I am yours…edkv sharman two shots…last part

Hey guys….. M back again with my last part of my shots I AM URS…hope u will like it ???

Recap: Shravan saves sumo and both reach the university

Pari: yr tu theek toh hai na….tujhe Kuch hua toh nhi???
Pta hai main kitna pareshaan ho gyi thi sab meri galti hai agar main pehle nhi jaati toh tu kidnap bhi nhi hoti??
Pari had tears in her eyes..
Sumo: oye meri sherni tu kab SE rone lagi….and Teri koi galti nhi hai Jo hua usse bhool jaa ab main theek hu and yr thank God ki Shravan tym pe aa gya…hum usse aise hi bura samjhte the voh itna bura nhi hai…☺☺
Pari ( in her mind): yr yeh sahi mauka hai…isse bta deti hun ki Shravan ne iski kidnap ki planning ki thi…aur phir yeh Shravan pe gussa hogi…and agar Shravan vapas sumo pe gussa hua toh voh isse like nhi karta….lekin agar nhi hua….toh iska matlab main sahi hun..he has feelings??
Sumo: kya hua…kahan kho gyi??
Pari: nhi yr voh Shravan bilkul acha nhi hai…tujhe pta hai ki usne tujhe kidnap karwane ka plan banaya tha?
Sumo: kya!!!??…usne mera kidnap karaya??
Pari: nhi yr….kidnap usne nhi karaya but usne plan banaya tha …jisko usne bola the tujhe kidnap Karne ke liye voh kar nhi paaya…
Sumo: tu sure hai??
Pari: han but tujhe kya chod usse..
Sumo: arre aise kaise….voh itna bura hai Maine yeh nhi socha tha….main abhi jaake uss se baat karti hun
Saying this she goes…
Pari: isse itna farak kyu pada….hmm iska matlab yeh bhi…wah yr Pari tu toh sabse smart hai chal ab chal ke dekhte hai sumo shravan ka kya haal kar rhi hai????

Here Shravan was sitting lost in the canteen when sumo came there… He was very happy to c her

Shravan: sumo tum yahan
Sumo: jhoote dhokebaaz???
Shravan: what yeh kya keh rhi ho tum sumo
Sumo: sahi keh rhi hun….pehle mujhe kidnap Karne ka plan banate ho phir mujhe bacha ke mere saamne ache bante ho….itne bure ho tum Shravan??
Shravan: sumo…
Sumo: apni gandi zubaan se mera naam bhi mat lena…aur plz ab mujhse baat karne ki koi zaroorat nhi hai??
Shravan: sumo suno toh…plz Atleast listen to me once…??
Urvashi: usski itni himmat ki voh tumpe chilaye…uski aukaat Usko yaad dilani hi hogi….bl**dy down market girl
Shravan: urvashi????
Stop it….jiske baare mein tum bol rhi ho usne tumhari jaan bachayi hai….voh kidnapers tumko kidnap karna chahte the but galti se sumo ko kar diya…but usne kissi ko nhi bataya taaki tu Bach sake aur tu uske baare mein bakwas kar rhi hai…
Urvashi: usne tumko apni baaton phasaya hai Shravan mujhe koi kyu kidnap karega…aur tum uske jaal mein phas rhe ho usne tumhari itni insult ki voh bhi sabke saamne aur phir bhi tum uski side le rhe ho….dekho Shravan uski jaisi middle class girls hoti hi aisi hai….rich ladkon ko phasati hai…
Shravan: enough urvashi….agar tumhari jagah koi ladka hota toh main usse thapad maar deta …issliye iss se pehle ki main bhool jaaun ki tum ladki ho just get lost???
Urvashi: but Shravan main keh rhi hun ki voh sumo bahut cheap hai…
Thaaad….there was a sound of slap…when Shravan turned around he saw that pari had slapped that jerk urvashi hard…
Pari: ae…zayada bakwas mat kar meri bestie ke baare mein…class clothes se nhi balki dil se hoti hai…and rich insaan apne thoughts se hota hai naaki paison se…and iss hisaab se sumo tumse zayada classy and rich hai so just get lost iss se pehle main phir se tumhe thapad marun…..just get lost u bl**dy fool??

