure he will never meet her.
Raghav to himself “I’m sorry Arjun”.

Neil walked into house with a little dull face. Shekar,who is working looked up n understood something is wrong. He know that he can’t do anything. Neil stared Shekar n silently walked to his room. Shekar took his phone n Radhika.
Shekar: Radhu…!! He shouted literally so that Neil can hear. Neil knows that now is going to come, he is sure that he can’t cover infront of her.
Neil: y r u calling her now….??

Shekar: can I have a right to call her..??
Neil: u have.. but y now..??
Shekar: y not now.. I have some office work n she has to help me as u never did it, I have to seek my princess help. U do ur work n I will do mine…with showing attitude.
Neil storm to his bedroom, don’t know what to do, he covered himself in bedsheet tip to toe when he heard calling bell. He had few tears recalling his mom n past. He is sure that Radhika will enter room but, to his surprise, it didn’t happen. Instead he heard something broke n someone quarreling. He uncovered his bedsheet to hear clearly forgetting what he was thinking few minutes back. To his surprise, it’s Shekar’s n Radhika’s voice. He storm out of the bed n opened his room door n saw both arguing literally about to fight.
Shekar: no Radhu..!! I said it’s not that..

Radhika : no pa.. it’s that only…!! Y don’t agree with me(angry)
Shekar: ur a child. U don’t know anything n arguing with me. What I said is correct n u have to agree bcuz it’s true (serious tone)
Neil looked them in surprise as it is 8th wonder, he looked down saw a vase broke, he is more surprised n felt it’s big so he have to do something.
Neil: what happen dad..?? Y you both are fighting…??
Radhika: u can’t solve it as it is big, leave it… turned to shekar.. pa, what I  said is correct, agree old man..
Shekar: ur calling me old man..??! I’m not old I’m young, smart, handsome… u spoilt generation…
Radhika was about to start again then Neil shouted “what’s the matter..?? Tell naa..!! I will solve it.”
Shekar: u can’t solve it.. it’s a big thing, u r child, u need to grow to solve these sort of issues, leave it my child. They were about to start again, Neil interrupted.
Neil:I can’t listen u guys fighting without knowing reason, so please tell me..!!
Radhika: so… u want to take this problem on ur head,so what can I do, r u sure, you want listen this problem..?? U will loose your cool after listening this problem.
Neil surprised that problem is that much big that she is asking for assurance, whatever I have to stop them. He assured her nodding head.
Radhika: I said pa to sign on this project papers. He said he can’t.
Neil: y dad…?? What’s wrong with that..
Shekar: I can’t sign with that pen, it’s tip is rough, but she is saying it’s sort n smooth. I said no, but she is agreeing with me..!!fake anger.
Radhika: I said it’s soft but he is not accepting me.
Neil n God are shocked.

Shekar: no… it’s rough. Radhika: no… it’s smooth. (God :is this problem that child can’t solve..??)
Neil: u broke this vase for pen tip..?? He muttered,With mixed expressions. Radhika is trying to control her laugh. Neil hearing both shouting “rough” “smooth” alternatively. Finally, he lost his cool n shouted “u guys r fighting for this silly tip..??”
Radhika:it’s not silly tip, it’s cello tip, now solve the mystery..??
Shekar: he can’t Radhu… leave him.
Neil: Is this a mystery..?? Stop ur bakwas..!! He shouted n left to his room.Now, Shekar n Radhika burst out in laugh which they r controlling till then.
Neil left to his room thinking ” they r fighting for this, I thought it’s big,wait wait..!! They r laughing means they r diverting my attention.” He heard “yes..!!”from door. It’s Radhika. He turned his face opposite to her. She came n sat next to him n wrapped her arms around his neck n leaned to his shoulder with full face.
Radhika: I can’t see u was faltoos..!! It pains when we our loved ones in pain.
Neil: how can you figure everything in me easily, that’s why I’m scared to show my face to u. He hugged her.

