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when the EGO called FARAK crosses its limits !! (part-6)

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Thanks a lot those who commented in my previous parts here is the link for previous chappy

when the EGO called FARAK crosses its limits !! (part-5)


recap; ragini got memory loss she does not remembers shivaay, shivika admit to each other that FARAK PADTHA hai omki to find the actual truth of shivaay ‘s life
@ present
Shivaaay was recollecting what samar said he tries to recollect what anika did the last three days b4 last three months
He remembers anika saying pinky brought nayanthara he thinks what if that is true yeah i should find out
He reaches lovely dance bar
Shiv;muje insse milna hai
Waiter ;she is there sir
Shiv; kaisi ho nayathara
9tara; daamd ji aap
Shiv;kabardar agar thum ne muje damad ya anika ko beti kaha tho
9tara ;u know all then y did u come here
Shiv;i wanted to know something who brought to oberoi mansion
9tara;so u came for this thing
He throws a money bunch on her face now say
9tara ;u r forcing this much so im saying wohh pinky ji only gave me money to act as anika’s mom
Shivaay leaves from there with so much shock he didn’t expect this even in his dreams
Now one thing was clear for him that pinky hates anika so its also clear for him that pinky would have forced anika to do all those but how did anika obey pinky there were so many questions running on his mind

@oberoimansion
Shivaay calls every one in the hall except om evry one r present
Pinky;shivaay thumne kyn sab ko bhulaya hai ??
Shivaay ;mom woh to ask something from u
Pinky ;from me ??
Shivaay; yeah uu ,why did u bring nayantara as anikas mom b4 three months>??
Pinky didn’t expect this question
Pinky ; wohh shivaay
Shivaay ; i want answer mom he shoutsssssss (by listening to him every one reaches the hall)
All ; kya hua shivaay
Shivaay; mom will u say or i should say
Dadi;kya bath hai shivaay what u want to say say fast
Shiv; yhi ki 3 mahine pehle anika ki nakli mom nayantara ko inhone laya tha
All; kya (except anika coz she already knows )
Shiv;haan par kyun mom kyun ?? because of u we even fighted abut this matter even though anika said about tis i didn’t believe it coz i believed u mom but y u did like this say ??!
pinky without any other option she says ;
Woh shivaay im always inscure that u will leave me because of this girl from the day she came into ur life u started ignoring me so i thought to separate u both i didn’t want her to be a part of ur life so i did that intentionally
Every one were so shocked

Shiv;matlab anika is ghar ko chod k jaane k peechey aap ka hath tha ?? par aap ne ussse kya kaha tha?? Eaisi kounsi bath thi jo anika aap se dar k chali gayi thi muje chod k haan KYa baath hai wohh ( he littrally shouts )
Pinky ;woh shivaay
Anika ;bas shivaay ye itna zarooori nahi hai pls leave it here itself
Shiv; nahi today i want to know the reason and no one will interrupt me
Pinky is about to say
But om gives a entry there
Om ; b4 she speaks i would like to say somthing
Shiv; is that more imp than this ??
om ; offcourse shivaay
Shiv; then proceed om
Om ;choti mom aap se kisne kaha hai ki shivaay aap ka beta nahi hai??
All ; ye kaisa sawal hai??
om ; when im asking pls don’t interrupt chotii mom say
Pinky;shakthi ji ne
Om ;woh joot tha sach ye hai ki shivaay aur mahi dono aaphi k bête hai
Pinky was shocked ;kya !!
Om ;haan

Flash back ;
Om ;chote papa its the matter of ur sons life pls say the truth
Shakthi; woh om i and kamini loved each other but my mom arranged marriage for me with pinky i was helpless then i married her during all this time kamini was out of station when kamini came pinky was pregent nearly last stage
That time when kamini came to know that i married pinky she did acting of doing suicide i went to save her she kept a condition with me according to that i should give one of my kid for her and also i should make pinky believe that shivaay is not her son
At first i didn’t accept but she had photos of us together she said she will show this for media i was scared that it may destroy OBEROI ‘s reputation so helplessly i did all these
I separated my kids i was away from my son even pinky was not showing any affection whole heartily i was so helpless to all those i didn’t expect that this truth will affect shivaay’s life so badly

