ek duje ke vaste โ€“ new beginnings (episode 13)

Hey people ! How u guys doing.. Okay so gotta tell u dat dis story is gonna end soon. Probably 2 or 3 EPs left.. M not sure depends on TU wale babu..,๐Ÿ˜‚
Recap: Shravan locks himself n suman in a room where he says that now its his turn to say n she will answer..

Part 13
Sumo bangs on the wall.. N Shravan keeps his hand beside her.. She looks into his eyes..
Shravan: so first of all, jaise ki apne kha ki ap mujhe nai janti .. First of all mai apko apna introduction de dun..
He backs off n bends down in a welcoming pose..
Mai, mai Shravan malhotra hun.. Peshe se vakeel .. Delhi , wha se pdhai ki h, its strange Pr wha ek ldki thi mere college me .. WO bilkul.. Bilkul apke jaisi thi.. Whi bolti aankhen.. Whi khoobsurat chehra.. Kya aap… Nhi.. Mai v na.. Asa kaise ho skta h, wo to selfish thi.. Kisi ki kadar nai thi usse .. Pr ap , ap waisi nai lgti.. Ap to samajhdaar h, kyu miss?
Oh! Oh sorry Maine apka naam nai pucha..
Sumo starts crying..
Sumo: am sorry Shravan .. M really sorry..
She breaksdown n sits on the floor crying..
Shravan clenches into a fist.. N turns towards a window..
Shravan : kis kis baat ke liye mafi mangogi sumo..? Hmesha mujhe for granted lene me lie? Hmesha srf apne bare me sochne ke lie ? Mujhe hr bar , evry single tym, akele chor kr chle Jane ke lye? Meri feelings ko kbhi nai smjhne ke lie ? Ya srf abhi, abhi Jo tmne kia uske lie? (He turns to her ) Tm asa kaise kr skti ho.. Itni khudgarz kaise ho skti ho.. Na kuch kaha na meri baat suni.. Bs yunhi chli gyi.. Itna aasan tha mujhe chor kr chle Jana?
Sumo was crying deliberately, her beautiful face had turned red but right now nothing could distract Shravan’s anger neither those dark eyes , nor those pink lips..although he stopped a bit to look at her.. Evry detail of her face.. He pulled himself out of her admiration n closed his eyes to concentrate..he so damn wanted to hug her right away, he had waited for dis day, or to be specific lived for this day.. Today he wanted his answer n her beautiful face could not stab his attention..

Sumo looked at him..
Shravan : uss din, tum chli gai, mujhe pta h ki mujhse glti hui thi pr kya uski itni bdi saza.. Uss din mai..
Sumo: can’t we stop talking about dat day (she said firmly, wiping her tears)
Shravan: but why? Tum hmesha asa hi krti ho sumo .. U never share anything.. Bina kuch btae bs .. U run away.. Hm uss din ke bare me kyu baat nai kr skkte …
Sumo:(still weeping) plz Shravan…
Shravan: pr kyu? (Desperate)
Sumo: because I lost dem dat day… Hmesha ke lie kho dia unhe …
She was crying… He just couldn’t believe wat he heard… He stepped back wid widened eyes n trembling lips..
She looked at d door wiped her tears n stared at it endlessly.. He was too shocked to say anything .. He wanted to embrace her.. To hold her.. But his hands were numb, she sensed dis n started speaking..
Tmhe yaad hai, uss din jb mai laut rai thi, mujhe call aaya, call aaya ki mom dad ka accident ho gya hai, mai itna darr gai ki kisi ko btana yaad hi nai rha… Jldi se hostel se nikli ar dehradun pohonchi (yes dat was sumo’s hometown) do din , do din tk unko operation ke baad under observation rkha.. Phir WO log chle gae hmesha ke lye mujhe chor ke… (Again cried keeping her knees near her chest n burying her face in it..) Mai under shock thi, doctors ne kha depression hai avi isse kisi ase ki zarurt h Jo isse pyar de sake (dey both looked at each other).. Nanu mujhe apne sath jodhpur le gae.. Pr mere halat me koi sudhar nai hua kuch mahine baad nanu bhi chle gae.. Mai akeli ho gai..
Shravan: tmhe ek baar bhi nai lga ki tmhe .. Tmhe mujhe btana chahye?
Sumo: ek saal baad jb mai thodi thk hui to socha tmse milun.. Pr tmhara no. Badal gya tha.. Mai Delhi v aai thi tmse Milne.. PR wha Maine..,
Sumo looks at him n gets silent
Shravan: wha kya?
Sumo: Maine tmhe tia ke sath dkha , mujhe lga.. Mm.. Mai phr se tmhari lyf me prob create nai krna chahti thi .. Mai .. Tm to jante ho na tia mujhe pasand nai .. (She steal her glances)
Shravan: (sarcastic smile) tmhari to yhi baat hai, huh, sb kuch khud tay krti ho tm… SB kuch…ye v khud hi tay kr lia ki mai aur tia…
He holds her tight, grabs her arms,
Shravan: kya tmhe kvi ehsas nai hua ki mai tmse..
They stare at each other his hands cups her face n he presses her lips wid his thumb smoothly..
Her eyes said sorry but lips couldn’t..
He leaves her n leaves the room.

Precap: suman lies in her bed crying wen her doorbell rings..

