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Ek Duje Ke Vaaste: One Reason [Two Shot by Nikita] {Pt2}

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Chapter-2

Hey guys… How are you all? Okay I know that you’re excited for the part, so there you go… And ps- this is freaking long, so bear with it..
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-Next Day-

Suman wakes up.. To her surprise she sees Shravan sitting beside her bed, just looking at her in aww, and smiling..

Suman: Shravan?
Shravan: hmm?
Suman: why are you sitting over here?
Shravan *gets up and sits in front of Suman in her bed, as she got up and is resting her head in the wall* wo… I found a reason, why you can’t marry him…
Suman: why?
Shravan: because…. He has a mother…
Suman: so?
Shravan: so you’re gonna get a dangerous mother-in-law, who’s gonna make you work like servant day all night, just like here, mami makes you work..
Suman: sshh.. Don’t say that. They’re my family.. And about my mother-in-law, what can I do?
Shravan: you can marry someone like me! I have no mother, so no mother-in-law problems…

At this point, their eye-lock just deepens…

Suman *did he just confess indirectly? Did he just propose me for the marriage? What does this guy want?* *she looks at Shravan’s hand, that has been tightly wrapped around her fist, and her hand is covering it*

Shravan: I mean, what if that lady turns into those dangerous TV-Shows mother-in-law..?
Suman: that would not happen Shravan, I’ve
talked to her, she’s fine with me working at PCT, she’s fine with me not working at home..I’m pretty sure she’s not gonna be those typical desi saas from TV..
Shravan: oh…

He removes his hand and gets up to go

Suman: don’t go please..
She says holding his hand while his back faces her..
Shravan: let me go…
Suman notices sadness in his voice.. She gets up and stands in front of him…
Shravan: Sumo
Suman: what’s wrong?
Shravan: I don’t know.. I just don’t know…
Suman: maybe, I could help you..
Shravan: no… None of you can..
He walks away… But couldn’t as Suman was still holding him..

Shravan *how I wish I could confess.. But dad, it’s always been him.. Why doesn’t he like this beautiful face, I don’t know.. At times it’s just enough of him*

Suman: Shravan, please…
Shravan: I can’t… None of you would ever understand.. None of you would ever get.. Especially you and your family.. You praise my dad so much..
Suman *annoyed* my family might, I don’t
*she had reasons*
Shravan: why?
Suman: you had to go, na?
Shravan *nods and leaves with a tear in his eye*

Suman’s hand just drop down with a thud.. She never wanted this.. Any of this.. Yet she had to get ready.. Today was her engagement..

Preeti: di, why wouldn’t you tell Pushkar all about Ramnath uncle?
Suman: cause none would ever understand..
Preeti: di, me and Pushkar would fight for our love, just like you did… Di, everything would be fine…
Suman: I can’t

Preeti * if you won’t I would*

*PreeKar ain’t married here*

Preeti goes slamming inside the door of Pushkar’s room..

Pushkar: Hey, we aren’t married yet.. You don’t have the right to slam inside my room like that..
Preeti *angrily* Shut up!
Pushkar: what’s wrong Preeti?
Preeti: don’t you know what all is going on..
Pushkar: Sumo?
Preeti: you were the one who used to tell that there’s something between Shravan and Suman di!
Pushkar: I know..
Preeti *angrily* so would you not even care? You knew there’s something, you know Suman di’s getting engaged today!
Pushkar: I can’t.. I just can’t
Preeti: I knew it, waise toh humare matters mei itne tez ho.. When it comes to them, you’re as good as nothing!
Pushkar: it’s not that I don’t care..

