Ek Duje Ke Vaaste: Love, Friendship, or Something More? Epi 18 (Part 2) || LAST EPI LAST PART

Recap: Ritik breaks marriage with Sumo telling her Shravan was meant to b hers. Sumo is jealous watching Shravan dance with someone else
-Shravan’s side-
Hi guys. I have a lot to type nd u all have a a lot to read. !stly the ff then a boring msg.
So getting with the ff:
Epi 18 Part 2

Girl: Congratulations baby…Ur girl loves u
Shravan *confused*: Who loves me?
Girl: Wahi jise tum pyaar karti ho
Shravan: Sumo?
Girl: Yah yah. She rushed of the stage quite a long time ago. She couldn’t see u and me together…
Shravan: Kya!!!! Woh chaligayi? Then y r we still dancing. Let me go to her… *he clears his hands and was abt to leave when she stopped him*
Girl: Pagal!!!! No way u r melting for her so easily. Make her jealous to such a level that she’ll break the marriage with Ritik. Just keep on dancing
Shravan: par..
Girl: Just do as I say….

-Suman’s side-
Preeti: waise Shravan ‘jiju’ kidhar hai?
Pushkar: I don’t know
Suman *angry*: lagta hai uska dance abtak khatam nahi hua
Preeti: Di…kya woh Shravan hai us ladki ke sang?
Suman turns her head to the way Preeti was pointing. And it was enough to die for. Her Shravan..Yes HER Shravan was lost in that 3rd party girl’s eyes. He never even looked at her eyes with so much affection. He bend his head down as restfully as her arms grabbed his neck tip-toing her foots to maintain the same level. They were so close, sooooooo close that any sec, even a single step or the slightest movement would make both clash their noses against each other…

-Shravan’s side-
Shravan could see Suman staring at him with wide eyes. Her breaths were deep. He could see her collarbone clearly moving up and down with each breath. She was being affected. Wht did he want more? She loved him. His lady loved him. Not being able to stop himself, his muscles shrank to the hardest forming a huge curved smile. (Suman fumed even more watching him smile)
Girl: Kya hua itna khush?
Shravan: Tumhari trick kam kadgayi. Suman is affected by our closeness.
Girl: really? Toh abtak kuch kiya kyu nahi? She must come here, or cry, or do something… K lambu look…don’t mind but I’ll have to do it…sorry…
She moved her head upper and slowly tilted it, placing a soft kiss on his cheek. Shravan was shocked. What just happened? He was clueless. His saint character was destroyed in this every sec. It was supposed to happen or not. Did he cheat on his Sumo. All his life, he kept girls far away from his thoughts, just to make him available just to her, and today, not did he just allow another girl to play with him, but make his character questionable. It was just not the planned. But then falling for Sumo wasn’t even a plan. Watching her dance with someone else wasn’t in the plan. Seeing her ignore him, ignore his motives of love all these years wasn’t in the plan. He had to jump out of the well-organized routine and get to do something out of the box. And now…was the time
Girl: Go…get ur girl.

Before Shravan could thank her, he saw a storm rushing from the drinks stalk to nowhere….and she isn’t there. It’s just Pushkar standing, staring at him with disrespect. Where is Preeti? And Sumo? What just happened won’t just break it all forever. Will it?
Shravan: Thanks so much for whtevery u did. I don’t know wht Sumo feels for me. What u did affected her badly and I knw that very well. This might end our relation too. I’m afraid of her rejection as she can question me now. But I won’t blame u till the very end because u made me realize, I love her. I don’t care it’s obsession, possession, stupidity, crush, or anything. I’ll confess.

He broke their position and rushed towards the drinks stalk sharing a glace to every corner of the hall. No trace of her… Pushkar…his savoir…
Shravan: Chote Sumo kaha hai?
Pushkar *shocked*: Bhaiya woh kya tha?
Shravan; maine pucha Sumo kaha hai
Pushkar: Aur maine pucha woh saab kya tha?
Shravan: okay fine I was trying to check whether Sumo gets affected seeing me with someone else or not. Now, woh kaha hai?
Pushkar: Seriously bhaiya? What I have been saying u for all these years wasn’t enough? Damn she left crying. U kissed someone else in front of her eyes.
Shravan: No. I didn’t kiss anyone ever!!! And that girl kissed me on my cheeks like mom does, like chichi does, like anyone else does. I need to talk to Sumo. Where is she?
Pushkar: I don’t know. Maybe Preeti does. Wait I’ll call her….*calls* Bhaiya phone toh nahi utharaha
Shravan *tensed*: Music loud hai. Msg her. *Pushkar follows*
Pushkar: Done. Waise bhaiya woh kyu? When u saw her leaving the dance floor u should have understood. And okay fine, dance tak thik hai. But…Y did that girl kiss u?
Shravan: Chote, forget it. Now answer my question honestly. Pls…
Pushkar: Mai toh bhuljaungi par Sumo? Anyways question kya hai?

Shravan *blush*: What do u think about us?
Pushkar: We r good brothers. Actually awesome ones. Nd humari choice bhi toh ekdam same to same. Tiwari girls *wink* We r seriously thug Malhotra bros
Shravan: Oh god!!! Mai tera aur mera baat nahi..mera aur..mera aur *breaths* Sumo ke bareme
Pushkar: Oh u both *smiles teasingly* U guys r best friends right?
Shravan: Chote pls be serious
Pushkar: Okay Chote is serious

Shravan: Now say wht u think of me and Sumo
Pushkar: U r a very handsome, charming, UNROMANTIC, angry young man. And Sumo toh SUMO hai. Jhaali, pagli, musibaat, par firbhi mature, sensible, bubbly, and responsible. So idealistic!!
Shravan: So do we fit in together?
Pushkar: Nope. U guys just don’t fit in together *Shravan looks down in disappointment* Relax. U both r one. Together one. And how can u both fit in? Is there a complete puzzle nd u both parts of it? No!!! U guys r the complete puzzle, and each of ur qualities r the parts of it. Those qualities join together to form ShraMan. Shravan and Suman.
Shravan: Toh humdono kya eksath…?
Pushkar: Honestly, u and Sumo, were never two individuals to us. It wass always like Shravan and Suman. Always. As if “Suman yaha jao. Shravan beta tum bhi Suman ke sang jao” or “Shravan yeh kaam kardona. Suman, Shravan ki madat kaddo” We always counted u both together.
Shravan: Will everyone accept us? Everyone took us as friends till date. U knw it’s a huge step in our relationship.
Pushkar: Seriously Bhaiya? Even when u were in London, Sumo always took the title of “Shravan aur Suman” without any hesitation. Badi Mummy (Nirmala) even made Sumo help her out in family rituals, as if she was always a part of the family. Bade papa (Ramnath) shared his workloads with her and always admired her workaholic quality. She use to cook Papa’s fav food and help Vandy Bhabi nd Mummy in the kitchen. And as for Varun bhaiya, she turned into his business partner as she helped him deal with his new business clients. Aur meri baat toh mujhe Sumo bhabi ke roop mei humesha manzoor tha. *winks*

Shravan *scared*: Chote…What if we don’t work out together. Our friendship…Agar Sumo mujhe pyaar nahi…Iss dosti ka kya hoga?
Pushkar: Aap yeh kya soch rahi hai? Sumo loves u even more than anyone else does. Even Bade Mummy doesn’t love u like the way she does. Ek ma aka pyaar uske samne hargayi. Imagine how much she feels for u. I knw bachpaan me woh todi teri thi, but bhaiya woh apko tab bhi pyaar karti thi, *Shravan looks at Pushkar in complete shock* Aap pana pyaar koh pahchan liya tha, use thoda waqt laga. Varna bolo aap donoki dosti ki baad ekdin bhi aap dono ek dusre se dur rah payi? Okay physically u guys did, but ur memories always tied u guys together. Aap dono ek dusre pe itna dependant ho that there is no chance of this relation of not working out. *Pushkar’s phone beeps* Yeh lo Preeti ki msg agayi. Woh dono pool ke corner par hai. Jaiye apke Sumo ke paas
Shravan: par chote…

