“”A DREAM””:::SWASAN SS by Kakali part 13

Hii ev1,, here m with d 13th part..
Thnk u all for ur amazing response on previous parts.. thnk u to all silent readers also..sorry for grammatical mistakes n spelling errors.. :0 😀

So Let’s go inside d DREAM,,,

Link of previous chappies :::

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12

Link of d teaser ::
Click here

Link of my 1st OS ::
Click here

Here we gooo,,,,,,

Swara is aimlessly walking through d corridor.. she is remembering Sanskar’s words “Swara is none to me,, I don’t love her ,, I only like Nia “….
All those words r haunting her like hell…having no emotions neither she is able to cry nor scream…

But comes to sense for her continuous ringing of phone….she pics the call but doesn’t say anything….

Other side-Shona where r u yaaar? U went to bring Sanskar but u urself get disappeared !!! Come fast , we have class…

Swara-(blankly)Simin(not addressing as Simmu) i have some work ..soo going to room…says this she hangs up n makes d way to her room…

Simin-Shona,Shonaa r u okk !!! Ufff yeh ladki bhi naa,, didn’t even let me complete my talk…(shooking her head,but also feels something wrong with her tune)….

Lucky-Simin where is Shona?

Simin-She went to room(*remember she is staying in hostel)… i guess she has some important work…

Lucky-owwwwhh !!!Anyway let’s go to class..

Swayam-Yeahh…

In hostel ,, Swara’s room :::

Swara’s POV ::::

No Swara u can’t fall weak… u have to accept it… coz it’s ur life’s brutal reality… ur Dream Boy doesn’t love u… u r none to him… Noneeee !!!
Waise bhi it was my mistake,, i expect that he will love me back… (painful laugh)
How can u even think like that !!!

HOW COULD U,,,
DON’T FORGET U CAN NEVER LOVED BY ANYONE…. NEVER…

This was a one sided love,, this is a one sided love n this will be a one sided love….
Remember this words….

N now u have to do d most impossible task which is too be away from ur Love…

God how can i forgot,, be ready to see him with another girl whom he like….but m happy for u Sanskar… u r getting what u want.. what u deserve… n i’ll be d most happiest person to see u happy….. (smiles in pain)

U know what Sanskar u was becoming my habit… i was thinking that i achieve a place in ur heart… but thnk u for showing my place…. !!! (Caressing Sanskar’s photo)

N our those beautiful memory are enough to live my rest few days hopefully…(Determine herself)

Sooo from tomorrow try not to face Sanskar as much as u can…. n be away from him…(a lone tear is about to escapes from her eyes but she wipes it…)
..

POV ends::::

In all this process Swara is not showing any single drop of tears… it’s like her eyes n tears r tried n can’t flow anymore….

She goes to washroom n open the shower…. now her tears n water is flowing with eaual passion giving competition to each other….

She let go flow his all those painful words in shade of tears …

{¤BG TUNE PIYA OREY PIYA(SAD VERSION) plays¤}…(This one for u my Lady Gabbar[Maryam])

O Re Piya O….
In Faaslo Ka
Ye Faisla Kyun
Dil Ne Mere Kar Liya ,,,,,

(SHE REMEMBERS HOW HE APOLOGIZED HER,, HUG HER FOR D VERY 1ST TIME)

Khud Hi Na Jaane
Kaise Jeeyega ,,,
Hoke Ye Tumse Juda … aaaaa

(SHE REMEMBERS HOW HE SPEND TIME WITH HER,,IN CANTEEN, IN SHOPPING MALL ETC ETC..)

Main Waari Jaawan
Main Waari Jaawan
Saath Ho Ke Ho Ya Ve Kasoor Re

(SHE SMILINGLY REMEMBERS HOW HE PICKED HER IN HIS ARMS,, HOW SCARED HE WAS WHEN THAT ACCIDENT TOOK PLACE…)

Naadaan Se Dil Ki Har Khwahish Roothi Sapne Huye Hai Saare Choor ………………
Piya O Re Piya …
Piya Re Piya Re Piya
Piya O Re Piya
Piya Re Piya Re Piya…….

