“”A DREAM””:::SWASAN SS by Kakali part 14

Hii ev1,, here m with d 14th part..
Thnk u all for ur amazing response on previous parts.. thnk u to all silent readers also..once again sorry for grammatical mistakes n spelling errors.. :0 😀

So Let’s go inside d DREAM,,,

Link of previous chappies :::All Parts Here

Link of d teaser ::Here

Link of my 1st OS ::Here

Recap-Sanskar’s jealousy…

Here we gooo,,,,,,

Swara continuous to pouring her anger… “Soo what hahh !! Now what’s bothering u? What u want? Answer me damn it !!” (Jerk his hands)..

“U said me to stay away from u,, i did…!!!
U broke our precious friendship in a few seconds just bcz of some baseless talks !!! ,, rit? Then also i accepted without saying anything… !!!
U said not to talk with u in front of people,,, n as u said i just did like a puppet…. Now what !!! ? (With angry blood shoot eyes)
Anything left out ? Or u want me to do sometimes else ¿ (push him with full force)

Sanskar is just starting her with blank expression … he has seriously no words to reply her questions!!!!

“Sanskar it hurts(points to her heart),, it really hurts here … it’s feel like u did friendship with me for some reason n when ur work is done u just throw me out of ur life… !!! U used me Sanskar,, u just used me … says crying bitterly…

Sanskar cups her face “No Shona listen to ,,it’s nothing like that !!”

She again jerks his hand “No Sanskar let me complete,, u know what everything is just d way u want,, but u never think about me.. about my emotions…

“Did u ever thought how it feels ?
Did u ever thought how badly it hurts me?
Did u ever thought when u said those words to me?”

“NO U DIDN’T !!! U DIDN’T SANSKAR…. COZ U CAN NEVER FEEL MY PAIN…. NEVER !!! ”

“Now when m trying to compose myself u r again showing right on me !!!
But in which base? As a friend ¿
BUT M NONE TO U NAA !!!
Remember u urself said !!! ” says in painful voice….

“SWARA IS NONE TO ME” his words echoed in ears…

“Soo don’t try to act !! It’s enough now !!!m tried of all this !! …. u should never worry whether I M LIVE OR DIIII…..”

But Swara couldn’t complete her sentence when Sanskar tightly pins her to wall,, pressing his body to her n seal his lips with her for a hungry kiss !!!!

Swara stands froze at her place… but our Sanskar is busy in his own world kissing her lips with full passion pulling her more to him…

Swara is neither reciprocating nor reacting anything… she is unable to think what’s happening with her…

“I HAVE RIGHT SWARA, I HAVE” says between kiss n again capture her lips showing all d emotions Jealously,frustration anger,sad, which is flowing in his soul since many days…

[*it’s kinda tsunami of jealousy,,land sliding of frustration,,jwalamukhi(volcano)of Anger,, earthquake of sadness,, hurricane of his own confuse feelings that he has fir Swara…. actually his Swara….]

He bites her upper lip n sucks at d same time …..

“Ahhh!! Sansskkarr !!!! “Swara mourns in pain….

(*Guyssss don’t laugh after reading d kiss scene… haah i m 1st time writing this kind of scene…)

“Sanskar !!! Sanskar !!! Where r u man?
Kaha kho gaya” Nick shakes his shoulder finding Sanskar in deep thoughts…

“Haah haaa !!” Sanskar jerks his head n looks around …..

He is breathing heavily n comes to sense.. he is scared a bit.. (monologue-Ohh God !! What was that?
What i was doing? Kissing that too Swara!! Goshhh !!
Thnk God it was just “A DREAM”…
i almost died with her words !! It was stabbing my heart… i dun know why m feeling like something is wrong !! But what? Is Swara really feels all that ?
What if it’s true n she (again looks at Swara who is laughing with Swayam…) .shook his head in noooo.. don’t think all this Sanskar… it will never happen… she is ur Shona.. she can understand better than u…. ”

(*guyzz Sanskar was thinking all that or u can say day dreaming,,, u all know na our princess Shona can never use those words for her Dream boy for her love… it’s out of her coverage :p :0 )

His gaze again follows Swara where she is standing with SwaLakmin…. n her dress is also okk now..i mean her frock’s zip is close now…(*may b Simmu informed her..lemme ask her !!! )

Meantime Nia comes to him ” Sanky! Let’s go to them,,n drages him to SwaSwaLakMin….

