Ek Duje Ke Vaaste: Love, Friendship, or Something More? Epi 7

I’m back with another epi. This one is actually “big” not long. And I might make this a week twist and not post the nxt part till Wdnesday or something. Idk. It depends on ur responds. So here comes the 7th epi

Previous epi link:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/ek-duje-ke-vaaste-love-friendship-something-epi-6/

Recap: Shravan is shocked knowing the girl he had a crush on is Suman, his childhood best friend/love. He tries to ignore her. While leaving Tiwari house Sumo calls him

Suman was standing a feet away from him. His heart was beating as the same rhythm as hers. She gulped, took a deep breath and fixed her voice as he kept on looking at her with those questioning eyes.
Suman *breaking the eye contact as it made her feel rougher and looking at the ground*: Woh… I’m sorry Shravan. Jobhi daas saal pehle hua, I really didn’t mean it. Woh mera bachpana tha…..Aur ub toh Nirmala aunty-Ramnath uncle ke beech saab kuch thik hogaya, toh kya hum fir se…..
Shravan *disgusted*: Ladkio ke liye yeh saab itna asaan kaise hota hai? *Suman gives a confusing look* Pehle galti karna, fir maafi mangna, aur firse galti karna…..Is it so easy to break someone’s trust like this?

Suman (she was unaware of his newborn feelings towards her): Kya? Mai kuch samjha nahi
Shravan *“as if I care” look*: Jankar bhi anjan maat bano. 10 saal pahle jobhi hua uske liye tum bilkul bhi guilty nahi ho. Agar hota toh usdin party pe bhi apologize karsakte the
Suman: Party pe mai unprepared tha. And I wasn’t even sure it was you until…..until I read ur eyes….And u even acted so normal
Shravan (trying to act as if he always knew it was her (Sumo) in the party and on that anat ashram): Iska matlab mai normal behave karte rahti toh tum mujhse kabhi mafi nahi mangti? U r not ashamed of what u did.

Suman nodded denying to what he said
Shravan: Aur coffee par?
Suman: Tum bohat khush the *gulp* aur mai tumhe udaas nahi karna chatithi
Shravan *nearly abt to melt but his ego popped up*: Baas karo yaar…Aur kitna jhut bologi? Upna so-called concern tum upne pass e rakho. Anyways I moved on….it has been 10 years….U should move on too….humare beech kuchbhi age ki tadha nahi hoga….

Shravan regretted on his last words the very next second as shiny water started appearing in her eyes….Those eyes which made him fall for her twice….He hurt those precious eyes…he didn’t mean to… As she blinks involuntarily, large water drops rolling down her soft red cheeks in the same speed as his ego, hatred, angry fell off him. He wanted to give her a tight hug but his brain reminded him of his boundaries… He was helpless…so was she… She felt weak now…very weak… that she broke down in front for her friend…who means nothing to her now… She regretted not on those tears, but on her expectations…which kept growing on these 3692 days…
Suman *wiping off her tears and breaking her muscles painfully to act normal*: Anyways Pushkar toh mera dost hai…ajbhi….Uska favourite gajar ka halwa banaya tha…socha tumhe deedu. Tum use dedena. Bohat khush hoga woh bhukkad. *Handing him a tiffin box*

Ahhhhh….Wow! Gajar ka halwa…But for Pushkar…..not for him….Did she forget all those days when he did her homeworks just to have a bowl of gajar ka halwa? Okay so she doesn’t care about him much….
Putting a stone on his heart, he took the tiffin box from her hand and walked to his car without uttering a single word. No byes….no thank you….no take care…nothing….But both had the same question in their mind, “Does friends say good bye like this?”