(FINALLY SHE REMEMBERS HOW HE SAID SHE HAS NO ANY RIGHT ON HIM,,, SHE IS NOW NONE TO HIM,,)

All d DREAMS she had is now totally shattered… there is nothing left …. n she has to live like this…
(*readers i really don’t know how to write painful scenes,,, sorry if it was not upto ur marks,, specially Cutieee !!! Sorry ha…)

After 5 days at college::::

Sanskar comes with Nia,, he is talking with her but his mind is not present.. something is really bothering him….he is only having thoughts of Swara…

Sanskar’s POV:::

Everything is happening in d way i want… everything is perfect… no gossips no rumours about us… everyone is as calm as before… n all this bcz of Swara !!!

She has stopped talking with me.. no phone calls,, no messages… even now a days i rarely see her face…Not even a single glance of her… she has made everything soo perfect…

She is maintaining distance as promised…
But in all this mess she herself change also…

She is not that same Swara who was bubbly,, chirpy,, cutee… who can bring smile in every face with her jokes n antics..

She is changed… changed a lott… She smiles but her curves don’t touches her ears…
It’s just a fake smile n i can sence it…
Her face has lost charm… it’s become pale with dark circles under eyes….

N i m observing her all this changes after 4 days… in all these days whenever we come face to face she just avoid me….

Yesss,, she is avoiding me… infect avoiding as i don’t exist…. don’t even say a HI,, HELLO… n it’s sooo irritating…

But d most irritating blunder is that Swayam who never leave my Shona alone even for a single second… anytime bas Shona Shona Shona…. i just hate him…
Chipku Rubber Band… (*pull his cheeks)

Urghhhh !!! Why all this effecting me… ? She is doing as i want? Then now what i want…
Mannnn !!! M going crazy with her… !!! (Frustrated at his own thoughts)

POV ends::::.

At Canteen:::(*guyz canteen is my fav 2nd fav place in clz soo using it more)…

LakminSwa(Laksh Simin Swayam) is taking meal … Meantime SanNia also come to them….

Lucky-Arrey Sanskar! !!After a long time yaar,,,.

Simin-Haa!! Nia come… take meal with us…

Nia to Sanskar- Let’s Join them.. it’s been many days sitting n talking with them…

(*yooo guyz after that incident all stopped spending time like before as they have to complete lot’s of assignments n projects …. they even didn’t get time to talk properly..
Sooo Swara’s weird behavior was not at all noticed by anyone… though Lakmin had doubt but thinking as it lack of time they ignored this topic,,,but there is someone who knows everything about SWASAN… )

Sanskar-yeah sure…

But our Sanskar’s motive is something else.. he came here to get a slight view of his Shona… but d main question in his mind is “Where is my Shona?”
(*buddhu prasad Address her as his Shona,,, but a confuse soul address her as none to him…)

He takes sigh of relief seeing Swayam with them… it means he is not with Shona… huffff !!!

Both takes seat….. Simin starts d conversation…

Simin-Waise u all must heard about freshers party…rit?

Swayam-Ohh haa !! Day after tomorrow!! Isn’t it?

Lucky-Yeah buddy !!! But thank God… theme is not like last year.. warna every year seniors convert it as couple party… where we have to take a partner with us…says mockingly….

Lakmin NiaSwa all r continuously blabbering… but our Sanskar is desperately waiting for Swara… n murmurs”Where is this Shona now?”

Finally his waiting is over now…he sees her coming towards them n his eyes sparkles with unknown happiness n a small smile appears on his lips…

Swara comes to them talking in phone”Haa Maasi Maa i’ll take my meal pucca!!! Now m in Canteen itself.. soo … haa haa !!! Okkk bye!!”

Saying this she hangs up d call…n about to sit but sees SanNia n again stands up…
There is small painfull eyelock between our SWASAN which is broken by Swayam…

Swayam-Shona where r u yaar? We were waiting for u… anyway tell me what will u eat?

Swara-Swayam m not hungry now!! Actually I have some work… will catch u all later… (avoiding eye contact)..

She turnes to go but Swayam holds her wrist … “Shona u didn’t even take break fast n now u r not hungry !!! R u kidding.. ?? Come sit n have something… m not going to listen anything…” says in a dominating voice…

Swara-Arrey no Swayam… nothing like that…

Swayam-What i said?? Just sit ….

Swara having no options sits with them…

(*Hahhh now let’s move to Sanskar what he is doing)

Sanskar is glaringly looking at Swayam’s hand with which is holding HIS SHONA’s delicate hand…. he fumes in anger hearing Swayam that he is ordering HIS SHONA… n HIS SHONA is listening him chup chap without giving any reply… huhhhhh !!! He just want grap Swayam n give a tight punch…
(*ohh Godd!!!)