Radhika: every relation has different names but the thing exists is only love, our relation is bond with true love, noone can break it even in dream..!!
Neil: I’m thinking what if u wouldn’t have entered in my life, I can’t imagine breaking hamara rishtha, I will remain same forever, I won’t spare if someone thinks to break our relation. Breaking hug n took her hands in his.
“Noone can dare to do that” they heard, it’s Shekar. They all smiled with happy tears thinking their bond never breaks.

Akhil walked to Arjun n closed his mouth.
Akhil: cool man..!! It’s not a big thing. Leave it. Tell me how did know that dad was coming..??
Arjun:nothing I saw him through monitor. Akhil struck their for a second.
Akhil: wait wait..!! Their is cctv everywhere in the building..??
Arjun:yes..!! For security reasons, it will be their in every office for sure. What a foolish question..

Akhil: but brilliant idea..!! U said u called her for meeting right..?? She will be in some camera naa..?? Arjun made a disgusting face.
Arjun: is this an idea .??? Idiot, she covered her face with scarf…!!
Akhil: Arey yaar..!! They are not allowing anyone with scarf into building, so she might be captured, at atleast one camera for sure…!!
Arjun :yaa..!! Ur right. He jumped in excitement n kissed Akhil.
Akhil: aww.. cheeee… don’t do this infront of all, they will think wrong.. Arjun hits him playfully.

Arjun pulled Akhil to security cameras room. He asked them about cd informing data n time. He found 3 cameras in the way to the meeting room n took the 3 CD’s n excited ran to his room. He sat infront of his computer n started playing CD’s one by one, he found many girls in the 2 cameras which are in ground floor main hall. Only one CD left, which is at reception. He played the CD tensely. He found a girl walked towards reception her back seen n talked something n receptionist jumped in excitement. She turned n video got distributed, this annoyed Arjun a lot.
Arjun: y this happens with me Bhai..??just 1 second I would have seen her.
Even Akhil face turned dull n suddenly glowed.
Akhil: wait..!! The receptionist jumped excitement means she saw her..!! With excitement.. Arjun face too glowed up.
Akhil: wait..!! She saw her that’s it, if we ask she can say that she saw her but can’t who she is…?? She can’t say who the girl exactly was..?? So, no use of asking her.
Arjun(sad): yaa..!! Ur right, but we clarify my doubt naa..??
Akhil: doubt…..?? What doubt…???

Arjun: I said naa..!! I felt like Radhika is mere jaan, I felt familiar feeling with her which I felt with mere jaan.
Akhil: Ohhh..!! I have an idea, just remember her meeting with you, recall her every word n compare with Radhika, then u may get some clarity meanwhile I will get her photo.
Arjun recalled their first meet them second, he remembers her words while hugging “faltoos..!! He came yaar..!! He came to meet me, wow..!! Even he is desperate to meet me”, which he spelled out, Akhil looked up, who is surfing in his mobile.
Akhil: I heard Radhika calling Neil faltoos..!! It can be coincidence also, try some more clues.He summoned.

Arjun again slipped into thoughts recalls her calling ARJUN SIR in the meeting. He said” how can see call me Arjun sir.. she would have called me Arjun or some other but y Arjun sir like juniors..?? Their is chance that she can be Radhika.”
Akhil: ur office staff too calls u that, she can be one of them. Still surfing.(God: seems to be CID officer)
Arjun: ur unbelievable.. Mr.Akhilock holmes..
Akhil: I got it… radhika’s pic.. come we will ask her.
Both ran to receptionist. She confused seeing them.
Receptionist: sir…??what can I do for you..??