___________ (night)__________

Tiwari house

Sumo on phone talking to Pushkar
Pushkar: Thanks yaar!!! Gajar ka halwa, woh bhi mere liye. Maine toh socha tha bhaiya ko dekhkar tuh mujhe buljaegi.
Suman: Dost ko kaise bhuljate hai woh maina nahi sikha. Shravan se kabhi sikhlungi.
Pushkar: Haan woh note bhi mere liye hi thi….By the way, bhaiya ne tujhe bataya unke naya crush ke bareme?
Suman *shocked*: New crush? Kon?
Pushkar: Pata nahi
Suman: Toh use jake puch
Pushkar: Bhaiya ko bhi pata nahi woh kon hai
Suman: Joke tha? Bohat ghatia wala for ur kind info
Pushkar: Joke nahi I’m serious. Crush tha ya fir kuch aur woh toh nahi jaanti par woh ladki thi kamal ka. Bhaiya ka dil jit liya. He was so impressed by her qualities
Suman: Kya bolraha hai mai kuch bhi nahi samaj rahihon
Pushkar: Areh jab tu tere family ke sath kanpoor pe tha, humare yaha ek party tha Shravan bhaiya ke aane ke khushi me. Waha bhaiya ne kisi ladki se takrai joh…
Suman *imagining her first encounter with him* : bohat hi simple bheez me aaithi. No makeup, aur kapree bhi bohat ordinary tha.
Pushkar: Haan. Tujhe kaise pata?

Suman *coming back to sense*: Haha…guess tha…Shravan ko us ladki acha laga? *excitement*
Pushkar: Acha nahi bohat acha laga. Kaal bhi milithe woh anat ashram ke bahar jaha tu Nirmala aunty ke sang jatahai. Aur fir dono coffee date par bhi gaya. Par bhaiye ne naam puchna bhul gayi. Bhaiya use jaise describe kiya mujha laga tu hogi par tuh toh kanpoor tha.
Suman couldn’t believe anything she heard. Shravan didn’t know who she was before he came to her house. That’s why he was so nice with her. Now…when he came to know that she is Sumo, he brought all his anger up. Once again water started rolling down her cheeks. This time, her cheeks were red and she could feel the warmth. Probably the anger. How could he not recognize her?
Pushkar: Hello? Hello Sumo …..mar gayi kya?
Suman trying to fix her voice as she replied to ensure her presence.
Pushkar: Kya baat hai Sumo? Tu rorahi hai?
Suman *cleared her husky throat*: Nahi toh
Pushkar: Kya hua? Bhaiya ne kuch….

Suman cuts the phone as she couldn’t stop herself. Her tone hiked up with every drop which came out of her eyes. The last time she cried like this was….when her parents died….She ran out of her house as neither could she hold on nor she wanted to break down in front of her family.

Malhotra House

Pushkar banged the door of Shravan’s room
Shravan *shocked*: Chote?
Pushkar: bhaiya upne Sumo ke sang kya kia? *in a high tone*
Shravan trying to miss eye conact: Kuch…kuch bhi toh nahi
Pushkar: Haan Sumo toh aisei rorahithi. Time pass ke liye
Shravan in his mind: Yeh ladki!!! Bachpaan me akhse ek asu bhi nahi nikalti thi, aur ab rona shona band hi nahi hota.
He scuffs his voice: Agar yoh roe toh mera kya? Aur tu mujhe kyu blame kar rahi hai?
Pushkar: Anjan maat bania. Sumo bilkul thik thi. Apka naam liya aur rone lagi
Shravan: Toh fir agli baar mera naam math lena