Urvashi goes from there and pari takes Shravan to a corner and says
Pari: tu sumo se pyaar karta hai na
Shravan: what!!
Pari: ab yeh mat kehna mujhe nhi pta…tu sumo se bahut zayada pyaar karta hai….Teri aankhon mein bas sumo ke liye pyaar dikhta hai…tu khud soch agar sumo ki jagah koi aur hoti toh kya tu uski baat aise hi chup chap sun leta…nhi naa….but tune sumo se Kuch nhi kaha and moreover when that urvashi was insulting her u felt bad…so this all indicates that u love sumo madly???
Shravan remembers all the moments he spent with her …
Pari: agar abhi bhi realise nhi hua toh just close ur eyes and see whose face u can see..
Shravan closed his eyes and saw sumo..
Shravan: yes…yes…yes…I m in love…that too with sumo…yes pari I m in love…???
Pari: toh soch kya rha hai gadhe jaa aur usse apni dil ki baat keh de..
Shravan: nhi aise nhi…tu aaj jaise bhi karke usse xyz mall mein le aana…main usse vahan purpose karunga
Pari: wah…sabke saamne not bad han…chal done ok c u den..bbye
Shravan: pari…
Saying this he hugs pari…( friendly hug guys??….and pari di this a gift from me to u ab aur Kuch toh nhi de Sakti but I think aap Shravan ki hug paakar bahut khush hoge…I hope so)
Pari: bas kar pagle rulayega kya…chal ab chod mujhe jaana hai usse lekar bhi toh aana hai…tab tak tu sab ready rakhna bbye
Shravan: han OK bbye

Saying this pari leaves and shravan starts preparing for the grand proposal

At evening…
SO GUYS HERE STARTS THE PROPOSAL PART….I HAVE REALLY WORKED VERY HARD TO MAKE IT UNIQUE I HOPE U WILL LIKE IT….

SO GUYS ARE U READY??
SIT ON UR IMAGINATION HORSES AND RIDE ON ALONG WITH ME INTO MY IMAGINATION WORLD….

pari has successfully managed to get sumo to the mall….
Just as sumo entered she was greeted by a man who gave her a bouquet of flowers with a chit in it…before she could ask anything else..the man went away….
Sumo opened the chit and read it…there was written
U r more beautiful than tthese flowers but kya karun….I roamed here and there to find something more beautiful than u but couldn’t… So here accept these flowers…and yes now stop smiling and move ahead
Sumo realised that she was smiling and was shocked to c that how this guys knows that she would smile seeing this…
But she moved ahead… Then a small boy came and gave her a chit and a teddy bear and ran away….
Sumo read the chit…it was written
U r more cute than this teddy bUT this teddy is just a symbol to show u ur height of cuteness….now don’t fly too high and come on the top floor….don’t take too long m waiting…???
She was so touched with the way he is expressing his love and was so desperate to see who the person was that she ran upstairs with pari smiling and following her…
Sumo went upstairs and she was left dumbstruck to c the place….it was all decorated with red roses and balloons….she had tears in her eyes just then she saw a heart on the floor and near it was a board on which it was written
Stand inside it….its my heart and u live here…
Just as she stepped inside the heart roses started falling on her…she was so happy that she started dancing she had never experienced all this before…
Then a voice came…
DIL KI HASRAT ZUBAAN PE AANE LAGI..
TUNE DEKHA TOH ZINDAGI MUSKURANE LAGI…
YEH ISHQ KI INTEHAA HAI YA DEEWANGI MERI….ki
HAR SOORAT MEIN SOORAT TERI NAZAR AANE LAGI❤❤❤❤

Saying this shravan came out from behind a curtain and bent on his knees and said
Mujhe nhi pta sumo ke yeh kab hua…kaise hua…tumse hi kyu hua…bas main itna jaanta hun ki main tumse bahut bahut pyaar karta hun….main ab tumhare bina jeene ke baare mein soch bhi nhi sakta…tum meri dil ki dhakkan mein basi ho….agar tum nhi toh main bhi nhi…
If I get ur smile I don’t need flowers..
If I get ur voice I don’t need music…
If u speak to me I don’t need anybody…
And if u r my love I don’t need the world

SO MISS SUMAN TIWARI…WILL U BE MINE??

