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Their EGO killed their LOVE…..SWARAGINI..ONE SHOT.

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Hey everyone…
Its Abhi…
Its a one shot.
And the pairs are sangini..
I like swasan too but i haven’t seen even one ragsan one shot here.So i planned it for ragsan.Its a really short one.sorry for that.

A boy is shown talking in his phone.
Its our sanskar.He is in his room.
A girl is sleeping in the same room.
Sanskar:Ragini…
Yes,she is our Ragini.
Ragini:Good morning sanskar.She smiles.
Sanskar:Get ready..we want to go to court na,,..
Ragini’s smile fades.
Ragini went to the washroom and starts crying.
Ragini:Why god why…Why cant he say me that he love me..

FLASHBACK..
Ankit is Ragini’s lover.
Ragini:Ankit,when will you come to my home with your parents.?My parents are searching for a good groom for me..iam always rejecting the proposals..But if they ask me for the reason,then i don’t have any.
Ankit:Baby…let me get a job.Next week iam going to America for an interview.If i get that job,next day i will come to your parents.
Ragini:When will you come back.?
Ankit:It will take one month.Wanna know the results also na,thats why.
Ragini:What..one month..its not possible.Within that my parents will make me married to someone.
Anki:What…then what will we do..Okay one idea..My best friend,he is a great businessman.He is not married yet.
Ragini:What are you saying about?
Ankit:Wait…let me call him first.

Aftersometime
Ankit:There he is..Sanskar .
Sanskar:Hey,why did you call me and who is this girl.
Ankit:She is my girlfriend.
Ankit tells everything to sanskar.
sanky:But what can i do in this ..
Ankit:Sanky..you please don’t say no..
Sanky:First you say..
Ankit:Can you marry Ragini?
Sanky:What..
Ragini:Anki,What’s all this nonsense.
Ankit:Rags,tuje meri kasam..please accept this.Actually its only for one month..You both can apply divorce after one month.That is, when i come back.
Ragini:But..
Sanky:No way..
Ankit:Sanky please.
Ankit emotionally blackmails him and made him accept.
After one week
Ragsan got married with the presence of her parents.Sanskar is an orphan.So no one from his side.
Her parents accepted him because they felt him eligible for her.

DAY 1
Ragini is sleeping in the bed and Sanskar in couch.
DAY 2,3,4 completed.
DAY 5
Sanskar and Ragini starts feeling for each other. but diverts their mind thinking about Ankit.
Sanskar and Ragini even didn’t speak a single word to each other yet.
DAY 6
When sanskar comes back from the office,he found Ragini unconscious in the floor.He took her in his arms and made her lie on the bed.As she was having high fever,he called a doctor.Doctor checked her and said its because of improper nutrition and because of doing heavy works.
Doctor leaves.
Sanskar:Where are the workers..
He was shouting.a
All the workers came.
Sanky:Iam giving you money for doing works,not to make her do works.
Worker:Sir,that..because she said she’ll do..that’s why.
Sanskar:Tomorrow onwards if i see her doing any works then you all will be fired.get lost..
Ragini gets concious.
Ragini:Sanskar..actually
Sanskar:Don’t say anything..for two days you will not wake up from here..full bed rest..got it..
He leaves.
Ragini:He cares for me???
DAY 7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15
In these days they get to know more about each other..
DAY 22
Ragini gets a call.Sanskar is also there in the room.
Ragini:No..ankit..what are you saying..
She starts crying woefully.
sanskar made her to sit on the bed.
Sanskar:Ragini..what happened..why are you crying?
Ragini hugs hima nd he hugs her back.
Sanskar:What happened.
Ragini:Ankit got the job there…and he said that now he don’t want me ..I will not suit for his standards and all..She again starts crying.
Sanskar:Ragini,don’t cry.
Inside sanskar was little happy because he loves her.
DAY 23,24,25
Its full of crying and all..
DAY 26
Sanskar:Its enough of this crying and all,..He left you that doesn’t mean you should keep thinking about him and cry..You should be strong and move on.
Sanky’s POV
Ragini,say that you will be with me forever..as my wife..pls.
Ragini’s POV
I know that i have some feelings for you…but you will get someone better than me..i will be a burden for you as i loved someone else before.
Ragini:Yes sanskar,i will forget him and move on.
Ragini leaves from there.
Sanskar becomes sad.
DAY 27
A situation comes where sanskar is about to kiss ragini but moves back due to phone call.
DAY 28
Now both of them know that they love each other.But waiting for the other one to say.
DAY 29
Sanskar:Tomorrow is the last day of our agreement..
Sanky’s Pov
Ragini, please say that you love me.And want to be with me forever please.
Ragini:Hmmm i know,you don’t worry i will go to my home after that.
Ragini’s pov
Sanskar,say me not to go..say..
Sanskar:But what will you say to your parents?
Ragini:That,i will make them understand.
Sanskar leaves.
Ragini is crying.
Ragini: i don’t want to lose you.Why cant you say that you love me?