Pushkar: bhaiya ap thik toh haina? Kya bakwas kar rahehain? Sumo upka bachpan ka best friend
Shravan: tha…ub humare beech kuch nahi hai
Pushkar: Matlab ajbhi up use maaf nahi kiya
Shravan: She isn’t even guilty. Mai kahase maaf kado?
Pushkar: R u kidding? Sumo 10 saal intezaar kiya sirf ek sorry bolneke liye. Woh collage me harek din mujhe akar puchta tha mere upse koi baat huihai kya aur maine upko uski taraf se sorry bola hai kya. Par upke sang toh kisika bhi contact nahi tha……so she waited….
Shravan: Toh? She should feel sorry for what she did
Pushkar: Haan woh sorry toh bola lakin up maaf nahi kiya. Bhaiya she is already dying because of her guilt, use aur mat tarpao
Shravan: Nahi toh! Maine toh aj nahi dekha use marte hue, nd she doesn’t even remember me (opps kya boldia! She remembers me nd almost everything expect she gave u the gajar’s halwa)
Pushkar: Agar use kuch yaad nahi hota to haj woh gajar ka halwa nahi bhejta
Shravan: Woh TUMHARE liye tha
Pushkar: Haan aur yeh sorry note bhi *handing Shravan a piece of paper*

****Flashback
Shravan enters Malhotra House in anger and throws the tiffin box over the table.
Shravan *taunting tone*: Pushkar yeh SUMO ne khas TERE liye bheja hai
Pushkar *excited*: Kya?
Shravan: Gajar ka Halwa, TERA FAVOURITE!
Pushkar: Upka bhi toh fav hai, ao share karke khatahoon
Shravan: Nahi khas TERE liye hai. Aur mujhe kaam hai
Shravan walked to his room
Pushkar to himself: Bhaiya ko kya hua? Anyways mai pahle halwa khataho.
He opens the box and notices a paper taped at the bottom of it
Flashback ends****

Pushkar *frustrated*: Mujhe samaj nahi aati up Sumo ko maaf kyu nahi karti hai? And she is the kind of girl u want…Simple…Bold…Confident…Independent…Helping…Intrepid…
Shravan *irked*: Haaa…Aur bhi kuch hai….Selfish, childish, immature, irresponsible, careless, egoistic.
Pushkar *angry*: Bhaiya bassss! Bohat hogaya. And yah u r right indeed. She is careless. Kabhi khudke bareme nahi socha. She is childish kyuki woh bachoke sang miljata hai. She is irresponsible because she never takes the responsibility of her own happiness. Immature? Haa…Agar woh mature hota toh upke rudeness ko bare nahi karti….Aur kya kya bola? Selfish? Yes….she loves everyone selfishly. Aur up jise ego kahte hai, woh Sumo ka self-respect hai.
Pushkar leaves angrily but his words didn’t leave Shravan’s mind. Was she really crying? Did his words hurt her so badly? Why is he even caring? He looks at the piece of paper which lied still on his palm.

“I’m SORRY…..I mean it….Please maaf kardo….Dosto ke beech narazgi achi nahi hoti. 
So….maaf kiya? Ub mazese upna favourite gajar ka halwa khao. Maine upne hatho se banaya hai sirf tumhare liye. “

He read it over and over again specially the last three words……..SIRF tumhare liye….

Precap: She could feel him. His strong hands all around her shoulder. His warmth. His breaths; which were slow, cold and rhythmic to hers.
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So how was it? Ik full of mistakes nd stupid emotional events. But I enjoy writing ShraMan fights so I guess I’ll put some more. (jk, romance bhi hoga) So should this be a week twist and should I post the next epi on Wednesday or something? Idk. Let’s see what’s ur opinion. Nd…sry of mistakes, thank for reading nd don’t forget to comment.

51 comments

  1. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Hain…???
    Bht acha nxt Wednesday..??!!! Marna hai kya intezaar karwa karwa ke….
    Ek toh waise hi itna kamal dhamaal bemisaal ep likh kar mardia hai Adna ……..baqi ka intezaar karwa kar mar do…..
    nahi aaisa nai kar sakti ap…….I want it ASAP ASAP ASAP plzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzz
    I can’t wait or wo Bhi Wednesday tak na..na
    Ok ok so now coming to d ep……
    It was OMG wat to say……..zabardast…or_______________________________________ ye line Gil kar li jiay ga….cause mere paas toh words nai hain apki or apke ff ki tareeef ke liay… 😀
    Bs yahi kahoon gi dat may god keeps u happy always….
    N may god bless u…..
    N plz. Plz plz plz post nxt prt ASAP ASAP APNE reaction dekhlia na….
    Btw when will u gonna post nxt ep….?
    Plzz jaldi…jaldi..
    Ok take care…
    By …..
    Love u sooooo much…
    Frm ur sis…
    Maria 😉

