EHT-The fresh start

LET’S START WITH THE SHORT STORY FRIENDS……..
Note: The character’s/personalities may vary from actual ending/plot in the storyline/show as I would like Dr.Thakur to be alive.

It’s morning time and we see a grand building with large walls ,a big gate and a beautiful garden the area adjoining it is also as clean as the yard of the house. This place, was so beautiful and grand that you can point out from far away ,and this place was also a centre tourist attraction of Kolkata. People enjoyed the scenic view that it gave and it’s garden was just marvelous, people were allowed to go inside and see the grand palace once a week when the owner went out, with his family. As we enter the gate we see the gardener watering the plants and the sweeper cleaning the yard as we move forward we see the grand door of the house ,with large metal handles,which are simple but beautiful,inside and as clean as you can see your face in any polished or reflecting surface like the floor also it’s kept simple and tells us/gives us the impression about the people living in the house they are simple, and kind…………………any guesses where are we well we are at the Goenka estate which is now owned by Dev Goenka and his small family consisting of his mother and wife.After the arrest of his uncle and his family he and his wife Durga took care of the whole business and prevented the downfall of the Goenka estate .We see an old woman sitting in a small temple constructed inside the house and offering the morning prayers she is wearing a simple light colored saree not so fashionable and it suited her the best and she looked very beautiful in that with that she just wore a ring in her index,finger and a pearl necklace her look is very simple………… She is Suchitra Goenka the owner ofthis house……… with her stood four figures with their hand’s folded in prayer and their lips,moving in an co-rdinated manner and they are singing ,the morning aarti. As we see the figures clearly We see a young beautiful girl with a smile on her face and wearing a sweet yellow colored pajama suit she is, Payal Nitya’s sister and with her stood a middle aged man in white kurta pajama and a big tika on his forehead he is Aakash ,who now a partner in Goenka estate being Sakshi’s son and being the most trusted one of the family he manages all the affair’s related to the business. And moving to the left we see Durga standing with folded hands and wearing a long ,length suit as usual and with Dev staring at her as she is looking very beautiful.

*******TO BE CONTINUED

LOL THAT’S ALL FOR THIS CHAPTER HOPE YOU LIKED IT AND PLSS TELL ME IF TOU DISLIKE SOMRTHING IN MY STORY PLOT AND GIVE YOUR REVEIWS . and i hope all fine with the introductions in the last update.AND SORRY FOR ANY MISTAKES.
THANK U-

Credit to: Richa

35 comments

  1. Pathanga

    Wow! I luv ua way f narratng.. T really makes me imagine al d charctrs n d similar way hw i usd to watch n tv.. Tx..
    I wud luv to hv mre n mre suspenses n d cumng chaps.. Pls consider dis as ma req..

  2. Swati

    Good work Richa … Im a big fan of the EHT series ….. Thanks for starting the fan fiction series of EHT .,,

  3. richa

    thankz @shivi @pathu and dr nxt chapter will take sometyme as i already hav an f-fic about Nauc going on and i was posting random since a week sooo i will first continue dat as loong i havn’t posted any chapter der and srry 4 dat and plss u can suggest me ideas regarding this EHT story……. and u can tell if u dislike anythng in d stryyy

  4. richa

    @SWATI AND PRAGSS , HG, BD DIEHARD FAN,CUTIEPIE AND DIA THANX A LOT UR CMMNTS GIMME COURAGE TO WRITE MOREE
    @@@@@ HG SWEETY THANKU FOR SUGESSION
    CAN SM1 TELL ME SHAURAYA’S FRND’S NAME WHO SUPPORTED HIM PLSS I FORGOT

  5. Pathanga

    @richu pls dea mk shourya to be a chngd man at last..
    Nd also reveal hw he ws abl to cal durga which ws shwn as suspense durng d end f shw..
    I wd luv to hv new new thrilss.,

    • Hey pathanga after a long tym huh !!

      Hw r u ???

      Xactly yaar I think it shud be like dis !!

      Hey do u think dat EHT season 2 will b back ???

  6. Devga

    No pathu vatsal can’t B changed as the climax showed an evil attitude of him … So he can’t B changed … Hehehe @pathanga

    • richa

      nina i will post next epi most probably tomo as i just posted two updates toady 1 intro part and this one lol

  7. richa

    thank u guysss @nina,nithasha,ahana.Devga,lulu nd sara
    ur wrds gimme encouragement to write more
    @ arjun ok w ill write in paras nd srry i typed the pe but didnt post it here it is
    NEXT UPDATE: We hear the door bell ringing and a servant comes in and informs the Goenka’s about the visiter,and we see Dr Thakur standing at the door……..
    @ pathu hyy nd @ pathu nd devu thenx 4 sugessions i will tery to use ur both sugessions dr 🙂
    lol thanx 4 cmmnting nd keep reading frndss

  8. Pathanga

    @mandy.. Hii mandy..m fyn dea.. Hw a u?

    @devga.. Frst f al hii devu.. Though climax shwd his evil attitude bt at last tats t d end f season i wnt him to be CHANGED man becoz every1 mst gt a second chance in deir lyf nd ts appicabl to shaurya also..
    If he wont dn he hs no right to liv n dis punyabhumi nd im gonna kill hm nd tats fr sure hihihihi..

    @richu eithr u mak hm a chngd man r else make hm die t d end..
    Sumthng lyk dis.:diggng grave fr sume1 else nd hmself falling into t..

  9. lee yan

    niiiiiiiiiiiiice…. really loved it.. the words and the way of narrating is very interesting… enjoyed reading it…. goood workk.. keep on writing..

  10. Ireena

    plz,richa.make a new lead entry for our cute payal.and where is kangana????she should stay with them.
    and,praiseworthy effort by u!!!???

  11. richa

    thank u sree ,leeyan& Ireena
    @Tttt i have poisted a chapterb4 this one with the introduction of all the chaatecters plss see that for detailed answer………..anyways Durga is Dev’s wife &payal is her sister
    @Ireena thanx 4 sugession……….

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