Pushkar: Bohat sadi question kadlia. U should spend time with her now, convincing…
Shravan: Lakin
Pushkar: Do u love her?
Shravan: Yes
Pushkar: Do u see her with u?
Shravan: In every step of my life
Pushkar *smiling*: Can u imagine a day without her?
Shravan: Nope
Pushkar: Can u see her with someone else?
Shravan: Never…not even on the worst nightmare
Pushkar: Agar mai bolu aap Sumo ko choddo toh?
Shravan *confused*: I’ll leave her. U guys r everything to me
Pushkar: Will she leave ur heart?
Shravan *bold*: Never
Pushkar: Agar Sumo ne boli aap ko apki family ko chodkar uske pas rakhne?
Shravan: She will never say so

Pushkar: And u trust her that much, know her that much, love her that much. Problem kaha hai? Don’t delay anymore. U have been waiting for 15 years. Bhaiya everything is either good or bad. No in between. If time is on ur side, it’s good, if it’s too late or too early, it’s bad. Don’t wait for the “too late” moment coz trust me, that moment, two souls which r meant to be together forever, till the very end, will split into half. Shravan ka Suman nahi rahega aur Suman ka Shravan bhi nahi rahega. Do u want that?
Shravan: NO
Pushkar: Then go.
Shravan excitedly turned around when he suddenly looks back nd smiled saying..
Shravan: Chote…U r the best brother..I love u…I seriously can’t imagine how horrible I would have been with my love life without u.
Pushkar: What!!! 2nd line Sumo ko kahna tha. But fine, since u love ME *smiles* mujhsei shadi karlijiye.
Shravan: Kya!!!
Pushkar: Bhaiya Go!!! Bhabi ko lekar hi ana. Aur pls meri pretty preeti ko bhejdena. I’m missing her

(NOTE: The following part is more like a narrated story than a script. Don’t get confused)

Shravan rushed through the crowd in the dance floor making space, and went to the pool side. There was so sign of anyone. His heart took a long pause until he heard a soft voice of concern. “Di pls don’t cry. Shravan aisa nahi hai.” It was Preeti. Standing at the very end hidden corner of the pool side covering a figure who would probably invisible to anyone’s vision from every angle as she had hidden the last thread of her body perfect behind the pole wall. Slowly, he stepped forward and signed Preeti to leave indicating her lover is waiting for her. *Preeti leaves blushing but concerned* finally, after a long time, he got time to see Suman carefully. She was seating on the floor rubbing her back to the wall and head down her knees, sobbing. Her hairs were all in a messy bun by now and those lilies which were so fresh were now dull and nearly dead like her soul. Shravan didn’t have the courage to confront her but if not today, then never….

“Sumo?” He tried saying way more but this was what managed to be out of his mouth. For a moment he realized, his voice, it wasn’t usual; it was husky yet lack in confidence. He saw her tilt her head upwards, trying to look at him. Her face was all watery. She might have been sobbing forever! Her liner and mascara smudged creating dark spots around the eyes and somewhere on the cheeks. The make-up was all mixed into a ghostly appearance which was still ‘cute’ to him. It showed how much she cared. There was no presence of the charm which she generally carried. It was all dull and broken. Indeed, her soul was hurt this time.
As she looked up at his guilty face, her eyes grew wider. This time there was no love, concern or care. It reflected much of anger, disrespect, disappointment and frustration. She knew she had to leave. She didn’t wish to encounter him ever again. Quickly she stood up and was about to go to which he denied. So she broke through him for an exit when her legs tangled with her gown causing her to loose balance. It was so not the right time for her to fall. But she didn’t fall either. Her hero, as always, managed to grab her by her waist, bending his head down as she involuntarily surrounded her hands around his neck. After days, for the 1st time, both looked into each other’s eyes. This time they didn’t wish to say unspoken words but just wanted to find answers of their ancient questions. The moment was just too perfect. No anger, no words, no quarries, just them…lost in each other.
Realizing their position, they broke the contact. While Suman was annoyed by her last moment stupidity, he was proud for breaking her ice shield. She decided to leave and stay away from him…forever onwards…. She took the stand to walk out when realized his hands were still around her waist, holding her hard. But she didn’t care. She indicated him to remove his hands which he disobeyed boldly, leaving her enough angry to push him far to make a clear route. Walking passed him, tears rolled off her eyes even more than usual especially after what she did now, but he didn’t give up so easily. It was his last chance and he knew the ending wasn’t a sad one; the ending was of them…together, forever…which stood no less than a paradise.

Shravan clutched her hand tight being proud of his manhood. She turned around facing him as she tried releasing herself; he applied more pressure on her wrist bone making her shrink in pain. Tears were continuously rolling off her cheek, for both physical and mental pain, but now it was time for him to not care. Coz if he did now, rest of his life he would regret.
She hand went red, so did her face. She couldn’t believe the Shravan whom she loved so much, the one who cared about her in every single step ever since they met, was now so harsh. He didn’t care about her hurt waist or her hurt….soul. Managing to form words, slowly and politely, she warned him to leave, only to be denied with more force to shake her up. “Shravan pls!! Jane do” she gowned again, this time it turning into a fair request, but it had no effect on him.
He clutched even harder, ensuring she went enough weak to loose balance over her body, then finally pulled her close making her land safely on his chest. This was what it is. What it should be. Suman under Shravan’s shelter. Leisurely, he leaved her hand moving his ones around her shoulder, hugging her slightly.“Aj nahi jane dungi. Kyuki aj agar tum chali gai, humari sari rishte khatam. Humesha humesha ke liye. Coz I won’t chase u. I will never force u upon me. Today, I’ll just let u knw what I feel, and then it’s up to u. To leave… or to stay…. under my shield being my queen.”

Suman succeeded freeing herself from his hands. She craved for his warmth, wanted to be in that state forever. Being his queen? Could she ever afford being so? But it was not the time to melt. It was time for answer to what she witnessed. She had to know, every single bit of what happened. If she owed the slightest right of being his queen, she must know. Boldly, she looked into his eyes, those light brown, almost hazel eyes. It spoke so much. It tried seeking apology with dangerous amount of love and care. But she was not to get effected this time.
“Of course u won’t run after me. After all u got an alternative now.” Suman smirked on finishing her words. He knew she would raise this incidence up but he decided it was better to confront it than running away. But her statement was wrong. She had no alternatives. It was either her, or none. He smiled. Looking how much someone else in his life affected her. Forming a husky tone he begun, ”Yup, I do have an ALTERNATIVE now.” Her eyes went wide as her cheeks dropped down following her mouth. She wanted to be proven wrong but it sounded so simple for him to admit she never mattered much. “It’s either my princess Sumo, or my queen Sumo. Option is urs. I’m sooo not leaving u. U have always been my princess, whom I adored so much. It was always a flawless friendship and even if u leave, it won’t break. Now, do u wish to be my queen taking some responsibilities? To stand by me forever, boldly, like MY SUMO?”

