“”A DREAM”” (SWASAN SS by Kakali) part 19

Hello ev1…
Thnk u for ur response on previous parts.. Thnk u silent readers.. So here is d next part… let’s go inside d DREAM…

Flashback continues ::::

See Sanskar, Swara is no more… ! Our Shona is no more.. !! We have lost our old Shona.. ,, d girl who is sleeping there is not our Shona.. she is someone else … someone else who has no hope, who is a failure of her own life… who is just breathing ,waiting for her death to come n take her with n making free her from all sorrow,all darkness of this bright world.. !!

Look na Sanskar,, what has happened to our Shona.. !! Plzzz say her to come back to us.. !! Plzzz Sanskar say naa.. !! Say her not to loose hope.. !!! Plzzzz Shona come back… come back to us… ur Hippo,, ur Simmu, ur family is waiting for u… Plzzz ” saying this Simin cries bitterly n breaks down in a friction of second….. !!!

Without saying anything Sanskar moves to Swara’s cabin,where she is sleeping peacefully. !! But no doubt her sleep is not peaceful,though she has d sence of emerging from a word of dark,haunted places where she traveled alone all this years n may b she would has to travel alone for all her entire life.. !!!

{¤BG tune : Sanam Teri Kasam¤}

Betahasha dil ne tujhko hi chaaha hai,,
Har duaa mein maine tujhko hi maanga hai…
Tera jaana jaise koi baddua,,
tera jaana jaise koi baddua,,,
door jaaoge jo tum,,,
mar jaayenge hum,,,
sanam teri kasam oo..
sanam teri kasam oo..
sanam teri kasam..

{Without any limits,the heart has loved you only
I have wished for you alone in every prayer of mine.
Your going is like some curse,
if you go far,I’ll die..
I swear on you, my beloved..}

Sanskar slowly sits beside her taking her palm in his shaking plam n calls her name lovingly yet with a fearful voice “Swara”…
He waits that she will say with a bright smile “HAA!! SANSKUU”…
But there is no reply.. neither she is replying nor looking at him.. !! N now he is badly carving for her reply.. he just want to hear her voice once ,calling him Sanskuu once…

Tumhe dekhte hi aankhen ho jaatin nam
sanam teri kasam o..
sanam teri kasam o..
sanam teri kasam..

{When I see you, my eyes get wet..
I swear on you, my beloved..}

Huaa ye kya hashar mera,,,
judaa huaa sabar mera,,
main tere bin ek lamha
kyun kabhi naa jiya…

{what condition I have reached
that my patience has left me,
I have never lived for even a moment
away from you..}

He trembles with his words “Swara,, plzz wake up naa… i know i have hurt u a lot… but plzz Swara u can’t give me this punishment… !!! U can’t do this with us Swara.. !!! U don’t know what had happened to me after that incident.. u don’t know Swara.. u don’t know..

Raat bhar ashkon ne tujhko pukaara hai,,,
har dua main maine tujhko hi maanga hai
Tera jaana jaise koi baddua,,,,
door jaaoge jo tum
mar jaayenge hum
sanam teri kasam o..
sanam teri kasam o..
sanam teri kasam..
tumhe dekhte hi aankhen ho jaati nam,,,
sanam teri kasam o..
sanam teri kasam o..
sanam teri kasam..

{All night, my tears have called for you only,
in every prayer I have asked for you only..}

But u know what, I have realised something… I missed u when something really good happened, bcz you are d one i wanted to share it with… I missed u when something was troubling me, bcz u r d one who understood me so well,,, I missed u when i cried n laughed… bcz u r d one who made my laughter grow n my tears disappeard…. I MISSED U ALL D TIME… !! but i missed u d most when i laid awake at night n thought of d wondering time s that we spent with each other…. Those were some of d best and most memorable times of my life……. & i want to live it again … With u… !!! Only WITH U SWARA… !!! He says caressing her hair qith lots of love …

Nasha tera dil ko lagaa dena nahi mujhko dagaa,,,
main teri aadat ka maarahai kya meri khataa,,,

{My heart is addicted to your intoxication,,
don’t betray me now,
I am now so addicted to you,
what’s my mistake here..}

But i know d truth now..!! U have figured out I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH U .. n u ,,, u just trying to make me stop by hurting me this way… bcz i hurt u rit¿… Well it won’t work… one day or another u have come back for me .. for us… for our LOVE… for our DREAM..

“I LOVE U SWARA”… !!! Says n kiss her forehead lovingly.. !!

Tere bin naamumkin apna guzaara hai,,,
har duaa mein maine,
tujhko hi maanga hai….

{Without you it’s not possiblefor me to live..
in every prayer,
I have wished for you only..}

Tera jaana jaise koi baddua
door jaaoge jo tum
mar jaayenge hum
sanam teri kasam o..
sanam teri kasam o..
sanam teri kasam..
tumhe dekhte hi aakhen ho jaati nam…
sanam teri kasam o..
sanam teri kasam o..
sanam teri kasam..

