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Home»Fan Fiction»“”A DREAM””(Few shots by Kakali) Part 4
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“”A DREAM””(Few shots by Kakali) Part 4

KakaliBy KakaliOctober 11, 201645 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hii ev1.. here m with d 4th part.. m soo happy to see ur support on previous parts. It means a lot to mee.Thnk u soo much for reading n commenting..Silent readers thnk u to all also..plzz try to break ur silence n share ur feelings..u all will feel great..Again sorry for grammatical mistakes n spelling errors..

So let’s go inside d DREAM..

Here we goo–:

Swamin both were laughing n giggling..passing comments to students.. n also saying a lot about Sania’s(Sankskar n Nia)friendship..

But Swara knows how she is feeling..her heart is crying.. but she can’t.as she can’t fall week..she has to bear more than this..

Here at corridor:

Nia- Did u say sorry?

Sanskar-never in this whole life.. let her go to hell ..

Nia-now what happened?

Sanskar-nothing,,let’s goo we r getting late..

Nia is confuse so she just nodded n went with him..

Swamin convo::

Swara-Simin did u see Nia’s dress?hahahaha she was looking like a RATTLE SNAKE(lol)..

Simin- yeahh! She is soo tall n slim..infect taller than Sanskar also i guess.!.Don’t u think soo? N she was soo chipku..huhh!!

Swara remembered their closeness n gaze..she become silent..

Simin understands her state of mind.so thinks to ask something..

Simin-Swara if u don’t mind can i ask u something?

(Now Swara totally understands what questions she is gonna ask her,,so avoid to all this,she has to do some nautanki,)

Swara- Simin r u all rit?(touching her forhead n neck) ohh God .. r u feeling week? (Panick)

Simin-(hell confused) hold on hold on chennai express!! What will happen to me? But why r u asking?

Swara-Thnk God u r fine.. i thought u had Meleria,,(a kind of fever) ..not in ur sence n that’s why blabbering anything..

Simin-Whattt?(confuse look)

Swara-aur nahi toh kya u were taking permission before talking to me.. soo ..(Dramebazz girl)

Simin is like “what d heaven is wrong with this half mad girl?”

Simin-Swara u r just impossible.. justt yuumpossiable.. why u always in hurry to give me mini heart attack haa?

Swara-waaaa !! What did i do now?This is d same dialogue my Massi ma always uses..i don’t know why she says this me.. Plzzz don’t say anything to me,u know na i m a pure soul with lots of beauty n smart brain.. i can’t hear anything bad about me.. it’s againt of law n constitution..(Nautanki).

Simin gives her “i_m_really_sorry_to_mess_with_u ,,_it will_never_happen”look”

Both suddenly heard a song for which their eyes get widdend..n d song is

Addayein badi funnky, kare hai noutanki,,
Yeh chori badi drama queen hai..
Badi badi aankhein hai,aasuon ki tanki
Yeh chori badi drama queen hai..

Simin glares Swara from top to bottom..n brust out into laughter…she is laughing like anything..

N Swara is standing here with angry cutee pout.. looking d most breath taking girl in d whole universe.(There is no one who can compete with her this pout)

Simin(while laughing)-Swara did u hear dat?did u hear ? She again laugh like mad..ohhhh God Swara..ur perfect actions with perfect song..hahaha.

Swara- huhhh !!!! Don’t talk to mee.. byee..(she left from there stamping her foot)..she murmurs”What’s wrong with ev1?i just hate this song”..

She comes out from canteen n sees that Sania(Sanskar n Nia)is talking holding each other hand.. like Sanskar is trying to say something but Nia is angry n is not ready to hear anything..

Swara again felt heart broken.. again ! Looking them soo close.specially his lovely gaze on Nia..which is stabbing her heart .. this time she can’t able to take all this n tears started too flow from her beautiful almond(mini coconut) like eyes..

But this time her tears are not unnoticed by Sanskar..he looks at her n finds her eyes r moist.. also noticed dat she is breathing heavily..

He comes towards her , Swara ! What happen,,(tries to calm her down).. aaram see arram se saas loo… (worried n holds her hand tightly) .drink some water(gives her water bottle)..she drink it all in one go n finally breaths normally.

Sanskar-Are u okk?(worried)

Swara-yeah!! Yeahh m okk..
suddenly both notices dat they r holding their hands tightly.

.both had a cutee eyelock..Sanskar is staring her moist eyes like he is trying to find out something..he has no idea what is he doing but yeah he is searching for something for sure..

Swara is also feeling a new motion in his gaze..she just wants d time to freeze in this moment.dat they would live like this 4ever.afterall it’s her DREAM to be with him for d entire life..