Preeti: now you would.. Listen to me..
*she narrates everything from nirmala, to why she agreed for adi’s marriage, to accepting PCT to Ramnath’s promise*
Pushkar: WHAT?
Preeti: yes! They love each other, and they jusst can’t stop…
Pushkar: I need to do something..
Preeti: happy realization..
Pushkar *gives a huh? look*
Preeti: I’m telling you.. Agar aaj 7 bajne se pehle agar di ki engagement ke pehle shravan aur suman di saath nahi aaye na, toh phir I won’t marry you
Pushkar: what?
Preeti: because I love my family!

Pushkar: nahi nahi.. Wo dono saath honge..
Preeti: good..
She walks out leaving a confused/tensed Pushkar in his room
Pushkar: kya karu? Kya karu?

———–

Pushkar: try to understand.. You guys are destined to be together…
Shravan: NO!
Pushkar: remember, that day when you were running, and you were mad at Suman, you just unknowingly reached in front of Tiwari Killa (remember this episode? Suman then felt his presence and came, but till then he had left?) …. Don’t you see, wherever you run from, whatever way you take, you’re gonna end up on Sumo.. Sumo is your destiny..

Shravan * how did he get to know about that run, anyways, Pushkar he is, it’s possible with him *
Pushkar: You stayed back, instead of leaving for London, for her, her house… She made you suffer so much, and you did too, yet you both remained together, as 1.. That’s what LOVE is bhaiyya! Now don’t tell me you don’t love her.. What about that rose you took for her when you went to propose her, but you met Nirmala Aunty? That rose is still in your drawer.. That letter you wrote to her,still is in that crossword book.. The letter she wrote to you still remains in that box with her.. You love each other bhaiyya.. You always have, and you always will..
Shravan: I don’t know what to say..
Pushkar: I LOVE YOU!
Shravan: what?

Pushkar: look, it’s 6:30 right now.. 7:00 pe uski engagement hai.. Go get her before anyone else..
Shravan: what?
Pushkar: dhanya ho aap bhaiyya!
Pushkar walks out leaving a confused Shravan behind..

-6:45-

The Malhotra’s left for her engagement.. Except for Shravan. How can he even see her love of her life getting engaged? He had made an excuse of not being well.. This whole thing freaked Pushkar out..! *what if I and Preeti don’t get married… C’mon Shravan bhaiyya! Don’t do this!*

-7:00-

Mamiji: Suman, come outside after 5 minutes..
Suman: okay..
Dabboo: Suman didi..
Suman: Dabboo, Shravan aya hai?
Dabboo: Nahi..
Suman: okay..

———

Preeti: di chalo!
Suman: you go, I’ll come..

Preeti walks out…
And as soon as Suman is about to go, someone holds her hand from the back..
She turns…

‘Shravan?’

Shravan smiles..
Suman notices him, still in his sweat-pants and a plain-tee..

Suman: Shravan? I have to go.. They’re waiting for me..
Shravan: I have to say something!
Suman: what?
Shravan: I found the ONE reason why Aryan is not apt for you!
Suman *smiling sadly* because his name sounds weird..like he’s ssending away a fly?
Shravan nods in no, Smiling..
Suman: because his mom is gonna be a deadly mother-in-law to me?
Shravan nods in no again..
Suman: then what? What is that ONE reason?
Shravan: Because I LOVE YOU jhalli!
Suman: What?

Shravan: that’s the reason, you can’t marry him.. You don’t love HIM, you love ME! That’s the perfect ONE reason, right?
Suman nods crying and Shravan pulls her into a bone-crushing hug…

Suman *finally Shravan realized that ONE reason*

AKHIR MIL HI JAATE HAI DIL JO BANE…
EK DUJE KE VAASTE…..

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How was it? Boring? Or not?

Do give your reviews!