Swara slowly opens her eyes n looks around… !! Her eyes sight catches d 1st view of her Dream boy… her Sanskuuuu.. !! Who is weeping like a kid which nose is flowing with tears… he is just sobbing sobbing n sobbing… it hurts Swara a lot.. !! He feels her hand is doing movement… so looks up to her face… !!!

Their eyes locked intensely… her hand reaches to cup a side of his face making sure that he is here.. with her, close to her….it’s not any of her DREAM.. !!! She had lost all hopes that her Sanskuu would ever love her back n she had to live with d pain of one sided love all her life till her last breath which is she going to take in few hours… Some droplets of tear escapes from her eyes seeing d same amount of love in his eyes as well as.. She desperately wants to be in his embrace ,wants to threw herself on him n hugs him tightly praying to God not to break her this beautiful “DREAM”… !!
But seems Destiny has kept something else for her… !!

Sanskar smiles brightly with tears seeing Swara but his smile is just for some seconds … bcz after this may b he loose his all reasons to smile for forever….. !! He looks at her shockingly where Swara is breathing heavily… !! She clutches d bed sheet tightly unable to take breath.. !!!

Sanskar is horrified looking Swara in this State… he is not getting what to do… !!! “Swara.. !! Swara.. !! Ohh God.. !! What happened to her.. !!”

He cryingly shouts “Doctor,, Doctorrrrr “…

(To Swara)-Swara ..plz don’t loose hope.. Doctor is coming.. !! Try to breath.. plzzzz … cries cupping her face.. !!

Doctor rushes to Swara “o my God.. !! Her pulse is dropping. !! Oh God.. … !!!
(To Nurse)- Get everything ready in OT.. !! We need to operate her as soon as possible… otherwise !!! (Sanskar cuts off)

“Don’t say anything… i know nothing will happen to her.. !! She has to come… n she will”…

Doctor nods n makes her wear d oxygen mask n gives a injection.. !!! Sanskar looks at Swara’s face n feels her pain.. !!! He just can’t able see her in this state n runs out where Simin is crying bitterly holding her mouth with plam for not doing any kind of noise.. !! She knows if she doesn’t do soo she may brust out crying … !! But she has to stay strong.. She has to for her SHONA.. !! For her BEST FRIEND cum SISTER.. !!!

Sanskar looks at Swara from out n tightly closes his eyes letting go his all tears flow endlessly.. !!. He remembers his dreadful DREAM n it shakes him again.. !!

After half n hour Swayam comes with Lucky …. Lucky’s condition can’t b described in words.. !! His eyes look so tired n red due to continuous crying… hairs r messy… !! He is actually in a devastated state … As soon as he sees Simin in no time rushes to Swara’s room… !! (When he got d news about Swara,he directly come from Indonesia for his Koala)….

He opens d door without disturbing his Koala.. !! He is just starting Swara.. !! Unable to move he comes to sence when Swayam keeps his hand in his shoulder.. !! He looks at Swayam teary eyed n hugs him.. !! Swayam is also in same state …

For Lucky,Swara is not only his best friend… !! They indeed best friends .. but at d same time strength of each other.. !!
Swara always comes first for him after family.. !! She is his Shona, she is his Koala.. !! Who is now sleeping .. !! Not even responding him … !!

Simin n Sanskar also come to d room.. !!
Lucky goes to her ” Aee Shona.. !! Utth naa.. !!uthh… how much u will sleep.. !!? See na this room is so small like nest.. !! I know u don’t like to stay in one place for more time… soo now get up ..(wipes his tears) r u not tired? Look i came .. i came from Indonesia.. !! Now u get up n fulfill ur promise.. !! U said na when i will come u would welcome me with chappal n smelly socks… !! Soo do it na.. i won’t say anything.. !! I will not Chase u… bass tu utth ja.. !! (Tears r endlessly flowing now)… “says n again cries silently…

He again continues “Shona.. yeh deekh (takes out a small box).. here is ur all fav chocos u said me to bring from there.. !! See naa i bring them all.. !! Infect if u want i will buy more.. bass tu uthh jaa naa.. !! Arrey uthhha na Koalaaaa. !! Aur kitna satayegi.. !! Get uppp naaaa… !!! ” saying this Lucky cries so hard n falls on his knees.. !!

Swayam,Simin, Sanskar is now crying more seeing Lucky like this.. !! Only they know how they feeling.. !!

“Excuse me.,, it’s time for her surgery.. Dr.Hemanshi has reached here… we need to take her OT.. ” says a nurse who is cheeking her pulse.. !!

Swayam somehow makes Lucky get up n comes out of room.. !! He makes Lucky sit beside Simin n looks at Sanskar who is doing nothing except starting Swara blankly…

He places his hand on Sanskar’s left shoulder n nods saying everything will b all rit.. !!

Now Swara is taken to OT… all four of them is waiting at d entrance of OT … ev1 is restless… n with d passing time restlessness is increasingly & an unknown fear is appearing in their hearts..