Sanskar’s (monologue)-What is happening with both? He is ordering Shona n she is not reacting.. haah !!haaa!!! Today she is not doing patar patar…. huhhh What’s going on between them.. ? It’s like he is her boyfriend n she is doing as her boyfriend says… urghhh !!!
Sanskar what r u thinking… u r mad or what?? This can’t never happy!!! Never….
But why? Why can’t this happen !!! ??

Noooo nooooo noooooooo it will never happen… he consoles himself… (*bechara confuse soul)….

(*He is listening everything chup chap… haaa !!! Becahra jealousy ka maara)

Swayam-Shona r u coming in freshers party?

Swara-Hmmm!! Why?(she has no mood to speak….)

Swayam-okk!! Then U r coming with me…

Swara-hmmm !!! (Realise what he said) whattt ?? With u but y? Asks in amazement…

Swayam-Bcz m saying…n u have to come…okiii !!! ?signals something through his eyes…

Swara-okkkkkkk !!! (Makes faces)

(*Sanskar !!! Expression is worth watching,,, Godddd !!! He is now tempted with heat of jealousy…. who can burn anything)..

Day of Freshers Party :::

Ev1 is ready for d special evening…

SanNia,, LakMin is waiting for SwaSwa…
N Sanskar frowns looking SwaSwa coming together laughing n giggling…

Lucky-Toh chalee.. !!!

All- Let’s goooo,,,

All steps in d hall,, which is decorated very beautifully… (*dun know how to describe)

Simin-woooowww !!! All looking beautiful yaar… decorations are superbly done… (looking all around d hall)

Lucky-Haaa Simin all girls r looking breath taking(glaringly ev1(only gurlz) lovingly)…

SwaSwa-Kuch na ho sakta iska… n both laughs…(*imagine Sanskar’s expression looking awwww with red jealousy cheeks)…

Time passes,,, but all d time Sanskar’s gaze was at Swara only… what is she doing,, with whom she is talking…. he is looking all her movements keenly…

He notices some boys r staring At Swara’s back but don’t know why as he is facing her cute face…!!!…. He tightens his fist looking at them …. he just want to kick them…(*dun know why¿¿)

One of them a boy comes to Swara
asking for a dance… but Swara denies….

” waaaw !!! Swara u r looking beautiful n hotttt ,,, I have never seen u like before… ,,, seriously u r looking killing babe ,,, if u don’t mind will u dance with me”… With a smirk n flirty tone asks a boy…

Swara feels uncomfortable with his gaze n denies “Sorry m not interested” saying this she turnes around”

Sanskar widens his eyes looking at her back… coz her frock’s Zip is open giving a slight view of her back….

Sanskar boils in anger… now he can understand why those boys r staring her… he looks for Simin to say but she is not present….

Sanskar( monologue)-ohhh God,, This girl naaa !!! Can’t even wear her clothes properly…. what should i do now…
Those bl**dy morons !!!! Tighten fist n close his eyes to control his anger….

He goes to her “Swara i need to talk to u,,, n drages her too a empty corner”…

Swara is shocked with his sudden behavior.”Sanskar what r u doing?? What will people say,,?? Tries to frees her hand from grip but Sanskar holds it more tightly….this makes Swara more angry…

He takes her to a corner n pines her to wall,,, “CAN’T U SEE HE IS TRYING TO FLIRT WITH U,, N WHY CAN’T U WEAR A PROPER DRESS ? ” says holding her shoulder tightly….

Swara is damn angry now coz he said try to maintain distance with her in front of people n now he himself doing that…. showing his right on her… soooo “SOO WHAT,, ¿¿ WHAT’S BOTHERING U,¿¿, HAA SANSKAR,, M NONE TO U NAA,, THEN WHY??..
WHY U CARE WHATEVER I WEAR,, WHATEVER PEOPLE DO WITH ME,, IT’S NONE OF UR BUSINESS RIT?”

U said me to stay away from u,, n m doing that only… now what u want ? Says pouring all her anger…

SANSKAR LOOKS ON SHOCK N LOOSES HIS GRIP OVER HER…

Precap-SWASAN 1st kiss…
n “THUD”- A BURNING SENSATION….