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Wow…. If one epi gives me soooooooooo much blessings then I should never finish this ff. Thanks Maria. One day i’ll pay u the money u spent on buying butters. Di ka promise. And as for the next epi, idk when I’ll post it. Somewhere next week. Didn’t even write a line of that so it needs time. But I’ll wrap up soon and post asap. Tabtak………keep waiting…
      Love U

      • Marie

        |Registered Member

        Yay’…..!!!!!!!! Sunday is tommorow…!!
        Hahahah but maponday is d day after tommorow ……. 😀 😀
        Acha tell me one thing more is it long…??? Plz plz plz make it long….
        Hahahah butter ke liay paise….???
        Mera butter pe paise nai Lagta it’s free cause it came out frm my heart 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
        Love u
        Love u
        Love u sooo much
        Thank u sooo much fr writing it early….!!
        Take care

    • Ariana

      |Author

      K so I turned super responsible and finished the next part within an hr. So it’ll b up on Monday? Or Sunday? Which ever works.

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        Seriously. U r such a sweetheart. So now u have finished it pls post it tomorrow itself. Pls.🙏😁

      • Ariana

        |Author

        nahi yaar ab Maria ne long epi manga, so gotta make it long. So I guess I’ll post on Monday. Or I have to be toooooo responsible which is not my type

      • Ariana

        |Author

        Itna bhi sar pe mat chadao. 😜 my brain is not working 😭😭😭 wht to write for next epi continuation??? Uhhh lazy brain. But I’ll post whatever I have on Monday so fikr not nandu 😘

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        OK Ji no more chadoing on sir😂😂😂. Yes, so no fikr Ji. Maybe I can help u?? Only if I can😧

      • Ariana

        |Author

        Keep loving and supporting like this. It makees me feel warm and happy 😊. And do annoy me too. Then I feel like being responsible and write long epis soon.

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        Ok Ji. Kaam done.😎😝😁😂😂😂😂😂 I, specially me will keep annoying u and make u feel cozy and warm here. Lots of love to u di. Btw am 13 so, I will call u Arian afterwards.any problems??😅😅😅

  2. heena

    amazing, amazing, amazing episode…. mai to lost hi ho gyi thi….yaar kya likhti ho tum….marne ka Irada bnaya h kya tumne….itna achha mt likha kro…vrna mai to pkka hi mar jaungi….mera to mann kr rha tha ki bs pdhti hi jau, pdhti hi jau….kbhi khtm hi na ho….plsssssssss ek request h….next part jitna jaldi ho sake utna jaldi upload kr dena….mujhse itna lambbbbbaaaaaaaa intezar nhi hoga plssssssssss…..thank you yarrr….itne amazing episode k liye….

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Haeeeee! Itna tareef toh mummy ne bhi kabhi nahi kiya. Thanks soooooo much. The next epi will be up by Monday. I won’t keep u wait for soooo long. But, mar mat jana. If u die then I’ll cry nd stop posting epis.
      Love u

  3. Nandini aka Nandu

    What re u talking araiana di?? Wednesday will be too far. Pls post jaldi. Pls😵 u write so so well that I wait for ur updates anxiously. Lots of love. Post soon. Keep writing di. Excited for the precap. Pls post soon.