Nia-Hii guyzz!! Can we join u all?

Simin-Hey Nia n Sanskar come join us na… !!

Swara slowly looks at Sanskar who is starting her from long…(*heehh his eyes !! Phewww dun know how Swara is managing him,,, )

Swara-Guyzz u carry on i’ll be back…

Swayam-Now where r going? Wait i’ll also come…

Swara-No Swayam m here only…it’s just i need to make a call…

Sanskar glares Swayam like eating him alive… (monologue-why whyy whyyy is he behaving like rubber band … i wish i could beat him with Stove…) frowns at his thought…

Swara is about to go but her phone rings …. n seeing d caller ID a big smile comes to her beautiful,cute face….

Seeing her smiling after so many days that too brightly Sanskar’s heart skips a bit n small smile also comes to his lips..

Swara-Guyzz guyzz guyzzzzz(in utter happiness) call !! Calll….!!

Lucky-Haaa!! So what pick up naa !! For whom u r waiting !!! ??

Swara glares him n shows him d ID….

After noticing d ID Lucky’s cheeks automatically turned cheery red n he taking few steps back n hide behind Simin….

Swara Swayam Sanskar Simin Nia all brust out into laugher seeing Lucky in Shy avtarrrrr !!!….

He takes Simin’s dupatta’s edge in mouth n starts to chewwwww !!!!

Swara somehow stops her laugh n pick d call…

Swara- Heelooo!! Haaa Beeeee !!(*d call was from Mica… Lucky’s 1st ever school crush…)

She put d phone in Speaker !!!!

Swara-Haaa Bee bolooooo !!!

Bee-Waaaa!! Shona how r u ?? What r u doing?u All r in freshers party na ?

Swara-Yooo Bee we all r here !! Together… n we all r good… tell me how r u?

Bee-M flying !!

Swara-Matlab?(u mean)

Bee-I mean watching FLYING JETT…

Swara-ohhhh !!! Mad girl….

Bee-BDW where is my Lucky?? Is he also with u?

Swara-ohhh haaa !! He is here.. infect with us… but ….

Lucky(still chewing Simin’s dupatta) peeps from behind n looks at Swara blushingly..

Swara-Beee ur Lucky is soo shy yaar…. !!he is hiding…

Bee-R we twin Lucky?(*Mica’s all time fav dialogue)

Swara-yoo yooo u both r Same….

Lucky comes near Sanskar n starts to poke his finger in Sanskar’s arm….Lucky’s this action shows how shy he is feeling…

Lucky-Beeeee !!!(says slowly)

Bee-Luckyyyyyyy !!! How r u? I miss u….

Lucky is about to faint hearing his name from his(Bee’s) Mica’s mouth….. his heart is doing “DHINNA DHIN DHAA!! DHINNA DHIN DHAA!!!!”

He couldn’t take it anymore n runs from there … this time chewing his nail…..

All laughs loud….

Swara-Bappreee !!! Beeee Lucky is gone… he is bushing yarrr !!! What magic u do on him that hearing ur name ,,,his flirty nature turnes into a girl one….. Godddd !!! U both r just yumpossiableee !!!

Bee-Shona !!! Don’t make me blush more…. Lucky is Lucky only…. n i like him as he is… soooo stop making fun of him…(says in flow).

Swara-wooohhooo!!! Someone is blushing…. saying this she giggles
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Bee-okk okkkk!! Now tell me where is ur Sanskuuuu? How is he?
Waaa Shona u know ,, what i was almost screaming when u said Sanskar is ur friend now… i mean u both did friendship….
M still unable to accept Sanskar is actually ur friend ….

Swara’s bright smile fades away n it is definitely noticed by Sanskar….

Bee- Shona r u there? Shona!!

Swara-Haa .. haa .. bee m here ….(fumbles) Bee Sanskar is my friend now !! He actually mean it dear !!! (Says in a very painful voice)

Bee-Waaaa Shona !!! Gimme Choco …. it’s kinda epic…

Swara-Huhhh !!! U,ur Princess Ambeer n chocoooo !!! U trio r just yumpossiableee !!! (Smiles a little)

Bee-Huhhh !!! R we twins …. ?? Says n cuts d call…

Swara- This girl naaa !!! Totall mad ….Shook her head…. don’t know who will handle whom?