Sumo had tears in her eyes and she was about to say yes…when her mind went through the flashbacks of Shravan teasing her…making her fun..his flirty nature..his kidnapping plan..
She stepped back..and said
Sumo: what the hell is this…I..I..don’t love u and neither u do.. U just want me for fun…no …I m going and I don’t love u at all???
Saying this she ran away….
Here Shravan was shattered pari came to him
Pari: she loves u I can c it in her eyes..
Shravan: I know the thing that hurts me is that how could I be so cruel naa jaane Maine aise hi kitni ladkiyon ka dil dukhaya hoga…but ab nhi…main jaanta hun sumo mujhse pyaar karti hai…and main bhi…..main uske bina nhi reh sakta pari…..I just can’t live without her…????
Saying this he also left…

Here the weather turned stromy and it started raining badly..sumo was crying and walking on the road like lifeless body just then she got a call it was pari…she cut it…but again pari called this time she picked up…
Pari: Shravan ka accident ho gya hai sumo…plz jaldi se city hospital aa jaa…
Sumo: kya??…main abhi aa rhi hun??
She reached the hospital the hospital and saw Shravan lying his head was bleeding badly and his leg was also hurt….she went straight to him and slapped him tight..
Shravan: yr ek toh mujhe chot lagi hai upar se maar kyu rhi ho??
Sumo: dekh ke nhi chal sakte…sadak pe chalna nhi aata kya?? Aise kaise tumhara accident ho sakta hai…dekh kar chalna chahiye tha na…
Shravan: tumhe kya hai…tumko kaunsa farak padta hai
Sumo: farak padta hai…kyu nhi padta…
Shravan: acha…kyu padta hai..
Sumo: kyunki main tumse bahut pyaar karti hun…suna tumne I love u damn it???…
Shravan: shhh shh chup hona sumo…main theek hun mujhe Kuch nhi hua..saying this he cups sumo’s face..
Here sumo realised what she said and again stepped back….
Shravan: ab tum kyu bhaag rhi ho..
Sumo: dekho Shravan Maine bol toh diya hai but mujhe Kuch tym chahiye..
Shravan: sumo tumko Jitna tym lena hai le lo but mujhe chod kar mat jao plz…main tumhare bina nhi jee paunga..??
Sumo: hmm ab tum apni Patti karao aur ghar jao..main bhi jaa rhi hun…??
Saying this she left for her home…
She was sitting on her bed when pari entered her room
Pari: yr tu Shravan se pyaar karti hai voh tujhse pyaar karta hai…toh prob kya hai
Sumo: yr dil keh rha hai ki usspe trust karun but Jo bhi usne abhi tak kiya hai dimaag usse trust nhi kar paa rha…??
Pari: theek hai toh mere pass ek idea hai…tu usse iss naye sim se phone kar and koi aur ladki ban ke uss se flirt kar..agar usne tujhe bhaao diya toh voh tujhse pyaar nhi karta aur agar nhi diya toh …tu khud soch le…
Sumo: kya yeh sahi hai…??
Pari: dekh le …Teri marzi
Sumo: pyaar mein kya sahi kya galat..yahi karti hun..
Pari: haha theek hai chal ab phone kar…and han awaaz change karke baat karna nhi toh pehchaan jaayega..
Sumo: han theek hai meri maa…
Sumo calls him…
Sumo: hey handsome
Shravan: ji kaun??
Sumo: naam mein kya rakha hai…baat toh yeh hai ki main ladki hun aur aap ladka…aur main aapse flirt kar rhi hun aur aap naam puch rhe hai…
Shravan: ji aap hain kaun?? Aur aisi baatein karte aapko sharam nhi aati?
Sumo: oh toh ab university ke stud ko inn baaton se sharam aati hai…
Shravan: voh past hai…ab main aisa nhi rha…mujhe ab apna sacha pyaar mil gya hai…and mujhe ab baaki saari ladkiyon mein apni behen dikhti hai…and agar aapko meri behen banane mein interest hai toh theek hai nhi toh dobara Phone mat karna…
Shravan cuts the call angrily and goes to his bed…
Shravan: ek toh sumo abhi tak nhi maani aur upar se yeh pagal ladkiyan pareshaan kar rhi hai??
Just then the bell rings…
Shravan: iss tym kaun hoga aur voh bhi itni baarish mein…
Shravan opens the door and before he could say anything the person outside hugs him tightly…
Shravan: sumo…??
Yes she was sumo..
Flashback starts
Just when shravan cuts the call…sumo throw the phone and runs in the rain that too bare feet to shravan’s home….here pari was smiling
Pari: chalo ab ho gyi Puri inki prem kahani..??
Sumo ran through the roads and reach shravan’s house and then hugs him…
Flashback ends…