Her eyes finally found hope but she didn’t wish to rely on that. “U kissed someone else and requested me to be ur princess.” “I didn’t kiss her” he claimed before she could even break after her words. “Jhut mat bolo Shravan. U said our friendship is flawless, then y r u hiding. It’s okay. U kissed her. Make her ur queen. She deserves it.” She broke his smile with her words. “Who deserves being my queen is up to me. And a kiss never decided ur partner.”
Suman smiled as if she won the battle. “I’m glad u admitted the fact u kissed her. Good for u. And sry, I can’t be enough mean to take away her spot.” Shravan’s confidence was lost. His eyes were being more aggressive with each of her words. He knew she was tough but never knew she could neglect his love like that. He did confess. Direct, indirect, doesn’t matter. But she? Still playing with his feelings.
“Have a wonderful life ahead Mr. Malhotra” These words were harsh. Very harsh to use for the person she lived her life for. But she had no other options. The only thing that came in her life before her love was her self-respect. She could have lived a happy life with him but now…there were insecurities. It was a better option to walk out. He even ensured their friendship will last forever so no fear. Following her thoughts, she attempted to leave and this attempt was finally successful…

He stood there stationary watching his lady leave. She walked off but…each step…the least of what could be measured in scale but yet very longest ones mentally. The souls which were meant to be together as one forever were now physically splitting out. It was the worst moment. All he decided to do was to close his eyes. Witnessing this moment would scatter his scientifically four chambered heart into zillions of pieces in terms of literacy. But then all his eyes did was dug deep into the best memories they made. It was always so full when she was around. His ears got surrounded withal those words which made him the king of happiness. “It was always like Shravan and Suman/U both a one. Together/She was dying to meet u/it was never just friendship/Time won’t stop for anyone/Did u really move on Bhaiya?/ Don’t wait for the “too late” moment coz then Shravan ka Suman nahi rahega aur Suman ka Shravan bhi nahi rahega/U kissed her/Have a wonderful life Mr. Malhotra” All those words flew in and out his ears. Pushkar was right. He couldn’t afford losing her. The only way to live a wonderful life was to to live it with her…
Opening his eyes slowly, knowing that fact it took him forever to realize he can’t let her go, coz by now she might have left. But she didn’t. She was still sobbing and taking those minor steps lost in her thoughts. She hardly moved across him. He knew she didn’t wish to leave either. “I ain’t no saint Sumo”

By the time his voice echoed to her ears, she was already been pinned to the pool pole aggressively as his chest pressured her shoulder to stay still and his lips rushed against hers. It took her a while to cooperate with the atmosphere but soon she reciprocated fully. All frustrations, disappointments, confusion, everything drained away for a while. Time did lose in front of their souls. It was the moment when the world moved on, the time continued, the water still flowed, but nothing was so consistent as them. If perfection didn’t exist then now it does. They formed it, together. Finally setting her free, he cupped her face, rubbing away the last drop of tear, opening his heart. “If kisses were to decide partners every single day today onwards I’ll make u feel how much we were meant for each other. I can only have a wonderful life ahead, if I can hide in ur shadow. I’m sorry. We make mistakes and we learn from them. I didn’t kiss her. I really didn’t. It was she who kissed me on my cheeks just we do to a kid. I didn’t dance with her for enjoyment. Every step I joined her, my heart imagined her as u. I wanted to know what u feel for me. It was enough of mixed signals we gave to each other. I really needed to know what I mean to u. And I am successful. Look, u don’t have the chance of denying to the fact u love me, coz if u did…”His words were interrupted by her soft broken voice. ”I never denied”
She was still sobbing. It was the first, and possibly the last time when he smiled at her tears. His smile made her. “And u don’t have to be insecure. All these year, ever since we met, I reserved myself to only one lady. U know who she is? My Sumo. I can never, NEVER imagine a second of me with someone else. Sumo u own me. I’m all urs. All of me. Pls don’t leave, pls. I’m nth without u. I lived 10 years away from u and trust me, those were the worst days. I tried hating u, forgetting u, but some impossibles r just impossible. No i’m-possible. I can hate u but not myself. U r me. We r parts of the same soul. We always were, and will always be.”
Those questioning eyes had deep words hidden. It reflected the excitement for the bright days when they’ll wake up smiling at each other but also exposed the horror of her reject. She could feel ever bit of him growing weaker and weaker with each word he spoke. It showed his fear. Breaking through all her negativities and wars of mind-brain, she smiled. “I love u.”

These were just three words. 3 simple, easily constructed words, but had great value. It costs so much that even the richest person couldn’t afford it. But now….he could. After all these years of patience, he got his reward. His lady loved him and fearlessly admitted. “I love u too Ms. Suman Tiwari. Not from today, not from any day between our friendship, but from the very 1st sight of urs, I’ve been in love with u deeply, madly, obsessively. It was Love-friendship and then….something more. I have always loved u. Always. Just couldn’t afford losing u so way I could have u was as a friend. But with time, the love went possessive, uncontrollable. It isn’t love any longer. It’s something beyond all feelings in existence.”

Her eyes were all filled with emotions she carried. How can life be so nice to her. Giving her every happiness one can have. She was a simple middle-class girl. Can she afford so much of happiness? Can she hold on to it? What will life take away in return? But she didn’t care. As long as she had him, she didn’t care of losing. “I’m sorry…Pls forgive me. I kept u waiting so long. Y did u wait so long for just a yes?” Finally she spoke breaking her wonders of the perfect guy who waited years after years just for her.
“Just a yes? U mean JUST a yes? I’ve been dying for years for this moment nd u label it with a ‘just’? Well u r worth waiting for. No regrets. But if u regret for keeping me waiting for soooo long then u need to give me something in return. U need to pay for keeping me waiting for so long. And u pay me till the very end…” He said, no longer husky, but with sarcasm and naughtiness. After all he needed to enjoy a bit of his manhood.

Fear stroke her as he progressed with his words. What did he want now when she gave her soul to him? She couldn’t afford much. What if she couldn’t give him the only thing he asked in return? She would be a loser forever. He loved watching her perplexed, but didn’t wish to suffer his lady longer. “Be with me, forever. U can never leave me. Never. U’ll have to stay with me, being my queen, my Sumo wrestler. And like in the game of chess, u will defend me like the queen defends the king. The world is wrong. Men protect women physically, but a woman can only secure a man from heart. U’ll have to do that. U have to protect me. Fight for me. U have to be the happiness of my life. I’m a lawyer and I do fight cases to win, but u….u should win over me…always. And u can never leave ur job. Coz now…our souls are connected.”

As his words ended with a pause, she jumped into his arms hugging him together than ever. He was taken with a shock but realizing his lady on his arms and feeling her warmth made him feel like the king. “I’ll be urs till the very end Shravan. I’ll be ur queen forever”

It took them long…very long indeed to connect the souls ut the increasing hunger made them unite stronger. There were no complaints any longer. Both knew life could never be perfect but having each other by the side will form something beyond the lines for perfection. Physically their relationship was white. Pure, clean white. Plan and simple. But looking through a spectrum showed how colourful they were. It was the white which turned into a rainbow. In order to see those rainbows, life took them through rains, storms, beside sunlight, but both played well. The king protected the queen while the queen secured him. And this lifetime chess carried on…it the very end. And so did ShraMan stood by each other…forever