(*Lucky to handle Mica or Mica to handle Lucky !!!! It’s destruction…. phuuuu)

Lucky again comes taking baby steps…. Shonaaaa !!!

Swara-Luckyyyy !! Bass karr !! Ur cheeks r heating now… don’t know how Bee is gonna manage u…. (* imagine Little Shy Lucky with ghunghat/vail)

Lucky-huhhhh !!!

Swara laughs n Sanskar stares her lovingly….

(All enjoyed d party except our SWASAN …. where Swara feels continuous gaze of Sanskar … n Sanskar become jobeless… huhhh only Staring HIS SHONA….nothing left… (*buddhu prasad….)

At d end of party :::::

Lucky-Shona i need to gooo !!! Mom Dad is coming… says in a hurry…

(To Simin) Chall Simin i’ll drop u… (*Actually Simin’s house is on d same way to Lucky’s house)

(*note-Nia already left d venue…)

Simin-owkkk !!! Chalooo…

Swayam-ooo hello hello guyzz !! We will go… but what about Shona… ? I mean how will she go?

Swara-Array!! Swayam dun worry i’ll manage.. u go with them… aunty uncle must b waiting…

Swayam-Arrey aise kaise…. 1st i’ll drop u then …… (Sanskar cuts him)

Sanskar- U don’t need to worry about her…. M WITH HER…. i’ll drop … u go …. says with a frown n frustrated voice….

Swara looks with amazed……

Swayam-Haah!! Are u sure? I mean…. !!!!

Sanskar-I said naa !!

Swayam-Okkk !! Shonaa go with Sanskar … n yeah call me as soon as u reach home…. !!!

Sanskar tightens his fist closing his eyes n take a deep breath … “SOO BYEE SwaLakmin”….

SwaLakmin-Byeee ….

Swayam-Byeee Shona… don’t forget to call me… otherwise u better know….!!!!

Swara-huhh okk okkkkk as u say… !! N makes faces…

Swayam-That’s like my girl….

“MY GIRL” stabes his ear with d words….(*goddd !! Look at his red angry nose… wanna twist it hard)

“R u both done… n Swayam why r u behaving like likeee (Stammers )….. ”

“Likee whatttt “says Swayam with a smirk…..

Simin-ommmggg u all r done or i should go alone…. dhuiiii !!!

(Trio left n now let’s go to our SWASAN)

Swara turns around to go… but stops hearing Sanskar’s words….
“Sit in car,, we need to move ..it’s quite late”….

Swara-Sanskar now they r not here… !! U can go.. i will go by myself… !!! It’s about only half n hour…

His anger reach his prak n says in a veryy veryy dangerous tone “I SAID SIT IN CAR,, I DON’T NEED ANY ARGUMENTS HERE… !!! soo it’s better to shut ur mouth n …….. before he completes Swara moves to car n sit silently…

Sanskar is again shocked with her act ….. but says nothing n drove to her home… all d journey Swara is quite … doesn’t even say a single word…

Sanskar-Swaraaaa !!! Calls her slowly…

Swara comes to sense “Haa !!Sanskar !!!”

Sanskar word is really effecting him too much as she always call him Sanskuuu… but now a days everything is changed naa…though he composes n asks,,,,,

“Swara r u angry with me??”

At first Swara was astonished but smiles(fake smile)”No Sanskar !! Why would i be angry? ”

“Wooo “(Swara cuts him)

” That was a past Sanskar..i have forgot all that.. i m really not angry with u… so stop thinking about….”

“But Swara”!!!!!…

“Sanskar stop ” ….

Sanskar stops d car n says “What happen ?”

Swara-WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO ME… !!! NOTHING…. it’s just i reached home…

She bids a bye n moved towards her home… (*she is staying at her home today as college authority gave permission to all who r staying in hostel)…

Sanskar-Byee !!!…

Episode ends on Swara’s teary eyes which is she hiding from him through d journey n blank face of Sanskar….