Done with d 13th part…
Guyzz i seriously don’t know what i have written… actually m not well… back pain n headache is killing me…
If u find it not worth reading thrn plzz Sorry… i m not being able to doo anything… M trying to finish it as soon as possible coz i have only 13 days in my hand… soo if u all find it going fast … then plz forgive me.. hope u all understand my problem….

Thank u all for reading…
God bless u all… <3<3….

87 comments

  1. Hemanshi

    |Registered Member

    Aww kakuuu it’s awesome……😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Take care😘😘
    Headache in winters is like always feeling sleepy……huhhh…….
    Loved Sanky’s jealousy and confused emotions😘😘

    • Trisha-Balani

      |Registered Member

      Do that’s what I am feeling ….. sleepy sleepy sleepy😌😌😌😌……

      One incident is coming in my mind while thinking of sleepy mood….. you know kaku dii always sleeps with her hubby……of he isn’t there she won’t sleep…….😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much Diiii ,,, m glad that u loved our Sanskar d confuse soul… huhuhu !!!!
      yoo i guess my headache is due to lack of sleep… hahh !! anyway… Thnk u for ur concern..
      Have a beautiful day ahead.. ;0 ;-*

  2. Nagamanasa

    |Registered Member

    Awesome di…Really sanskar’s face is worth seeing while he is burning with jealousy…He is really buddhu Prasad hahaaa😁😁
    Waiting for next part di try to post soon

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Waaaa !!!! Thnk u sooo much Manasa..
      Haaa he looks chubby n cute with jealous face… God i wish i could pull them once… ;0;0;0;D… huhuhu !!!
      Sure dear i’ll try to update soon… ;-*

  3. Mariyajap

    |Registered Member

    that’s why i said this sanskar is an idiot, why can’t he listen to his heart always giving importance to his bl**dy brain and shouting on our pooooor swara tooooooo bad snskar

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Haaa Mariyaa !!! Actually he is not taking almonds now a days soo his brain is not working properly….n taking mad decisions…
      Hope his heart wins this time*fingers crossed…..
      Thnk u soooo much dear… ;-* ;0

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much Shan Diii… waa m glad u loved it… Dii if u find any kind of mistakes then plzz let me know.. haa !!! :0;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Urghhhh !!! M not getting straw to drink Coconut water… that’s why !!!! *wipe my tears..
      Thnk u soooo much dear… *ten tena ten…

  4. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    Swasanchu..lol Di
    And coming to Episode u explained it very well Di …. Thnkew so much for fulfilling my wish Di… U know I have a special name for u… Wanna know it us sorry queen …. Kitna sorry bolti ho… Han….. Don’t underestimate my Kaku Di… Ooky … Lov u Di

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Haaa Diii ,,, i guess u r also from communist party of Shreyuuu !!! tabhi toh mai soochuu !!! hmmm *agli bar hamari sarkar… 😉 😛

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Awwww !!! Sorry queen !!! Huhhh my Cutieeee is a priest who does namkaran !!! haaaa *part time job…
      Waaa Thnk u soooo much dear.. hmm !! i was really not satisfied with myself… that’s why !!
      huah haa haa !! Don’t underestimate d power of a priest *Cutieee…Love u tooo dear… ;-* ;);) :0

      • Shreeyu

        |Registered Member

        Haha Di priest … Well m really Brahman by caste so u guessed it right but ya m not a priest… Heh . … Di pls upload next one soon … M waiting for it … Actually I’ll not b regular on tu from this week so waiting for ur update

    • Kakali

      Haaaa Cutieeeee m trying my best ….
      n u’ll not be regular from this week… huhhhh will miss u a lot…
      coz i’ll be active after 10 days till April…
      sooo advance Best of luck for ur Exams,, …. rock d sheet …
      hope u do everything best in ur life…
      God bless u … love u … haaaa !!! TC

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Sure Cutieee i will try my best to update today…
      n yoooo u’ll not b here haaa will miss u a lot…
      Best of luck for ur Exam dear… rock d sheet… *Advance wish…
      Hhuhuhu !!! it means i will not be able to meet u till April… God !!!
      anyway TC… do everything best in ur life … okkkk !!!!

  5. Navi

    |Registered Member

    Oi take care.. i knw nothing will happen to.. wait i will give u 2 bites it wil cure ur head ache and back pain… one on right shoulder another on left .
    get well soon. Aftr bite 10 mints….
    Kakali dancing… see my trick works..
    chapieee ws awesome loved it.. pain pain.. it kills me… waaaa kiss waiting for swasan kiss..swara sanskar swayam trinagle who slapped who????