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So finally I am ending my ff here. I don’t know how was the epi nd how was the ff. Though I’m feeling very sad coz I’ll miss all of ur sweet comments, but don’t worry I’ll be back. Now coming to the weird part:
This was my 1st ff nd it did actually go very well compared to what I expected. Not what I wrote but what I got as responds. I still remember how u all commented on my intro being like “great. Pls post soon” and I replied with a simple “thanks” It was so formal!! And then over time all of ur comments grew into small essays and my replies into paragraphs. The way I named u guys different things. And how our friendship grew. Honestly we never meet, never interacted but our bonding is so strong. Even my besties don’t praise me like u guys do. I do feel a lot of buttering nd I’m sure I did gain invisible weight for tht. Sometimes my days went horrible, but after reading ur sweet comments nd brilliant ffs, I smiled so much. U guys did turn on the light of my heart. If I had a boyfriend for sure he would have been jealous seeing how much I blush when u all praise me. (just kidding no bfs) So thanks…for everything. Starting from the very beginning till today, I’m grateful of what u all did for me. U guys read my boring ff, commented to make me happy, supported me, wished me good lucks and even blessed me. I felt so loved! I’m sorry but I won’t mention any name as I’m pretty sure my dumb brain will miss out someone. So thank you guys. Every one of u who even read a single line of my ff. If u r a silent reader and I have no clue who u r, then also a big thanks to u guys.
I’ll be here, reading all of ur sweet ffs nd commenting nd hopefully will b back soon with another boring shot/ff to waste ur time.
Stay blessed forever and keep rocking.
I guess exams r coming up so study hard!!
Advanced Eid Mubarak
Enjoy!!!
Love u all……my sweet little family
Take care
byeeeeeeeeeeeeee

82 comments

  1. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Amazing! I loved it! It was the first time I read today your ff and it was awesome! The love confession was just perfect!!

  2. pretty preeti

    Oh my aruu it ws so good so good that I am blanked my sweetheart cupcakes
    U rocked
    The note ws so good
    The epi ws motlre then excrlellent
    I toh just kept reading and reading u wrote so beautifully I means really lost in the epi
    Shraman ws soo cute
    U made it so romantic I WS really glad to read ur ff
    Ur this ff ws awesome sweety cupcakes aru
    I always read it happily it always made my day
    I too will miss u
    Love u so much I can’t express
    Ab post soon bhi nhi keh skti yaqr
    I m emotional this time
    Ok love u my aru
    Loved love friendship or Something or more
    U rocked
    Love u soooo muchhh

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Aww my cupcake so much love? I can’t fit in all in at once. Thanks sooooo much. Love u too. Don’t b emotional. I won’t miss u coz I’ll stick with u. U have a ff too so I’ll b there. Haha I’m a chipku. I’m not leaving u like this. I love cupcakes. Nd u r probably the sweetest one.
      Best of luck with ur exams. Study hard. Love u. Take care.
      K fine I’ll miss u till u come back. Waiting for u exams to end.
      Byeee

  3. Ananya98

    |Registered Member

    Hey aru
    I kno i havent commented ur ff last two to three epis
    A bit busy these days
    Bt i surely read them
    N u kno wht this epi took my heart away
    This kinda proposal is sumthing too real… Which actually happens
    N thnx for such a beutiful ending
    M surely gonna miss ur ff
    U rocked this
    Hope to see u soon with a new one…
    Lots of love
    Take care….

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Thanks sooooo much sweetheart for ur sweet wishes. It means a lot. And pls don’t apologize for not commenting. It’s okay. Chill!!! I’m happy that u atleast managed reading them taking a time out of ur busy days. Thanks again. Gonna come back soon hopefully.
      Till then…Take care

  4. Jenny

    Hey. Your ff is AMAZING!! Even amazing is not enough to describe your ff. It is my first ever comment. I’ll miss your ff. Stay blessed 💕

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Thanks soooooooooooooo much dear. ur 1st comment!!! Nd on my ff!! I’m feeling so lucky. Can’t express how happy I am. Don’t worry I’ll come back so u won’t get much time to miss me.
      loads of love sweetheart
      take care

  5. Jenn

    Your ff is AMAZING. Amazing is not enough to describe your ff. I was a silent reader tho but your ff made me to comment. Wil miss your ff. Stay blessed 💕

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Sweetheart thanks aloooooooooooottttttttt. I love when silent readers pop up sometimes. It makes me feel heavenly good.
      Loads of love nd blessings
      Take care

  6. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    It was rap chick out of the world fantabulous tremendous stupendous like seriously first of all a warm hug for such wonderful ff hugs and kisses to u lots and lots di will miss u muahhh😘😍😘😘😍😍😍💕💕 come back soon take care kisses u love u bye take care muahhh😘😘😍😍😍

    • Ariana

      |Author

      K I feel like dancing. When awesome writers like u praise my simple writing, I’m all jhingalala. Thanks soooooooooooo much sweetheart. Love u alllllooooooooooooottttttttt. Gonna come back soon hopefully.
      Till then…
      take care
      keep rocking
      loads of love, blessings, hugs nd kisses from me

      • Sriya

        |Registered Member

        oh di i m not at all amazing okay now i am all jhingalala listening a praising from great writer rofl love u allllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllltttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt se bhi ziada….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      • Ariana

        |Author

        Don’t u dare say u r not an amazing writer. Ur write ups take my heart away from my body. So look how effective they are.
        Love u too bohat bohat bohat zyada. Itna sala ki u can’t even count

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Thanks alot dear. Don’t worry, I’ll hopefully come up with other boring work so u won’t get much time to miss my work. :p
      Take care
      bye

  7. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Aru…..!!!!!!!!!! My darling my sweeto sis…!!! How r u my love…???? Yr yr yr tum ne le li meri jan Han bhee le hi li now how will I survive with out ur dhamakedaar ff…?? Huh…!! If u want to c me a live then cm ASAP ASAP with a new ff n Han that’s n order from ur twin….!!! 😀 n yr this part I was crying like the emotions I imagined these emotions n yr it great nai nai more than great ke I can’t fibd words to express how much I loved it or how talented u r !!!
    May god bless u my darling……remain happy always or Han tum hame bilkul bhi bore nai karti my love……..!!!!!! Just plzz plzzz plzzz done back ASAP ASAP okkkkkkkkkkk
    Take care yrrrrrrrrrrrrr
    Love u itna ke koi samajh na paaai
    HAPPY EID MUBARAK IN ADVANCE…..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Ariana

      |Author

      OOMG Maria!!! My sista is back!!! How r u? How is ur studies going? Hope u rock on the exams.. Girl..I missed u sooooooooooooooo much. I can’t believe u managed time just to read my ff part. it was a long part nd very time consuming. i’m so so so so sorry for interrupting between ur studies. And thanks soooooooooooooo much. Every thanks will b less. I’m so grateful tht u read+commented. Besides, its such a sweet comment!! All sugary. Kk don’t die. I won’t let u die. I’ll try my best to come up with something new soon. Don’t worry sweetie.
      Love u alllllllllllllloooooooooooooooootttttt beyond the lines of infinity
      Take care
      all the best for ur exams
      eid mubarak!!
      keep smiling

      • Marie

        |Registered Member

        Hy my darling omg hahahaha I didn’t knw that u will be so happy awwwwww how can I not comment on ur ff when it’s so sweet !!
        My exams went very well….!!
        M fyn how r u…??? All fyn shine..??
        Studies also going well….!
        N thanks alt fr ur wishes…. Cause my nxt exams r going to strt soon ! 🙂
        Love u infinityyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!! Muahhhhhhhhh

      • Ariana

        |Author

        My sweetheart!!! I’m fine. Now that i found my twin back I’m awesome. All good. Very happy that ur exams r on the way to end. Woho!!! Our Maro will b back to form soon. I miss u soooooooooooooooooo much!! Study hard nd best of luck again. I knw u’ll rock it off there coz of ur awesomeness.
        Hope to find u soon online again
        love uuuuuuuuuuuuu (million x zillion z infinity)
        take care
        byeeee