After 1 hour Dr.Hemanshi comes out with a worried face …. as she takes a step out of OT Sanskar madly runs to her following by SwaLakMin…

“Doctor how is Swara.. !! She is fine naa.. !! ” Sanskar asks trying to understand Dr’s facial expression…

“No,she is not fine.. !! She is not responding to ur treatments.. !! She is losing herself..” declares Doctor n says to A ward boy to call Dr.Raheja…

“Don’t loose hope.. we r trying our best… now Dr.Raheja is coming… he is one of d top most famous surgeon here.. m sure everything will b fine.. !! Just pray for her.. !! ”

After 10 minutes Dr.Raheja comes n makes his way to OT living all of them froze n taking their breath ….

(*one more song plzz read it.. it’s one of my fav song from d movie Yaariyan “ALLAH WAARIYAN”)…

Apne roothein, paraaye roothein,,
Yaar roothe naa,,,
Khwaab tootein,
waade tootein,,,
Dil ye toote naa
Roothe to khuda bhi roothe
Saath chhoote naa

{My close ones get angry,
others get angry,
The beloved shouldn’t be angry..
Dreams break, promises break,
The heart shouldn’t break..
{If He gets angry, even God can get angry,
but I shouldn’t get away (from my beloved)}

Simin takes few steps back n run to d temple to pray for her Shona.. !!! She is not in her sence .. just running dashing with ev1 whoever coming on her way..

O Allah Waariyan,,
O main to haariyan,,
O tooti yaariyan mila de oye!,,,

{Sacrificed on you, O Lord, [as in, in prayer with everything ready to sacrifice]I am all lost,
My broken love,
just get me that..}

Lucky leans back against d wall remembering their beautiful moments … when he 1st time meet Swara … he snatched her Tiffin but in return Swara land in his back n pulled his hair so tightly that some of his hairs came in her tiny hand.. from that day he never took any panga with her… n they become best friends as HIPPO N KOALA.. !! A small curve appears in his lips… he smiles in pain also … after all this is d special quality of his best friend who can make anyone smile in worst situation even.. !!!

Udte patangon mein
Holi waale rangon mein
Jhoomenge phir se dono yaar

{In flying kites,in the colors of Holi,
Once again we’ll both dance together,
O beloved..}

Waapas to aaja yaar,,,
Seene se laga ja yaar,,,
Dil to hue hain zaar-zaar….

{Come back, O beloved..take me in your arms, O beloved..
The hearts have completely shattered..}

Swayam takes a sit beside Lucky n remembers how Swara helped to find his feelings towards Simin.. !! How she always teased him saying Simim loves someone else… !!! Now he just wants that bubbly Shona back in his life.. in their life … !!!

Reh bhi na paayein yaar,,,
Seh bhi na paayein yaar
Behti hi jaaye dastaan…

{I can’t even stay like that,
I am not even able to bear..
The story keeps flowing..}

Umr bhar ka intezaar,,,,
Ik pal bhi na qaraar,,
Ungli pe nachaaye dastaan….

{The life long wait,
No peace for even a moment,
The story makes u moves in his fingers…}

Finally our Sanskar is standing in one place looking aimlessly at d door.. !!! Nothing is coming into his mind expect he n HIS SHONA.. !!
Their cute fight,,, Diwali celebration , 1st friendship,,, n those words that he used for Swara..his dream to kiss Swara.. that Slap ,that horrible day n d horrible Dream.. !!! But he touches his cheeks n says himself “Sanskuu u r soo cutee “… he smiles n whispers ” I LOVE U SHONA”…

All four of them’s chains of thoughts r broken by a sound ,,,, Dr. Hemanshi comes out with tears in her eyes,, nobody moved nor Lucky nor Sanskar..both just looks at Dr n wait for her answer. Swayam asks her ….

Dr. Nodes her head …..

At that time Lucky collapses in d floor,,, Sanskar falls on his knees n Swayam moves back whether Simin is froze at her place…

Precap- Blank…😑

#Ignore my all outstanding mistakes.. 😶

Hello ev1🙌 … see today even i couldn’t complete.. 🙅Soory.. but what to do i wanted to make this chappy a lil emotional…was it so?did it reach up to ur expectations..?. urghh hope u all like it.. !! Do let me know through ur cutee cuteee threatening comments… !! I know ev1 ready with something..
-as Arshaa is ready to kill me with her beautiful eyes,,.
-Chanduu already booked a bed in Apollo for me.. !!
-Navi is ready with her 32…
-Chanu is ready with Gas stove..
-Deekshuu is reafy with water gun…
-Shaluu is ready with Broom… !!.
-Mica is with crying red puffy nose ready to curse me.. !!

N ready with Submarine … !! *run to Pluto…..

Silent readers comment today.. i m demanding comments from u all… otherwise… huhh i dun know what will i do.. !! It’s kinda whitemail… !!!