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Yayyyy !!! That’s like my Naviii !!! who knows me sooo well that nothing can happen to me… huhuhu !!!
      ahhh!! pain!! uhhh !! painnn…
      pain pain pain … just bcz of ur biting nature… hahhh !!! *doing nagin dance with Navi… !!! ;P

      I really dun have any idea about about who slapped whom but yeah my mom gave me a tight wala spal seeing ur bite marks… haaa !! huhhh !!!

      Thnk u soooo much dear for everything… *bang my head with slender…. 😉 :0 ;0 :0

      • Navi

        |Registered Member

        Hahahaha… thats me… bcz of me u got slap… bt y did not apply baby cream.. its ur mistake….
        thn nagin dance.. lol… kakali frm which planet are u frm???

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Waaaa !! Naviii u urself said baby cream is not for me … it’s for kids … that’s why i gave that to Nive’s cousin… haaa !!! *Navi promise…

      huhhh !!! Now m from earth only… but soon gonna settle in PLUTO … will u accompany me ¿ *Dragging Navi to my punctured rocket to take of… 😀 😛

  6. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    Wow loved it… nw its getting more intrstng wid sankyz jlsy, cnfsd feelings n romance..
    Precap 😍😍 n 😱😱
    Get well soon n Take care kakali

  7. chandu

    Yooo…!! It’s superb…!! Bang sanskar’s head with one coconut..!! 😛 His confusions will get cleared…!!! Swaraa…will be heart broken??!!! I don’t think she is in less condition now…!! Precap is soo interesting…!!
    Take care first…!! Then you can write…!! 😀

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanduuuuuu !!!! i was planning to bang his head with slender…. hmmm !! anyway coconut is also good… haah !!!
      Haaa she will be more broken then this !!! she will be miserable….
      hope u’ll like that…
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!!
      yooo m taking proper bad rest from 2 days… ;0 :0

  8. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Wow, my bukkadd rocked… Loved the chappy… It’s not boring😁😁😁.. Hehe,chipko rubber band and confuse soul, nice name dear😅😅😅…Haww, you are not well😨😨… Plz take care…keep it up dear… Keep smiling…😊😊😊

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Waaawwww !!! Umaaa bang me with a new name… !!! *Sobbing…
      Haaa u dun know m good in namkaran !!! that’s why… !!
      Thnk u soooo much dear ,, m glad that u loved it…
      n yoooo n taking proper bed rest now..
      u2 keep.smiling dear … 😉

  9. chanu

    Awwww kaku drl!!
    Its sooo nice epi!! I lv it!!
    hee hee sankys jealousy is da best part!!
    RLy he look soo cute while jealous. :-* :-*
    in real sr also sanku drl dnt leave sawar 4 1 min.. always staring her nly..
    its soo adorable.
    Swaras part is soo sad.. aww my cute grl.. dnt cry.. its hurting me also…
    bt bt her wrds??!! 😮 .hey kaku y u write it in capitals??? Y??? Y???
    Its rly scary!! Dnt knw wt is cooking in ur lil brain… if u do smthng 2 my swasan na.. then ill nt leave u… if u hv any idea 4 doing it.. take it off.. gt dat!!??
    Da best part is ur wrds in brackets. Its awesome I lv it.. hee hee.. my thoughts also same like u.. lols.. 😉
    hey I rply u in last epi.. plz go and check it.. 🙂 😉
    U dnt knw hw 2 write sad parts.?? Then wt is dis ha!! Urrgg.. 😛

    Wait!?? Wait!! Wt?? u hv back pain??? And also headache!!?? 😮 😮
    and u r writing dis.. *standing and keeping stick in my hand with angry face… hufffff…
    dnt u knw wt 2 do!!?? Haa!!?? I think its bz f ur accident!?? 😮 hey dnt take stress. U cn end dis any tym.. nw take a rest.. or else ull be sick and cdnt face 4 ur exams also.. did u take ur medicines?? Dnt knw wt 2 do with dis grl.. hawww..

    Keep writing dr
    be happy always
    take care.
    lv you
    ♥♥♥♥

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanuuuuuu !!! *yelling….
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!!…
      yoooo he lookr killing while staring only HIS SWARA… man those looks r urghhh !!