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Precap-“THUD” – a burning sensation on Swara’s cheeks …..

Sanskar-NOW I HATE U SWARA. …. I FEEL DISGUS WITH U….

Swara-THNK U SANSKAR FOR UNDERSTANDING ME SO WELL….

Done with part… hope u all like it a little….i was blank while writing as my tests is going on n exam fever is burning me… *108’…
sooo couldn’t concentrate it completely…. don’t know what i have written….

“NO PROOF READ”….

Thnk u sooo much for reading…
God bless u all.. <3 <3..

73 comments

    • Maha016

      |Registered Member

      diiii…..!!!!! wanna beat u with pimpom ball but u said na u have exams so thats y i m leaving u i wanna pull lucky’s cheeks….he is soo cute while blushing and di really i was just….shocked after reading the kissing scene….sanky was just dreaming….urghhhhhh sanky na sach me pagal…..di soon make swasan together warna….hmmmm i ll tell u later….di overall the chappy was awesomeeeeeeeee out of the world and all the best for u xams di…take care…..love u….

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Mahaaa !! dun beat me dear !! huhh !! i’ll also accompany u to pull Lucky’s cheek..
        SWASAN will b together of Destiny wants…*hope so… i have no about them…
        Thnk u soooo much dear… Love u toooooo…

  1. Hemanshi

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    kakkkkuuuuu………..so high fever…….plus tests………take careeee *kissing heart*
    awesome episode………bit emotional also……i cried while reading swara’s hidden pain…….
    you are he best writer i know……..
    lovee uuuuuuuu *kissing hearts*
    get well soon……..muahhhh

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooooo much Diiii,,,,,
      yooo i m burning with exam high fever…😉..
      sorry for make u cry Diii… 😢.
      waaa best writer… huhhh dun tease me…😡..
      okk okkk love u tooooo… 😀😀

  2. Chanu

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    Kakuuuuuu……..
    Dis epi ws awesome!! Lv it 2 da core…
    First thing… he hee..
    I ddnt laugh when they kissed.. bt after u say 2 us nt 2 laugh.. I ws laughing rolling in my bed..
    im angry!!! Its jst a dream!! *frown
    hhuhhuhuh….
    bt I lv it.. 😉
    Hee hee.. u describe all is emotions soo well.. after rading abt is confuse soul… my heart also faced 2 a tsunami.. huhuh..
    In da party!! When da calls cm I thought its mica nly..
    lols..
    lakys reaction is soo sweet.. I want 2 pinch hi cheeks. Soo cute.. 😉 rly dnt knw who ll hndl whom!!?? 😉 soo nice dr.. dat ws epic part!!
    Sankys gaze!! Hayeeee.. *paralysed
    Rly dnt knw hw swara hndl him.. 😉 lols..
    angry , jealous , frustrated sanky looks soo cute.. :-* :-* lv him..

    da preacp sceard me!! *hiding
    dnt do dat!! Bt wt 2 do I knw u gonna do it.. ok ill prepare my self 4 it.. 😉 😉

    U hv exams na.. 😮 😮
    study well dr..
    Heee hee 108 exam fever!! Lols..
    we all r suffering 4m it.. soo no probs.. 😉 😉
    2dy ff pic is soo nice.. I lv it.. :-*
    Keep writing
    be happy always
    lv ya
    all the best 4 ur exam!!!
    ♥♥♥♥♥♥

    • chandu

      chanuuuu…….u created account??!!!!!!!!!!!!! Woohh/………..!!!! Congo dude…!! We got some other medium to talk other than comment section…!!! 😀

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanuuuuuuuuuu !!! Thnk u soooo much dear !!!! ;-*
      huhhh !! u knew it u all will laugh after reading my kiss part… coz i have no idea how to write !!! phewww but u didn’t laugh haaa i was so happy reading that but then u said u urghhhhh …. Chanuuu bamg ur head with stove…*eating choco to cool down my mind…

      waaa !! u r soo smart … ☺
      wait wait i’ll also accompany u to pinch Lucky’s cheeks… *run to SL
      hehhh m already lying on ICU bed for Sanskar’s gaze… phuuu!!!
      puut puutt putttt m also scared thinking about precap…
      huuuu u r also suffering like me… then gimme HiFi*by leg…
      yooo that pic is my Laptop’s wallpaper… my 3rd fav pic of my SWASAN… ¤☆¤
      once again thnk u soooo much dear for ur wish..!!! love u tooo…
      u2 take care…
      Byeee !!! ♡♡ ;-*