But both come to sense hearing Nia’s sound as she is continuously shouting his name from a distance..(Kabab mei haddi,pakore mai makkhi huhh)

They are embarrassed but composes themself..

Sanskar-Feeling better?(avoiding eye contact)

Swara-hmm !much better..thnk u..

Sanskar-no worry.take care.. byee.

Swara-Byee..see u tomorrow..(saying this both went to their own direction).

Sanskar’s POV::

Ohh!! God what happened to me? Why was i staring her? Why her eyes were moist?i felt like she wanted to say a lots of things through her eyes..but what?
Ufff !! So many questions?
But why it’s bothering me so much?
Urgghhh m going mad..
Don’t think all this Sanskar. U’ll loose ur mind..i should stay away from her as much as possible..yeahh..i should..

POV ends..

Swara’s POV

Ommgg!! What was that God ji? Sanskar was helping me.. uhhh maaa.. i still can’t believe..it’s like A DREAM.. i was soo close to him,also felt 1000s of butterflies on my cheeks n nose..
Oh God this feeling is soo beautiful..
Thnk u God ji,,n dont worry i’ll give u 1 ladoo n 3 chocolates.. (Kanjuss makhisuss).

POV ends..

Precap-SWASAN real friendship..SwaLakMin more masti..
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Thnk u soo much for reading .. i know it’s too short n not upto ur marks… but what to do today is my grandpa’s death anniversary.. soo busy a bit.. hope u all understand my problem..
Do let me know how was it thought ur valuable comments..
Take care all..
Have a good day.. 😉

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    45 Comments

    1. bhavana on October 11, 2016 5:04 pm

      woah so amazing chappy kakali wanna read next part asap waiting for it ………………….

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 10:40 am

        Thnk u soo much Bhavana for ur wonderful comment… Next is on d way dear … ;-*

    2. rabia on October 11, 2016 5:46 pm

      Kakali its awesome dear ?

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 10:40 am

        Thnk u soo much Rabia Dii.. :-*

    3. SNY on October 11, 2016 5:46 pm

      Wow ……. ..

      .

      M so amazed to read it….di
      I rly luv it …
      Nxt one soon sis…..

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 10:42 am

        Awww!!! Thnk u sooo much My little sis… m glad u love it…
        Next is coming soon dear .. :-*

    4. Arshaanya on October 11, 2016 5:52 pm

      Loved it…
      Exctd for precap swasan frnshp ?

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:08 pm

        Thnk u soo much dear … m also excited about that … ;-* ..take care.

    5. Radhika.. on October 11, 2016 5:56 pm

      awesome part di and its good i loved it as sanskar care for swara he care for her he help her he is thinking of her her tears are effecting him yuhuu loved it and the song totally suits swara i remember something by the song and laugh very much. i just love the song and loved the chappy. and its upto mark even more than that its not mean by the chappy is small or big it means by the time u take from the prepararions and write a part for us really di love ur this thing very much and may ur grandpa’s soul rest in heaven. and the part is awesome i am very happy by reading loved it love u di ?????

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:13 pm

        Awwww !! Radhika .. m soo much happy dat u love it.. uhhh !!!
        u understand me soo well dear .. m glad u like d song also.. hmmm!! i also pray d same.. *closing eyes n praying…

        Thnk u sooo much Baccha.. stay bleesed .. love u three…

    6. vyshu10 on October 11, 2016 6:27 pm

      awesome ep…..smile now

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:10 pm

        Thnk u soo much dear .. !!! awww keep smiling always.. 😉

    7. hemanshi on October 11, 2016 7:08 pm

      kakali……..i loved it soo much it was short but still was very much worth reading……..love u a lot sissy………..muahhhhh

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:14 pm

        Thnk u soo much dii…thanks al lottts… love u too .. ;-*

    8. Simin on October 11, 2016 7:18 pm

      Lovely chappy dear
      I am eagerly waiting for next one as we three will be doing masti and i hope we will do a prank on sanskar hehehehe

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:17 pm

        Thnk u sooo much dear… !!!
        huhuhuuu i’ll think anout it Simin…
        but gonna do it sure… thnk u.. :-*

    9. Shreeyu on October 11, 2016 7:35 pm

      So cute Kakali dii …. Update next soon but wanna ask something that In last part u gave the precap that Sanskar will b angry but now toh he us gradually melting ….
      Waise Jo bhi ho it was so nice …
      Tc

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:19 pm

        Thnk u sooo much Cutieee !!!
        yeah i said about Sanskar’s anger in precap… but change my mind … as someone was soo angry on me for doing this.. but don’t worry its gonna brust soon… Take care dear .. ;-*

    10. deeksha on October 11, 2016 7:58 pm

      Loved it… Continue soon…!!!!

