ek duje ke vaste – new beginnings (episode 2)

Hey people!!
How u doing?? M really obliged by ur love to my story.. Wen u guys appreciate it its thrilling..
Thank you for liking it..

Here’s part 2 of story..
Shravan drives to his home but was constantly thinking about d gal he just met minutes ago…
Shravan : ( smiling ) weird girl..
He reaches his house n takes his laptop out … He skypes ( p.s : skyping is video calling ) someone while he takes his dinner n water..
Shravan : hey , gorgeous?
Lady: aj itte late??

Shravan : shak kr rai ho?
Lady : shak ,, ar tujpe ..( laughs)
Shravan : mom!!
Lady: haan to !? Kvi koi gf crush kuch v nai rai teri..
Shravan : so isme kya h !? U kno na…
Mom: (inturrupts ) ya ya .. U havnt found d ” ur kind gal”
Shravan smiles..
Mom : acha sun na wo meri frnd h na priyanka unki beti tere college…
Shravan : okay mom,, mujhe bht kaam h chlta hun..

Mom : are sun to le … Frnd bnne k lye hi keh rai hu..
Shravan : cm’on mom!! Mujhe nai bnana koi frnd .. Adi is enough..
Mom : adi ,, ahh .. Sometimes I really doubt u guys…
Shravan: mom!!!

Her mom laughs n cuts the call after giving him some basic instructions..
Shravan’s POV
Mai mom ko exactly smjha nai pata pr I don’t like dese high society narrow minded girls… Attention seaker,, so many people ask me y haven’t I have been able to find a gal..
Kaise btaun mujhe khud hi nai pta wat kind of a gal I would like!?
He sits back on his sofa n closes his eyes … N hears the gate girl’s (sumo) voice..
He smiles…
Suddenly his phone rings..

Shravan : bol?
Adi: ohh attitude!!
Shravan: sale .. Agr ek assignment kr deta to kya hota !?
Adi: to tu char ghnte apna assignment kaise bnata…
Shravan: haan hass le ,, hass le.. Teri wjh se aj mujhe watchman ( remembers sumo )
Adi : amm shravan u dere??
Shravan : actually u kno ,, thanks
Adi : aah???
Shravan : agr aj mai college se nai niklta to usse miss kr deta!
Adi: wat! Kisse?
Shravan : let it be… Ar ab mujhe neind aa rai h pakka mt..
N cuts d call leaving adi confused..

Next day shravan reaches the place where he met the gate girl last nite..
Watchman comes dere..
Watchman: ap kuch dhundh rae h?
Shravan : (while keeping his hand on watchman’s shoulder) are lights lgwao yha pe aplog.. Koi kisi ko dkhna chahe to dkh hi nai paaega..
Watchman: kya!? Wo kl bijli me kuch dikkat thi whi dkhne gya tha mai to..
Shravan : ab asi glti mt krna.. Khi agr usne apki complain kr Di to??
Watchman : complain!! Kisne !???
Shravan smiles naughtily n goes in…
It was a free period n shravan was sitting along with his frnds he was busy in his phone .. Adi was reading a book n nishant n abhi were discussing about the fresher’s party which was in two weeks..
Sumo also comes along her group..

Dey all sit just beside the guys table…
Jea n nia starts discussing about shravan .. Sumo just smiles seeing him..
Jea tells dem dat shravan’s dad is a lawyer n lives in London wid his mom n he lives in his house alone..
Here nishant n abhi sees d girl gang…
Nishant : iss baar ke batch me kamal ki bndiya h,, abhi wo dkh she is cute(pointing at sumo)
Abhi : sach me yaar..
Shravan does not see her ..
Shravan : shut up yr guys…
Abhi: Bhai baten to tere bare me hi kr rai hongi..
Nishant : ar ye dkh iss adi ko ,, isse duniya ki koi moh Maya nai h .. Bhai tu ek kaam kr himalay ka rasta pakad..
They all laugh…

Sumo’s phone rings shravan listens to it n recognises it to be the gate girls ringtone he turns but she is gone …
Shravan searches her but fails ..
Shravan : shit!!!
Adi : kya hua ??
Shravan : kuch nai chl ,,
Shravan was desperate to kno who d girl was …
D next day was Saturday,, the boys were practicing basketball..