      • Chanu

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        Huhuhuh….
        kaku dr…
        Rly I ddnt laugh 2 dat kissing part.. bt bby ur talks nly I laughed.
        Lols..
        Wt!! 😮
        stove!!?? Poor me…
        is it ok if I bang my head with my pillow or my teddy!! 😉
        Hawwwww… y r u eating choco nw!! ?? Shere it with me.. u said dat u r my sis??!!! So gv me.. ahhhh!!

        Hee hee yaaa I’m smart bz kaku told me dat shes eating almonds. Soo nw I also start 2 eat them.. 😉 😉

        Im still waiting 4 u. Bt u ddnt cm till na.. 2 sl.. 😉 😉 kaku.. cm 4m ur rocket. Or else ill bcm old. 😉 😉

        Ok hifi * bt 4m leg 😮
        ok!! Unique hifi..lols

        oh rly..soo plz in nxt parts.. plz gv ur other fav pics f my swasan.. k!!

        Byee
        :-* :-* :-*

      • Chanu

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        Hifi chandu**
        🙂 🙂 🙂
        Kaku hifi 2 u too.. bt dis tym 4m hand ok!!?

        Y shd I gv u choco kaku!!
        Ddnt u see my cmnt kaku!!??
        Im angry with u..
        Bz dat ws a dream..
        huhuh..
        soo u hv 2 gv me choco..
        nw gv me!!!
        🙂 🙂 😀

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Noooo Chocoooo today Chanuuuu !!! u always can’t whitemail me saying u r my sis…. it’s universal truth… n we all know… puuut puuuttt !!!
      Yooo yooo u can bang with ur pillow tooooo… *sis sis… ;-*

      • Chanu

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        Heeee heee
        whitemail!!!
        U knw wt kakù bz f u im learning nw wrds and nw wrks.. (hifi 4m legs) 😉 😉 😛

        hawwwww..
        noo choco!! 🙁 🙁
        Y??? Y??? Y???

        Yaaa yaaa we r sisos sis.. 😉 😉 😉 da nly universal truth!! 🙂

        Thank you..
        sooo nw im banging my head with pillow.
        😉

  3. Deeksha

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    Kakali….!!!!!! I swear I would kill you if you were in front of me…..!!!!!!! How could their first kiss be a dream….??????? How….?????? Hate u for tat…..!!!!!!!!!

    Anyway episode was awesome dear….!!!!!! Just loved it….!!!!!! Continue soon….!!!!!!

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Deekshuuuuu !!! wait m coming to ur home… then u can kill me… *ready with my punctured private rocket to take off !!!!
      huhhh !!! U just only hate me… har waqt… hayeeee !!! Kyu ??😢

      anyway Thnk u soooo much dear !!!glad u loved it… ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much Alku…
      haaa !!! gimme hifi by leg !!!
      huhuhu Dear plz inform me once befor u post anything… actually m not reading any new one … That’s why… !!! All d best to u toooo … TC… ;-*

  4. Nagamanasa

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    Awesome part di…omgggg it’s a DREAM…you gave a shock di…but loved it

    Awww kaku di that exam fever left me and it attacked u…take care di…All the best for ur exams di

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooooo much Manasa !!!!! m glad u loved it …. phuuu phuuu it was a dream only…

      Ohhooo That’s why my exam fever was tagged with Manasa !!! Goshhh !!! Thnk u dear for ur wishes… ;-*

  5. Radhika..

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    Di first of all what u do while writting i am just in love with ur writtings . hmmm i was shocked that how come swara say all this and the kiss when u say that its a dream i really laugh thinking of sanky my bro say what happen i just say nothing its just i was reading something which make me laugh and the way u describe the anger of swara and her pain is just amazing just loved it ……… U say u can’t describe it well and i think u do phd in it…….. Just amazing anger and pain scene u describe as it is happening in front of me……… And the way swara hide her tears from everyone her pain and mainly her emotions……. Some people have that ability because usually all the emotions of girls easily came up on their face . and mica phone and lucky new shade mica what u do to lucky yr. He is going crazy before u……. Hmmmm they both can care for each other and atlast make each other doings correct di.
    Swayam and sanskar what are going on in between them they both to don’t know about it. Sanskar please get to know ur feeling early still it becomes too late many people do this mistake only.. When time passes away they got to know about their mistake ….. An pachtavat hovat kaya jab chidiya chugh gai khet… That thing will happen…… And from swara talks of some days I. Am thinking that she is having some problem which she is hiding from everyone………loved the part atlast its amazing part di…..

