ek duje ke vaste – new beginnings (episode 11)

Hey people ! Thanks for commenting.. Loved it.. The feeling of being back is sooo awesome..

Now coming to part 11
Shravan was travelling towards the airport.. His heart was pacing ,Hands sweating .. There was anxiety, restlessness in his heart.. He Walked into the airport n few girls laid dere eyes on him n giggled.. He ignored the chaos n went straight to the counter, n board the flight… In d flight he sat down to his comfort n relaxed on his seat.. Today d feeling was really unconditional.. A turmoil of emotions was enraging him.. He wanted some peace but the gut feeling of something’s gonna happen was leaving him restless… The flite attendant came n asked him if he needed something to which he politely said no!
Time passed n he reached Jaipur.. While leaving d airport he felt light hearted.. A smile ran down wen he felt the breeze dat shivered his collar bone.. The nights here are really cold. He looked for Mr. Gupta’s attendant n laid his eyes on a old in his 60’s man wid his name written on a sheet.. He went to him n smiled at h signalling he was Shravan malhotra..
Driver : oh! Namaste sir, Gupta sir was going to come personally, but PCT madam wasn’t good, so he couldn’t come.
Shravan: PCT madam?
Driver : ji WO..
Before he could complete he trips n falls while Shravan supports him..
Shravan : are are kaka easy, it’s so cold, you shouldn’t be out …
Driver: this is everyday’s cold sir , for how long you won’t go out..
Shravan smiled n opened the front left door of d car..
D drivers moves towards the driver’s side but Shravan stops him
Shravan : are kaka , here , sit here..
Driver: but sir
Shravan: no but, I will drive and you give me direction..
Driver: but sir, how you can..
Shravan : are I know driving, don’t worry..

They drive to d hotel. In the journey Shravan sees a board of PCT he felt a jolt for a moment he really was deeply connected to d name but couldn’t recall.. He ignored his heart beats n concentrated on d road.. After reaching the hotel he checked in n got a call of concern from Mr. Gupta but because of bad network he couldn’t ask him who was sick.. He sat down on the bed he wanted to recall about PCT but was clueless.. He dozed off finally while he was thinking about it..
Next day he woke up to a beautiful morning..
Chirping of birds ,sound of d hotel fountain n cool breeze.. He smiled looking at d sky…
There was a knock on his door. He opened the door n dere was a guy wid flowers n a box in his hand.
Guy: sir , Mr. Gupta sent dese for u.. A token of apology
Shravan: it wasn’t required
He takes dem n comes inside. He looked at the box dere was a note on it.
” sorry , because of us u weren’t able to meet Mr. Gupta but dis is d compensation😊”- PCT
It said.. He smiled n opened the box a delicious smell filled the room. “Moong daal ka halwa” he muttered.. He tasted it n remembered her it was similar to d one she used to make.. She was so good at it .. He closed the box as he couldn’t bear with it anymore.. He closed his eyes
Shravan: 4 saal , 4 saal ho gye pr tmhari yaad dil se mitti hi nai.. Tm itni aasani se chli gai , bs mai hi nai jaa paa rha inn yaadon ko chor kr..
He closed his eyes..
He asked himself to focus on work n went away for shower .. Afterwards he came ready in a 3 piece suit of navy blue color his hair just lyk always perfect. A lill bit of TouchUp to d hair n he is ready.

