ek duje ke vaaste reloaded (part-13)

Hey, I am lily …..acha guys I am not complaining.But I am getting very less comments…I think you all are not liking it….actually, I am not even getting 10 people’s comment. atleast I can expect that much. so pls be honest that are you all really liking it? I will not feel bad ,so plz be honest…………..
Now coming back to this epi, this one will also be a special epi with some romance and drama..new twists are coming…….
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ek duje ke vaaste reloaded (part 12)


Recap:shraman kiss..some emotional moments …shraman decides to separate …
Shraman tried to avoid each other in the pre wedding fuctions..And they were successful in doing that.But now they have to face each other..they both knew this will be very difficult for them.
Sangeet(goa)
Suman smiles looking at shravan. Shravan also smiles.
Both of them wants to make a healthy environment……..suddenly a girl comes from behind and hold shravan’s hand ..suman understands its none other than tanya …
Suman:hii ,you must be Tanya .
Tanya:hiii

Suman:nice to meet you.chalo guys I will catch you both later .i have to go….
Suman turns and is teary eyed after seeing shravu with her……….
All the family members dance on their respective songs……………
Now its sumans turn…….
Suman comes on the stage and says: hello! Everyone ..mai dulhan hi behan aaj aapke saamne
Apni behan aur apne jijaji matlab ki pushkar ki choti si cute si love story dikhaana chaahti hoon……isme mera saath mera dost lakshay dega…………….shravan is quiet jealous…..
(suman enacting preeti and lakshay enacting pushkar)
Dance starts with lakshay dancing on the dance number dekha hai tumko jabse hai …..tera dhyaan khidar hai yeh tera hero idhar hai………….(trying to show puskar is trying to get attention from preeti)

Then they both dance on aivayi aivayi….(now preeti is giving attitude to pushkar)
Then suman dances on pehla nasha pehla khyaal …naya pyaar hai naya intezaar………..(this is a beautiful song of amir khan’s movie…)(trying to show preeti has fallen in love)
They both end their performance dancing on the song meherbaan (from bang bang)
All this while Shravan is super duper jealous …………………………..
Tanya to shravan:yeh dono kitne ache lag rahe the ek saath………….perfect Jodi..
Shravan fumes in anger and ignores her……..
suman passes from there.
Tanya to Suman:Bahot hi acha dance tha!hai na shravan…..
Shravan nods …

Suman:thanx……..
Suman leaves from there..They both tried to avoid each other …………….(after this event,Tanya went back to delhi due to some important work)
Haldi function…
So preeti and pushkar’s haldi ceremony is going on………………………..
Maamiji:suman kaha hai?dikh nahi rahi……lakshay beta tumhe pata hai?
Lakshay:voh uska phone to aaya tha..ki voh bas thodi der mein aa jaegi………………
Shravan(fumes):madam ko isiko phone karna jaruri tha!
Lakshay:lo voh aa gayi………………….
Sumo comes dressed in a yellow sari..she has made a hair bun..she is looking very
Beautiful……………..shravan is mesmerized seeing her………………..
Lakshay:oho!(signs her that she is looking beautiful)
Sumo (smiles):thanks

Shravan is again jealous after seeing her closeness with lakshay………….
Sumo applies haldi to preeti………………….lakshay clicks the pic of both the sister…….
Then sumo applies haldi to pushkar……pushkar playfully applies haldi to sumo…..
Everyone laughs…………….
Sumo:pushkar ke bache ab toh tu gaya…in the mean time lakshay also applies haldi to sumo………………..
Sumo:ab tum dono ko mai chodungi nahi………………
Sumo starts chasing both of them……………….
No need to say, shravan is very very very jealous…………………………………..