    Mine condition is also same like h but the difference is ur brain still works very well and mine do all the things wrong my tests are also going in as exams are gonna start from next month theory exams than practical means full December and January is full of exams than feb urary full of tests and march agin exams but final exams with practical exams these 4months only study study and study
    ……..
    My brain also doing the same ……. Take care of brain di and all the best for he test..,
    Love the part…. Love u…..😃😃😘😘

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Radhikkaaa !!! u also laughed… !!! *heart broken…
      waaaaa thnk u soooo much dear !! actually now a days m seriously not at all happy with my own works n words… !!! sooo saying like this !!!
      yes some people has that ability too guve happiness to all n gulp all d sadness !!!
      my Swara is like that only… !!!
      Yooo me2 think Swara is hiding something… but i dun know what … may b lots of chocos… *hope so…
      huhuhuhuh !!!
      haaaa study, exams,tests,assignments,practical,projects r also eating me alive… but we dun have any other option… rit ?? sooo study hard Radhikaaa !!!
      Once again thnk u sooo much for ur live n cutee cuteee comments… Love u toooo… u2 take care okkkk….puuut puuut !!! otherwise *injection in my hand… ;-*

  6. Ashnoor

    Amazing
    Now blushing work passes to mica di after her’ s lucky 😛😜😜😍😍😊.
    Swara is so sweet yaar.
    Sanskar you go to hell.l.l.l.l.l.l.l.l ” stress the word hell ” .

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much Ashnoorrrr !!!
      haaaa !!! Mica n Blush ,,, Goshhhh !!! yoo my Shona is choco pera here soo sweet u know… puuut puuut … dun worry we will throw Sanskar at dustbin… ;D ….

  7. Navi

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    Omg hw come u write btwn ur xamz.. ur grt kakakli.. omg it ws sans dream.. u made me fool..im crying :'( 🙁 sad
    superb chapie…
    Rock d xamz kakali… dnt need to post btwn ur schedule..

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Naviiii !!! don’t tease me okkk !!!
      huhhh if i don’t write naaa then i’ll get “0” in tests … puuut puuut !!!
      waaa i made u full !!!*pull ur hair…!!!
      Again crying !!! Goshhh *ready with tanks to save salty water. !!! :P…
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!!
      n yooo i have to post Navii !! as i have a very less time… soooo… puut puuuut !!! ;-*

  8. Tharu

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    Awesome as always..but bit angry..how can their first kiss to be a dream..😞….lucky..he is so cute…I really enjoyed his behaviour….please make my swasan together soon…and really are you having 108 exam fever…please meet a doctor soon…😋…btw all the best dear for your exams…and take care of yourself…btw if you don’t mind that I call you kaku dear…

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much Tharuuu !!!
      waaa sorry to make u angry dear !!!
      dun worry dear SWASAN r always together …. now just little patience then everything will b all rit.. !!!
      Thnk u for ur wish dear n of course u can call me Kakuuuu !!! u don’t need to ask … call me with any name u want… afterall we r friend cum sister na… !!! ;-*

  9. Mahjabeen

    Huhh darls wat hpn?? hvng fever dat too so high nd urghhh dis test also..tk cr nicely kaku…
    Cmng to epi it ws amazing…ahhh loved it soo mch…my cutie swara suffering so mch alone…sanskar u dumbo CNT u understnd her feelings toward u nd even u r nt able to undesrstnd ur feelings too..huhhhh
    Well kaku u knw i WS desperated to rd ur ff ‘s nxt part but ws soo busy didnt got time u knw dis test nd all..tdy got sumtime to relax so rd ur previous parts too nd all dat part were awesome👌👌nd i missed to cmmnt..nw i don’t wnt to miss to cmmnt u coz aftr dis mnth u will nt b here in TU nd may b u WL return after a long time so i dnt wanna miss a chance to cmnnt u on ur lovely ff..
    well enough of my bak bak
    Chalo bye
    Tk cr😊😊
    Stay blessed
    Keep smiling always
    Love u😍😍😘😍😘😍