Mr. Gupta’s driver knocked out the door n Shravan went out wid his research papers.
It took dem 15 mins to reach the big Gupta empires . he entered d office .. It was mr. Gupta standing in front of the gate
Mr. Gupta : acha hua Mr. Shravan ap abhi hi aa gye kl court hearing h, ar khurana ( the guy who is opponent of Mr. Gupta in dis land deal case) ka lawyer mujhse Milne aaya h, ap khud uski baat sun lijiye ..
Shravan : ohh chaliye …
They head towards the confrence hall
Mr. Gupta: Mr. Sharma ye , h mere lawyer Mr. Shravan malhotra .
Mr. Sharma: (standing up n smiling) these days who don’t know him sir.
They shake hand..
He has progressed a lot in short time.
Shravan: all this talk will keep happening, let’s do some work first?
Mr. Sharma: sure, ( nods his head in appreciation)
To Mr. Malhotra owning land deal that Mr. Gupta wanted to do, uss deal se Mr. Khurrana itefaq nai rkhte .. Ar WO ye land company use me Lana chahte h.
Shravan: hmmh, lgta h aapne case details thk se nai pdhi .. Iss land ki deal jb hui thi tb Mr khurrana ar Mr. Gupta partners the ar ye land unhone ne company ki trf se li thi isilye iss land ko kha bechna h iska faisla srf Mr. Khurrana nai Mr. Gupta v krenge..
Mr. Sharma: I know. I did the research too dats y m here
. Dkhiye Mr. Malhotra avi v wkt h, iss mamle me smjhauta kr skte h bina baat k court tk kheencne ki zarurt nai hai, Mr. Khurrana is ready to pay for dis land but Mr. Gupta isn’t understanding..
Mr. Gupta: Maine kha na , mai iss zameen ko nai dena chahta…
Mr. Sharma : Mr. Gupta business emotions se nai chlta …
Mr. Gupta : tm apni ye bkwas bnd kr do ar keh do khurrana se mai kisi v keemat pe ye zameen usse nai dunga..
Shravan was listening to deir conversation calmly…
His hands resting on his lips…
Mr. Sharma : Mr Gupta try n understand…
Shravan : ek minute , Mr sharma it was a pleasure meeting you pr ab aap mujhe thoda wkt dijiye taki mai apne client se baat kr sakun.. Agr koi v progress hogi I will let you kno…
Mr. Sharma nods n leaves ..
Shravan: Mr. Gupta ye baat to mujhe v samajh nai aa rai ki ap ye zameen aadhe daam me kyu bech rhe h? Mr. Khurrana apko double amount tk dene ko taiyyar h fr v .. Ap apna loss kyu krana chahte h?
Mr. Gupta: ( smiles) hr deal me profit or loss nai dkha jaata Shravan ji..
Shravan: mai kuch smjha nai !?
Mr. Gupta sighs n looks out of the window …
Mr. Gupta: mai ye zameen PCT ko dena chahta hun.. Bohot wkt ke baad PCT frse khda hua h mai usme usse support krna chahta hu.. Uski help krna chahta hu..
Shravan was really confused because now he knew dat dis deal was emotional decision for Mr. Gupta but he didn’t get whom he was talking about..
Before he could ask a voice cut him ..
Girl : pr PCT ko apke help ki zarurt nai hai….
Shravan holds a chair near him as his legs trembled after hearing that voice d voice he was craving to hear since long, d voice which was d sweetest thing he ever ever heard , the voice without whom his day never completed.. He closed his eyes to catch his breath n turned towards the person..
In front of him was his dream , his only desire , his love, his sumo

Precap: confrontation

Okay so how do u lyk it?
Sorry I said dat I will be regular n posted after a week actually I went to meet my grandparents n network dere was very poor… Mafi guys πŸ™πŸ™
Btw if u have any doubt wid dis part ask me , coz I think dis part is a bit confusing.. But how do you like d story after leap? plzzz keep commenting need love😍😍
Lots of love ❀

41 comments

  1. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Hello sumo di…!
    How r u??
    Ooohhhoooo di itne Dino baad phir Bhi itna chota ghalat baat…..hai….. πŸ˜€
    I want moreeeee…!!!! Cause u ri8 so amzinglyyyyyyy..! I loved it to d core..n no confusion..!! The last prt was OMG..finally he saw her….I WS imagining this scene in my mind πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
    Acha di…I want to ask smthing when will u post nxt chappy…??
    Plz plz plz plz update ASAP ASAP ASAP !!! It’s a request!!
    Cause I can’t wait to c nxt ep….!
    Hahahah thoda ziada ho Gaya shahiad…
    Take care..di
    Byyyyyy
    Love u sooooooo much..
    Frm ur sisyyyy maria…. πŸ˜‰

    • Sumo

      |Author

      maria 😍😍😍😍 love yaa … ur comments put a smile on my face.. u r soooo supportive .. although dis story is gonna end soon may be 2 or 3 more EPs.. I m so touched… love you lots… u gave a lot of respect n love.. 😍😍😍

  2. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    WOW.. It was amazing.. I just love you sumo di! Kya likhte ho! Aur aap wapas aa gaye! Yess.. Ab aaega maza.. Confrontation! Oh no.. Can’t wait.. Kehte hai na, “der aaye durust aaye” aapne toh late aake kamal ka episode de diya.. Post soon now!

  3. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Amazingggggg….fantastic….loved it a lot…!!
    Plz plz post soon…waiting so vry eagerlyeagerly…luv u
    πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

  4. Nandini aka Nandu

    Cant cant cant wait sumo di. Please post soon. No questions! Cant wait for the confrontation dear! Lots of love. Krep writing.