In order to apply haldi to pushkar, suman bangs with shravan…by mistake she applies it to shravan…………………….both have an eyelock………………………….
Suman leaves from there after saying sorry……………..And suman goes to the washroom of her hotel room…………….
Shravan follows her…………..and locks the room from inside………………….he comes inside the washroom………….(the door is open.. don’t run your imaginative mind……….sumo is just washing her face…………….)
Sumo(a bit loud):shravan!
Shravu in no mood to listen………………..just wants his answers from her…
Shravan:tumhare aur lakshay ke beech mein chal kya raha ?
Sumo:kya ho gaya hai tumhe! jao tum yaha se …koi dekhega toh kya sochega……….
Shravan:mai tumse kuch puch raha hoon…………..
Sumo turns and continues washing her face: tumhe iss baat par jawab dena mai jaruri nahi samjhti !
Shravan drags her and pins her to the wall…………………sumo resists…………..and by mistake she turns on the shower………………… the water starts falling on them………both have an eyelock………shravan forgot his anger…….shravan cleans the haldi on suman’s face.…….shravan comes close to her and rubs his haldi wala cheek with sumo’s cheek…………
Shravan:lo, badla pura…………………both stare at each other……………
Suman turns off the shower………….

Suman:I think you should go……….
Shravan nods and directly goes to his room………..
The mehendi function…………
Ladies are busy in applying mehendi..on the otherside suman is busy with other preparations like decoration…………………….
Mamiji and preeti passes from there……………..
Maamiji:beta you also go and apply mehendi…………
Preeti:haan di …chalo na!
Sumo smiles…shravan passes from there and listens their conversation…sumo also sees him
Preeit:aur haan di lakshay jiju ka naam likhwaana mat bhoolna………………preeti smiles………
Shravan is hell shocked……………sumo is not able to meet his eyes…
Mamiji(laughs):haanh haanh beta……………
Sumo leaves from there and directly goes to the place where mehendi is being applied..……………the girls starts applying mehendi to her hand……………………..sumo is physically present there…but her mind is

Somwhere else……………………………..
Flashback
Naanu to sumo:beta lakshay ke ghar se rishta aaya hai tumhaare liye…………………lakshay bahot acha ladka hai…………………………..tum batao tum iss rishte ke liye raazi ho!
Sumo:mujhe kuch time chahiye!
Nanu (smiles):thik hai…..
Then she remembers
Lakshay:sumo,I am sorry for this..but actually my mom likes you very much ..so she came up with this
Relation…..i know we are friends..but I want to say I have started liking you or may be loving……………….
I am not convincing you ..you should take your decision………….whatever is your decision ,I will be there with you………………………………
Sumo(nods) and leaves…………………
Then she remembers saying yes for this alliance………………………
Present
She is teary eyed remembering all this…………………………..on the other side ,shravan is shocked and is unable to accept it……………………………………………
Sumo’s mehendi is done…………….
Sumo leaves from there………………she thinks its better to stay in her room for sometime…………
Shravan drags her to his room…………………….
Shravan closes the door …and forcefully holds her hand
Shravan: are ! dikhao kaha likha hai lakshay ka naam………………..

Sumo(screams):shravan,you are hurting me…………
Shravan leaves her hand…………………………
Shravan:suman,dikhao apna haath keval L likha hai ya pura naam lika hai…….
Sumo:bas karo shravan………….
Shravan:tum mujse itni badi baat kaise choopa sakti ho……………………
Sumo is speechless…
Shravan:tum mere saath aisa kaise kar sakti ho!
Sumo:shravan,maine aisa kya kiya……………….maine tumhe iss liye nahi bataya kyunki mujhe laga its better for us……………aur tum aise kyu react kar rahe ho…………………
Shravan:tum lakshay ke saath shaadi kaise kar sakti ho………………tum mujhe chod ke kaise jaa sakti ho………….you loved me .right..how can you leave me?how can you betray me?
Sumo:shravan, what are you saying………………I am not your mistress ..i also have to get married
Someday just like you………and I chose lakshay because he is my good friend………………………….
Sumo leaves from there…….shravan breaks down………….
In the evening,
Sumo near the same beach which she went with shravan and where she confessed her love …
Shravan comes from behind…………..

