ek duje ke vaste – new beginnings (episode 5)

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Part 5
Location: fresher’s party
Sumo was sitting on d couch after she had sent nia jea n vidhi on d dance floor..
She was thinking about her n Shravan’s dance..
Shravan comes to her
Shravan: hey!
Sumo: (lost in him) just smiles
Shravan: so !? Tired already!?
Sumo: dis party is so over..
Shravan frowns a bit den smirks..n gives his hand to her..
Shravan: come!
Sumo was surprised..
Sumo: where!?
Shravan: aao to..
He den takes her to the college terrace..
Sumo: wow!!!
Shravan: dis is my fav place.. Jb v upset hora hun yhi aata hun..
Sumo: tm upset v hote ho? ?
Shravan: n wat kind of a question is dat!?
Sumo : haha… Nai I mean tmhare paas upset hone ka kya reason h!? Sbkuch to h tmhare paas..
Shravan: sbkuch… (N looks at her for long wen she looks at him) sbkuch to nai h…
Sumo: acha?
Shravan: m also a normal human being.. Kvi kvi… Wen m upset …. To yha aata hun..
Sumo: normal human being! (Laughs)
Shravan: (smiles seeing her) n wats dat funny?
Sumo: nhi … College me SB tmhe superstar .. U kno SRK (N Does d signature step of srk bending down wid open arms) ki trh treat krte h…
Shravan: ahh! U kno … Ur mad!!
Sumo smiles..
Dey sit dere for sometime widout speaking.. Just enjoying each others company…
After few minutes..
Shravan climbs to the terrace railing…
Sumo : (tensed) Shravan r u crazy.. Kya kr rae ho …gir jaoge …
Shravan: kuch nai hoga … Mai to khta hun tm v aao.. Its so good here..
Sumo: pagal ho kya !? Mai gir gai to?
Shravan: kuch nai hoga tmhe .. Mai hun yha…
Sumo looks at him n gives her hand in his hand..
They were holding hands wid their eyes closed n feeling d breeze…
Shravan looks at her n smiles….
He den comes down n gives her his hand again..
She comes down …
Sumo : u kno kvi kvi mujhe lgta h ..jaise Sb tmhe khte h tm waise nai ho…
Shravan n sumo were still holding hands… He comes a step closer to her..
Shravan : to kaisa hu mai?
Sumo: (smiles) bht ache ho..
Shravan: ar kya lgta h tmhe ?
Sumo was about to say but her phone rings.. It was vidhi
Sumo : amm avi mujhe lgta h ki mujhe chlna chahye …
Shravan: (annoyed) mmmmm…
Sumo smiles
He was still holding her hand..
Sumo : Shravan!!(smiles)
Shravan: (chuckles a bit) acha jao…
She smiles at him …
Sumo : pagal!
She goes but Shravan was standing n smiling
In their rooms dat nyt..
None of dem (shraman) were getting sleep..
Both of dem were thinking about each other….dey both get their phones n den realize that its 1 am n really late…
Sumo lies down to her bed..
Sumo’s POV
Ajeeb baat h , uski hr simple si baat mujhe itni khas kyu lgti h… Itna caring , cute koi kaise ho skta h…?
Kya wo asa hi h, ya mujhe hi ye special treatment milti h…
Suddenly she comes to her senses…
Ye tu kya soch rai h sumo? Mujhe ye SB ni sochna chahye .. WO Shravan malhotra h … Usse sari duniya chor kr mai hi mili hun… Koi v …. Koi v ldki mil jaegi usse to … (She closes her eyes) tu to bs WO kr jo krne tu yha aai h…
They both sleep…
Next morning
Shravan n his frnds were standing near first year rooms n laughing on some joke …
Professor passes..
Prof: mm? Mai puch skta hun tmlog yha kyu aae ho?
Shravan: erh! Sir , law pdhne…
All of dem again giggle lyk kids.. The prof leaves irked..
Sumo n her group comes along …
Suman n Shravan look at each other..
They all chit chat a bit but sumo wasn’t talking..
Sumo: okay guys .. I ll leave…
Sumo walks towards her class wen Shravan calls her out ..
Shravan : sumo ! (She turns to him) mmm suman.. I mean.. Kya hm college me v frnds reh skte h? Sbke samne?
Sumo: (smiles at dis innocent question of his) zarur.. Agr tmhari fan following mujhe maar na de…
They share a smile…
Ar haan, tm mujhe sumo bula skte ho…
Shravan : cool!
Few days pased wid deir frndship going strong.. But Shravan was still not able to gain his courage to tell her his feeling , n sumo unaware of her own changing feeling was focused on something else ( which will be revealed later) whereas , adi n vidhi had come really close because of shramans efforts..