  5. Sharmansangel

    |Registered Member

    Di this is not fair yaar aap ek toh itne din bad aai aur twist par khatam kardiya this is not at all fair lekin kar bhi kya sakte hai please post asap
    Lots of loveπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž
    Riya

  6. MissAaira

    Mmmuuuuuaaahhhh tussi great ho sumo di… Itt wz amazing❀❀❀
    Ab bas itna bataadijiye ki agla part kab post hoga
    I ll get mad noww

    • Sumo

      |Author

      2 din me.. pkka! waise hy! hmne phle kvi intro nai kiya… m sumo n m glad you are here .. love you..😘😘😘

      • MissAaira

        Yaa intro toh hua nai but i ll b glad to b ur frnd
        Iam aaira
        Luv u tooo😘😘😘

  7. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hey !!! Again after a bit long time han .. Yeah u said right .. this ep was lil confusing bt was very gud .. all the dialogues were really fab ..
    Nd I wanna say something .. plzzzz ep k start me RECAP dy dya kro bcz most of time ur ff parts have a gap … so that’s y I said so .. Moreover!!! Ep was really nice .. keep posting ..
    Will be waitingggggggg for the next part ..
    Take care ..
    Stay blessed ..

    • Sumo

      |Author

      thanks Fatima .. glad you liked…
      yes I will remember dis, will give the recap from next post. thanks ,✌😊😊

  8. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Hello….I’m new here so just read all epis at once nd I must say…….k nth to say…I’m SPEECHLESS!!! Ur writings r full of suspense….wonderful..pls carry on…btw I’m Ariana

    • Sumo

      |Author

      so sweet , u read dem all? thank you so much, love ya.. n yes I kno Ariana … in fact I consider u as a great friend already… 😘😘😘

  9. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    Arey wah Sumo di bhi agai. Ab bas roz update karo. Sachme TU wale babu bare ghuseru he, bt bht logo ko hindi nay ati na. Sab thori hindi ke fan he…. Meri tarha. Main bangla se zayada hindi janti hu na. Bengli exam me maine rokto(blood) ka similar word khun likh diya :p. And mujhe right bhi mila bolo ;-):-D:-P. Are sry main chota likhne wali thi galti big ho gaya,sry:-P. Your cute wali osshovvo(ill manared) pakao choti di- Neeti.

    • Sumo

      |Author

      awwwww… neeti u r so cute.. 😍😍😍😍 roktor synonym khooon?? haha.. n u r from Bangladesh yet u speak or to be specific write great Hindi… thanks n glad u liked.. 😘😘😘😘😘

      • Neeti

        |Registered Member

        Main Hindi bolti bhi achi Hu likh bhi achi leti Hu, i can even write Hindi letters separately, bt can not write them together..πŸ˜πŸ˜œπŸ˜πŸ‘…
        by by di
        sry fr been late, Maine purane epis check nahi ke badme isliye
        lots of nind-Neeti

  10. Deotima

    i was soo annoyed wid u di. but when i read the epi my anger vanished . so finally u came up after soo long time. di just loved it and cont wid it dont end it soon. pls. by the way i read ur ff from the first epi and followed it but after the 9 epi u were lost. i use to wait 4 it and finally ur back. sorry i couldnt comment on the 10 epi . it was mindblowing love u di

    • Sumo

      |Author

      m sorry I was really late deotima..
      thanks for reading.. n letting me kno dat u like it.. glad u commented.. ur really sweet..❀❀

  11. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Amazing superb fab I just can’t tell how much I loved it u just portrayed the scene soo nicely di u r soo good
    Aap ek Mahan writer ho do I just love u soo much….
    I loved the gut feeling wala part shravan is going to meet sumo Ohh god waiting like mad for the confrontation di plz try to post ASAP…
    Btw how r u??
    Enjoying ur free time??
    Love u loads di jaldi jaldi jaldi post karna can’t wait now

    • Sumo

      |Author

      khuuuusshhh!! I have been missing u a lot.. come back soon.. n thanks, ( no katti dis tym) dat u liked n commented..,😘😘😘😘
      ya enjoying it a lot.. keeping myself busy with movies TV n novels..😘😘😘

  12. Khushi

    Superb episode di u nailed it aap toh Bahut Mahan writer ho di just amazing i loved the episode especially the gut feeling wala part mind blowing di plz m waiting desperately for the confrontation jaldi post karna plz awesome di….
    Di m having a problem I m not able to login yr don’t know why r u facing this problem??
    Anyways how r u??
    Enjoying ur free time??
    Ur khush

  13. sss

    awesome episode yar sorry couldn’t comment before as damn busy infact i am commenting with much hard thiefly and hurriedly read it just awesome sorry can’t say more in next part hopefully sorry again

    • Sumo

      |Author

      its completely fine .. u read it n found tym to acknowledge is more than enough for me.. love yaa… 😘😘😘😘

  14. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    Sumo di epi was amazing
    Kitna intezaar kiya that
    U r very bad mai jab padh rhi thi u posted next part on that time
    Its not gud
    But koyi baat nhi
    Bade bade insano se chooti chooti galtiyaan hoti rehti hai
    Its fine
    Sorry for late comment as my papers were going on so was busy in studies couldn’t comment please pray for my good marks
    Bye
    Loved it
    Love u
    Tata bye bye

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