So, how do u lyk it?
Plz keep commenting really need it.
Lots of loveโค

38 comments

  1. Naina

    Like no like ka to sawal hi paida nahi hota ……

    Bcz i loved it yarr jis baat ka itna der se intezar kar rahy thy finally pata cha gaya k kya hua tha sumo k sath
    Bs ab jaldi se inhy eik kar do thats all i want

  2. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Woahhhhh !!! Have no words in ur praise .. now m just short of words .. what to say in ur praise .. this ep r should I say this ff is something just ,,just beautiful .. awwwwesome awwwwdorable fantabulous fantastic .. r kya kahun apki tareef me .. u r just fabbbbbbbbbb .. can’t
    say anything more .. speechless .. u r an amazing writer .. just luv ur ff ..
    Next part plzzzz plzzzz plzzzz plzzzz post sooooooon .. plzzzz .. plzzzz .. take it as a humble request .. plzzzz ..
    Take care .

    • Sumo

      |Author

      I will take dat as a wish, n ur wish is my command.. ho bhi kyu itni tareef kri tumne meri.. thanku so so much, love ya..๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  3. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Sumo..
    how r u??
    Awsum epi yr..
    try to post next epi soon..
    take care..
    Lots of Love
    Ruchi… ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Neeti

    ahhahaha idhar bhi fight ho gaya unke bich sab jan bujhkar kya ye kr rahe he
    itna emotional epi likhne ki jaroorat kya thi
    sab gande he, ab bhi is ff ko end kr rahe ho..koi meri bat kiu nai sunta,waise toh sab kehte rehte he ap ka view share karo par amal kiu nai krte me ise end nai karne dungi that’s it..
    waise ap sab ek sath mujhe kiu dard de rai ho, real track pe bhi Sumo and Shravan ro rai the aur ap sabne bhi aisa hi kiya
    mujhe baat hi nai karni kisi se
    gussa hu to kya hua I love you Sumo di – Neeti

    • Sumo

      |Author

      awwwww tu kitni cute h neeti.. sb thk hi hoga kyuki finally to milna h na Shravan aur suman ne, to don’t worry sb zabardst hoga..
      n haan end kr rai hu but I will be back soon.. โคโœŒ

  5. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god sumo…now will u kill me or wat!๐Ÿ˜‘
    Don’t write so well….!!
    I get feels….!!๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข
    Loved it very very much…!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
    Fantabulous..!!!๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„
    Luv u.
    Come back wid another ff…!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

  6. sona

    Sumo…it was so emotional..
    I didn’t expect this from the leap..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
    Loved it yaar๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  7. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    OMG!!! U killed me. Sooooooo emotional. U rock. Stay blessed nd keep making us happy with wonderful epis.
    Love u

  8. Angel_pari

    And this was superb seriously u hv describe sharvans pain amazingly superb yar loved it…….

    Post soon and after this i,ll be looking forward for ur next ff ok?

    Lots of love

  9. Sss

    |Registered Member

    oh another chapter yappi why took so long time to update anyway episode awesome as always little bit difficult to read the hindi line but amazing really loved it..atlest shravan showed his anger I thought he won’t today her dark eyes and pink lips also couldn’t melt him I was oh accha ye bat hein I never what exactly he liked about her pinky pinky lips her hairs also I like them don’t know about shravan..finally I got to know why she left him so dumbo how could she that shravan with other woman that’s a biggest stupid reason ever never mind but she gone through much and now shravan is back.or lover boy so.don’t have to worry last scene the way he admire her lips I thought atlest one kiss no lagtahe intejar karna parega uske liye..
    egarly waiting for next part.
    how are you? all good huh

    • Sumo

      |Author

      tumar analysis khoobe bhalo.. seriously, I love d way u analyse my post. each and evry part. thanks Sam, u r sooooooo sweet. love u a lot.. u kno m done wid my next part should I post it now?
      just asking..
      n yes m great how r u?

      • Sss

        |Registered Member

        of course i would tell post it now ab jab methai meri samne he to der kis batki khaneki post it..i am great except study lol btw you know bengali liked it..ekhn r karbo jakhn tomar ff eto valo nijeke dhare rakhte parina

  10. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Oh di !!
    Kya likhte ho yaar aap !!
    It gives me pheeelss…
    I just loved it..
    It was damn amazing..
    Bichara Shravan, uska gussa samajh aa raha hai..
    Bichari Sumo, everyone left her !!
    Maybe Shravan came to Sumo’ss house.. Post soon!
    Lots of Love,
    Your nikster

  11. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Frst of all toh am speechless after reading this……!!! Yr di ap toh bht hi kamal ki writer ho OMG itna acha……!!! I was reading n then then I was continuosly checking ke ab khatam toh nai horaha na……me when it ended I feel so sad….cause I want to read more more n more……!!
    Plz plz plz di post ASAP ASAP ASAP….!!!
    It’s a request…!!!
    Take care di…..!!
    Love u a lot se Bhi bht bht ziada…!!

  12. pretty preeti

    Sumo di it was amazingggggggggggggg
    Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
    But fight jldi ktm krva dena
    Loved ur thinking
    It is amazing
    No words
    Loved it
    Post next one soon
    Love u
    Byeee

  13. Nandini aka Nandu

    Are waah di! Aap to a chha gayi๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜lots of love. Post soon. I can’t judge u bcoz u r too good.

  14. Kaya

    Wow……………nice update…………loved reading it……….. I always enjoy your ff’s……….you write so well ……….. awesome….just awesome update……..post soon……….. eagerly waiting……

  15. Deotima

    sorry di 4 commenting late. no dont end it soon. if u do so promise me that u will come up wid another ff. i will not let u go so easily. u r a great writter so continue !!!!!! love u di

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