  4. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Hi ariana..
    Ab kya kahe
    Tum likhti hi aisa ho..
    That.. That I can feel the emotions of the characters.. It was damn lovely..
    And it’s okay, I like shraMan fights, but not too long.. Okay?
    The precap:
    Kya bolu.. I loved it….!! Post soon..
    And yes, I’m glad you brought back the cupid pushkar.. In EDKV, our pushkar’s got mad after falling in love.. Tumhare me I love the Pushkar.
    Post soon,
    Love,
    Nikita

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Ik after falling in love, Pushkar forgot ShraMan 😠😭 he only cares abt Preeti. That’s y I kept Preeti away from my ff. Won’t let her spoil my ff for now. Anyways tnx!!!! Love u

  5. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    Ariana
    Kya kaho yaar
    Itna aacha
    Loved each and every part
    I m mad
    Going to mental aslylum
    Today I read so many ff that now nothing is left I m mad on shraman
    Ur ff is so gud
    Could nt tell how much sweet
    Loved it
    What is ur age
    U r di or not
    Byeee

  6. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Ohhhhhh hy dear !!!!! What an ep What an ep !!!!! Fabulous amazinggggg awwwwesome awwwwdorable .. u left me speechless .. it was tooooooooooooo guddd .. just can’t imagine what’s gonna happen in the next part … nd the precap Wohooooooooooo !!!! What a precap .. dil jeet liya yar .. fabbbbbbb ..just fabbbbbbb .. u rockkkkkked girl … keep it uppppppp ..
    Post very sooooooon .. just can’t wait now ..
    Nd take care ..

  7. sona

    Nice one..
    Pushkar ney…in unusual bathey..jaisey..
    Immature..selfish..childish…ego …etc…ko bahut achey sey samjhaya..I liked it☺

  8. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    I loved loved loved it….!!!
    PushkAr rocked….!!!!
    Hey Ariana plz post asap…coz I just can’t wait….!!!
    It was fantastic…
    Fabulous….
    Mind blowing…
    Luv u
    Stay happy
    Stay blessed…
    Stay same…!!!😊😊

    • Ariana

      |Author

      If i stay same, then I’ll stay lazy nd will b lazy while writing the epis so I guess I gotta change for good. And thanks!!! I’m glad u loved it.

  9. Deotima

    hey ariana we r of same age. epi was great or rather greater than that word. it was fantastic. oh mine d precap again made me mad. u r a great writer.

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Thanks!!! But I’m probably the worst literature student u will ever face 😂 and as for age, ik almost all r -15 so don’t think too much abt the precap. I won’t go faaaaaarrrrrrr. 😜

  10. Anonymous

    Oh my… This was awesome. Loved reading it. You’re such an amazing writer 👌 And please post soon. Waiting anxiously. And yeah you write such mind blowing precaps that I really think how more amazing you can be 😍 Btw how old are you (If you don’t mind telling age 😉)? And… Where are you from?
    Anyway waiting for the next episode. 💜

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Thanks sooo much! So anonymous asks me questions 😂😂😂 jk. I’m 14 and I live in Canada. I’m from Bangladesh. Btw can I know ur name how wht should I call u? Just asking. Don’t mind.
      Love u 😙

      • Anonymous

        Haha I didn’t mind at all. I’m Zainab. Using that name because of a dare. 😂 Anyway, just asked your age because you write so well. Wow you’re 14 and an amazing writer.. I’m 17 and I’m from Pakistan. Love you too 😘
        Gonna use my name now onwards from the next comments. 😘

      • Ariana

        |Author

        Woooo sry for very late reply. I was very busy. So hi Zainab. Nice knowing u. It’s great I don’t have to talk to an anonymous anymore.

  11. Kaya

    Wow….. you’re updates are awesome……. I love to read….your ff …. it’s amazing…….
    Please post soon…..
    Eagerly waiting for the next part…
    ;-);-)

  12. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    loved it girl… depicted deir feelings so well… n puskar he is so cute. . deir will be preeti’s entry too na? post soon Ariana.. 😘😘😘😘

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Thanks!!! Preeti’s entry? Never thought of it till now but sure gonna include her somehow. The epi will b up tmrw! Love u

  13. Max Weitze

    As the series reveals, Suman eventually falls in love with Shravan who had always loved Suman, but she insulted Shravan in his childhood days in school before he leaves for London.

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