Thnk u sooo much for reading… !!
God bless u all… <3 <3…

117 comments

  1. Anniya

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    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    Again i want your fav hanky

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much Poojaaaa.. !!! let’s see how will Destiny give her back to her loved ones.. !!! will try to update soon dear.. !! ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Simmmuuuu i hate u.. huhhh why u always get emotional while i want to make u cry.. !! why don’t u cry.. plzz cry naa. !! urghh let it b ..
      Thnk u soooo much dear … i will make sure that u will cry ur lungs out at ur b’day.. !! puut puuuut.. !! ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Rabiaaaa diiii !!! it’s Kakali’s hand made submarine soo anything can happen… !!! waaa we r seriously sisters.. seee even i also dun know.. yeeii gimme hifi.. !!!
      Thnk u sooo much diii… !! ;-*

      • Rabia

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        🙌🙌🙌🚀🚀🚀🚀 ive snd u space craft alsooo 😆😆😆😆😆 in case if ur submarine didnt work 🙈🙈🙈 andd u r alwaysss welcome 😆

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Raa raa bii bii yaaa Rabiaa Diii… !! i have my own private rocket… !!! wo agag baat hai ki tyres punctured hai.. but dun worry i can drag…. !!! puut puuuttt.. !!!
      it’s my pleasure Diii…😀

      • Rabia

        |Registered Member

        Ooo then give me back my rocket 😆😆😆😆😆 i have to goo naaa asal may bazaar for buying vegesss 😆😆😆 and put put u need more in spacee 😛😛😛😙😙😙

  2. Chanu

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    Huhuhuh!!!
    Kaku!!!!
    I hate u!! Hate u!!
    U r rly bad!!
    U knw wt still im crying. U r rly bad!! 🙁 🙁
    See bz f u nw im looking ugly!! 2morow is my sisos mrg!
    Nw ur responsible 4 all those things… huhuhuh..
    its rly painful epi dr..

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanuuuuu !!! Thnk u soooo much dear !!! awwww dun worry dear u will surely look beautiful tomorrow as u r .. !! hee Sorry to make uy cry dear .. !!! huhh Dance well eat well enjoy well.. !! once again bedt of luck for ur performance… ;-*

  3. Ria

    I was crying so I guess u managed to do your work quite well dear it was heartbreaking dear waiting for next part earnestly

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooo much Riaaa !! sorry to make u cry dear but i guess it was needed … mainly for Sanskar .. he has to feel his Shona’s pain.. sooo it overloaded all d emotions.. !! happy to see ur comment😊.. !! ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Oooooaaa !!! Shrijahhhh !!! Thnk u sooo much dear !! m glad u loved it… n about happy ending… let’s see what happens next.. n sure dear will post as soon as i get time to write.. !!happy to see ur comment …. ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much Janviii !! yuppo dear i also love Swa_Lak friendship… !! it’s soo pure.. !! m so glad u loved it.m !! *wipe ur tears. !! ;-*

  4. kumu

    it was really emotional..
    i dnt knw why bt i m feeling like u r going to give us a happy ending..
    plz i want happy ending..
    tc..

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooo much Kummuuuu !!! waaa u r having exact d same feeling now m have.. !! but let’s see what has Destiny kept for us… !!! n about happy ending… urghh !!! ;-*

  5. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    I didn’t expct u wil rite dis much emotional chappy as v knw u love to rite funny moments more… bt u did a gr8 job kakali 👏👏👏
    It was so emotional yet beautiful..
    U showed evrybdyz feelings so prfctly 👌
    N coming to ur not dats epic 😂😂😂😂
    Now nobody is going to kill u as v knw u r going to give us lovey dovey swasan moments in nxt chappy 😉😉
    N thnx for d cmplmnt of bful eyez 🙈🙈😘😘

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Arshaaaaaa !!!! ur comment killed me alive.. !!! goshhh m in could 17th reading this.!!! Thnk u very much dear for appreciating it, !!! yeiii i did it.. !!
      Waaaa Arshaaaaa u know me soo well..
      U r welcome … beautiful is beautiful na.. !! haaa ty once again.. !! ;-*

  6. chandu

    I blasted submarine…!! You are going nowhere…and you can’t escape from us..!! This time before opening your episode…I arranged myself hanky….and as I expected…I used it soo much efficiently…!! _/\_ _/\_ And sanam teri kasam song is my favourite..!! I couldn’t help out in controlling my sadness…going through that song…!!

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanduuuuuuuu !!!! u illegal blaster.. !! huhhh !!! don’t dare to do that.. it’s my fav submarine.. !! urghhhh finally u wasted ur hanky..yeiii !!
      Awwww even i like that song very much.. !! Thnk u soooo much dear !! hope my chappy touched ur heart
      . !! ;-*

  7. Nagamanasa

    |Registered Member

    Kaku today no doubt I am going to kill u for sure…I am already crying that I must submit a lot of assignments and even records this week and u made me cry again with ur chappy…*poor me…
    It’s too emotional sissy and u make everyone smile with ur comments but u r making us cry with ur chappy…This is not fair…Now i want happy ending otherwise I am sure i will kill u..Anyways loved it …Thank u…Bye

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Manasaaaaaa Diiiiii ,,, *running like participating in marathon.. !!! goshhh u also wanna kill me.. !!!
      Awwwww my lil emotional chappy made u cry.. huhh sorry Dii.. plzz u concentrate in ur studies.. now don’t cry more..*wipe ur tears.. !!
      ohhh diii do i made u smile by my comments*shy…
      huhhh sure i will give ending… !!! wait n be ready to kill me.. !!
      Thnk u sooooo much dii for ur cute threatening comment.. !!! bya byaaa !! ;-*

  8. SNY

    |Registered Member

    Such a great epi all around…
    Full of emotional….
    Plzzzzz sis i want hpy ending😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 and tc be hpy….

