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Home»Sony TV»Ek Duje Ke Vaste»ek duje ke vaaste reloaded (part 11)
Ek Duje Ke Vaste Fan Fiction

ek duje ke vaaste reloaded (part 11)

administratorBy administratorJuly 23, 201623 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey I am lily.As per you guys I will go with the second choice…I also liked that more ……….It will take time to bring that twist in the story. First I have to build the story upto that level…………..sorry for the late episode .coincidently,two of my scenes in this epi is similar to the scenes shown in the last two epis of the serial …lol.actually I had written this epi two days ago…so sorry for the similarity…………………plz comment
Heres my ff previous link
part-10
Recap:their romance in the garden
Shraman day out.
Shraman went to many places and recalled their past…………….it was a sweet and a simple day for them with some nok jokhs…
Now they are going back to home….shravu is dropping sumo…
(hey ,in my stoy preekar are already a couple.and only sumo knows about it….)
Sumo:acha shravan,tumhe pata hai!
Shravu:mujhe toh bahot baatein pata hai,tum batao tumhe kya jaanana hai(naughtily)!
Sumo makes faces ..
Sumo:I am serious…
Shravu:ok baba tell me!
Sumo:actually,yesterday nanu and I had a conversation….nanu was saying that I should marry now…
Shravu suddenly stops the car..
Sumo:kya hua!
Shravu(loudly):toh yeh problem hai!
Sumo:car kharab ho gayi?
Shravu(hits his head):I am talking about your problem
Sumo:(ohh)
Shravu:toh tumhari shaadi ho rahi hai…itni jaldi..
Sumo:no this is not the problem..vaise meri shaadi ki age toh ho gayi hai…
Shravu:nahi !
Sumo:voh sab chodo…actually then I convinced nanu to give me some more time to establish my pct..
Shravu(relieved):ohh!then whats the problem..
Sumo:due to this preeti is getting married first .preeti and pushkar love each other…
Shravu(shocked):really!kissi ne mujhe kuch nahi bataya…
Sumo(laughs):tum ho hi itne daraavne…
Shravu:ab kaun serious nahi hai.!
Sumo:ok ok , pushkar and preeti are scared to tell their love to everyone..so I want you to help pushkar In this whole matter…and I will help preeti …
Shravu nods…
Next scene,
Shravu convinces his family members..on the other side sumo convinces her family members……………..
Shravu calls sumo
Sharavu:ma’am aapka kaam ho gaya..sab maan gaye hai..
Sumo(excited):waah!maine bhi sabko convince kar liya iss rishte ke liye………………
Shravu:toh abse tum mujhe shravan ji keh kar bulaogi! ok!
Sumo: kyu! shravan ji aapne koi jang jeeta hai!
Shravu: hum ladke vale hai!
Sumo: ladke waale!my foot…I will call you chashmish only..like I used to call you in childhood……….
Shravu smiles.
Sumo: Chalo mai late ho rahi hoon…mujhe market jaana hai, coffee peena hai,bahot kaam hai!
I think you know kal pooja hamare ghar hai to ushi ke liye jaana hai…you are coming na?
Shravu:haanh!
Sumo:chalo bye..
Shravu: one sec, tumne kaha tumhe coffee peena hai,yeh kaunsa kaam hai..
Sumo:actually ,lakshay,remember the guy you met in that restaurant ,he called me for a coffee..so I have to go there also …
Shravu makes faces…..
Shravu(cold response):ohh,ya I remember…………..the doctor..
Sumo:ya,actually that day he left the dinner in mid …so to compensate that he has called me for a coffee..
Shravu:hmm
Sumo:chalo byee ,I am getting late..i have to get ready also..nahi toh lakshay ko wait karna pad jaega..
Sumo cuts the call..
Shravu(fumes):madam taiyaar ho rahi hai …ek sec bhi ache se baat nahi kar sakti kyunki unhe to coffee peena hai lakshay ke saath..hmmm
At malhotra house,
nirmala:ab pushkar ki bhi shaadi hone waali hai ………………bas ab shravan bacha hai…..
raamnath:shravan ki bhi shaadi jaldi ho jaegi…maine ek bahot achi ladki dekha hai…….
Lalaji : bahisaab kaun?
Raamnath:mr verma ,mere dost uski beti tanya…..
Shravan is shocked …………..
Raamnath:hum dono dost ne toh shaadi fix kar di hai…bas ab bacho ko milna hai……
Shravan is totally confused.he can’t say no as raamnath has already fixed the marriage after asking shravu when he was in london…but cant even say yes as he can’t stay with a girl whom he doesn’t love…………..
Shravu:mujhe yeh shaadi toh karni hogi..maine haanh kiya tha tab papa ne yeh rishta fix kiya tha…
Shravu:but I am feeling like I will loose something…………..
Shravu:no, iam feeling like I will loose sumo..
Shravu:it means I still love her…………
Shravu:no, it is not possible..i shouldn’t think about her….she is just my good friend…………..
Next scene,pooja at tiwari killa………………….
Everyone is busy in preparations …
Sumo is making rangoli…lakshay is also present there helping dabuu…(rangoli-it is a colourful pattern made by colours on the floor and it is a auspicious thing.)
(I hope you remember lakshay’s family and tiwaris family are family friends)
Malhotras except shravan comes inside the home…everyone greets them…
Sumo continues making rangoli…some dust particles enters her eyes.
lakshay helps her by blowing air into her eyes…just then shravu comes inside ..shravan gets jealous seeing them like this………….
Shravan:suman!
Sumo is fine now…….
Sumo:ohh hii shravan……….
Lakshay:hii shravan..
Shravan(cold response):hii ……………….
Sumo:chalo pooja start hone waali hai…
Everyone gets seated….
Shravan is sitting with his family…and sumo is sitting with lakshay…
Shravan fumes in anger seeing both of them together………………
Then maamiji calls sumo: beta jao aur saari cheese kitchen se lekar aayo…
Sumo:hanji maamiji…
Lakshay:sumo!ruk…I am also coming ..i will help you..
Shravan (in mind):isse to help karne ka bahot shauk hai!
Now ,,the priest first call s the couples as they will do aarti together..
Everyone turn by turn did aarti..it was shravans turn…he was not doing aarti properly…a everyone was lost in prayers , so no one noticed it..
Then sumo comes from kitchen and corrects him by holding his hand…and they both end up doing aarti together…
Shravan thinks about priest’s words and was really happy..shravan didn’t realise that how happy he is on just a thought of sumo and shravan being a couple………………………………………………… ………………………..this is enough for us to know that shravan
Loves her very much……………………………………………………………………………..and they are ek duje ke vaaste……………….
Precap-kamini’s plan to unite shraman……………shraman’s visit to goa…………….