Shravan:tum bhi vahi soch rahi ho jo mai soch raha hoon iss beach ko dekhke…….
Sumo:,mai jaa rahi hoon ..shaam mein party hai aur uske liye taiyaar hona hai……………….
Sumo leaves…………….
Shravan(in mind):sumo! i have realized it that I can’t live without you…..i know you still love me…don’t worry I will make all the things correct………………soon you will be mine………..
In the cocktail party arranged by kamini….
Sumo comes dressed in a black night gown……..shravan is staring at her……………..and Sumo is trying hard to stay away from Shravan….shravan is drinking wine at bar….
Lakshay comes to Sumo.Lakshay puts hand on Sumo’s shoulder….sumo is uncomfortable but doesn’t expresses it…..(is there any need to say that Shravan is jealous)
Lakshay :kaha reh gayi thi………………I was waiting for you?
Sumo:haa voh ……..

Preeti (interrupts):di,jiju kitna wait kar rahe the aapka..deho abhi tak kuch piya bhi nahi…….chalo ab kuch peete hai….
They all go to the bar….By mistake,sumo drinks wine………….sumo start feeling uncomfortable
And goes aside .she also spilled water on her dress due to drowsiness…. all this while ,shravan is seeing her..and he follows her………….she starts feeling dizzy….Shravan comes and holds her….
Screen freezes…………………………………..

Precap: twist ………….and we twist…………………………………

Thanks for reading this……………………….
Guys , I have not written the next epi yet……………it depends on the response which I will get from you guys,that i should continue writing ff or not………………..
Thanks to all those who constantly commented on my ff………………………………………………………….

Credit to: lily

42 comments

  1. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Of course u should lily…coz I m super duper excited for d…next epi….d epi was very nice… Jealousy in d air😊😊
    Post soon…waiting eagerly…☺☺

  2. Gargi

    Wow,just marvellous. Shravu’s jealousy is cute.make shravu’s name written in mehndi by mistake.plz.update soon What do u all think of the current track of edkv on sony? Plz unite shraman and let shravu know truth of his father.

  3. Heena mutreja

    hey lily….u should continue yrr plsss…its a request….maine aapki story ke sare parts pde hai aur mujhe aapki story bhot hi achhi lgti hai….but kbhi comments nhi krti thi….uske liye sooooorrrrrrryyyyyyyyyy…..plssss plssss ye story continue rkhna….aage se mai hamesha comment krungi.

  4. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    it was amazing n I want u to complete it … plz..
    n m very excited for the next epi.. 😍😍😍

  5. Nandini aka Nandu

    Oh comeon lily di! Kisne kaha that we dont like jr ff. I just love love love it. I had been waiting for this part so curiously and u said that u dont want to continue. Forget it, pls pls complete it and no worroes for comments. U surely will get loads of them. Love . Keep writing.

  6. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    It was super duper awwwwesome nd m super duper excited for the next ep 😊😊 .. plzzzz continue it .. lol 😂 JEALOUSY JEALOUSY all around ..

  7. lovely lady

    reallyyyy jealousy was all around
    still i loved that bcoz beech beech me wo romance tadka rahta tha
    sry fr not cmmntng on d last ff
    i wll surely cmmbt on all ffs now

  8. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Of course u should continue yr….!!
    I loved it to d core….!! Jealous shr serial Mai Bhi n yahan Bhi Bechara……. 😀
    Waiting fr nxt ep…..
    When will u post nxt chappy..?

  9. pretty preeti

    Lily it was super cool
    Yaar feeling bad but soon ur cments will be Increase
    Ok darling
    Not to worry
    Loved ur ff RPI
    Post soon
    My sweety pie
    A lot of love

  10. Loga

    Nice episode😊 Pls continue i m waiting for ur next ep.sry for not commenting in ur previous ff’s bcoz I m a silent reader

  11. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    What an epi just love it 100 epi to must he. lekin usse kam nahi. mujhe hi dekh lo maine logose cmnt jitna nahi paya kudh ne usse jayada cmnt kiya

  12. Naina

    I m sooooo sorry lily as i was unable to comment on ur previous epis i was a but busy with the family and all so i didnt had time to comment but they were all amazing and this one was also interesting post next epi soon i just cant wait to see the twist

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