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooo much sis yezzzz !!! sure dear i will give a ending which u would love enough to smile… !!! yeei !! u2 TC dear !! stay happy.. !! ;-*

  9. Mica

    |Registered Member

    Kakuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.. i hate you.. i hate everything now, crying crying crying..
    thank god, all gathered to company Swara..
    ciiihh.. how can i live without them..everytime i replay their dance, hear janam janam, i just crying and curse myself why i’m falling in love with them..
    why Kakuu.. why ????? how can i live without them when i always feel restless to facing weekend cause of their absence.

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Micuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu !!! now u don’t plzzz make me cryyy… !!! m controlling my tears somehow since it flew yesterday all d night watching their old beautiful IVs.. !! i just dun know what to say.. !! it’s painful dear.. !! my heart is paining like hell.. !!
      Even now i regret to fall in love with them more n more n more.. !! they r my habit n without them what will i doo.. ? why all this happening ? why whyy whyyy?? *hug Mica tight n cry … !!!

  10. Deeksha

    |Registered Member

    Kakuuu….!!!!!! 😤😤😤😤😤hate u….!!!!!! Hate u…..!!!!!! Again u made me cry….!!!!! I have my exam tomorrow and u….!!!!!!!! If u can go to pulto in submarine then I am gonna come there in ship and kill u….!!!!!!! And if you escape from there also then I am going to chase u……!!!!!!

    Beware anything happens to shona then you r gone in our hands…!!!!!! World War 10 is on the way….!!!!!!!!!

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Deekshuuuuuu !!! again u hate me.. !! goshhhh !! u r sooo confused about ur feeling towards me.. !! huhh !!
      awww today u have exammm.. best of luck dear !!! rock it.. !!
      waaaa it’s my specially Kakali hand made fav submarine … only i can go with it.. not anyone.. !!
      huhhh whitemailer.. !!! u can’t do anything.. !! beware her destiny is in my hand.. !!
      bdw thnk u soooo much dear for ur cute cute threatening comment..!! urghh world war 10.. chall jhuthiii.. !! *akkraman.. ;-*

  11. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Aww kaku u nailed this chapter….. Its amazing….. U proved u r a best writer….. Awesome….. Loved it…. I cried kaku…. Pls in next epi make me smile…..

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Shan Akkaaaaaaaaa do u know what u have said .. !! !¿ omggggggggg !!! jump jump jump .. !!!. goshhh Akka don’t give me such shocks i will jump from flyover.. !!
      m so sooo happy u loveed it. !! *wipe ur tears. !!
      waa sure dii i will not smile infect u will smile with tears .. !! Thnk u sooo much akka for ur appreciation n encouraging words.. !! it means a tonnn !! haa.. !! stay happy.. !! ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Mahaaaa !! my sis.. !!! Thnk u sooo much dear !! don’t b sorry.. !! i know u r having exams .. rit. !! best of luck n rock d sheet.. … !!!love u tooo.. take care of urself haaa. !! stay always happy.. !! ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooo uch Simiiiii !!! *wipe ur tears.. don’t cry dear. ! !!! sure dear i will give ending… !! happy or sad.. hehehe let’s see.. ;-*

  12. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    A big sorry from my side Kaku Di …. I m commenting😊 so late although I read it long back… Actually I had to go somewhere so couldn’t comment and at present M really very upset … My mind is blank at present I decided so much that I’ll write this and that but c… Well never mind Episode was awesome … Ty

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Cutieeee u seriously need a good scolding from mee !!! never say sorry.. !!! waa why were u upset? SR going iff air news rit? huhh then plzz company me… !! even me2.. urgh let it b.. Thnk u sooo much dear !! take care.. !! ;-*

  13. Navi

    |Registered Member

    Ms. Bear im going too start my torture.. bite u kick u chill powder in ur nose thn snake bite… hate u… hw cn u betray me… it ws emotional sad part.. plz bring my swara bck i will give u chance as nxt chapie.. if u fail to bring her im sure i will parcel u to pluto… its my warning.. u made me cry idiot…
    dnt try any stunt hr..

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Naviiii ,,, heyyyaaa !!! same reaction as i exactly thought… see i know u soo well.. !!! *hug..
      No Navi i can’t betray u.. !! it’s out of my coverage.. !!
      huhh i made u cry.. !!! look i m d most happiest person in d whole PLUTO.. !!! puuut puuuut !!
      but as u say my Navii,, ur highness ur warning grantedly neglected.. !! u illegal bitter.. !! goshhh Thnk u soooo much dear !!! i love to hear ur scolding.. as it’s kinda part of my life. !! loads of hugss dear !! Stay blessed.. !! ;-*

  14. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    First of all,a bigggggg sorry for not commenting in previous chappy bcz my so called boyfriend had came to meet me.. Don’t you wanna know who is he.. Then listen..
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    . FEVER..Every 2 months,mujhe yeh hi karne aata hain*poor me..