Akhil: u have seen her face… that girl, mrng star, who came that day for meeting  naa..??
Receptionist recalled Radhika asking not to inform anyone. So, she nodded in no manner.
Arjun(angry): don’t lie, we have seen footage n u can’t imagine what happens if u lie..!! She shivered with fear.she nodded yes now..!!
Akhil showed Radhika pic in his phone n asked “Is she the one..??”he shooted.
She looked it keenly n said “yes sir..!!Radhika But she said not to inform anyone.”
Arjun:how do know her name..??
Receptionist: she gave autograph sir..!! He pulled a autograph book n showed it to them. Arjun reads “With love, Radhika better half A”. He smiled at last 2 words.
Akhile:she is such a clever, she wrote better half instead of ur name..!! That means she agreed u as her better half. Cool Bhai, u r love succeeded without starting.
Arjun walked to cabin to burst out in happiness as he is not ready to embarrass himself infront of office staff.

He jumped in happiness saying “I finally found her.”
Akhil :control baba..!! Now.. It’s ur time.
Arjun:See she even gave me clue in this letter, she wrote her name intentionally but I didn’t found it. I’m such a idiot. Akhil laughed.
Akhil: now go..!! Go n tell her u found her.
Arjun: Yaaa..!! Wait.. till now tigress enjoyed annoying me but now it’s time for tiger. I will make her say herself. Keep watching mere jaan..!!
Akhil: so Bhai..!! U can’t do that with my bhabi..!! That’s not fair.
Arjun: u changed party suddenly, n calling bhabi too..
Akhil: yaa obviously..!! Ur my Bhai n she is my bhabi, from today onwards I will support my bhabi only..
Arjun stared with fake anger but internally he is so happy, he felt goosebumps, their moments flashed, their first meeting, clg ragging, next concert, her hug, their salsa n everything. He smiled to air. Akhil pushed getting him to sense.

Akhil:Mr.Romeo, now stop thinking about Juliet n come lets go, it’s late.
Arjun:yaa..!! I have to share this to mom..!! She will be super happy..!!
He ran into home n started dancing holding his mom shoulders who is holding some dish. Janki was confused but happy seeing him happy, Arjun caught her confused expression n took the dish placed it on table n pulled her towards swinging bed in balcony. He shouted “I found her maa…” Janki: really..!! That’s great.. with happy tears. He explained her everything n she was overwhelmed by happiness. He leaned into her lap n closed his eyes.
Arjun: maa..!! I never predicted that I will fall for girl this much madly… I’m very happy maa, she is such a ordinary girl who doesn’t like others attention but unfortunately, it makes others to draw her attention. I’m happy that I found right girl.

Janki: life is like sailing ship Aruu. We can’t predict what’s going happens next..!! Don’t know what happens in future, don’t know whether ur relation stays same or not but it’s we, who have to handle them carefully, love lies in trusting them,one day u will see something  ur eyes can’t believe, that day u have to trust ur heart but not ur eyes bcuz I love them. U committed most important relation in life, be careful, bcuz every relation face hurdles to test ur love, remember it’s just a test, just remember this word when feel something wrong in ur relation. I wish you took her hand which u r not going leave it at any consequences…!!

This thought n words came out from Janki’s past which effects her even now, she had a tears which she want to hide but they ran from her eyes to escape but caught hands ended up wetting her hands.A tear which cleverly escaped from hands ran to Arjun’s cheek who is listening Janki with closed eyes. He looked up saw her eyes.
Arjun: maa..!! Y r u crying..?? Wiping them.
Janki: in happiness of my son’s love..!! As usual she didn’t caught.Arjun took her palm n placed his hand on hers.
Arjun: I promise maa..!! I will never leave her at any consequences..!! Okay now, smile..!! Ur more worried about ur DIL than ur son..!! She smiled.

Guys..!! How’s the episode.?? Guess, u liked it. Waiting for ur comments. I really love to read them.
Hayathi :sry for mistake, I got confused with A.
Zayn : haa..!!u missed Ritvik right..? So today’s Ritvik part is for you.
Jasvin : thank you dear.
Abisa : I think ur waiting ended..!!
Mittu : ohooo..!! Mittu, I’m not that much poetic skills, I mixed few best lines from different songs.
Bhavna : sry..!! I didn’t get time so small update. I love smiley which u sent, they r special to me from u.
Snehahari:thanks you yaar..!!