      Don’t be sad Chanuuu !! dun cry .. okkk !! but she has to bear more… it’s just a starting dear… huhuhuu !!!
      omgggg !! nothing is in my lil brain coz of headache… soo take a chill pill….

      Huhuhuu we r sis na sooo our thoughts has to same… like always…

      ohhh haaa i don’t know how to write painful scenes coz m not satisfied with myself… heheheh!!!

      New Shade of my Chanuuu !!! *lady don…*scared… !!! now m taking bed rest dear… wobhi properly…..

      yeahh i took medicines… hahahah !!! u r something else Chanuuuuu…. really…
      Awwww !! once again thnxxx for ur concern dear… feeling blessed…. *hug…
      i gave u reply then alsooo….
      ADARE OYA dear !!!
      Byeee ♡♡♡♡♡♡ ….

      • chanu

        Kakuuuuuu… *screaming out loudly!!! 🙂 🙂
        Rly u write it in sinhala!!?? Hw u knw it.. sooo cute…
        MATH ADARE OYATA GODAAAAK. (Lv u soo much)
        Thank you soo much dr.. rly u make me feel sm1 spcl…
        im sooo hpy!! :-* :-*

        Yaaaaa…. I rly lv his when my sanku staring swara… awwww.. his nly 1 look cn kill me…
        Nw nly remembering hi gaze ahhhh… *paralysed 😉

        Huuuh!!?? Is jst da beginning????!!! 😮
        Hawwww.. my poor swara.. see swara dis kaku going 2 gv u more pain..
        dnt wry we ll cy 2getr drl!! :'(

        Nothing in ur lil brain!!! *looking at u doubtfully
        I dnt think sooo

        Yaa yaa we r sisio nly..
        i will be soo hpy if our thoughts r same! 🙂

        Dnt wry dr.. bt I knw u write it soo well… and dnt think soo much abt it. And u make me sad.. soo u r successful!! Gt dat! U r gd writer .

        Huhhh…
        dats like my kaku.. soo take bed rest properly.. and ya.. tell me if u gt well..
        vry gd grl… dnt miss ur medicines. Take care f ur health properly dr!!

        Heee heee… im smthng else!!??? Hawwww…

        U said na im ur siso.. then y dis formalities!!??? Haaaa???
        Its my duty 2 worry abt u and take care f u.. bt im nt with u na.. soo take care f ur self dr…*biigggg hug

        Did I talk too much??? *chanu is a quiz 2 ask??! Yaa u talk soo much like always.
        Sry 4 irritating u in ur headache dr kaku..

        tc
        lv ya

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanuuuuu !! why to feel u special dear … when y r already special… *mad girl… huhhhh !!!

      huahh haaa haaa !!! Chanuuuuu laughing reading ur comment… can’t stop smiling hyhuhuhu !!!!
      once again thnk u soooo much !!!
      MATH ADARE OYYATAAAAAA GODDAAK !!! 😀😀😀

      • chanu

        Heee heee..
        yaaa I 4gt im spcl… lols.. 😉 😛
        cute kaku!! Hw r u nw!!??
        I saw ur cmnts in other ffs.. r u going without completing dis ss!!??? 😮 😮
        hayeeeee… dnt do dat!!! If u wnt.. plz make sm smpl endng and start it with da same name.. with season 2!!

        And waiting 4 da precap!! 😉 awwwwww..
        *dreaming

        Bt wt ws dat thud!?? Burning sensation??? 😮 I hope my imagination will be wrong. 🙂 😉
        keep writing
        all the best 4 r exam!!!

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanuuuu m not going anywhere without completing my SS… it’s just that i have reading n commenting
      .. haa !!! n m gonna post tomorrow…. huhuhuhu wait i will also join u in dreaming…

      MAN HONDIN INNAWA !!!

      OYATA KOHAMANDA??
      <——– don't laugh okkk !!!
      m learning… 😀😀😀😀

      • chanu

        Fuuuuuu….
        I ws sceard dat u ll nt complete dis…
        I 4gt….u said na dat u gonna end dis.. *stupid grl.

        Waiting 4 nxt epi dr.. 🙂

        Yaa yaa cm lets dreaming 2gethr..
        bt bt u hv 2 write it in dis ss.. 😉 😉 and my dream dnt hv any thud sound.. 😉 😉 lols..

        im nt laughing @u dr..
        Btim smiling wt ever I read ur cmnt…
        awwww… u write it in sinhala? How did u learn dat!!??