    About chappy,kakuuuu,mind blowing but emotional😭😭.. Oye, I need a happy ending, otherwise I am ready with hockey stick,itching powder, gun🔫.. Now choice is yours*bossy tone..
    Take care
    Keep smiling😀

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Umaaaa !!! How r u now ? still having fever.. !! don’t b sorry dear.. even u know i missed u comment.. !!! plzz i dun like this kinda boyfriend
      . !!! so annoying .. urghhh kick him.. !!
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!!
      ohhh haaa now u became fine rit.. ready to kill me also.. goshhh this girl naa !! *shook head..
      Take care of urself dear !!! stay blessed.. !! ;-*

  15. Radhika..

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    Awesome part di ……. U know what I know u will not make swara die so why to threaten u ……… Har koi hath do kar apke pechee pad gaya. No worries when u make swara all right than they all will be happy and give u lots of love instead of treating. It is also their love just the way is different. About the part its just amazing and the emotional part is just amazing and same pinch its my favourite song too I was thinking to add in my ff but now will add some Punjabi friendship song……… Love this song to the core……. And the way u describe the emotions what to say u r just amazing no one can describe the emotions so good u just nailed it. And laksh coming back and the way u show his condition is …….. Awesome and swara how much she made everyone cry comecome back soon yr. We are waiting for u. And the dream boy scene loved it and the emotional scenes just out of words u describe very well we can feel their feeling.
    Loved the part.
    Take care di from all the things……….
    Loved it and hope next precap is also next part ..

    .loved it the most👍👍😘😘😃😃

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Awwwwww My Bacchaaaa Radhikaaa !!! u know what m smiling like a mad reading ur comment… sorry to reply u late.. but what to do now a days time us not permitting me to do alm d things acc to mine… sooo…
      n about their threatenings . huhuhu i know them.. they r just like that n it’s their way to show their towards me.. even i love this… i feel so blessed.. !!!
      u trust me too much Radhikaa n i m feeling like jumping.. !! u know me so well..!! but let’s sew what happens next.. hope everything goes well..
      waaa Thnk u sooo very much for ur beautiful sa cute sa encouraging sa comment.. ur each n every word means a lot.. !! sometime i think m i really worth getting this kinda comment.. !! hehehe !!! love u tooo dear .. take care of ur health.. i want my healthy n fut sis back.. okkkii !!!
      Thnk u once again dear..!!! ;-*

      • Radhika..

        |Registered Member

        Glad that my comment make u smile di.no worries about late n all u know na di not sry for late things. I know this time paSs away so fast. Hmmm i know u know that’s why only I say that they r showing their love as we show anger on them whkm we love na.hmm thats the beautiful feeling that we have so many persons that care for us.hmmm di i trust u na di. Thats why. Dont jump too much di .hmmm u r my cute di that’s why.hmmm waiting for it. Hmmm hoping the same.
        Aww u find it cute.ur welcome di. And thanku for such a cute reply. No di u r not worth u r the best just have confidence on u. Than this words are also small for praising u di.live u too di.hmmn taking it. U too take care di.
        Hmm will come back soon like that
        Hmmm oko.
        Ur welcome di.
        Love u😘😘😃😃

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Waaaa Vyshuuuuu !!! where were u? i was missing u.. *hug
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!! hehehe does miracle happens? even though i will try to convince God ji.. !! but haaa no more rona dhona from next part… promise haaa. !! ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Vyshuuuuuuu !!! Sorry for late reply dear !!! actually i m not being able to open my inbox n can’t even reply anyone’s msg since yesterday.. i dun know what had happened.. !!*sob Sooo..
      waaaa Simmu’s b’day is tomorrow dear !! ;-*

  16. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    Chalo now m back

    Di I was like bache ko aur kitna rulaogi , while reading this …. I was literally crying…. But seriously I just loved it …. I love ur hippo also and Simin Di u also gave so emotional scenes… Oh my god Simin Di …. U do such a gr8 acting ….

    Kaku Di I know u will surely rock with the next part so post it soon ,m already crying cause of swaragini …
    Huh today it was a emotional day well never mind waise I think wat Swara did today I mean when she caught hippo’s hair … I guess u must have also done this with someone or the other , cause u r also a foodie….

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Cutieeeeee u r back !!!! but haa where did u gooo¿*scratch my eyebrows…
      don’t jokeeee… did u seriously cried… !! it’s feeling like it’s worth it.. !!! waaa they r my home mafe actors.. soo its necessary to b d best… u know ghar ki chakki ka atta khilaya hai.. accha hona birth right hai… kyuuu?
      urghhhh u still following me.. did my besty said that to u…. goshhh Damn u “D”… hate himm !!! huhhh finally Thnk u sooo much.. !!! u post ur further parts soon… m waiting with chewing gum… !!!;-*

      • Shreeyu

        |Registered Member

        Lol Di u gave a name of furtune teller I can even tell past … Multi talented u know …. Oh Simin Di is eating ur chakki’s aata …. Waise kaunsa wheat flour or any other…. I guess u must b giving her multi grain haina?