@present
Every one were so soo schoked including pinky
Om; so shivaay choti mom blackmailed anika that she will say the truth for u that u r illegitimate which is actually a lie as anika knows that for u NKK is very important u so she left u being helpless
Shivaay and pinky were equally shocked
Pinky ; shakthi ji uu did very bad with mee noo u cant do like this u separated me from my kid u created insecurity in me about shivaay u did all these how i should feel say??
shakthi ; im sorry pinky
All ;ab sorry se kuch nahi hoga
Pinky ; im srry anika im so sorry i was so insecure that shivaay was not my child what if he leaves me thats y i asked u to leave him but i know u r his happiness still my insecurity didn’t allow me to accept u
Shivaay now understood every thing he went of from that place only
Pinky ; shivaay beta mera baath sun !!!!!!! she breaks down anika consoles her and she runs behind shivaay

@shivika’s room
Shiv pov
Its all because of me meeeeeeeeeeee if i would not have valued naam khoon khandhan anika wouldn’t have left me she knows it hurts me but y didn’t she know more than NKK her absence hurts me more he breaks down
Anika enters the room she locks the door
Anika;shivaay
Immediatly shivaay hugs her
Anika; shivaay i can understand u but think even from aunty g’s pov
Shiv;im sorry anika because of me coz of my belief in NKK u need to leave me sorry
Anika; its ok shivaay but pls forgive pinky aunt g
Shiv; only with one condition !
Ani;what ??
Shiv;u need to promise me that u wont leave me ever and ever
Anik; pinky promise i wont leave u
Shiv; even i do pinky promise that from today NAAM KHOON KHANDHAN wrths nothing to me
Anik; thank u shivaay
Few days later
They both now cleared every thing all the misunderstandings r over shivika were so thankful to om
Shivaay forgave pinky . pinky accepted anika whole heartily all were s angry on shakthi
When shakthi brought mahi for oberoi mansion every one forgave him
Mahi felt so happy for getting this much love and affection
Now he became the apple pie of the home
Anika –mahi became good friends
She spends some extra time with mahi as both of their language r same hehe
Shivaay notices this

@shivika’s room
Shiv;now a days madam is so busy with her new friend is it ??
Anik;shivaay not like that he is smae like omru fr me
Shiv; that i know sweeety but see after my bro came every one forgot me even u
Ani; awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so even if i spend time with ur bros u feel so much
Shiv; nahi anika muje kun farak padega i know u bhabhi devers relation ships but spend some time with me also na (he makes puppy face )
Ani;ok jealous singh oberoi
Shiv; what did u say
They both play chasing each other finally they fall on bed light goes off
U can imagine the rest part ehhe
Then after few months all the oberois r waiting for someone to arrive
All ; they came
Dadi does aarthi for shivika along with two babies (yeah twins )
Dadi ; haay kisiki nazar na lage
Ru ; ye bachi bilkul bhaiya k jaise hai
Om;or ye bacha bilkul bhabhi ki tarah
Mahi; chalo its photo session
All take photo with little ansh and anshi
Ansh had brown eyes and anshi had kanji eyes shivika were so happy finally their family is complete
Now they started searching alliance for mahi and omri sorted every thing
Bhavya after finishing her mission left oberoi mansion then rudra realised his mistake he went to Australia to bring soumya back
Soumya forgave him they married again
In oberoi mansion every youngsters got married
Mahi found his perfect match who understands him
Omri started understanding each other well soon junior omri is ready to come
Rumya still fights for silly resons but this time both have lofe and affection for each other
Shivika even after becoming parents for two kids didn’t stop their cat fights and farak dramas
Days passes but the love and affection in oberoi mansion became stronger and stronger

The end

Authors note
Yes the end actually i don’t like to drag the stories either in serial or anywhere but serial i cant do anything so i finished it soon in my story i thought to write only 5 shots i donno how it became 6 eheh
But don’t think its the end my story has ended not my thinking soon i will meet u all with one more ff or os of mine till then stay happy and happy 70th independence to all of u
Thanks for every one who commented in my ff it was my first ff ur comments gave me so much confidence soon i will come up with next story don’t worry
Silent readers please do comment it my last chappy comment atleast now
Thank u so much for ur support love uu all
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And if u guys wanted to see a strong and brave version of anika
I have my os about that do read and comment there too
Here is the link http://www.tellyupdates.com/najayaz-truth-came-one-day-shivaays-truth-os/
But b4 that comment here hehe
Thank u and see u all soon

18 Comments
  1. Alekhika20

    Superb update

  2. Awesome, fantastic ending

  3. Nikita_jai29

    It is nice one dear..