DAY 30
@ night
RAGSAN:Today anyway i will say everything .
Ragini made some special dishes and decorated the whole house.
A Servent:Mam..today anything special?
Ragini:Hmmm..no..no..today is my last day in this house like this…tomorrow onwards..
Before she completes
a bell rings.
Actually she was going to say that tomorrow onwards it will be a new start in this house for her..as sanskar maheswari’s wife..a perfect wife not argreemental.
Sanskar enters the house and notices the decorations.
Sanskar:What’s all this.
Servant:Ragini bhabhi said that its her last day here that’s why..

sanskar is controlling his tears.
Ragini comes.

Ragini:Sanskar,how is it..and do you why know this decoration and all is..
Sanskar:Hmmm…i know.You are leaving tomorrow ..thats why ..right?
Ragini is heartbroken.
But still she said:Hmmm and gives him a fake smile.
Sanskar crumbled the card which he had..
Yes guys..he was also about to propose her.But didn’t.
They had the dinner and sleeps.
Both are crying a lot while sleeping.
Now..
its present.
Ragini comes out from the washroom .
Ragini:Iam ready come lets go.
@ car
Both are not even looking at each other.
Sanskar switch on the radio.Hamari adhoori kahani plays.
@ court.
Ragini is going to left door and sanskar to right door.
Sanskar calls Ragini.
Ragini turns with happiness..
Sanskar:you kept your bags in the car..na
Ragini’s smile fades.
She felt like someone punched her.
Ragini:Hmm.
@ court room
Judge:Mis Ragini,are you okay with this divorce..
sanskar in Mind:pls..ragini..say no..pls..pls..
Ragini:Yes.
Judge:You..?
Ragini in Mind:Sanskar pls say no…pls pls.
Sanskar:yes.
judge:You both are divorced now.

Both came outside.
Sanskar:Here is your bag.
Ragini:Thanks.
Ragini:Bye..iam leaving.
Sanky:Bye.
Ragini:Sanskar..
Sanskar smiles and turns:Hmmm? Ragini: take care.
Sanskar:hmm
Both are crying..
sanskar:Ragini..
Ragini smiles and turns:Hmmm
Sanskar:You too take care..
Ragini:hmmm..
They both went in different directions.
Both are crying woefully.
The story ends..

In this story ragsan got separate only because of their ego….and also bcoz of little misunderstanding.
Never let your ego kill your love..
Guys ,I know its boring..sorry for that..I just felt like writing something thats why I wrote..sorry..

Credit to: Abhinanth

51 Comments
  1. An os with a moral keep doing this often abi

    1. Thankyou so much dev

  2. Nice yaar

    1. Thankyou so much sanskaar

  3. Awww….u shud not hv made dem get separated….but it’s k…its something to learn frm ur story 🙂

    1. Thankyou so much smriti

  4. Hey that’s good. Please do write another one on ragsan but don’t separate them this time.

    1. I will try to write….Thankyou anonymous..

  5. luv it …
    simply it is a beautiful story…
    but end is a sad . ….