Shravan: sumo tum yahan…iss waqt voh bhi aise…sab theek toh hai na??
Sumo: sshh kuch mat bolo shravan mujhse galti ho gyi Jo Maine tumpe trust nhi kiya ..m sorry ….m sorry… I love u shravan I love plz never leave me…???
Shravan: I love u too sumo….
Saying this they hug each other tightly and thus ends their eternal love story…

So guys done with it …plz do tell me howzz it….bahut mehnat ki hai…and yes silent readers plz do comment…
Love u all❤❤

54 comments

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Hey vini….it was three shots only so I had to end it…..m so glad u liked it dear…now I will continue with my gf and come back soon with a new short story

  1. Anamika

    Awww….. so expressive yr
    I could actually see all this in front of eyes super duper…
    Come back soon with a new short story khushi
    Loved it….??

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Thank u so much anamika…..I m glad u liked it ……and I will surely come back with a new short story….love u dear

  2. LovelyLady

    |Registered Member

    yaar tumhari mhnt dikh rhi h…… it was damn good yaar…..
    the proposal was well defnd….. the idea of chkng shravans new prsnlity was vry nyc……
    and last of the epi was out of the wrld….. i m vrt mch impressed by u…. really…

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Thank u so much lovely di….I am so glad that I am able to impress u??
      And yes now I feel that meri mehnat rang laayi….love u di
      ?

  3. sona

    Khushi..yaar..shravan ki propose kartey waqt..Jo shayari sunaaye..oh..kya tu ney khud liki..☺☺
    I’m glad…its soon…superb…
    Really..it was the best part..☺??☺

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Thank u so so much do……no di voh shayari Maine nhi likhi….I got it from net bas thoda modify kiya….aapko achi lagi??

  4. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    kya shayri thi yaar khush! tune khud likhi?? n all d proposal part damn bht awesome tha… n d mai tmhare bina nai jee skta heavy dialogues … dikh ra h tune romance k mamle me kitni mehnt kri h… long live khush! love you.. ??????

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Haha thank u sumo di….yes di even I think thoda Zayada filmy ho gaya….??
      Nhi di voh shayari Maine nhi likhi…main shayari likhti Hun but funny ones yeh romantic shayari nhi likhi jaati….I got that from net and just modified it a little
      Did u liked it???

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Thanks a lot shiny…..dear it was three shots only so had to end it…..I m so glad u liked it. ….I will now post the next part of my ff hope u will read it and like it
      Love u alot???

  5. sss

    yar it’s amazing the proposal part even i also ride in imagination world with you and the world was awesome the way you describe it than jhatka answer no but phervi shambhal Liya in the end it shraman as i know it.. superb ending liked it…btw how are you? sickness gone??

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Thanks alot SSS…….I am so obliged reading ur comment….love u yr???
      And m good now…..not perfect but still feeling good…thanks a lot

  6. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    it was so beautiful…. loved it..!! how can you write so nicely..? in love with you!! thank you so much for giving this n yea the proposal part was amazing.. please please please do write more! this was so damn simple n beautiful.. loved it 🙂

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Awwww thank u so much Niki and u also write so nicely…..thanks alot….I will try to come up with a new OS soon…thanks alot love u??