  8. sona

    😊😊😊😊😊😊
    😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻
    Ariana…
    I really enjoyed ur ff..from the beginning to the end
    Thanks for the entertainment..happiness..feel good moments..relaxing moments..u created in our life’s..by writing a simple.and beautiful .
    all the best for ur next ffs..and we will b waiting forvur return..
    We going to miss u😊😊😃😐😊😊

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Omg sona di next ff ka announcement already kardia? Okay fine I’ll b up soon. And thanks sooooooooooooooooo much for all of ur sweet sweet comments. It meant a lllllllllloooooooooooottttttttt. Not gonna miss u coz I’m a chipku nd will stick to u guys. Lol no just joking. I’ll miss ur sweet comments too.
      Love u allllllllooooooooooootttttttttt (can’t explain)
      Gonna miss u
      Take care
      byee

  9. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    FIRSTLY, do you want a slap in your face from your small sister?
    Cause I think you do, that’s why you called this WONDERFUL, EXCITING, ROMANTIC, SUSPENSE, JEALOUSY, FRIENDSHIP journey of this ff, “Ek Duje Ke Vaaste..Love, Friendship, Or something more..? Boring??
    Di, I don’t care if i’m small or big right now, but what you said hurt this wonderful journey..
    How could you..?
    Anyways, gussa baadme..
    Di.. I LOVE YOU..(So proud right now)
    I mean Pushkar-Shravan’s conversation was so so so L.I.T….
    Nd humari choice bhi toh ekdam same to same. Tiwari girls *wink* We r seriously thug Malhotra bros
    This one…B.L.I.S.S.
    Di, how can you write so beautifully?
    I mean seriously..! How can you?
    And that bookish writing of your’s was BEAUTIFUL..
    I mean everything, each n every word and lines made me smile..
    I loved it more than anythiing i’ve loved in your whole freakin’ ff..
    loved it di.. Seriously loved it..
    Those dialouges were

  10. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    FIRSTLY, do you want a slap in your face from your small sister?
    Cause I think you do, that’s why you called this WONDERFUL, EXCITING, ROMANTIC, SUSPENSE, JEALOUSY, FRIENDSHIP journey of this ff, “Ek Duje Ke Vaaste..Love, Friendship, Or something more..? Boring??
    Di, I don’t care if i’m small or big right now, but what you said hurt this wonderful journey..
    How could you..?
    Anyways, gussa baadme..
    Di.. I LOVE YOU..(So proud right now)
    I mean Pushkar-Shravan’s conversation was so so so L.I.T….
    Nd humari choice bhi toh ekdam same to same. Tiwari girls *wink* We r seriously thug Malhotra bros
    This one…B.L.I.S.S.
    Di, how can you write so beautifully?
    I mean seriously..! How can you?
    And that bookish writing of your’s was BEAUTIFUL..
    I mean everything, each n every word and lines made me smile..
    I loved it more than anythiing i’ve loved in your whole freakin’ ff..
    loved it di.. Seriously loved it..
    Those dialogues were utter BLISS to me..
    Loved it..
    And i’m so gonna miss this ff..
    This was my fav.. <33 ab kya hoga mera?
    So now, if you don't want your little sissy to die, come back soon!
    Loved it bohot saaraa…And love you!
    Love you loads and loads and loads… (i could go on you know.. but then, aap bore ho jaaoge padh ke.. so it ends here)
    Love ya,
    Nikita

    • Ariana

      |Author

      MY 1st love letter. Itna sada pyaar? I’ll die taking sooooooooooo much love from u. Nd sorry yaar. S.O.R.R.Y. Chalo boring nahi this ff is super duper boring. Okay? See I fixed the problem. Nd if u want, y ? Slap me more than a million times. Usme bhi pyaar jo chupa hai. Nd as for u sweeto words. I’ll b admitted in a hospital soo. High blood sugar + diabetics above controlled. Ur word’s sweetness is seriously affecting my health. Thanks soooooooooooooo much for ur sweet cute comments. I’ll miss reading those a looooooooooooottttttttt. So, I’ll come back soon just for ur mitha comments. Happy?
      Love u too beyond words nd the line of infinity
      take care
      bohat sada di ka pyaar with ladoos
      gonna miss u
      byeee sweetheart

  11. Kaya.........

    |Registered Member

    Aww….. Ariana Di……. I am commenting after a long time but I loved to read this part of your ff and so I had to comment…..you are a wonderful superb and a marvelous writer… when I read this part I kept reading on and on…..the way you wrote it….it was amazing,awesome … lovely …fabulous………..wonderful….mind blowing…….perfect….. I always used to write post .soon…eagerly waiting but this time I will write please come soon with a new ff because I would really miss your this ff……as this was one of my favorite ff’s …..
    Love you a lot
    Take care

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Sweetheart thanks sooooooooooooooo much! So many sweet words in a single comment!! I’m blessed to have such well-wishers. Thank u for ur cute comment. I’ll try my best coming up with something soon. Gonna miss u honey
      Take care
      love u

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Awww thanks sooo much sweetheart. Sure I’ll try my best to come up with something new.
      Take care honey
      keep smiling
      loads of love

  12. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    Okkkkkkkk so a beautiful journey has come to an end a journey of love romance frndship fun and many more……
    Actually i big thanku we r blessed to hv lil cute fairy doll like u who talks sweeter than honey…..
    Who is amazing writer like superb one but never appreciate her self……….
    But seriously u r MARVELOUS ur unique peice yar….

    I dont think that i hv to repeat how much i love u …

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    stay blessed forver 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Omg my sweet Pari!! Girl stop making me blush. Itna tareef koi karta hai kya? I love u tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Idk how can I express it in words but I love u uncontrolablly. U r soooooooo sweet. And thanks sooo much for ur cute comments nd sweet words. Means a lot.
      Take care

  13. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ariana!!!!
    Well well well !!!! Firstly I want to say that congratulations for the completion of ur very first ff 🎉🎊🎉🎉✨🎊🎇🎉✨✨🎊🎇✨👏👌🎇🎊🎇🎇🎇🎊🎇🎉🎉🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎊🎊🎊🎇🎉🎉✨✨ ab party to banti hy 😂😂
    Nd secondly u r extraordinary talented MashaaAllah .. great .. I hv gathered all of my house butter to apply on u nd sorry if u become fat after this 😜😜😝😜😜😜
    This whole ff was awwwwdorable
    Awwwwesome
    Fantabulous
    Fabulous
    Spectaculous
    Wonderful
    Tremendous
    👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
    U r just awwwwesome amazinggggg
    The way u portray emotions nd dialogues is beyond perfection ..
    Seriously u r amazing ..
    Nd plzzz make a comeback with another awesome wala ff r shots ..
    Nd don’t u ever dare to call it boring .. else I will not talk to u 😜😜

    Stay blessed ..
    Take care ..
    (P.S: this is pure homemade butter .. hope u like its taste 😂😂😂😝😜😜😜😝)

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Oh god!!! Soooo much butter!!! K I’ll buy some bread, then apply all these butter there nd I don’t even need to get sugar, coz ur comment is so sweet that it’ll work. Thanks. This is my breakfast tmrw morning. Oho!!! kk enough of bakwas now…Thanks soooooooooooooooo much sweetheart. U supported so much. Loads of love for u.I’ll try my best to come back with something new
      Stay happy nd enjoy.
      Gonna miss u
      love u
      take care
      byeeee