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Huhhh Cutieeee !!! It’s triple multigrain Kakali’s chakii pissing pissing Atta..
      u know about past life rit.. then plzzz tell me who was i in last birth… !!? This question always makes me feel bees in my nose.. !! goshhh Shreeyuuu mata ki jai.. !! ;-*

      • Shreeyu

        |Registered Member

        Oops Didi triple multi grain … Ummm abt past lyf toh I don’t know I have to consult my guruji u know I don’t have that much gyan…. Ufff and humara ashirvad sada tumhare saath hai putri …
        Go n rock the stage … Ab don’t ask for what … Obviously for our nagin dance….

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Mirnaaaa Darlzzz !!! See i told u not to trust me. !!! m not worth of it u know.. !!! huhhh !!! Don’t use my hathiyarrrr !! urghhh invent urself… !! heyyaaa Thnk u sooo much dear !! ;-*

  17. Tharu

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    Oh..what an emotional episode…I am crying so much…😭 😭 😭…shona will not leave her sanky…no it can’t be happened…I know even kaku will not do so…so why should I threat you…i am already sad because swaragini is ending…hope you will not increase my pain…please unite my swasan…and love you kaku and take care 😘😘😘

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Tharuuuuuu !!! U r sooo good.. !! u don’t hate me rit.. yeiiii *hug.. !!
      Thnk u sooooo much dear !!
      nopr dear Shona will never leave her Sanskuuu… she will b always in his Dreams.. !!
      Waaa dear i will no do sooo.. no pain no sain.. only showing 32.. !! ADORE OYA dear !!
      U r looking lovely in ur DP… n d lil doll is looking pretty.. !! *pinch ur cheeks. !!!
      God bless u dear!! ;-*

  18. Halima

    |Registered Member

    *faint

    Such an emotinal and amazing part, the Dr nodding no seems freaky 😧
    please say Swara is alright. *finger crossed
    Tears made their way through my eyes and I felt like 😫

    Upload the next part soon and sorry for not commenting on previous episodes…😬

    I always read on my Tablet but today I read on my phone and I commented 😄 Cause whenever I read on my tablet, no comment 😆

    Take care and keep smiling 💫

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Halimaaaaaaa !!!! reading ur comment i myself feeling Dizzy.. !! goshhh Thnk u sooo much dear !!
      Nope don’t b sorry dear !!!even same is happening with me.. if i start to say sorry huhh it will never end.. !! sooo*hug…
      sure dear i will try to upload as soon as i will get time.. !!! n biggg sorry fir not replying in msg box… i dun know what had happened to my inbox.. i m not being able to open it.. !! *cry…
      take care…God bless u dear !!! ;-*

      • Halima

        |Registered Member

        First of all hug back to you too.

        Second of all, same pinch, that happened to me too but 3 months ago… it’s fixed now…

        No need to say sorry, I was also frustrated because of the Inbox thing. 😅

        I’m not being able to read your comment peacefully *pout.

        I keep on getting disturbed but finally I read it *sigh

        Stay blessed xx 💫

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Waaaa Halimaaa !! u r too cuteee !! *pinch ur nose.. !!!
      huhhh send them to Pluto whoever is disturbing u.. !!
      Be always happy dear. !! ;-*

      • Halima

        |Registered Member

        Thank you *hug

        Have you left in your submarine?

        Please say no *fingercrossed.

        Because I want to join you, is there any space for me? 😆

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Halimaaaaa !!! i m on earth Itself.. !!! huhh it’s my special fav home made submarine by my own hand.. !!! there is lots of space… n u can accompany me.. !!! yeiii even u can bring chocos to have in Space…. *drag Halima to my submarine to take off to Pluto.. !! ;-*

      • Halima

        |Registered Member

        Thank you *tight hug.

        Yay!! I will definitely bring chocos to eat 😊

        I’ll make arrangements, because I know that I will surely be gone here after posting the last episode.

        If you made it then it must be awesome, can’t wait to see it. *happy

        *fly to Pluto with Kakali on her home made submarine

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Halimaaaaaa my frnd u r sooo sooo soooo good… !! *hug u tight.. !!
      waaa it’s seriously awesome.. u know self praising.. !! u won’t believe
      i have made it with coconut containing each n every necessary thing which we must need there. !!! it’s gonna be EPIC .. !!! hope we come back safely.. otherwise will b counting us in their Alien’s list.. !!!
      wait wait wait i have a problem… urghhh my submarine’s all tyres r puncture now… goshhh *pull ur Shoti n run to my hand made garage.. !! :3 :3

      • Halima

        |Registered Member

        *hug back from me.

        You’re amazing… you made it out of coconut… it must be so amazing, I really can’t wait to see it… *out of my house.