    1. Thankyou so much cute girl.

  6. Hey good try…..plz write a story on dis on shot…. I dnt like ending.. That’s not ego…they were expecting from each other..Write a beautiful by using dis concept bcz i really loved dis concept.if u dnt want,i would like to ask sindhu r m ya megha.i belive she can convert dis one shot in beautiful story.

    1. Iam little busy nowadays…so I think its btter to ask sindhu di or meher to do it….
      Thankyou joya.

  7. M a swasan fan …i actully never want to see ragsan n ya itz first ragsan os or ff i hv ever read…n i must say itz osm…ur plot is very strong… keep writing

    1. Iam feeling so grtful to hear such a comment frm YOU.
      Iam grt fan of ur os’s.

      1. Thnku so much…n ya please one SwaSan os please… 🙂 🙂

    2. Ohh..u r asking me fr a swasan os?…U made my day by that question..Ur all the os r awesome…
      Let me think about a new story…And surely my nxt os will be swasan’s.Specially for u..
      Thankyou so much meher

    3. Yeeyyyy thnkuu so muchh 🙂 =D 😀

  8. awesome……

    1. Thankyou so much kriya

  9. Its awesome…

    1. Thankyou arushi

  10. krishali khnna

    its awesome.

    1. Thankyou krishali

  11. Superb dear. I loved it

  12. Jst awesome

  13. It was awsome abi.make another one plz

    1. Thankyou so much amaya…let my exams finish after that surely I will.

  14. Hi its just awesone i loved i just want your permission to take your idea and continue story

    1. Yes sindhu di…its my pleasure if you are continuing this story..
      Thankyou so much…

  15. Very nice . Please write more os on ragsan but with happy ending please…

    1. Thankyou so much Aayushi..ans yes I will write one more os on ragsan.

  16. hey i think u watched thumhi bhandho shaka thumhi serial the same thing will happen to sanjana and ajay but u have changed a little don’t cheat us but os if nice don’t get hurt this is the real

    1. i agree withu 425342 ahe has copied the story

    2. Dear 425342…I actually dont know which serial is that even…i just took the moral ego kills love and made a story..But sorry if u felt that I copied any serial’s plot..
      Anyway,thankyou so much fr reading.

    3. i agree with u i saw tumhi bhandho shaka tumhi for chandini bhagwani and kabeer she ajay and sanjana will marry and sanjana is gf of ajju .ajay will marry sanjana for ajju and later they both fall for each other . yes u r right this serial was in zee tv

    4. abhi plz use ur brains i loved it but plz use ur brains i saw that serial tbst

      1. Thankyou raki..and you might saw that serial but I didnt…

  17. hey reallly awesome but sad ending i want u to write another os but same pair plz a humble request from me keep it up. really awesome os ur’s is the first ragsan ff i loved plz continue writing os plz don’t stop writing i loved it . i want another os o ragsan
    write more os all the best for next os with ragsan but plz plz plz happy ending
    i have read it 2 times it really sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    good

    1. Thankyou so much jane……
      My exams are going on now….On march 22 exams will over.After that,I will write one more os on Ragsan…

      1. thank all the best for ur exams

  18. Suoerb I must say.. good moral

    1. Sorry I mean superb. Not suoerb

      1. Thankyou so much lila.

  19. Superb episode. I love os with morals. Please write more os and ff. You are an amazing writer.

    1. Thankyou so much sweetie…
      I will try to write more os…

  20. Nice one can u write ff actually i am not happy by ending way …

    1. Megha…thankyou so much and sindhu di will make it into a ff.

  21. Well..it was expectation dissatisfied not really ego..story thought n moral is good..i know its an os..but divorce cnt occur too easily…i truly wonder if they expct each odr to say no den y they themselves said yes!! Well..i think u cn write much bettrr dtories dan dis..it was good but smthing i felt was missing..not bcz u didn unite them..as its ir idea to separate them

  22. Thank u so much bisha

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