Manha: thanks yaar..!! I would be waiting for ur comment daily.
Lakshmi : I just love to read your comment.
Subha : thank you buddy, sure I will continue.
Abi: Ohio…!!sorry for making you wait, happy u missed it, ur using my stance on me only..!!I loved it. My preparation is gng better. U didn’t tell me which course ur studying.??
Devi : thank you dear.
Aastha: seems someone having crush on Ritvik here..!! Lol..!! Just kidding yaar..!! U don’t fear,I’m their to console him.Okay..??
Shree: I don’t know ur full.. but even my name starts with sree.. my frds love to call me that, I’m glad a Frd like u, bear hug.
Harani: still ur doubt is not cleared..!! Ashiwarya is elder than abhisheik n dhoni n shaski too..!! So it’s not a problem dear. Clarify..?? If ur not okay with that think Neil took long term like me.

Roma: here comes my Roma..!! Roma catch me I’m flying due to ur comment…!! Lol…!!
Ameena : don’t even dream that I can forget u, I didn’t mention bcuz it’s not necessary as ur always with me in my story, I updated my ff, so did u  forgive me dear..??

I think I replied every comment my dear buddies. I expect silent readers to comment to know ur presence,just for once.

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  1. Hi deepthi!!! Very nice story waiting for next update..

  2. hey deepu u guessed correct yar i ve a huge crush ritvik……ll u mke my crush cme true??????????plzzzzzzzzzz??????????????????

    i lvd evrting……..rads rivik frienship……..wow rads cn ride a bike?????rads -shekhar fi8 ws awesome……i also tot whether it ws smeting serious.bt ten it turnd out 2 b te biggest joke………….finally arjun found out rads ………i wanna see hr face wen he says tat he found hr………..raghav pa plzzzzz change ur attitude…..u r nt savng ur son.instead ur killg hm slowly part by part………..n in doing so ur breaking so many hearts…………plz dnt stand as a barrier to ardhikas love coz hw mch u resist tat mch it ll grow strong……….their love s pure……….plzz mke sam realize tat she loves niel…………

    1. i forgot to tell 1 ting………deepu u need nt take pains 2 console hm.im here na…i ll mke hm feel comfortable….sry deepu bt i ve to turn dow ur offer………hpe u wont mind it………(jst joking………..)

  3. simply superb yaar

  4. wow super excieted for next part…. yipiiiiii…..

  5. Your ff was really damn awesome and I am really excited for next update……

  6. Jasvin J.Kaur

    My heart was literally in my mouth. So so excited. ..wow pls updates soonest posssible. Not sure I was sleep tonight …….

  7. Wowww finally he made it yaar awww yes yes yes i am so happy but what abt raghav yaar

  8. Amazing update deepu. Arjun was totally lost in love. He couldn’t understand anything other than love.. Lol.. Akhil is really his true frnd n his Savior ,he helped him to find her.. Wow ..so arjun is going to do something to make her accept herself.☺☺.. Neil,radz n shekar’s bond is superb, really no one can break their bond. Shekar n radz fight is very funny they r arguing for tip??..lol..Felt sad for radz past. Sam is really innocent that anyone can easily misuse her innocence. Raghav is right but he should understand arjun’s true love n he should support him n protect him from any harm but not stopping him .Janki is nice mother. What about akhil’s love story,I think she’s pooja only. Today no ardhika scenes but no problem arjun got to know that she’s rads so happy.lol. Really u r an amazing writer dear .
    Will be waiting for next update. Love u deepu???…take care…

  9. Nice episode

  10. Heyyyyy Deepthi….mind blowing , splendid episode dear..loved it
    Finally..our Tiger came to know about his Tigeress…eagerly waited for this part…
    Hey dear I was not able to comment at previous epi..so commenting now… Letter part nd Arjun saying same poetry..that was beyond comprehension… .
    Due to my upcoming final examz not able to comment regularly… I’ll b giving my first board exams..so a little worried.. .
    Will meet u at nxt epi..
    B happy always..