D girls hostel was close to the basketball court ..
Shravan : pass it !! Pass it !! Guys kya kr rae ho!?
Ase khlnge to haar jaenge …
Its 7 bs ar 15 min fr pack up krna hoga
While playing he again missed a basket .. He looked towards the sky in disappointment… N coverd his eyes wid his hands to protect against sun rays…
Suddenly he felt something has covered the rays he looks up n is stunned to see a girl who was smiling at d sky adjusting her wet hairs..
He was fixed after seeing her…
The ball hits him but he was not able to take his eyes off from her..
Adi : ab kha h dhyan tera !?
Shravan : guys tmlog khelo I ll just take a break …

He goes to the shade n looks towards her balcony she was walking here n dere n talking on d phone!
He was looking at her n smiling..
Shravan : she is so beautiful.. So vibrant… Mmm mujhe usse samne se dkhna h..
Kya kru,, kya kru,!!??
He luks at his water bottle n throws all d water on a plant..
Everyone comes..
Nishant : chl dude bye.. College me milte h…
Everyone leaves..
Adi : chl buddy ,,
Shravan: adi I need water.. Paani h?
Adi : nai, tere pass to tha na..
Shravan : (shows him d empty Botel) khtm!!!

Adi: ab !?college gates to bnd h..na..
Shravan : yea..( looks towards her balcony)
(She wasn’t dere ,, in his heart aa jao aa jao..)
She suddenly comes to keep the washed clothes..
Shravan : (shouts ) excuse me!! Can u help us wid a bottle of water we need it badly..
Sumo sees dem ( obviously d gal was sumo πŸ˜› ) but couldn’t recognize dem since it was fourth floor..
She goes inside ..
Shravan n adi waits for 5 mins..
Adi : shayd nai laegi… Let’s go..
Shravan : hmm.. ( sad)
Dey were going wen someone calls dem out..

Shravan turns to see suman..
N suman was shocked seeing dem both..
He saw her ,,a cute messy bun , trousers n t shirt .. N no makeup of course..
But still d most beautiful girl he had seen..
Sumo stammers .. : ammm.. Pp.. Paani..
Adi takes it ..n drinks..
Shravan was constantly adoring her .. N sumo was avoiding d eye contact .. Because she was conscious on her appearance moreover she was shocked to see shravan infront of her ..
Adi paases d bottle to shravan ..
Adi : thanks u were a saviour…
She smiles…
Shravan was still staring at her while drinking…
Shravan : thanks !! (N signals to kno her name..)
Sumo : amm sum..

Suman..
Shravan : m shravan ..
Adi : n m Aditya …
Sumo : I kno
Shravan : thanks suman n gives her the bottle..
They both look at each other n den dey leave…
Sumo was thrilled..

Precap : sumo shravan dance..
Sumo bumps into shravan n shravan discovers sumo to be the same gate girl..

So dis part was really long …. M tired… But still love to write it…. Hope u enjoy it…
Keep commenting…
Lots of love❀

Credit to: sumo

29 comments

  1. sss

    awesome episode the way shravan admiring her wow he just saw her n already made an excuse to meet now he totally is in love bt still thinking what kind of girl he want lol i also like the conversation of shravan n his mom it was really nice…..update next part soon

  2. shraman

    Loving it.. Plss post the next part soon.. And also the way shravan adores her.. And loving ur ff…. You write amazingly..

    Love, nikita

  3. ankita

    super duper awesome… i really love it….mujhse to wait hi nhi hota h…bs aapki story pdhne k liye baar baar ye page check krti rhti hu….thank you sumo

    • sumo

      thanks Ankita … ur a gem… mai v tmhare comments ka wait krti hun… u r too much sweet.. ❀

  4. Lado

    Wow wow wow ….how do u manage to amaze me every time sumo……this part was just like a fairy tale….loved the way shravu was admiring sumo…(I was imaging the scene and was smiling like mad??)
    And I liked the mother son convo very much its good that u didn’t make nirmala away from shravu like in the serial…it’s amazing tooooo good for words????

    • sumo

      thanks lado… m glad u liked it … I mean it really u guys make my day… u lyk it … thanks… πŸ˜€

      • Lado

        No I didn’t liked it
        I just loved it sumo…..
        Plz post next part fast……main baar baar iss page pe aake check kar rhi hun ki post hui ya nhi????

    • sumo

      now dats something really sweet thanks… I m glad u guys r liking it dis much… ❀

  5. ankita

    hiiii sumo….mujhe ye jaan kr achha lga ki aap bhi mere comment ka wait krti ho…thank you….aur ab M impatiently aapki story k 3rd episode ka waitttttttttttt kr rhi hu….plssss jaldi se upload krna…

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