(EDKV TS) Part-1


Hey guys i m back with a two shot.

Suman and shravan are school students. They are in the same class. They are enemies from the age of 5.
Suman and shravan are in the class. Suman is cleaning her desk. Shravan was with his group. He sees her.
Shravan- class me itni badbu kaha se aai rahi hai ( he looks towards suman) ohh suman tiwari (laughs)
Suman angrily looks at him and sits on his desk.
Pam( suman’s best frd) – kya hua sumo itni gusse me kyu hai
Suman- vo hai naa shameless shravan
Pam- koi nai chood usse
The school gets over.

While driving home suman breaks her scooty. She somehow reaches home.
Suman- daadu vo muj se hai na kya hai na ki muj se hai naa
Daadu- scooty toot gai
Suman- aap ko kaisa pata
Daadu- beta mai tumhara dada hu muje sab pata hai
Suman- daadu saach
Daadu – maine tumhe ghaar aate hua dhek liya tha
Suman- oh
Daadu- ab iske liye tuje khud paise jama karne honge part time job dhund ke
Suman- theek hai daadu
Suman gets a part time job in a adventure land where she gets the role of princess and hug a frog who becomes a prince
[frog prince].

She gets ready in her dress for checking the dress.
Suman(in her minda)- muje kisse hug kar na padaga pata kar ke aati hu
She sees a person in frog’s costume.
Suman- shayad yahi vo banda hai jisko muje hug karna hai
She goes close to him
Suman- hi i m suman and we ar going to do work together bhaut maza aai ga
The man removes his mask and its none other than shravan
Shravan- haa suman tiwari bhaut maza aaye gaa

Precap- depends if any one liked it or not

Sry if anyone did not like it. Sry if it was boring

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  1. It was superb ishita. Pls post the next part ASAP. Pls…. it was really very interesting.. waiting eagerly for next part……. tons of love…..

    1. IME

      Thank you i would post nxt anf final part on sunday

      1. IME

        * and final

  2. hey ishita….
    it was very very interesting yaar.
    awesome episode. waiting for next one…
    please post soon…..

    1. IME

      Thank you reema would post nxt part on sunday

  3. nice ya
    keep writing

    1. IME

      Thank you balamirra

  4. amazzzzinnnng plzz post

    1. IME

      thankkkkkkkkkkkkkkk youuuuuuu devgyani would post nxt part on sunday

  5. Riya choudhary

    Very nice posts

    1. IME

      Thank you riya

  6. Beas

    It’s damn amazing. Plz continue and post asap?

    1. IME

      Its just like u

  7. Ime I really liked it not liked but loved ??plz post the next part asap

    1. IME

      Thank you Vedika nxt part would be coming on sunday

  8. Vyshnavireddy

    Its very interesting!!Pls post the next part soon

    1. IME

      Thank you dear

  9. ----Manya-----

    Hi I m Manya I m 11 yrs old ! And the biggest fan of Edkv
    I loved ur fan fiction it was amazing I know where u took the idea it was frm best of luck Nikki right ? Am I right I have seen that episode and that first line Rahul says to dolly .. And Pam is her best friend ..
    Anyways I loved the ff
    I wish I could write one
    It was superb !!
    Well done

    1. IME

      yes u ar ri8 I just love best of luck nikki. You know rahul was better than ayaan. bt what to do. I loved the last epi of season 2 it was fab for dolly and rahul they were just amazing……………By the way thank u so much dont worry u would be able to write a fan fic just search for a theme………remember no idea is bad ( said by dolly in season 2) :p

  10. ----Manya-----

    Pls post the next part soon!!

    1. IME

      Would post nxt part on sunday

    1. IME

      Thank u yrrr

  11. Heyyyy its really amazing dear would love to read further plz post soon

    1. IME

      Thank u dear i have submitted the article just now hope it gets published soon

  12. IME

    Thank u dear i have submitted the article just now hope it gets published soon

  13. Wow it was so nicee

    1. IME

      thank u riya

  14. Wow it was so nicee I really liked it was just fantastic please post nxt part soon

    1. IME

      I have submitted hope it gets published soon

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