    Love u loadZz

  11. Awesome

  12. I didnt like it 🙁 🙁
    LOL I loved it …. n thanks for rithviks part .. i really radz neil n his dads bonding … akhil is smarter than arjun he should have done that in the first place .. y arjuns dad hate luv wen he himself love arjuns mother.. arjun has the best mother … first i couldnt understand DIL then after reading twice i got it ( daughter in law ) it is pooja only akhils gf i am 99.99% sure 1 % in case … I love all manmarziyan FF …. i did missand FINALLY arjun got to jnow radhika is his jaan ….
    I am getting so seriously addicted to ur story …. when ever i read ur ff a smile automatically comes on my face
    Last time tooh my mom thought i am chatting wid a guy n smilling ..
    I cant controll only my happiness seeing ur ff … everyone asks me what happened .. i would say nothing !!!! LOL 😉 🙂 😉 😛 😛
    TODAYS update was just fab !!!! I know i am too much !!LOL still am asking can u tell me till wen u will be able to update …
    I think i should stop my blabbering n irritating you
    Take care keep smiling n updating (selfish 😛 😛 ) n lots of love ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♡♡♡♡♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♡♥♥♡♡♥♥♡♥♡♥♥♥♥♥♥♡
    And thanks a lot for the update

    1. So many typoos , after posting i read .
      Sorry i typed in excitment … 🙂 🙂

  13. Yey!! Yey yey yey!! I’m so happy!! Can you see me dancing?! No you can’t.. That’s why I’m telling you… Me so HAPPY!! I feel the Pharrel Williams part playing in my head… Lol… ??

    I loved it deepthi… Can’t take Neil’s pain… Loved shekar radz argument… Arjun found out so soon… Aawww… Now he’s going to play along with her… Nice idea… I loved the ritvik part.. Radz drove the bike… Yey!! Akil met his gf?! Who is it? And what?! An alliance for Arjun?! No… Don’t do that.. Anyways I loved it… Update soon..

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

  14. Love the comic timing of god yaar really enjoyed it thanks for updating yaar really good .

  15. Awesome Dr ..arjun finally found his jaan..waiting for their meeting without that scarf in between 🙂 🙂 :-)luvd it sweeto …my doubts never get cleared hehe…tanq for the reply

  16. Love u deepu awesome epi eargerly waiting next epi..ya no words to tell I am flying in the sky ….great ,super ,lovely ………

  17. yippeeeeee. Super update. Ritvik- radz convo gud. whoa Radz know bike riding. ofcourse neil ne sikaaya hoga. Nesam talk was too gud. Sam is able to see neil’s pain n trying to console him. Neil’s concern towards sam. very gud. When hunter is beside bird what can i do??!!! Lol. that was very funny. i loved that.

    Shekhar n radz fake anger to make neil normal was too gud. Loved the bonding between shekhar n radz. Rada n neil they r the super friends. just superb. Why is akhil’s meeting not shown. But i’m happy that both friends has got their love. Whoa finally Our romeo has find out his juliet. Mr.Akhilock holmes. lol. it was tooo gud. yep he is our next CID officer. I can see all the qualities in him.

    Arjun is out of control now after knowing abt radz. He almost threatened the receptionist yaar. Akhil n arjun bonding was very gud. Akhil has already changed party. janaki n her feelings were too emotional n like it when arjun said u r feeling for DIL more than ur son.

    U r giving some beautiful friendship bondings. they r just so adorable. Waiting for the next one. Update soon. Now we have to see what our tiger is gonna do??!!!!