Plz comment………

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23 Comments

  1. WeirdSister on July 23, 2016 5:04 pm

    It was nice lily…nd yaah…same scenes in d serial…!!
    ☺☺

    • Lily on July 23, 2016 6:06 pm

      Thanx

  2. Prettypreeti on July 23, 2016 5:31 pm

    Wow lily it was nice epi post next one asap loved it keep writing
    The track is very sweet and loving it
    Bye
    Love u

    • Lily on July 23, 2016 6:06 pm

      Thanx pretty

  3. Nikita on July 23, 2016 5:41 pm

    Very amazing..haha same scenes.. Cv’s and your thoughts match.. Loved it.. Post soon

    • Lily on July 23, 2016 6:24 pm

      Thanx Nikita

  4. Marie on July 23, 2016 5:48 pm

    Wow yr amazing i loved it…..!
    Nxt post kb karo gi?
    Plz Post asap asap asap……..!! 🙂 🙂

    • Lily on July 23, 2016 6:23 pm

      Thanks Marie.. And next may be tomorrow or day after tomorrow

  5. Marie on July 23, 2016 5:55 pm

    P.S this is frm khushi also…..
    (due to lot of studies she cant cmmnt write now) 🙂

    • Lily on July 23, 2016 6:24 pm

      Thanx Khushi

  6. Nandini aka Nandu on July 23, 2016 6:44 pm

    Really nice lily. And yes a strange coincidence! The precap seems interesting so please please post the next part soon. And with soon i mean it really jaldi. Please. Lots of love.

    • Lily on July 23, 2016 7:49 pm

      Thanx yaar

  7. LovelyLady on July 23, 2016 6:56 pm

    hi lily……..
    it was amazing to see a jealous shravan…..
    the way he realized his love … n his reactns on lakahya was amazing…….
    n most imp i loved last prt of aarti …. i m still blushing on that…..

    • Lily on July 23, 2016 7:50 pm

      Thanx yaar

  8. Fatimagulesarfraz on July 23, 2016 7:33 pm

    Hello lily !!!! This ep was amazing awwwwesome???? … nd lol shravan’s jealousy (bachy ko jalan ho rae hy??) … story is going really well … hopefully this lakshya will not create any SYAPA in track .. btw post ASAP ASAP !!!
    waiting eagerly for the next part !!!
    Stay blessed !!!! ??

    • Lily on July 23, 2016 8:59 pm

      Thanks yaar…..lakshay is not a important character .he is just to push shravan….. love you

  9. sona on July 23, 2016 8:33 pm

    Ya…lilly..story should reach the level..WHR it can take the big twist..and about the story..even though it was similar to episode..I will be always happy..to watch shravu jealousy..and love for sumo????☺☺☺
    And thank god..he was realising he loves sumo..OK..nw..have to watch how..he will get rid from..Tanya and his engagement..??☺☺
    And kya sumo bhi jealousy hogi..aur realise karegi ki she loves shravu after listening shravan Tanya’s..engagement???????
    Pls..do and?☺?

    • lily on July 23, 2016 9:42 pm

      thanx sona

  10. Fatarajo on July 23, 2016 9:19 pm

    wow lily interesting yaar dear love ur story update soon 🙂
    cant wait for shravan to realize his love

    • lily on July 23, 2016 9:43 pm

      thanx jo

  11. lily on July 23, 2016 11:19 pm

    acha guys i have posted the next epi..it will be a dhamakedaar epi and a long one……………so read that for sure……………………

  12. sumo on July 25, 2016 3:50 am

    it was really mast… i liked it to d core..❤

    • Lily on July 25, 2016 2:23 pm

      Thanx sumo

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