  14. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ariana this one is going to be pretty long but still not enough for me to explain how i feel. so now i begin…..
    first of all I m extremely sorry for commenting late. i didn’t want to write anything in a hurry.
    coming to this episode: i swear to god this has been till date the most marvelous romantic piece of work i have ever read. I m not buttering. I just can’t get over it. I really can’t. Help me if u can. this epi was just divine for me. I was thinking through out that is this even real…like can somebody write so well…so so well? U just slayed it girl.. like totally. I can’t tell u how much i loved the proposal part and how well u defined the relationship of love. That chess part… God, u plz accept a standing ovation from my side. even that would be less. There is no need for me say that you are excellent at literature and the way you portray emotions is nothing short of a treat for me to read.
    coming to the whole ff, i am so sorry if i have not been able to comment on any of the epis but i m honestly speaking, i read it all and i feel so blessed to have been able to read such beautiful work of art.
    i m saying this now..remember ..please do:
    YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER I HAVE MET HERE. THE BEST…MIND IT..NOT GOOD OR EXCELLENT…THE BEST.
    I m definitely gonna miss ur ff but i hope u surprise me wid an even more wonderful story.
    no emojis needed to express my love towards you or how sad i feel that its ending coz i hope that my words will make you understand.
    I feel so very blessed to have come across such a sweet and humble person like you. I really do feel on seventh heaven after reading this.
    on your previous epi i wrote that u r a better writer than me.
    now i feel so stupid so to have me compared to you. there is no comparison, u r way better than me.
    I LOVE YOU SO SO MUCH THAT I REALLY CANT EXPRESS. IF I EVER MET YOU I WOULD REALLY GIVE YOU A NICE TIGHT HUG. YOU ARE A SWEETHEART AND A WONDERFUL WONDERFUL WRITER.
    DON’T MAKE ME MISS YOU AND COME BACK SOON WITH ANOTHER STORY AND I WOULD REALLY GET BOUNDLESS HAPPINESS.
    I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
    HUGS AND KISSES.
    COME BACK SOON.
    YOU ARE A SWEETY.
    TAKE CARE.
    AND HOPE YOU READ TGIS FULL COMMENT AND I HAVE NOT BORED U.
    SORRY IF YOU THINK THIS WAS TOO MUCH BUT I STILL WANTED TO WRITE MORE.
    BOUNDLESS LOVE.
    YOURS AND ALWAYS YOURS..
    YOUR BIGGEST FAN.

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Omg!!! I’ll come back again to reply properly. U just made me go speechless. Gimme time. I’ll reply properly. My words can’t b so less to wht u just commented. I need to get back to normal state 1st

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Oh so I’m back for a proper reply. 1st sorry for such a late reply. S.O.R.R.Y!!! When I was replying to every1, b4 i could reach ur part, my laptop died. Then when I managed fixing up nd reading ur comment, I was thud. I just couldn’t speak a word. If speechless ever came true letter by letter then ur this comment made me that. It made me nearly cry. Emotions were raging in nd out of me. trust me, no one ever praised me so much. I’m feeling so honoured. I’m still not completely normal but I’m trying to get over what I read. I knw my writings r horrible but I’m happy, nd probably the 1st time kinda self-proud for making u all smile for a while. I don’t know how to thank u, like I’m off that part. If i think of it, I’ll start crying. So, pls take a huge thanks from me for not only reading my ff, but all commenting nd praising me. It’s true however u all said my writing is gd, the fact doesn’t change I’m a bad writer, but thanks a loooooootttttt for boasting up my confidence. For supporting me. For ur sweet words and attention. I hope someday we get to meet so that I can personally give u a tight hug nd thank u with all my heart. Ur words up there made me go so emotional that I felt like “a newly in love girl” who is smiling with watery eyes. And pls, my request, don’t think urself low in front of me. U r someone who canNOT be compared. I’m noth, not even an ant in front of u. U r brilliant. Ur writtings touch my heart’s deepest part. And if u want proof then here, look, this simple comment made me nearly die. Ur words r preious. I soooooo cannot be more grateful now, that I have a friend, a supporter like u. And no way! Bored reading this comment? Girl look at urself. U u amazing. How can someone not love u? I love u alooooooooooootttttttt nd hell even all the sweetest adjectives, those soury lime taunting words, those angey langs with hidden care together won’t be eough to define my love for u. U r sooooo like a family to me. I’ll for sure come back. Just can’t leave u all.
      Now it’s time I’ll say eagerly waiting for next update of ur ff, nd hope ur exams get over soon. Study hard and I knw u’ll bang off on the examination. It’ll burn on ur awesomeness. My best wishes, love and blessings r with u. Always stay happy.
      Love u so much that even the line of infinity is broken
      take care sweetheart
      (PS: Sry for a boring reply will all my useless feelings. Pls consider)

  15. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Aru
    how r u??all gud?

    how can u say that?
    ur ff was not at all boring it was superb ,mindblowing…
    nd hum buttering n krte yr … Ur ff nd u deserve all those praises…
    wow man… U nailed it…
    words r less to describe how beautifully u hav written…
    Mindblowing , superb, amazing epi…
    i loved it to the core…
    come back soon with a new story on Shraman…
    we r eagerly waiting for that…
    take care…
    Love u loads…
    Ruchi… 🙂 :-*

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Aww dear thanks sooooooo much. I’m all good. How r u?
      So much buttering!! But fine I can see love in that so I’ll b happy being fat now. Thanks again alooooooooooootttttttttttttttt. Honestly I don’t have much words left. Ur cute comment made me go speechless. Love u dear. Take care.

  16. Lily

    Hiiiiii!!!!!
    I hope you remember me…Congo for your ff…I didn’t read it but looking at comments it seems awesome….

  17. LogaMegan

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ariana dr
    Awesome episode and amazing ff
    It was not boring we enjoyed reading it
    We will miss ur ff so pls do come back with another ff or shots soon
    Lots of love from Loga-Megan ❤️

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Awww loga and megan thanks sooooooooo much my cutie pies.I’m glad u guys enjoyed my ff. It means a looooooooooottttttttttttttt. I’ll try my best to come up with something soon. Till then I’ll keep on reading both of ur nd other’s awesome ffs.
      Take care
      Love u both

  18. Anjali

    hey ariana …m anjali …I’d always been a silent reader but couldn’t control myself from commenting on 18th part1 n here…
    boring?? I mean yar seriously…r u kidding me…how can u say that it was boring…I know m new here but u really deserve a small whack in ur head to understand that it was mind blowing dear…sorry if I hurt u… 🙁
    u did justice with title, with shraman…
    they fought, they became friends again, best friends, lovers, n king n queen… dear ur an amazing writer…
    I’d always waited for next part badly of ur ff …I m surprised to know this was ur first ff…I felt like someone with a great experience is writing this… ur an amazing writer dear… 🙂
    all the best for exams…I know you’ll do ur best…n please write new ff after ur exams 😉
    love u lotss dear…will miss ur ff as a silent reader… 🙂
    n sorry if u feel I blurted too much in flow…
    love u… 🙂

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Awww anjali thanks soooooooooooooo much sweetheart. I really felt blessed to have some hidden friend like u who secretly admires my writing. it means a loooooootttttttttt. I’ll for sure com back with something new soon. Don’t worry I won’t leave. Thanks for ur wishes too.
      Love u honey
      take care
      btw, welcome to our small TU EDKV family.