  7. Fatarajo

    |Registered Member

    Loved Shraman’s love confession aww it’s so cute keep it up khushi I read it in morning but was busy for my test that’s why couldn’t comment luckily it ended today

  8. Perry

    It was awwwwesome yr !!!!! ??? … Nd what a classy proposal ???? ….. u nailed it yr ???? …. it was fabulous, awwwwesome, fantastic, super duperb ….. too gud yr ???????

  9. angel_pari

    yeyyyy khushi is back with dhamakedar welcme back ji ;)epi kya epi tha yar confession wala part was superb amazing fantastic and that poetry was soooo beautifull

    ohhhhh i,m happy with sharvu,s hug on cloud nine 😀 i totatly love my character thanks for this

    but how r u feeling now feeling better???

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Awwww thanks pari di…..and yes I knew that u will like that hug…..after all its shravan’s hug??
      And m better now though I have fever on and off but it’s all OK till u all are here with ur wishes….love u di???

    • Khushi

      |Author

      thanks alot ws …..hey i have replied to ur comment in the previous part of i am yours post…plz do go and see it dear…love u loads

  10. Piyu

    Its awesome Khushi…happy ending is always bst…u r a fablous writer…i like it…nd a request…plz post ur nxt ff asap…

    • Khushi

      |Author

      ohh thanks alot yr piyu…..m blushing yr…i m so glad that u liked it…and yes i will try to post the next part asap…love u piyu

  11. roshni

    wow……………..I am speechless………..the way u portray what to tell khushi……….n yeah that shayari………kamal hain yaar tune khud lika hain kya??????? yaar tu toh badi shayari likti hain……..mein toh fida hu tere shayari pe aur tere ff pe……..aur kaise taarif karu……..there proposal n hospital scene super sai bhi upper tha yaar………..good job…………

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Thank u so much roshini……ur a sweet heart…..and plz yr meri itni bhi tareef mat karo….kahin main udne na lag jaun??
      And voh shayari Maine nhi likhi…I write shayari but mostly funny ones…can’t write romantic ones…..so got it from net and modified it a little…. I m so glad that u liked it….
      Love u dear ???

      • roshni

        oh…….taarif toh mujhe karna hi hain yaar……coz ur work is like that……………koi baat nahi agar who shayari tune nahi likha toh………..rest were also nice………..ty for telling me as a sweet ……..tu bhi kuch kam nahi………ur sweetest………ha ha………well a request if possible read raglak love for each other I ended that for 25 epi…….so if possible read that………..n currently I am writing raglak infinite love so if possible hee hee read that too……..sry……….

      • Khushi

        |Author

        Ohhh yr now toh m jumping with happiness and I read ur new ff infinite love and commented there also plz do check it dear…love u ??

  12. maria

    Khushi khushi! khushi!! Yr m sooo sooo sorry fr late cmmnting dear kuch prob ho gai thi…… well lets come to d ep: i have no words to describe dat how much i loves d ep….. Yr u nailed it seriously !! 😀 u r d most amzing writer!!! Fab the confession prt was soooo lovly! ❤❤
    Love u dear!!

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Haha…thank God u r here yr…I was waiting for u …..good to c u …I hope that problem is solved Maria???
      And no need to day sorry……I understand yr…after all friendship is all about understanding right???
      Thanks alot of liking it dear…..u always make me so happy with it comment…love u dear??

  13. Naina

    Mind blowing, fabulous, awesome, wonderful, outstanding, ………aur words uad nahi a rahy but the epi was soooooooooo good that i was smiling all the time and yes the propose scene was just wow i wish mujhy b koi aise hi propose kary…….. And khusi u r really great ur dialogues, ur story, ur imagination everything was just epic…….?????????????

    • Khushi

      |Author

      Thank u so so much naina….and don’t worry tumhara bhi prince charming tumko iss se bhi ache se propose karega….??
      Love u yr….u made my day with ur comment thank u so much??

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