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Hiii,,, My Mahuuu !!! how is ur study going on dear !!! uff study hard okkk !!! Sanskar will understand her feeling when she will go away from him for forever*hope sooo !!!
      Noo dear 1st study then u can read..no need of taking stress !!! m still here… n u don’t need to comment okkk just read it n that’s enough for me…
      Love u tooo…
      God bless u dear..
      take care…
      Byeeee !!! ;-*

  10. chandu

    While reading starting..even I thought how swara let out her anger…!! But boom…!!! you made everything dream..!!! Uff..!!!Loved everything…specially luckybee…!! 😛 😀

    First take care of yourself buddy…!! You can start writing..when you become fine..!! Do’t take too much stress..!!Get well soon…!!

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooo much Chanduuuu !!! m glad u loved it … !!! puuut puuut !!
      waaaa now m fine dear !!! n m writing bcz i have a little time in my hand sooo need to complete it…
      Thnxx for ur concern dear !!! it means a lot to me.. !! ;-*

  11. Mica

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    huh! that why you missing nowadays..wrote a romance ?????? *beating with choco wafer stick
    but gooossssshhh..i can’t stop laughing to read your kiss scene..
    kakali and romance scene ?????? *pinch me please
    Simiiinnnn..your dupatta dear! how is that now ? goosshh this lucky..
    dammit..i can’t stop another laughing to imagine my lucky condition..you are soo bad Kaku!!
    uugghhh what i want just to pull his cheek..cute cute cute..

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Waaa i know … already seen their pics… looking like prince n princess…*made for EO…
        n dear now m much better.. !! Thnkx for ur concern n wish… !!! *jump from flyover…
        puuut puuut 😛

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Micaaaa don’t laugh okkk !!!* sobb !!!
      i was shaking while writing… i have seriously no idea how to write… puuuut puuuttt !!! that’s why i said not to laugh…
      yooo yooo i know m soo bad… *universal truth…
      Thnk u sooo much dear !! ;-*

  12. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    Thnk u thnk u thnk u kaku Di… For posting it today was waiting for it… Sorry today I’ll b commenting less muma is sitting next to me…. It was a wonderful chapter awesome as always…. Post next soon

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much my Cutieeee !!! 1st study then read FF n comment… okkk !! n no need of long one… ur one word is enough for me… !!! Take care dear !! ;-*

  13. Maryam

    Hey dude…How are you… How are your Studies Going….
    OMG the Episode was mind blowing…Bechara Sanskar..They dreamt of a Kiss..A kiss…Gosh…kitna bara Pagal hai kiss dreams mein nahen reality mein kartha hain…haven’t you taught him kakali…very Bad…send him to me I’ll teach him lol…Just kidding dude…I was shocked to see my Siso being so mature that she is writing kissing scene…Aww….But Good A Change is always needed…Lol….
    Dude I wanna tell you that I am leaving the site after Wednesday N that to Forever But haan I will try to visit it if possible only to read your ff so don’t be late dude…Don’t have much time…CIE+Exams both are on head….N I have lack of Time + Not that much preparation…..
    So plz come up with the next part soon If Possible…N I am so sorry For being Rude in the last Episode. I am really regretting thinking that what might you be thinking about me… May be a girl who Bully her friends I am sorry dude…I really didn’t mean to hurt you..Bye Dude time for Namaz(Prayer)…
    Take Care N Always Stay blessed….May Allah Grant you with every happiness N always protect you from Evil eyes..

