Dushman bane lovers (Epi 4)

Hello guys ..this is nithu..im soo happy for ua support guys…n guys pls tell me if you get bored by my ff cause guys u no its soo difficult to decide who can posses that charecter …n guys im adding few of my ideas…here…pls do tell me if have any prob or get bored with my ff soo that i can think abt the change in story

Soo guys i strt my ff..
Evry1 sots in their cars keeping all their luggage n strts to their village MAHI(guys i took this place to write my ff but nt to humilate guys…)
Meanwhile in village
Mahi village..
There is a dhaba which is owned by a punjabi
person
Customer:sardaar ji i want a plate idly and a plate dosa…fast
Attender:okay ji…

Now we will see a person who is sitting on a table who was sitting der frm 1 to 2 hrs..
He is ver short in height…he wears ajib dresses…
He is raadhey
Ra:ooo..atten i orderd u b4 an hr wat happned to my order
Att:malik told nt to give you any food until u pay the due…
Ra:sardaarji ill pay ua due bt pls give something which is very hot to eat..
Sardaarji:we have peices of coal…which are very hot shall i give them(he looks at raadhey very angrily)
Ra:bring them att bhai ill have them
Cus:bhayya will u really eat them
Ra:i can evn digest fire balls…bhai..

Attender brings hot coal ina tray…evry1 looks at raadhey with questn marks on thheir faces…then he takes out a maize..and burn it..on coal..
Evry1 looks at him …wierdly..
A person pays his bill have a hole on one his notes..
Sa:give me antr note
Ra:u can give us vada with hole bt he cant give a note wid hole ..ji…
Jus then a grp of cars cm to village..
Ra:arey yuvi ….sardar ji ill pay ua due with in a jiffy..my yuvi came…
There we also see a big house which is named as SOWMYA PALACE…
It really looks like a palace… somu dadaji call his servant to make his car ready….as he need to go for temple jus den somu comes out of her house and sees yuvi…and says her dadaji dat he is cute…(she loves krishna by that tym) his grandfather thinks to marry somu with yuvi…

Guys i no that today ff is shrt n we dnt have yuvani scenes at all bt frm nxt epi ill b sure that we have yuvani…for sure

14 comments

  1. ci

    Sorry to say i dont get ur ff.kahani bhool gaya.plz write precap.if my words u i am sorry.i know how it pains.sorry.

  2. radha

    nithu ni ff chala bagundi.kani nuvvu exact movie la kakunda konchem improvise cheste inka superga untundi.sorry nenu ninnu idi cheppi hurt chesunte.

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