        Oh no, I’ll bring some spare tyres and I’m heading to your handmade garage *running

        I think I’m going to love the journey and hope we come back safely… don’t want to be on the Alien list 😅

        You’re truly Talented Kakali… would love to travel in your amazing submarine!! You’re so generous to let me fly with you. Thank you *another hug

        *running to your handmade garage with spare tyres

    • Shrinjal

      |Registered Member

      Difficult to belive…I didn’t knew you type this also.. I mean…like if u wanna type faint then..*faint..Full in kakali di’s style. .😁😁

      • Halima

        |Registered Member

        Then how else should I write it? 🤔

        Some emojis don’t even match what I wanna say… I thought this was the way…? I didn’t know how else to write it 😂

        I hope Kakali doesn’t mind?

        Sorry *holding my ears

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Halimaaaaa !!!! m sooo blushing hard reading ur reply.. !!! even my cheeks turned pussian blue due to heavy blush.. !! goshhh !!!
      huhh u can’t come to my handmade garage as it is an imaginary one.. !!! waa mad me i forgot to tell u.. !!
      m sure u will love d journey as d fellow passenger n driver is me onlyyy !!!!
      *hug u tight out of breath.. !!!
      *Halima wearing oxygen mask.. !!! :3

      • Halima

        |Registered Member

        Aww ☺️

        I’m sure I’m going to have fun travelling with you… can’t wait.

        Blush? Because of the compliment? It’s 100% true and sorry for making you blush so hard *bite my tongue.

        Haww, imaginary garage? *stopped walking.

        But I will come with spare tyres and I’m surely gunna love the journey and I know it *happy excited and waiting.

        I posted the last episode *running

        Need to fly out soon *worried and 😅

        I’ll bring two bags of chocos and then give you one bag. *smiling and running.

        *out of breath
        *hug you extra tight
        *dreaming about our ride.

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Haaaa !!! Halimaaaa !! That’s why i love to write in this way.. !!!
      n i won’t mind.. !!! but will b glad seeing u holding ur two chotis instead kf ears.. !!! awww*pull ur cheeks.. !!!

      Halimaaaaa bear my moid swings… now m having tears reading ur comment… !!! u r d 1st ever person who understands me soo well in every way.. Iir i can say half maniac as me.. !! again sorry *pinch u hard on nose..
      waa come comeee we will take selfie.. !!*smile showing 32.. aa :3 :3 :3 :3
      u posted d last … !! but of which FF Halima as u have so many… n i think it’s still not uploaded rit.?¿

      Twooo bag chocos.. !! *eye balls lying on ground..
      one bag for meeee *slip into comma.. !!!
      *dreaming about chocos… !!!
      i need it.. !!! goshhh !!! 🙂

      • Halima

        |Registered Member

        I’m glad that you don’t mind *extremely happy

        Okay, instead of ears, I will pull chotis 😜

        Tears in your eyes? *gasp
        Wowwww! I’m the 1st person ever that understands you in every way… *feeling lucky and blessed 😇

        I’ll take that as a compliment *smiling

        Dil toh Bachcha hai ji 😆

        *smiling for the selfie

        I look so weird in the selfie 😬

        Kuch To Hai… we have to fly soon 😆 And I don’t think it’s posted.

        Of course one bag is for you, sharing is caring *hug

        It’s good to see someone here that relates to me, my friends say I’m weird but thank you Kakali *tight wala hug.

        Is the submarine ready?

  19. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    God….Kakali..this is amazing…allah waariyan..my fav song dear..I love when they play in KKB…you brought it amazing…am like frozen at last part…Shona should be back..but why he crashed on his kneess….see…I came here as you said..now post the next one soon..like real soon….You write so beautiful…I loved the song part…love you loads..TC

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Jesssiiieeeeee !!!! my frnd we r same.. !! even me2 love this songgg very much !!! but i can’t feel or interact it’s lyrics when it plays on KKB.. !! i dun know why… !! my crazy heart.. !!
      Waaa i will try to upload soon as soon as i get time… but now seems it impossible.. !! though i will try my best.. !! Thnk u sooo very much dear !!! Love u a lottt.. !! God bless u.. !! ;-*

  20. Shrinjal

    |Registered Member

    Hey!!! Di!!! Why why why???????? I’m also gonna faint if u don’t give a happy ending…uhhhh…crying….pls give us a happy ending as SR is ending soon nd we’re gonna miss SwaSan a lot so Pls. .pls a happy ending….😭😭😭😭😭 I’ll die if there’s a sad ending so…….If u wanna become a murderer then give sad ending😉😱 huhu..*smart me

    Pls pls pls..kaku dii *puppy eyes no no..dog eyes

  21. Mahjabeen

    |Registered Member

    Wow kaku m really spellbounded by reading dis part…no words to describe it..its rly beyond my expectation…love it dear…it ws outstanding one…u Wrote so beatifullly i CNT describe how i flt while reading…rlly u made me speechles…loved it! loved it! loved it!!
    Stay blessed

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Mahuuuuu !!! how r u dear?
      Thnk u sooo very much for ur appreciation… !! it means a lot Mahu !!! what to say , i m repeatedly reading ur comment .. coz u made me speechless.. !!! once again thnk u dear !!
      I can understand u … never say sorry… !!! u commented naa that’s enough for me. !waa i have posted my last part.. read whenever u get time… !!!
      ! stay blessed n keep smiling Mahuuuuu.. !! ;-*

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