47 Comments
  1. Anushika

    On My God,Loved it,Loved it,Loved it…
    Previously in another 2shot I had told that CV’s should take ideas from you…..I can’t help it but I will still repeat that…
    It was amazing ….
    I am completely speechless to tell my views on it..
    ..pls post more Os\Ts like this…
    Lots of Love
    Take care

    1. Nikita

      ANU!
      Awwhh..!
      I love you so so much!
      Thank you so much!
      Love you,
      Nikita…:)

  2. Anushika

    On My God,Loved it,Loved it,Loved it…
    Previously in another 2shot I had told that CV’s should take ideas from you…..I can’t help it but I will still repeat that…
    It was amazing ….
    I am completely speechless to tell my views on it..
    ..pls post more Os\Ts like this…
    Lots of Love
    Take CARE …
    And lost more Two shot

    1. Nikita

      Though your comment came twice, thank you so much!
      Love you Anu so much <33

  3. It was not….. πŸ™‚
    It was damm awesome n great…..
    Loved it n love u so much darling…..
    Sorry fr short cmmnt but i also have one reason……
    Ps:its ur mario di only……

    1. Nikita

      Awhh!
      Love you so much di!
      Shravan ne reason de diya, aap bhi de do..

  4. WeirdSister

    Woww…
    I feel like giving u a hug now…!!!
    It was so amazingggggg…
    Loved loved loved it…!!
    Love u..
    Take care…
    😊😊😊😊

    1. Nikita

      Awwhh..! Diii.. <33
      Thank you so much..
      Love you!

  5. Nikkkkkkkkuuuuuu
    This is perfect, my girl!
    U write the best, BAE!
    Do post MFK soon.
    Love u dea😘

    1. Nikita

      Awwh Laddoo..
      Not the best , but good enough to entertain you!
      Thank you so much.. BAE, you’re love!
      Love youh!
      -ur BAE
      [Code word for us, done?]

  6. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Nikki yar !!!!!
    Kya likhti ho yar … tooooooooooooo good .. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    Beautiful one 😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍
    Love 😘😘😘😘
    Take care ..

    1. Nikita

      Oooyyii..
      Dii.. Thank you πŸ™‚
      Love youuu
      -Nikita πŸ™‚

  7. kya baat hai niki !!!! preekar can do such a job only in dreams and ur ff.
    i love u jhalli…. inovative confession…. stay blessed and yes waiting 4 ur ff

    1. Nikita

      Deotima!
      Awwh!
      Actually..
      PreeKar ye sab yahi karte hai.. Ye sab yahi ho sakta hai..
      Awh.. Thank you!
      Love you

  8. How u guys write so awesome😍

    1. Nikita

      Mitthhuu..
      Thank you!

  9. Awww this was so perfect.
    Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. πŸ’•
    Writers of edkv should learn something from you girl.
    You wrote amazingly beautiful. 😍
    You are the best.
    Loads of love 😘

    1. Nikita

      Zainab <3
      Thank you so so much!
      No, yaar they're good as they are..
      Thank you bae!
      Love youuu!
      Nikita πŸ™‚

      1. They’re good and there’s no doubt in that but you’re amazing 😘

    2. Nikita

      That’s damn sweet Zainab.. Thank you so much! <3

  10. Haha…
    Lolll…
    Nikita😊😊😊
    Lagta hai….serial mey preekar chupi ney him sabh ko kitna irritate kiya shravu ki maamley mey…
    Tumney vo saara frustration nikaal dhi yaha…
    Chalo serial mey na sahi Teri ff mey tho kuch naam aayeπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜
    Nice one..
    Dear😘

    1. Nikita

      Awwhh.. Shona!
      That’s damn sweet of you!
      I know man, PreeKar are just…
      Anyways, thank you so much!
      Love you!