        Mamath godak hondin inawa.
        After reading dis im super hpy..
        😀 😀

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanuuuuu how can u even forgot huhhh !!! u r my teacher only….
      i learnt it from u….
      remember u taught Sinhala to Chanduuuu !!!
      huhhh but i also learnt ….
      *u mad girl !!!
      *bang ur head with stove !!!! :'( ;(

      • chanu

        Ohhhh !!!!
        Yaaa yaaaaa.. I 4gt abt dat!!
        bang my head with stove!! 😮 😮 😮
        poor me na!!! Sooo is it ok with you if I use my pillow!! *with puppy dog eyes
        Hawwww…
        mad me! 😉
        I teach sinhala and I ddnt even remember it.. lols..

        U r rly soo sweet kaku!!!
        The bestest student ever…!!
        U knw bt im sad.. ; ( 🙁
        Bz in nxt lesson u r nt with us na.. *heart broken 🙁

        Dnt wry!! Ill teach u when u cm back!!
        Adarei godaaak!!

  10. Radhika..

    |Registered Member

    Awesome part di and its not atall boring and take care of itself as the season is changing it give us many diseases as gift so protect urself from them di
    About the chapter its just amazing swara pain u say u can’t explain sad scenes u explain it very well di…….,. Her pain is causing pain to me…………and sanskar understand quickly yr what is happening to u and why can’t u able to come out of ur thoughts sharp ur brain … And don’t hurt ur shona and itself by all the stupid thing u do …….. Sanskar care for swara but don’t know the reason he is such a dumbo na ……….. Pagal ladka……… Loved the part di love u take care of ur health😃😃😘😘

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo very much My Radhikaaaa !!!
      hmmm my headache is due to lack of sleep as m hardly getting time to sleep… it’s kinda become daily routine for me to sleep less… that’s why !!!

      Huhuhuhuhu it’s just a trailer dear Swara has to bear more… *hope sooo… heheheh Sanskar will understand her importance when he will loose her forever…*guess sooo…

      once again Thnk u sooo much my sis… love i toooo…
      u2 TC okkk !!! 🙂 :0

  11. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    Kaku….didn’t i tell u please inform me before😭😭😭😭…..And what u did? Itna rulaaya itna rulaaya….bay of bengal mein paani kam ho gaye.

    And what ere u saying? Don’t u dare to say that u don’t know how to write painful scenes. Huhh😠😠😠😠 U r making us cry from last 3-4 eps

    Ep is so emotional…..Swara’s pain😭😭😭💔 Have ur pain reduced now?

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Awwww !! Vyshuuuu !!! i seriously didn’t have idea that u will cry.. haaa !!! though *take my fave hanky…
      i was not satisfied with my work soo thought it will not upto all urs marks.. that’s whyyy !! otherwise i would have informed u … huhuhuhu !!!
      yooo dear m much better now… !!!
      Thnk u soooo much dear … !!! ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooooo much my dear Sis !!! haa he is in full jealousy mood… he will burn in some days… huhuhuhu !!! u2 TC dear… !! ;0

  12. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Frst of all plz take care of urself yaaaar!!!!!
    Rest n dnt stresss urself!!!hmmm!!!😄
    Now comng to d chappy!!! It ws fabulously wriitteen!!!
    Loved it dr😄😄😄
    Sanky jealousyy!!hmm!!😆😆
    Awww!!!bechari swara!!😑😑 …,,,dnt wry swaru sanky wl surely understand ur importance sooon!!!!
    N precap!! frst kissss!!!!!wohioooo!!!!m super xcieted for it * besharam me 😛
    Wtng for nxt part!! Keeepockng n st blessed meri pyaari patar patar😄😄😄
    N u know wt even pikachu ws mine fav.. Jst lovd dat cuteeee sa piku😄😄😄
    N d name swasanchu ws reallly unique…kaise sooch lete h tu ye sb hahahahahahhaah😂😂😂😂 hmmm i know*magic of taking almondss hai na😉😉😆😆😆
    Love u lotzzzzzz yaaar!!!take care😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooooo very much My Sweet Fairyyyy !!!
      yoooo m taking full bed rest from 2 days… n now m much better…
      ommmggg i sooo glad that u loved it… huahh haa haa !!!same pinch dear me2 soo excited about about kiss… hope everything goes well…

      huhuhu Pikachuuu is my fav fab fav cartoon… m a die heart fan of him… awww my oikka wikka !!!
      yooo yooo yooo magic of taking almonds… u know me sooo well… huhuhu!!! Love u toooo dear…
      u2 TC.. 😉 :0 :9