Shravan’s POV :
Pta nai kya ho jata h mujhe wen she is around .. Sb bhul jata hun … Ye v ki mujhe usse khna h… Dat I … I m in love wid her… Jaise kuch rok ra h mujhe usse sbkuch btane se… Shayd hme thoda ar grow krna h… Avi to fr v sb thk h .. Kia aa jaegi to kya hoga??
Shravan seemed tensed..
Next week..
In their college a cleanliness program was going to happen in which all d students had to volunteer.. Dey had made a group of two students n dey had to clean the campus on their own..
Sumo got a broom n walked to d room she was asked to report to meet his partner ….
Sumo: tum?????
Shravan : hey!
Sumo : ufff…
Shravan: tmhe mujhse prob h!?
Sumo: (in her heart) haan bht zada jb v tm aas paas hote ho .. Mujhe bht nervousness hoti h…
Shravan: hnh? Tmne kuch kaha?
Sumo: tmne kuch suna?
Shravan: sumo m noticing pichle kuch dino se tm bht alg behave kr rai ho?!
Sumo: amm.. Asi ko koi baat nai h…
Shravan luks at her while she starts her work…
They were working suddenly she screams n hugs him tight .. It was so sudden dat Shravan got a jerk n hold d table behind him for support.. He was stunned n happy he sees a cockroach flying away n sees her who was more scared n cluched him more tightly…
Sumo: aha mumma… In creepy creatures ko udna kyu aata h!?
Her eyes were closed as she was holding him tight he takes one of his hand around but does not keep it on her.. But he smiles n gives a flying kiss to the cockroach… She suddenly leaves him wen she realises wat she just did..
Sumo: (embarrassed)
Ammm.. M sorry wo mujhe c.. Cockroach se bht drr lgta h…
Shravan : koi baat nai..
He hands her a bottle of water.. She was embarrassed n heads back to work..
While working wid d shelf she again slips n he holds her.. Dey share an eye lock she parts herself away n composes herself..
After finishing dis work dey sit down for some moment…
Sumo: its so good apne college rooms ki safai khud krna..
Shravan : yea! Waise tm cockroach se kyu drti ho? Tmne khud ko dkha h .. Uska size ar tmhara size …
Sumo: usse udna aata h, mujhe to nai aata..
He laughs a bit…
Shravan: tm bchpn se hi asi ho?
Sumo: mtlb!? Mai tmhe weird lgti hu?
Shravan: nai , I mean …
Sumo : (angrily) han, mai bchppn se hi asi hun.. Tm bchpn me kaise the?
Shravan: mmmm… Mai bchpn me handsome tha..
Sumo: bs! Hr wkt khud ki tareef … Tum apne favorite ho na!?
Shravan: han! Tm movie freak ho na!?
Sumo: haan Bollywood?
Shravan : srk fan!
Sumo: don’t change d topic… Kya pure world me asa koi nai h jisse tm psnd krte ho?
Shravan : tm! (She luks at him ) amm vidhi , adi mere frnds mom ,dad!!
Sumo: hold on ! Ye to family ar frnds hue? M talking about wooo wala lyk!?
Shravan: tmhe mere love lyf me bda intrst h??
Sumo: (nervous) asi.. Koi baat nai h.. Nai btana chahte to its okay!
Shravan gets up n goes to the window..
Shravan: (meschiviously) nai .. Asi baat nai h.. Okay! So school me thi ek ldki.. (He is lying ) I liked her.. Class 10 me ..
Sumo: (worried) really?
Shravan: yaa! Infact we r still together..
Sumo: together!!???
Shravan: (happy seeing her reaction) aree not lyk dat.. We r still studying together.. I mean tia .. Oh! Maine kvi tmhe tia ke bare me nai btaya na…? Shutz!! Mai bhul kaise gya .. Anyway tm btao tm school me kaisi thi? Koi tha? (He keeps his finger crossed )
Sumo: nai, pr tm btao na tia ke bare me?
Shravan: uske bare me kya bolu.. Phle I was crushing on her now she is my friend…
Sumo : pr wo h kha !?
Someone says : yaha!!!!!
Shravan sees d person n it turns out to be tia herself!
She comes running to Shravan n hugs him…
Sumo gets highly ensecure…
Tia: oh! I missed u soooo much! N tm v … H na??
Shravan smiles
Shravan: (in his heart: wrong tyming) ahhh great to see u .. PR … Tm achank yha !?
Tia : WO SB mai tmhe baad me btaungi abhi bs chlo mere sath..
Tia drags Shravan out .. Shravan turns to see a upset sumo but couldn’t help…