  11. It was such a master piece awesome adorable amazing one I loved it πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’žπŸ’ž
    How could you type boring at the end of such a amazing one

    Of course I am new here but I can’t stop commenting

    1. Nikita

      Ouuwwhh.. That’s so sweet of you..
      Fine I won’t call it boring..
      Aww, I’m glad that you commented!
      Thank you so much !
      Love you dev’s fan πŸ™‚

  12. Sriya

    umhhh okay nikister it was phenomenal exceptional one spectacular fantabulous out of the universe space heaven or whatever i can think of i think u should be the story writer of edkv then i would watch like a crazy mad…! and it would be super duper hit and become the best show in the entire universe even if cvs would b of 100 yrs they can’t u get ur brain and maturity level it is something beyond this universe..! ur ts and ur ff which ended shraman-preekar a love story is something which can’t be expressed in words…! it can be conveyed through emotions and love…!! i love will keep loving i loved them from the deep down of my heart…!! lots of huggies and kisses to u muahhhh..!! u rock di…!! ur the best when it comes to ts in the entire universe space heaven…!! tc…!! do write more ts…!! keep smiling always…!!

    1. Nikita

      Sriyu!
      That’s just too too much me!
      I’m not THAT great yaar.. Don’t do that!
      No, the EDKV writer are superb..
      Cause if it hadn’t been for them, we wouldn’t have got ShraMan, and I wouldn’t have got the idea to write thi..
      But that’s just tooo sweett of you.
      Thank you so much..
      I love you sooooo much!

  13. Ariana

    Omg Niki u rock!!! Just kill me. Well u already did kill 90% of me by making me very ill with ur sweetness. I can’t stop giggling imagining the end. Soooooooooooo cute!! It was fantastic! Brilliant! Wonderful ts. N sorry for a late reply. I had a crushed schedule but ur write up just ended my day perfectly. So thanks soooo much
    love u beyond words
    take care
    all the best for ur exams
    my blessings n gd wishes r with u
    byeeeeee sweetheart

    1. Nikita

      Awhh, I won’t kill you, NEVER..
      You give such sweet comments to me, your enemies sshould die, not you!
      And I was giggling at the end while writing that too.. I had planned the end this way..
      You’re having a busy life, do rest..
      I’m glad I could make you happy!
      Thank you do much didi..!
      Thank you for your blessings!
      I love you!

  14. Y.balamirra

    Very nice nikita

    1. Nikita

      Thank you so much!

  15. Angel20

    It was mindblowing! I wanted to read more and more😭😭 but it ended!
    So the reason was I LOVE YOU! That was amazing!!
    Loved it!
    Love youπŸ’•

    1. Nikita

      Awwh.. Thank you so much..
      Yep..the reason was that
      Thank you!
      Love you..

  16. It was amazing…I am a silent reader..but couldt resist commenting on it
    Btw..i had writyen a story on edkv named “He was my dream” on wattpad..please read it guys..I hope you like it
    Leelly

    1. Anushika

      Sure will read it ,why don’t you post it here as well

      1. Well,there are some problems that why I am not able to sign in yet..thnx

      2. Well,there are some problems that why I am not able to signsign in…btw thnx for reading

    2. Nikita

      Awhh.. It feels so good to get new silent readers commenting on my work..
      Thank you so much..
      Hey, why don’t you publish it here?
      Anyways, I would surely read it..

      1. Awww..your work deserves 50 + comments…well my account is having some problem that’s why I am not able to sign up yet..hope you like that..thnx

  17. BTW…sorry for spelling mistakes

    1. Nikita

      Are its okay..
      Chill.. <33

  18. too good ,awesome jhakass loved it

    1. Nikita

      Thank you so much!

  19. RANdomfANCreationz

    Too good yaar loved it to the core when i was reading i didn’t realise when it got ended it was this good loved the way they hug

    1. Nikita

      Awhh
      Thank you so much joyee
      Thank you!
      Love you!

  20. Angel_pari

    I,m gone seriously!!!!!!!!

    I hv no words left now

    coz everyone has said everything already

    so take a tight hug frm me

    superb shots

    1. Nikita

      Awwh!
      Thank you so much di!
      *hugs back*
      Love you!

  21. Nikita

    I’m glad you liked it Prince
    Thank you so much..
    Yep, the articles here are beautiful.. <33

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