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Heyyyy !!! My Lady Gabbar !!! m totally fine n my studies r also going on well…. now tell me about u? how r u?
      Bapreee !!! m gonna send Sanskar to u for learning hiw to kiss *giggle…

      Noo Maryam why Wednesday dear !!! wait for some day i’ll also complete my SS n we can together move… plzzz !!! i know u r busy but though… !!! huhhh !!! just bcz of u i have already post my next part okkk !!!

      waaa why u saying sorry dear !!!
      nope u don’t have rit to say sorry okkk !!!coz we r friends rit… yaa phir yee bhi bhul gayeee !!! I know !!! huhhh !!! u can say anything to me … anything… n i can never hurt with ur words infect they shows how precious n pure our friendship is !!! rit?
      God bless u dear !!! Byeee !!!
      Duwawon mai hamesha yaad rakhenge appko hum… !!!
      TC dear !!! ;-*

  14. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Omg yaar kakali take care of urself yaar!!!u r sufferng from so high fever!!dhyaan rakh yaar apna..
    Coming to d chappy!!it ws mindblownggg…hahhahahaha aww!!mera baccha laksh 😛 ..hmmm sanky’s kiss n dat too in dream…u justified ur title yaar 😉 plz unite dem yaaaar!!kb milaoge unhe sweetu ??? Well all in all fantastic update..keeeeeeep rockng n stay blesssed meri pyari patar patar..n jald jald thik ho jao smjhe…me n pikachu r prayng to god to get u well sooon 🙂 ..love u dr dheer sara …muaaahhh 😉

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Fairyyyyyy !!!! totally fine dear !!!
      Tumhara Lakshhhh phewwww *ready with pimpom ball…. !!!
      Haaa i’ll surely unite them dear !!!*hope so just a little patience …
      Yoooo my Pikachu gave me electric shock n u gave me blessing naa so now m fit n fine*running…
      Hahhh Love u tooooo dear !!! u2 stay blessed…. ;-*

  15. SNY

    |Registered Member

    Kaku sis take care of urself…!!!

    All the best for ur exams sis…..

    As usual awsm epi…

    And get well soon sis….

  16. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    It was a dream😳😳thank God*taking deep breath….
    Omg, sanky you are….*irritating face…
    Oh God,lucky and micaa😂😘😂😘😂😘…ROFL…
    Haww😱😱😱 you are not well, plz take care of your health dear otherwise exams will be not good….
    Take care
    Keep smiling😊

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Waaa Thnk u soooo much my Ummmaaa !!! now m fine dear !!! haaa !!! dun worry everything will b all rit dear!!!
      Huhhh puuuuut puuuut !!! ;-*

  17. Mirna

    |Registered Member

    Kaksssssssssss now i am ready with pim pom ball y yarrrrr it was dreammmmmmmmmm soon make it for real love u tc 🙂

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Mirna darlzzz u stole my pimoom ball,,,, gosh !!!
      yooo dear soon it will turn true *hope soo….
      Thnk u soooo much dear… love u toooo.;-*

  18. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    Haye….what a dream! what a dream! Kab sach hogi? Awesome ep.

    Kaku…tume kyun har insaan ki naak se itna pyaar hai? Jab dekho “pinch his nose” haha

    Oh god…laksh blushing…ROFL. Micu is his partner…hillarious. Mujhe precap se darr lag raha hai. Xm achchi likhna….baad mein pata dena kaisi likhi…love u

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Waaaa Vyshuuuu !!! sach hogi naaa *sapne mei…
      Haaaa i love pinching n pulling cheeks !!! my fav work… !!! hahahah…

      Mica n Lucky r One piece.. !!! puuut puuuuut !!!
      Sure dear i’ll surely tell u ….
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!!
      love u toooo….
      huaahh haa haaa happy be lated children’s day…
      sorry for late reply dear… actually having tests na.. soooo !!! ;-*

  19. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    Wat dat swasan kiss was a DREAM 😱😱😱
    I was exctd funally kakali is writng romantic scenes bt u broke all swasanias dream kakali 😠😠😠
    N lucky OMG i was laughing lik hell reading his part hiding blushing chewing dupatta n nails ROFL .. micu how u gonna manage ur girly lucky 😂😂😂😂
    Loved it kakali… n precap is scary

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Awwww !!! Arshaaaa seee i again broke ur trust !!! m feeling so bad dear,, sorry !!! it’s just i dun know how to write cute n romance scenes… sooo !!!
      hahhhh finally feeling good imagining u smiling…
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!! ;-*

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