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:07 pm

        Thnk u soo much Deeksha.. !! glad u love it.
        n gonna continue soon.. ;¤

    11. Heltej on October 11, 2016 8:09 pm

      Kakali… Senti ? swara poor girl…!

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:06 pm

        Hmmm !!poor Swara… n rich me *pleading to God for chocolates… huhhh !!
        Thnk u soo much dii…

    12. Malika on October 11, 2016 8:45 pm

      Amazing but soo short yr. I can understand. Poor shona…… Aahhhhhh love you yr don’t worry and the song was fabulous. Wow……. You are better than me……… I writing truly speaking.

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:04 pm

        Sorry for short chappy dii.. but next one will b average..
        n Thnk soo soo much for ur cutee comments..

        Yeah yeah !! m better than u .. huhhh !!*joke of d hour..

    13. s on October 11, 2016 8:46 pm

      awsm..tc..

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:02 pm

        Thnk u soo much dear … u too take care
        . 😉

    14. mica on October 11, 2016 9:50 pm

      just butterflies ? though bees, crickets, grasshoppers joined…

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:01 pm

        Nice idea !!! hmmm gonna use it..
        Thnk u soo much Mica.. ;-*

    15. Mirna on October 11, 2016 10:52 pm

      Hi kaks awesome sanskar’s feeling for swara ohhhhhhooooo 🙂

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 12:00 pm

        Heyy !! Mirna.. thnk u sooo much …
        yoo !!! little little feeling.. ;-*

    16. khushiii on October 11, 2016 11:09 pm

      Awesome Awesome Awesome

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 11:59 am

        Thnk u soo much Khushii :-*

    17. tani on October 12, 2016 5:16 pm

      Super awesome

      • Kakali on October 12, 2016 11:29 pm

        Thnk u soo much dear … ;-*

    18. Mahjabeen on October 12, 2016 11:50 pm

      Amazing dear..wanna read more…post soon

      • Kakali on October 13, 2016 11:01 am

        Thnk u soo much dear … ;-* …
        next us on d way… 🙂

    19. maha016 on October 14, 2016 10:40 pm

      di wait i need some time *drinking some water * now feeling better di what the hell u made me numb i have no words to describe di i just love u di ummmmma

      • Kakali on October 15, 2016 12:07 am

        Awwww !!! My cutee name maker lovee meee… me 2 love u … !!!
        Thnk u sooo much dear … ur comments means a lot to me.. stay blessed… ;-* *late lattifff

      • maha016 on October 15, 2016 7:55 am

        di i forgot to tell u sorry because i was just struck in my works leave all that di are u in fb if u r in then give me ur id and i m late lattif because i dont have internet for last 5 days .

      • Kakali on October 15, 2016 10:04 am

        Noo need of Sirry dear !!! n hmmm !!! m not connected with FB…
        5 days without Internet !!! r u serious?? *slip to coma..

      • maha016 on October 15, 2016 10:12 am

        haan di what to do because of tight schedule i dont have time to recharge and di by the way i post my ff .

    20. Anniya on October 15, 2016 12:12 am

      Awsm one…
      Yup again late, don’t dare to angry from me…
      Because may be next time I will more late than this so keep your anger safe for further

      • Kakali on October 15, 2016 10:06 am

        I don’t wanna die soon from getting angry on u,, it’s out of my brain..i can’t afford this.. huhhh !!
        Thnk u soo much !!! ;-*

    21. Monesha on October 16, 2016 10:29 pm

      I understood your problem sweety…… No problem. About episode……… Omg…….. You killed me by your writing ????. I think i done some good things in my previous birth so only i got you as my darling sweety princess…….. ??? Thank you so much for giving wonderful story. You rocked it dear. I loved it to the core……. Millions……. Billions……….. Uncountable……….. You Nailed it. Hats off you darling. My date of birth is 30.08.2000 belated wishes to my sweety. ?????????????????????? today onwards i will not talk about braking our relationship. Sorry. Love you ? love you ? Love you ? love you ? love you ? love you ? love you ? love you ? love you ? love you………. a lotttttttttttttttttttt……. Loads of huggggggggs ????, kisses ??? and chocolates???? to my dear sweetie.?????

      • Kakali on October 17, 2016 8:38 am

        Thnk i thnk u thnk u soooo much dear… forrr urr sweet cutee n beautiful comments… u made my day… yoohhoo…
        awwww !!! thnk u for ur wishes dear… me2 wish u d same…
        actually u know what my sister birthday is also at 30th August with different year … huhuhuhu …
        love u tooo dear … lotss of hugss n chocolates from meee toooooo sweetyy… ;-*

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