      • Anjali

        thank God u wont leave…n yeah come back…n I should thank u sweety for writing such an awsm ff .. love u :* n ur always welcome….
        thanku so much for ur welcome…m very happy n blessed to be a part of it now… love u loaddssss 🙂

      • Ariana

        |Author

        Now u r making me blush!!! Thanks!!! I’ll come back sooooon don’t worry. As I said b4 I’ll come back so chill nd obv love u dear

  19. Anjali

    n yeah one more thing…yar ramu ko to isme u have made a true gentleman .. my eyes flooded with this side of his coz I know he’ll never change is serial 😀 😉
    no more bakwas …bye tc 🙂

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Lol Anju (I guess I’ll call u that if u don’t mind) It’s not bakwas. I love reading ur comments. Nd yah I hate him soooooooooooo much that I nearly never included him. I once even planned to get him killied but then I controlled my extreme feelings for tht guy.
      loads of love for u again!!!
      byeee

      • Anjali

        I’ve no problem…u can call me anju 🙂
        hahaha..
        why didn’t u kill him then?? well do one think when you’ll write ur next ff …kill him in car crash or aeroplane crash 😉 I’d really feel happy n blessed 😀
        m happy you too hate him that much …hifive 😉
        byeeee dear …take care n once again love u loaaddsss… ;*

      • Anjali

        hahaha…that’s good dear…u really got a point…why waste ur time on ramu when we’ve shraman…
        aewewww I made u blush :*
        love u sweety…take care 🙂

  20. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    hey ariana
    i dont read ur ff
    bt still here surprise………
    i m just here to congratulate u on ending ur ff happily
    so cooooonnnnngggggrrrrrraaaaattttuuullllllaaattttiiioooonnnnnsssss
    when u will start new ff?????
    on the intro plzzz write by ariana or tell me by any way
    ohk speaked sooooo much
    sorry
    take care
    lovvvvveeeeee uuuuuu

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Don’t be sorry dear. It’s ok. It’s sooooooooo sweet that u thought of congratulating me. Thanks sooooooooooooooo much. Take care honey

  21. Devsfan

    Wow superb awesome confession
    #each and every line made me roll my eyes faster than ever
    I am new to TU and used to check only KRPKAB and I have noticed ur comments on each and every ff I never knew that your such an amazing writer
    Accidentally my fingers clicked this link so I begin to read
    Congratulations your first ff is such a master piece
    You ended this in grace manner
    Now I am eagerly waiting for your second ff
    Hope you accept my request
    😄😄😄😄

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Hiiiii… I’m Ariana
      1st welcome to TU!!! I guess u r more of a KRPKAB fan but still welcome to EDKV family. 2ndly, thanks soooooooooooooo much for reading my ff epi. It was really nice of u. Loads of love. I’ll come back with something new soon nd will try to put KRPKAB on tht too. Till then, take care honey.
      Byee

  22. Zainab

    Arianaaaaaaaaaaaa 😍😍
    Girl you rock. You rule my heart 😉
    It was sheer bliss reading your ff. Talking to you was so much fun. Your wonderful episodes to your sweetest replies… I can’t even explain how much I loved it all.
    Coming to this episode…. Ahhhh… I don’t have words. After posting such beautifully written episodes you make me speechless that it takes me a lot of time to think how to explain how I felt reading such amazing episodes.
    I loved the brothers talk. Pushkar was the cutest 😍 The confession scene 😍😍 It literally stole my heart. I actually felt like i was watching it.
    Loved this episode from each and every wonderfully explained feeling to the beautifully written dialogues. 💕
    Please be back with another ff. I miss you already.
    You are the sweetest girl I’ve interacted with on this site. You are indeed the best writer and please don’t say anything about that today. I’ve always loved reading your ff as it’s most amazingly, beautifully and wonderfully explained. 😍 I was and am so impressed by your writing skills girl 👌
    I really love you. Gonna miss you so badly.
    Take care sweetheart 😘

    P.S sorry for commenting this much late. I was ill so couldn’t open this site. I was so anxious to read your ff and finally read it. Though I’m sad as I am already missing you.

    Khair Mubarak. Eid Mubarak to you too 😘😘
    Loads of love xoxo

    • Ariana

      |Author

      OMG!!!! U wrote such a wonderful comment that idk wht to reply.lets start with EID MUBARAK!!!! probably easy to say. Now, thanks in tons for praising. Like sooooooooooooooooooo sweet words!!! I’m 99% sure I already got diabetics by now. I have no clue wht to say now, how to thank u. U managed making me mum. Honestly, I’m not a good writer, nd as it’s a fact, everyone should admit to it, but I’m glad u loved my baseless writtings. It was an honour to find a frnd like u who praises soooooo much. Don’t apologize for commenting late. U were ill, yet u managed reading this long epi, what do I want more? Thanks again. I’ll try my best to come back soon. Miss u too sweetheart
      stay blessed
      love u alllllllllllllllloooooooooottttttttttttt beyond words
      take care
      EId wishes to u n ur associates
      byeee dearling

      • Zainab

        I’ve never commented this long till date.
        But your episode made me to. Loads of love sweetie 😘
        Khair Mubarak.
        Stay blessed 💕

      • Ariana

        |Author

        I’ll always be grateful. Ur comment was exactly as sweet as u. Both uncomparable. I guess in India, Pakistan, BD, nd all south east asian country today is eid so have a wonderful eid. Stay blessed nd u’ll b on my prayers. Enjoy the day and have fun honey. Love u
        Take care

  23. kittu

    @Ariana….
    SHAYAR KI SHAYARI…
    ARIYANA DI K FF…
    KOI TO ROKO DIL KO…
    SAMBHAL NA PA RAHA HAI..
    AAPKE FF NE DIWANA KAR DIYAA HAI..
    ……..

    RAHAT TO AATI HAI…
    CHAHAT HO JAATI HAI…
    ROKO IS DHADKAN KO…
    KAHIN THAM NA JAAYE…
    AAPKE IS CONFESSION SE..
    KAHIN DIL GHAYAL NA HO JAYE…
    ………..
    YAADE TO RAHTI HAI…
    KAHANI BHI BANTI HAI…
    PAR ISKI BAAT KUCH AUR HI THI…
    SAMBHALO MERE MAN KO…
    KAHIN KHO NA JAAYE…
    AAPKI SOCH PE HUM FIDA NA HO JAAYE…..
    ……………

    SAATH HAI CHAR DIN KA…
    ZINDAGI HAI KUCH DINKI…
    EDKV YU HI CHALTA RAHE…
    ZINDAGI AAPKI KHUSHIYO SE BHARI RAHE….
    SAMBHALO IS EHSAAS KO…
    KAHIN HAMARI DUNIYA HI NA ROK LE….
    AGAR AAPKI IZAAJAT HO TO…
    EK NAZRANA QUBOOL KIJIYE…
    JAATE JAATE EK MUSKURANE KI KOSISH….
    JAROOR KIJIYE…..

    HEY …ARIANA,…..I M GOING TO to give u….
    Oscar award…. Noble price in literature… BHARAT ratna……amazing Didi(could I call u)…how sweetly u depicted whole scene….mindblowing…..nd that pushu baba n SHRAVU duo was beyond this world…no words to show my happiness here…u r really blessed with good art….terrific… Incredible… Outstanding…. U need standing ovation Didi……y not u join us on EDKV pg….we’ll really happy to have u in our team….lots of love Didi… Nd u r just….wonderful… It’s really difficult to show our emotions with our words… But u did this….really u r a talented personality… I can only say thnx to u….for giving us such a fabulous fiction… Well done….🙌🙌🙌

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Awwwwwwww…It was soooooooooooo nice. U just made such a beautiful poetic write up for me. It’s extremely nice of u honey. Thanks in tons!!! I’m impressed by ur words. I’m not the brilliant writer, u r the one. Just look how beautiful u wrote. U deserve all those awards, not me. U’r writing skills r beyond words. I would definitely wanna read ur ffs.
      Ofcourse u can call me Di or Didi. I would have to have s small sis like u. U r adorable. Is there any special pg for EDKV? Whatever that is I’m unaware, but now that u offered, I would for sure LOVE to join it. Would u mind letting me know more about it?
      Thanks dear
      Stay blessed nd happy
      Love u aloooooooooooooooottttttttttt
      take care