  4. Fenil

    Awesome.
    Loved it.
    Sorry

  5. Dhar

    Awesome episode… Loved it… Plzz do come back with another dose of ur writings

  6. Niriha

    Awesome….loved it fabulous ending

  7. Ankita27

    Amazing….. Excellent… Superb…. Awesome… loved it…
    Sabse achha part ragini got memory loss & she doesn’t remembers shivay.. bade aram se apne ragini ka chapter close kar diya…. finally shivay find out d truth thanks to samar… wah zulfi singh good job… pniky aunty apologised to anika n anika consoles her abb ib me to hum yeh dekhne se rahe so thank u for this anky scene… shivay’s pinky promise so cute… finally mahi ki ghare vaapsi… anika spends some extra time with mahi as both of their language r same n hamare jealous singh oberoi… 😂😂😂 Awww twins Ansh n Anshi… 😍😍😘 n d best part was saumya’s re-entry n Rumya… 👌👌💖 Ese hi rumya ki silly fight n shivika ki tadibaazi chalti rahe…. Happy n perfect ending..
    come back soon…
    take care….

  8. Nilash

    Awesome ending to this amazingly fantastic story. Thank you so much for this story. Shab this was the best ever ending you could give to your story. I loved the line when you mentioned after having kids too they continued their fark drama. Loved it. This dose was needed to get over the stupid crap. And the way you portrayed the story, from starting to end it was worth reading. Come back soon with another piece. Will be waiting for your next story.
    And aaj no promotion. Love you

  9. Lauren

    Amazinggggg dearie loved it …. post nxt asap…

  10. Lauren

    Amazinggggg dearie loved it …. post nxt asap… waiting for it…

    1. Lauren

      M sry dr… juzz in a flow I wrote to post nxt asap… but I meant to start a new ff soon…. m sry for typo error…

  11. Hi shaba 🙋
    I hope you recognize me😊

    This ff was amazing 👌
    Superb one 👍
    I really loved it ❤
    Sorry i was not able to comment in all the parts I hope you will forgive me
    Love you 😘😘

  12. Vanisha

    Awesome jerry…loved it
    See you with a new work 😘😘😘😘

  13. Ashwinee

    very happy with this update . thank you 🙂

  14. Sumitha

    Superb yaar…..
    I don’t think that u will end it soon….
    Love this ff……
    As u said I also don’t like dragging stories in serial……
    Come with another ff drrr…….
    Love u drrr…..

  15. Logesh.M

    Really awesome shabana…But pinky should not be forgiven so easily in real ishqbaaz…How much she tortured anika…She must be thrown out of OM…But i am sad…you ended soon…..Really awesome…You might have continued it!!!!!!!!

  16. Gayathri.visu

    Shabz…..superb ending dear! I loved it. But whatever that ponky did with shivika in IB, I can’t able to forgive her…..I know Anika will forgive her so easily,but i won’t!!
    Sorry for very late commenting dear…
    Take care n stay blessed

  17. TUFriendsForever

    So shabsss sorry for not commentimg in the previous epi’s n sorry for being late to comment here
    So throughout the ff I loved two things one Samar’s character two the use of title not only two many teaf the comment fully
    3.The way u accepted out view of bringing the dialogues
    4.the way u gave a beautiful message in the previous epi as u sow so u reap ragini memory loss was good
    5.u made rumya unite that was good
    6Om’s final role was awesomeeee
    7.I can’t forgive pinky but being a IB fan u did it which isnreally difficult hats offf for that
    8.I excepted riya n samar past but it was not there sooo sad but its kkk
    9.u didn’t drag it longggggg but I expected at least 15 its kkkk
    10.u repleied each n every comment which is a great quality which many including me fail to do
    It was not the world’s best one but it was ye one which I liked to read
    Keep writing
    Missing u
    With love an IB fan

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