  18. OMG.Finally he got her…Nah my waiting is not ended now waiting for another epi <3

  19. Omg i m so so so hppy uk whenevr i come on dis pg n see tht u hv updtd nxt prt a sml comes on my face???????

    M so hppy tht arjun got his jaan..??
    Now radhika be careful accrdng to me our hero is gnna mk u feel jealous so tht u urslf sy him tht ur his jaan his radu❤

    Neil hes so cute n sam she is slwly undrstdng meang of love n nel too ….??

    Its tym for our tiger to njy n seek radhus attn intrstng…
    M in love wid u n ur ff….
    I feel relxd afr readng dis?

    Tyssm …????????????????????????????????????????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤????????????????????

  20. Extreamly good.I am silent rader for ur ff

  21. Hey deepthi…

    I told u before that i m studying final year of veterinary medicine (veterinaries-treating animals both pet and wild),.. I hope now you got it… I m happy that u replied me.. Thank you for that.. Today episode s awesome again… I can guess somthing after reading today’s episode… That both our hero nd heroin ll know abt each other idetity but one of them may tell that i m not that person( probably radhika ll tell arjun that i m not ur meri jaan)… Am i correct…
    Because this much childishness may lead them to that situation only i guess( u r the one creat the fate for them anyway right? )

    Okay… I imagine janki nd ragav as ragini and neil of IKMP serial lead.. Amaran as shiker pa ??

    As usual waiting for ur next update with reply… Love u sweety bye i finished my exams today???

  22. As usual it was fantastic! I actually enjoy while reading ur updates. God’s dialouges were amazing. Makes me smile brighter than ever. So finally tiger found his tigress and now what he will also play with her. Looks like next episodes will be total fun. Akhil is so smart. Good job Akhil..finally u helped our romeo to find his juliet. Janki’s feeling were too emotional. And while reading it was like I can totally imagine it. Hmm..akhil tumne bhi side change karli…even me…my bro is getting married…I also changed my side…now with bhabhi…lol…hmmmm…should I forgive or not…hmm for that I still need to read more episodes and satisfy my heart then only I will forgive u…and remember u did a very big mistake by forgetting to write my name toh punishment toh banti hai na..so no excuse…do as I say…k bye…pls update it asap…luv u ??

  23. Awesome, marvellous, outstanding, lovely episode, my deepuuuu darling…finally arjun found rads clues n thank you so much akhil for helping him….he was sooo lost in love that he couldn’t even realize when rads put the letter beside him…jaago mohan pyaari…aree ab toh achhi tarah jaag gaye…aur dobara soch rahe hain ek ek baat…wowwww, faltoos, Arjun Sir….lol…akhil ur genius dude, cameras and receptionist…nice…arjun control yaar receptionist ko daraa hi diya…but glad you found rads…now this tiger is going to make tigress accept herself…that’d be fun to read…loved it very much, I’m jumping in excitement like arjun…yayyyy..dhink chika…

    nesam convo was very touchy…Sam felt his pain consoled n even neil couldn’t hide it…rads shekhar neil trio r too gud yaar n their pure relationship is awesome…the way rads n shekhar diverted neil’s mind was pretty funny…n then rads n neil convo tooo good. ….rads drives bike n ritvik shocked, even me very happy…such a sweeeeeet story n lovely plots…arjun n his mom relationship very sweet, she is very concern for arjun’s future a wants him to keep trust on rads…so darling mom…papa Raghav also good but he doesn’t want to see arjun in pain so trying to stop him from loving rads…

    Akhil’s gf is pooja for sure…he is so excited, plz show fb of their meeting…loved each and every scene of the episode…God’s comments were lovely as usual…keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug

  24. Hi, me again, not done yet, thx thx thx for writing my name, me too flying with you in this mmz’s crazyyyyy wind…lets fly together n explore our pure friendship in this magical world…love you loads and very tight bear hug…muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡☆☆☆ 😉 🙂 😉

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