Precap: sumo jealous to see Shravan wid tia .. Semester break n sumo’s changing behavior towards Shravan

So, plz share our views on today’s update how do u like it!?
Ur comments r amazing love u all…
Lots of love❤

Credit to: sumo

48 comments

  1. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Ohh god….are u thinking to kill me sumo di……bcoz if u will write this much nice I will definitely die only……ab main DID ke master Dada ki tarah aapko standing ovation deti hun…..kya baat kya baat kya baat…..just loved it di????
    Aapko meri taraf se ek big hug……u r the best

  2. Bhagyashri

    Its amazing sumo.I like ur writing skill.I read ur previous ff also BT not comment due to moderation prob.so sorry.very nice.

  3. ankita

    hiiii sumo, khushi n lovelylady…. 🙂 howz u guys?? hey sumo mere pass to ab words hi nhi rahe…I’m speechless…. aapki story ka har episode mere dill ko chhu jata hai….ab to mann krta h ki bs aap likhti jao or mai bs padti jaau…aapne itna bda episode likha but aisa lg rha h ki ye to bhut jaldi khtm ho gya h….aap hamesha aise hi achhe achhe episode likhti rhna….thank you…

    • sumo

      thanks Ankita … ap kitne sweet ho! keep commenting.. mujhe to bs bht acha lgta h apse baat krke… 😀

  4. Maria

    It’s fantastic sumo di I love it sooooooo much …!!!!!! The shraman hug , suman’s jealousy o myyyyy god it was perfect u r brilliant di !!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂

  5. sss

    wow mindblowing episode…their friendship just started already jealousy good…. their conversation ot was amazing..shravan yar already telling lies in future many more thing u have to do bechra..
    waiting for next part..

  6. sona

    Sumo..its..sona..due to some holidays…I started reading fan fictions..these days..but..I really have..no idea..u r also doing the fan fiction..I just read all the 5 episodes..its really entertaining..nice..continue..?☺??
    I would like to read..many more articles of this ff..I really liked it.

  7. ankita

    hey sumo…mujhe bhi kal raat ko hi iss baat ka pta chla tha to socha ki aapse share kru…jb bhi mai aapke FF ko pdti hu to usme kho jati hu or mere face pr smile aa jati hai….iski vjah se meri mumma or bhabhi ko doubt hua ki mera koi special frnd (b.f) h or mai usse chat krti hu or uske messages pdh kr smile kr rhi hu…or wo dono mere aas paas ghum ghum kr check krne ki koshish krti rhti thi…mujhe iss baat ka pta nhi tha…mujhe thoda ajeeb sa to lgta tha but mai ignore kr deti thi unko lga ki mai unse chhupane k liye janbuj kr ye page khol leti hu…kal raat ko jb mai khushi ka “FF” Pdh rhi thi to mai jor jor se hasne lg gyi to meri bhabhi ko lga ki mere special frnd ne mujhe koi joke send kiya h…to wo bole ki ” di kbhi hume bhi apne special frnds ke messages dikha diya kro”…mai confused ho gyi ki ye kya bol rhe h baad me unone mujhe sari baat btayi…or jb maine mumma or bhabhi ko dikhaya ki mai kya pdh kr smile krti hu to sbhi ko hns hns kr pagal ho gye…meri mumma boli ki ” tv ki sumo km thi kya jo tu ek or sumo ke pichhe pagal ho rhi h…. 🙂 🙂

    • sumo

      thats soooooooooo swwwweeeeeeetttt Ankita… m ur fan now… itni cute ho na aap.. can’t explain how happy I m now… thanks a ton for always being dere…
      ap btao ap kaise ho???

      • Lado

        Take the name of devil and devil is here?????
        I m so so so sorry yaar……..I was out of town for some reason so net nhi tha……bas abhi aayi hun and aate hi Maine Teri ff padhi hai…..yr u know what saari tiredness khtam ho gyi…..ur ff is so refreshing…… U should keep writing yr even after u become a doctor……. My best wishes are with u love u yr……

      • sumo

        tu meri fan mai Teri… hm sare ek dusre ke fans h.. sach me yaar glad to have u all in my lyf… ❤

    • Lado

      Ekdum correct ankita…..aap bilkul sahi bol rhe ho…….main bhi jab khushi ka ff padh rhi thi toh itna zor se hasi ki meri family Jo pass mein hi thi dekh ke mujhe bole kya hua pagal ho gyi hai kya…….
      And main toh sumo ki ff akele mein padhti hun….coz jab bhi main sumo ki ff padhti hun mere face pe ek badi si smile hoti hai…..log toh pakka yahi sochte honge ki pagal ho gyi hai akele has rhi hai …..iss liye main akele hi padhti hun…….love both khushi and sumo alot…..

      • Lado

        And bhi sumo Teri ff ki bahut badi wali fan hu yr…..love u alot….I really want to meet u but yeh distance and yeh studies beech mein aa rhi hai???

      • sumo

        tu kitni achi h yaar… thank god u back… bs tera hi wait tha… tere comments mere lye further refreshing h… overjoyed to have u back!! love u love u…

      • sumo

        meko v milna h tmsb se.. ankita se tere sent.. but ye duriyaaaaan… 😛 😛 devided by states… 😛

  8. BEING A SILENT READER

    superb,awesome ,amazing writing skills sumo di pls post the next part soon
    waiting for the next episode

    • Sumo

      |Registered Member

      so if u guys see dis… I updated my 6 episode today but it got cancelled because it was long but moreover was in Hindi .. so I have decided I ll post episode 6 in 2 parts dey will be back to back… so plz look at both the posts… thanks

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