  24. kittu

    JINE KI TAMANNA ..
    KHAYAYISE KAYEE…
    RAHNA TUM YAHI..
    YE DUAA HAI ABHI…
    WITH EDKV…
    U ND HUM….
    WITH YOUR ENTERTAINMENT N GUM…
    WE’LL MISS U….
    IT’S FOR SURE…
    PAR YE MAT SAMJHANA KI HUM …
    TUMHE BHOOL JAYENGE…
    KYUNKI BHOOLTE TO USE HAI…
    JISSE DOOR HOTE HAI..
    PAR HUM TO EK HAI..
    AS PER U SAID…..
    IT’S MY FIRST TIME….
    BUT SEEMS THAT THIS Pg is MINE….
    LOVE U DIDI…..FOR WHAT U DID…
    U MAKE US SMILE…
    LIKE A KID…..
    WELL,I READ YR CMMT……SECOND TIME… REALLY FANTASTIC…. AWESOME BLOSSOM.. N IN KITTU’S LANGUAGE…. DIDI…TODI NAKO PHODI NAKO…BHUKKO KARI NAKO….HEY,I don’t KNOW WHAT IT MEAN….BUT REALLY IT WAS FROM MY HEART…..REALLY U NEED A HUGE ROUND OF APPLAUSE….. BYEEEE

    • Ariana

      |Author

      lol I didn’t read ur other two comment’s while replying before so yah again….thanks sooooooooooo much. Now u r for sure making me blush like an idiot. Uhhh!! Need to control myself. But ur words contains so much of sweetness that it is affecting me. i might caught up with diabetics a day. As for ur words of heart, then those don’t need meanings, those r so pure that can’t be explained in simple form. And for sure on my next ff I’ll kill ramnath nd turn him into a bhootnath. I hate him too… I’m eagerly waiting for ur ffs. Pls let me know when it’s up and also, the thing u said about joining the EDKV pg. I am such a chipku that I would love to do anything nd stick with u all!
      Love urs
      Ariana (for u didi)

      • kittu

        @Ariana di…okay well di…I was talking abt the written updates pg of edkv.. We really have a good gang he he I mean good team there …plez come n join us….well once I had started to write ff but I left because of some circumstances…. N now if I wanna write but this registration… Ohh I don’t know kaise hou registered….. Ek baar kiya tha try…but all in vain…..well could u plez tell me abt registration process🙌

        Love u tooo Didi…….
        Kittu😝

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Oh simple. For registration, sign up with ur email nd a password.
      For laptop/pc: While u r logged in, u’ll notice on ur left top corner of the screen it’s wriiten “home- Contact us- submit article…blah blah blah” click on submit articles where there will b space given for the title, then the main body (ff), a picture u want to show on the ff pg (not mendatory) and catagory (choose fanfiction) Then when u r done with all these, press on submit article at the very bottom of the pg. It’ll take time, nd will b up on the site within 24 hrs.

      For mobile/tab: After u log in u’ll notice at the top there is “menu” press on that nd many options will pop up. Choose submit article, nd follow the same procedure as laptop/pc

      if u have any more quires, msg me, comment here on this epi of my ff, or mail to TU helpline.
      Eagerly waiting for ur ff
      loads of love

      • kittu..

        @Ariana di…hey Didi…I did the same….but they r showing that ..my email is awaiting verification… Now what should I do???…n after that..when I went to submit article option…. There r many statement… Whether u r registered or not..n bla..bla..should I wait now?????.
        With loads of love….
        Kittu…

    • Ariana

      |Author

      If it shows ur email is waiting for verification then open ur email (like if u use gmail then gmail.com or if u use yahoo then yahoo.com) and login in with ur email. On ur inbox u’ll receive a verification email from TU. Open that mail n u’ll find a link at the bottom saying something like “to verify ur account click on …….blah blah blah……”
      Once u click on the site, ur TU account will be verified. step 1 done.
      For submitting article click on submit article (check the other msg above for how to get to submit article). When u r on tht “Submit Your Article” page, 1st there r some conditions u must follow in order to post an article. No need to focus on all rules. Just remember
      – make ur epi long (like atleast 2 big paragraphs)
      -don’t use inappropriate words
      -use mostly english. U can use some hindi/other langs in between but the basic should b english

      now when u scrawl down the pg u’ll see “Title (required)” nd a box below it. Type in the title of ur ff on that box.
      Below that is “Article (required)'” and a box. Write ur ff on that box
      Under that is “Catagory-Pls select” so click on the dark black arrow nd from the options (Episodic Analysis, FanFiction, Humor) select “FanFiction”
      Finally at the very end is a big green box with white letters saying “Submit Article For Review” click on that when u r done.
      Then relax n wait for a day for TU to post ur ff

      If u have any more questions, feel free to let me know. Nd sry for a late reply, I didn’t get notified earlier

  25. kittu

    Itne cmmt aajtak Kaisi ff pe nahi padhe…..
    Well in my ff I’ll kill ramu…hehehe….nice na….😝😝😝😝

    • Anjali

      @kittu babu. ..dil khush kr ditta mera tumne to ramu ko marne ki bat kehkr…meri to ankhein bhar ayi khushi k ansu s. 😉

      • kittu

        @Anjali di..ha ha…nice na…..but tell me how to write ff…. Ye registration of..n aapke danke ban rahe h on this pg tooo….wow itne cmmt…u r amazing aapke charan kahan Hai…

    • Ariana

      |Author

      thanks soooo much dear. It’s really sweet of u. I’ll for sure come back with more writings by this October. Hope to interact soon.
      take care

  26. prathyu

    hi friends …
    I’m a silent reader here .I want to share my views .can u plz help me to register in telly updates.
    thank u

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Hi dear..
      PC/Laptop registration: At the very top left of the site (Just below the url box) there r small black letters saying home-Contact Us-Submit Article…………………….the last one is “login”
      Chick on tht. Then it’ll say to enter ur username nd password or sign up/register. Click on “sign up/register” then u have to write ur name, ur mail, password and press the green button below. Then the page will say “ur email is waiting for verification” so u have to go and open ur email inbox (like if u use gmail then gmail.com or if u use yahoo then yahoo.com) and u’ll find a mail from TU saying “verify ur account” So open the mail and at the bottom it’ll give u a link. Click on the link and ur TU account will b verified n u’ll b registered.
      For further inquiries, comment on this pg coz u can’t PM me now. Feel free to ask anything.
      Hope to find u in our EDKV family soon
      Take care

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Awwwww my sweet paro misses me? I miss u too allllllloooooooootttt more than u can imagine nd waiting eagerly for continuation of ur ff where i guess ShraMan is still hugging each other. Everything is fine, studies all good, how about urs? All set? Do u have exams going on? Keep posting sweet shots nd ffs. Oh yah! PM me if u wanna talk or just start talking anywhere!
      Loooooaaaaaadddddssssss of love
      miss u

      • Angel_pari

        Ahhhhh!!! Basicslly that is the problem i cant send pm by my phone dont know y….

        So i wont mind kicking out this phone hahahaha

        yeah all good yup last exam on 30 of oct!!!
        Aryyyy han!!!!! They are still hugging hahahahaha

    • Ariana

      |Author

      Wait last exam on 30th oct or 30th sept? Like 1 whole month to go???? Ohhhh god!!! I’ll die till then. Pls yaar kuch kado. Mujhe bachalo. ANyways all the best for ur exams and come back soon. Sry for a late reply, I didn’t get notified due to some reason i”m unaware of.
      byeee

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