  13. Simin

    |Registered Member

    Are mera baccha
    Take care
    Why i feel swara is hiding something very big
    Sanskar cool down and think
    Kaku dont tell me that its gonna be a sad ending coz i am not in a mood to have that first meher di than u i just cant digest that

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much Simmuuu !!! u r rit dear… she is hiding something very big… haaaa she has lot’s of choco but doesn’t want to share with anyone… that’s why !!! huhuhu !!!
      of course it will have a engind but but but !!! will tell u at d end…
      TC dear… :-).;-* :0

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much Deekshuuu !!! m glad u loved it… ;-*
      yooo m taking care of myself with chocos… thnxx for ur concern dear….. u2 TC… ;0 ;-*

  14. Swarmayi

    |Registered Member

    Kakuuuuuuuu… what an amazing episode! !!! * Dancing on bed… la la la la la…* waiting for next part… love u.. ummmah.. ( kissy on cheeks ha.. 😂😉)

  15. Maryam

    Hey sweetie…What’s up…how are dude…
    How are your Studies Going on…N wait you are still not well…How many time should I tell you to take care of your self…I think u don’t understand English let me say it to you in Hindi/Urdu Kakali apna kayal rakha karo…!!! If you are not well then plz take a leave for a week or so but don’t tisk your health…I am very concern about you I know I mean no one to you that’s why you are not bothering me…. You are my friend dear…I can’t imagine anything happening to you..
    Angry that’s why No comments for today’s Episode…😡😠😟😡…in your language “Ready with a pimpom ball
    Take care of Youeself…TAKE CARE…
    (Writing in bold words too..)

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Lady Gabbar m good dear… now much better… n my study is also going with flow…
      how about ur study n health ??
      huhhhh m taking proper bed rest n taking good care of mine….

      wait what u said u r none to me… hehhh with this statement u actually proved m none to u… *punch in ur beautiful face…
      don’t u dare to utter all this crap okkk…

      no yarr i can’t take leave as i don’t hae much time in my hand … sooo trying to end asap..
      .ommmggg i wrote that sond specially for u & u didn’t compliment… *pout..
      okkkk !! okkk !! as u say dear…
      Thnk u sooo much !!! ;-*

      • Maryam

        Aww…You can punch me I won’t mind dude…N I was indeed very surprised to see the song..as it is my favourite song..I love you for this…You are my Favourite person dude…Mh studies are also going pretty well…N sorry dear for being rude…I was really stressed out..I hope you understand..
        Love you..N take care

  16. Mirna

    |Registered Member

    Hey Kakas awesome part do u think itsssssss boring dnt u dareeeeeee. This sanky idiot stupid monkey has no other work except to hurt
    swara and feel bad 🙂 Frgot to ask h r u now felling better 🙂

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much my Mirna darlzzzz !!! huhuhuhu he is sooo cute in jealousy.. *pinch his cheeks…
      waa he will hurt her more…*hope soo…
      Yoooo dear m fine now… taking proper bed rest…

  17. Maha016

    |Registered Member

    diiiii…..!!!!!! awesome awesome awesome…..aree waah!!!! di what a stry and di this sanky na break his nose in behalf of me he say like that ”SWARA IS NOTHING TO ME“ idoit sanky…..huhhhh leave di and ya i read all the parts which i missed it was awesome di and love u !!!!!

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooooo much Mahaaa !!!
      waaaa !!! don’t beat him … huhhh
      yeah but i n u can twist his nose,,, pull his cheeks…*dreaming…
      huhuhuhu… love u toooo my Sis !!
      stay blessed… ;-*

  18. Tharu

    |Registered Member

    It’s not boring at all..I read 3episodes now…intact it’s getting more interesting..awesome…feeling so sad about swara …and take care of yourself dear…love your writing very much…❤

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thank u sooo very much Tharuuuu !!! awww ur words always mean a lot to meee !!!
      hmmm me2 feeling bad for Swara !! but what to do she has to bear more… *hope sooo…
      anyway feeling nice to see u after many ages !!! ;-*

      TC dear.. ;0

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